初三必備英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)技巧全解及練習(xí)題(含答案)含解析

1、【英語(yǔ)】初三必備英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)技巧全解及練習(xí)題( 含答案 ) 含解析一、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)1書面表達(dá)假如你是九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)筆友billy 發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給billy 回封電子郵件，并建議他每周都要花些時(shí)間鍛煉身體。寫作要點(diǎn)：1. 你最近正忙于為即將到來的體育測(cè)試（physical test）做準(zhǔn)備。2. 介紹你平時(shí)鍛煉的情況：（ 1）每天鍛煉的時(shí)間：不到一個(gè)半小時(shí)。（ 2）偶爾不鍛煉的原因：作業(yè)多，沒時(shí)間。（ 3）擅長(zhǎng)的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)：球類運(yùn)動(dòng)。3. 談?wù)勫憻捊o你帶來了哪些好處。寫作要求：1. 不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2. 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫

2、。3. 字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰。4. 至少 80 詞。dear billy,it s my great pleasure to receive your-maile._best wishes!yours,li hua【答案】 dear billy,it s my great pleasure to receive your- maile. you wanted to know about my usual exercise. iit to you.i am busy preparing for the coming physical test. so i take exerci

3、se less than an hour every day.sometimes i don t do exercise, because i have so much homework that i have no time to do it. ido well in playing balls.doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. besides, i think it canmake me relaxed by doing exercise. so i advise you

4、 to spend more time doing exercise everyweek.best wishes!yours,li hua ll tell【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，給billy 回封電子郵件，介紹自己平時(shí)的鍛煉情況，并建議他每周都要花些 身體?！?解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人稱 數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主 一致 ，句子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：i ambusy ， because i have，doing exercise can help， soiadvise you to等句式的 用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代 ，注意多種句式交

5、替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開 表示很高 收到billy 的來信，接下來介 我平 的 情況，最后指出 我 來的好 以及我建 billy要多 。此 be busy doing sth,prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等 些 的運(yùn)用也 文章增色不少。2 面表達(dá)社會(huì)需要 ， 代呼 。 善行、 心的感 ，存在于每個(gè)人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感 ，而是一種 示感 的勇氣。 你身 的人或事點(diǎn) ， “點(diǎn) ”成 正能量的一種行 吧！是什么行 你點(diǎn) ？ 述一件你點(diǎn) 的事情。你從他/ 她身

6、上可以學(xué)到什么？ 我 一起分享吧！ 根據(jù)以下提示要點(diǎn)，寫一篇文章。注意： 1 數(shù)： 80 左右； 2不要出 真 的人名及校名。make a list of the persons that you should give a“ like” buttontell us one of the experiences that you clicked a“ like” buttonwhat could you learn from him/her?【答案】 i should give my uncle a “l(fā)ike ” button. he is very tall and very strong

7、. he punishes the bad people and protect the good people. he always helps others. he is my hero. he workshard.when i grow up, i want to be a policeman like my uncle. i want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 述一件我點(diǎn) 的事情，我從他/ 她身上可以學(xué)到什么。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人稱 數(shù)

8、第一，三人稱，注意主 一致 ，句子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：ishould ， he is ，he always helps，iwant to，so they can等句式的 用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代 ，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開 介 了我要點(diǎn) 的人，接下來介 他的情況，最后指出我從他身上學(xué)到的 西。此 give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live alife等 些 的運(yùn)用也 文章增色不少。3 面表達(dá)“小手拉大手 ,同做文明人。 ”自 建文明城市文明

9、 村以來,淄博人民萬(wàn)眾一心,眾 志成城 ,讓人點(diǎn) 的行 隨 可 。作 中學(xué)生,我 也做出了自己的努力。 根據(jù)以下所 要點(diǎn) ,寫一篇 100 左右的英 短文。1.種植花草樹木；2.遵守交通規(guī)則；3.公共場(chǎng)合不大聲喧嘩；4.公交車上主動(dòng)給有需要的人讓座；（自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn)）參考詞匯 : civilized 文明的make joint efforts 共同努力obey 遵守【答案】 since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in zibo have made jointefforts （共同努力）. thei

10、r good behavior can be seen everywhere.as junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized zibo. forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. also, for our own and otherssafety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. in addition（此外） , we no lo

11、nger talkor laugh loudly in public.whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people inneed.besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never litteringanywhere. furthermore （而且） , we are accustomed to （習(xí)慣于） queuing up （排隊(duì)）for aticket or something else.

