讀后續(xù)寫講解PPT文檔資料

1、1,截圖發(fā)朋友圈 share the pictures,1. 張博 （3）班 2. 黃心悅（6）班 3. 曹旭輝 （4）班 4. 陳琳（3）班 5. 馮圣杰（4）班 6. 郭子瑕（3）班 7. 邱新特（4）班 8. 金宸如（3）班 9. 朱澄镕（6）班 10. 林子心（6）班,2,讀后續(xù)寫,1. 讀懂全文,who, when, where, what, how, why,2. 從文中獲得重要的隱藏的線索,3. 分析給你的兩段的開頭句,第一段給你的第一句要與第二句有銜接,第一段最后一句與第二段第一句有銜接,三步走,3,1. vacationing v 度假 2. the Foggy Figure

2、 fgi fg(r) 霧影 3. haunt h:nt 時(shí)常出現(xiàn)在 4. ghostly gstli 可怕的 5. creature kri:t(r) 生物 6. sniff snf 嗅，深深吸入 7. the faint scent fent sent 微弱的氣味 8. strike strak struck 侵襲 9. dock dk 碼頭，船?？看a頭 10. scary skeri 膽小的，可怕的,11. shrug rg 聳肩 12. barely beli 幾乎不 13. lower l(r) 降低 14. hug hg 擁抱,4,who: when: where: weather:

3、 What,Justin and Mary,Uncle Thomas,one day during the vacation,at 5:00 am,first at their uncles lake house,then at the boat dock,Foggy,The fog had settled over the lake, making it impossible to see anything,Uncle Thomas told Justin and Mary about the Foggy Figure that haunts the lake,They determined

4、 to see the Foggy Figure,1. 讀懂全文,ghostly,frightening,scary,5,Whether did they see the Foggy Figure,Thinking,Is there the Foggy Figure,Do you think Uncle Thomas was just trying to frighten us with that story,2. 隱藏的線索 the hidden clues about the Foggy Figure,6,Justin carefully lowered himself into the

5、boat and then reached for Marys hand. Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then,3. 分析兩句開頭句,things happened on the boat,their frightened feelings,The Foggy Figure appeared,what is the Foggy Figure,_ atmosphere,nervous and frightening,7,存在問題,1. 沒有下劃線,2. 對話太多,3. 第一段最后一句與第二段第一句沒有銜接,張淑雯 鄭慧琳 夏晨輝

6、 蔡佳佳 鐘淇， 張博，羅慧杰 王佳慧 程卓瑤朱芮瑩,五個(gè)檔次,第五檔：21-25 第四檔： 16-20 第三檔：11-15 第二檔：6-10 第一檔：1-5,8,Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Marys hand. Mary climbed into the boat and sat beside him. She was getting nervous now that they were on the water. “See anything?” They looked around

7、, and gradually, the fog began to lift. Mary turned around and screamed. “The Foggy Figure!” It was in the boat with them,9,Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then they heard a laugh. Justin moved toward the Foggy Figure. “Uncle Thomas?”“I knew that story would get you two out of bed ear

8、ly enough to take a boat ride with me.” Mary sighed, happy there was no Foggy Figure after all. Justin looked relieved, too. Uncle Thomas laughed. “What do you say? I packed a breakfast for us.” Mary smiled. She had smelled the scent of coffee. And Uncle Thomas had packed sweet cakes for them, too.

9、“Lets do it,” Mary and Justin said,10,Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Marys hand. Mary climbed into the boat and sat beside him. She was getting nervous now that they were on the water. “See anything?” They looked around, and gradually, the fog began to lift. Mary

10、 turned around and screamed. “The Foggy Figure!” It was in the boat with them! Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then they heard a laugh. Justin moved toward the Foggy Figure. “Uncle Thomas?”“I knew that story would get you two out of bed early enough to take a boat ride with me.” Mary sighed, happy there was no Foggy Figure after all. Justin looked relieved, too. Uncle Thomas laughed. “What do you say? I packed a breakfast for us.” Mary smiled. She had smelled the scent of coffee. And Uncle Thomas had packed sweet cak