12、all in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves andzibo city more civilized【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如make joint efforts ， as junior students ， for example ， obey the traffic rules ， run redlight， in addition ， no longer ，in public ， and so on ，whats more ，on a b

13、us， in need， beaccustomed to ， queue up ， all in all 等。而 to protect our environment, we plant flowers andtrees./ whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ all in all,we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and zibo city more civilized.等插入語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短

14、文內(nèi)容，使語(yǔ)言表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。4（ b）根據(jù)要求完成大作文,詞數(shù) :80-100體育運(yùn)動(dòng)是中學(xué)生的共同愛好.請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇題為what we get from sports的短文,應(yīng)該包含以下要點(diǎn):1,學(xué)生參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的興趣不同,理由各異.2.多數(shù)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)疲倦時(shí),通過運(yùn)動(dòng)來放松自己.3.男孩參加各項(xiàng)體育運(yùn)動(dòng),希望運(yùn)動(dòng)能使自己

15、更強(qiáng)壯.4.女孩也喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，希望運(yùn)動(dòng)使自己減肥和保持健康,苗條 .5.你對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn).6.注意 :文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的名字和學(xué)校的名字7.短文開頭已給出,不計(jì)入詞數(shù) .8.參考詞語(yǔ) :keep slim （保持苗條）what we get from sportsstudents in our school have one thing in common an interest insports._【答案】 students in our school have one thing in common an interest in sports. but different students h

16、ave different reasons for taking part in sports.many students have sports when they feel tired after study. they just want to relax themselves and have fun. most boys love sports. they take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. they join in the sports that interest them most, such

17、 as soccer, basketball and volleyball. as for girls, they want to lose weight. they want to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise. in my opinion, no matter what reasons we have, we all can get a lot from sports.【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作主要是談?wù)撟约簩?duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)和看法，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，寫作要點(diǎn)要包括：1.提出目前學(xué)生對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的不同看法及原因。2.具體分析（多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)、

18、男生的觀點(diǎn)、女生的觀點(diǎn)）。 3.提出自己對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)的觀點(diǎn)。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，在文中使用了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如 have fun ，in order to ， as for， in my opinion 等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。5書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請(qǐng)將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（lucky money ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（wechat）或支付寶（

19、alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途；2. 對(duì)合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?！敬鸢浮?every spring festival i receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. now i even get it through wechat or alipay. i usually buy s

20、ome of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. sometimes i also buy some gifts for my parents.in order to make good use of the lucky money, i think we can do the following things. first, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. second, it

21、is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. what is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? helping others makes us happy.all in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. we should use our money in a meaningful wa

22、y.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個(gè)孩子都能收到來自長(zhǎng)輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（wechat）或支付寶（alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們?cè)撊绾喂芾碜约旱腻X，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的變化。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子： in order to m

23、ake good use of the lucky money, i think we can do the following things. first, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. 這些給文章增色不少。6 “美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她 ”。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文號(hào)召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動(dòng)中來。要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.

24、必須包含所給提示，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.as junior high students,_let

25、s take action now. our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】 since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment hasimproved a lot. everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can beseen everywhere.as junior high

26、 students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. we should be politeto others and try to behave well. it s kind of you to help people in need. meanwhile, we can helpclean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. also, we can plant more trees and keep offgrass. on the other

27、 hand, there are many things we shouldn t do. we shouldn t make a lot ofnoise loudly in the public. we can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throw rubbish everywhere.at the same time, we shouldn t break traffic rules.let s take action now. our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautifu

28、l city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行 “雙創(chuàng) ”活動(dòng)，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，號(hào)召中學(xué)生們都參加到“雙創(chuàng) ”活動(dòng)中來。題目中并沒有規(guī)定具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面來敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個(gè)內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)，把短文分成兩個(gè)層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱 we 來敘述。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，以常見的

29、主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢?！军c(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號(hào)召，共同參與到城市“雙創(chuàng)”活動(dòng)中來。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補(bǔ)充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個(gè)方面，對(duì)中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)句通順，符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級(jí)句式，語(yǔ)句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如we should

30、 be polite to others andtry to behave well. 、 it s kind of you to help people in need、. meanwhile, we can help clean upour city in order to make it clearer and tidier. 、 we can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throwrubbish everywhere. at the same time, we shouldn t break等等traffic。 rules.7書面表達(dá)難忘的初中三年

31、學(xué)習(xí)生活已經(jīng)接近尾聲，你一定既有收獲又有不足，也有許多對(duì)自己未來的期待。請(qǐng)以 my unforgettable middle school life 為題，根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，寫一篇短文介紹自己難忘的校園生活并描述對(duì)未來的期盼。注意 :1.詞數(shù) 90 左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，并補(bǔ)充相關(guān)信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。語(yǔ)言連貫、通順;3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。how time flies! my colourful middle school life is nearly ending. here is what i think about mys

32、elf.【答案】 how time flies! my colourful middle school life is nearly ending. here is what i thinkabout myself.in the past, i learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. so, i am very grateful to them. they helped me a lot! i also got on well with my classmates. we shared

33、happiness and sadness together. we were like a big family. however, i still have a lot to improve. i didn t do well in maths because i gave up easily when meeting difficult maths problems. besides,i didn t have a good sense of time. i used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. theref

34、ore, in the future, i will try my best to become better. i will work harder and organize mylife and my time better. i hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“my unforgettable middle school life 為題，”結(jié)合本題所給的寫作信息，闡述自己難忘的中學(xué)生活。根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知本文會(huì)用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意連

35、詞、固定短語(yǔ)的交替使用，使文意連接緊密，還要注意使用豐富的語(yǔ)句，注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，最后最好要表達(dá)出自己的感想和看法。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文 構(gòu) 湊，要點(diǎn) 全， 言 。文中not onlybut also，help a lot ，share happiness and sadness， do well in ， give up, besides， so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.， therefore, be proud of 等 （ ）恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意 接 密；文章的最后 i hope one day, my sc

36、hool and teachers will be proud of me! 表達(dá)了自己愿望與想法，使文章增色不少， 得學(xué) 。8 目 “持之以恒，方得始。 ” 持是一種可 的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“ 持 ” 主 的征文活 。假如你是李 ， 用英 寫一篇短文投稿。 淡你在初中生活中 持的一件事（ 好， ），你是怎 做的，以及你的感受。提示 ： keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud提示 ： 1. what did you do?2. how do you feel?it s important fo

37、r us to keep trying to achieve our goals.【答案】 its important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.i love running and i have kept running for three years.when i was in grade 7， i was not good at sports and running was always my headache.i often failed in my running test.in order to catch up with

38、 my classmates ， i began to practice running every day after school.sometimes ， i was so tired that i really wanted to give up.but i kept telling myself that i could make it.no matter what kind of difficulties i faced ， i tried my best to keep running.now i do much better in running and im very prou

39、d of myself.i feel more confident and im ready for any challenges in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，根據(jù)所 提示寫一篇自己在初中生活中 持做的事；文中寫明自己是怎么做的并 自己的感受?！?解】1.本篇要求根據(jù)所 材料，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己 持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“what did you do?用一般 去 ，描寫how do you feel? 用一般 在 。 寫 要 扣主 ，文句通 。2.本例文開篇立即點(diǎn)明自己的 持做的事是“跑步 ”，正文部分 地描寫了自己起初跑步 是不及格，通 克服困

40、、不懈地努力， 持跑步，到 在比以前會(huì)跑； 尾 了 件事 自己的影響；文章 構(gòu)清晰，前后呼 。3.本例文出彩之 在于用了很多的短 和重點(diǎn)句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型its +adj+for us +to do sth 、 love doing sth 、 keep doing 、 be good at 、 catch up with 、be proud of ；不定式in order to； try my best to ；狀 從句sothat；比 do much better in、feelmore confident等；短 多彩、文句表達(dá)多 。”94 月 23 日是 “世界讀書日 ”，你

41、校英語(yǔ)俱樂部正在開展主題為 “多讀書，讀好書 ”的活動(dòng)。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書，向全體同學(xué)發(fā)出號(hào)召。內(nèi)容包括：應(yīng)該讀什么樣的書，以及讀書的意義。提示詞語(yǔ)： story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示問題： what kind of books should we read? why do we read?dear students, the world reading day is coming.so i m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good

42、books.li hua【答案】例文dear students, the world reading day is coming. as a middle school student, everyone should read books. firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future.therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doin