四級(jí)英語考試作文高分技巧講義(1)

1、四級(jí)考試作文高分技巧大學(xué)四級(jí)考試寫作的評(píng)分依據(jù)是：文章切切題，條理清楚，語言準(zhǔn)確和字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。所謂切題就是看你寫的作文跑不跑題。所謂條理是每一段的議論的正反清楚，描述的時(shí)間正確。語言準(zhǔn)確要求作文的語法詞匯使用正確，符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。四級(jí)作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求不少于100字。針對(duì)四級(jí)考試的作文要求我們提岀十二句作文法，這里所說的十二句作文法不僅包括一般英文寫作的方法而且包括一套行之有效的寫作方法。它的具體內(nèi)容有以下幾點(diǎn)。一審題我們拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是審題。審題的作用在于使你寫作不跑題（如果跑題，條理和語言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）那末審題要審什么呢？1 體裁（議論文，說明文，描述文）審

2、題就是要審作文的題材和體裁。 因?yàn)槭材拥捏w裁就會(huì)用什末樣的題材去寫。那末體裁包括那些呢？它包括議論文，說明文和描述文。從近些年看，四級(jí)作文不是單一的體裁， 而是幾種體裁的雜合體。例如：Directi ons:For thispart ,your areallowed30 minutestowrite acomposition on the topicTryi ngto Be A GoodUn iversityStudent .Youshouldwrite at least 100 wordsand youshould baseyour compositi onontheoutli ne(gi

3、ve ninChinese ） below做合格大學(xué)生的必要性做合格大學(xué)生的必備條件（可以從德智體方面談）我計(jì)劃這樣做很多人說這種類型的作文是議論文。這是片面的，因?yàn)椋?第一段要求寫 “必要性”這說明本段體裁是議論文；第二段要求寫“必備條件”這說明本段要求寫說明文； 兒地三段要求寫 這樣做”這說明本段要求寫描述文。所以在大多數(shù)情形下，四級(jí)作文是三種體裁的雜合體2 根據(jù)不同體裁確定寫作方法通過審題，我們可以看岀四級(jí)作文地三段為描述體。 而各種文體又不同例如上面第一段的思路是：做合我們審題的目的就是根據(jù)不同體裁確定不同的寫作方法。大都是三段式。如上例第一段為議論體，第二段為說明體，的寫作方式：議論

4、文；要有論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)，而且往往從正反兩方面來論述 格大學(xué)生，會(huì)怎末樣（這是從正面論述）；不能做合格的大學(xué)生，會(huì)怎么樣（從反面論述）；所 以我們要做合格的大學(xué)生（結(jié)倫）說明文：可以從幾方面或幾條來說明一個(gè)問題，就上作文而言，可以從方面（德智體）來說 明合格大學(xué)生的必要性。描述文：一 人為中心描述一個(gè)做的過程。與上兩段相比，本段的主語多為人稱代詞，他要與第二段相互應(yīng)進(jìn)行描述。二確定主題句通過審題，我們知道該如何確定正確的寫作思路。下邊我們就談如何些。第一部就是要寫主題句。主題句是確保不跑題的前提，只有不跑題才有可得及格分。寫主題句嘴保險(xiǎn)的方法就是把中文提綱的各句譯成英語。例如上述三段主題句分別為：I

5、t is very necessary to be a good universitystudent .（議論體的主題句）There are severalrespectsof necessities to be a good university student .（說明體的主題句）What I will do in the future is the following .（描述體主題句）如果要求句是英語就可以把它變成主題句，例如這樣一篇作文:Good HealthImportaneeof good healthWays to keep fitMy own practice這樣的作文的要求

6、句就可以擴(kuò)充成主題句。擴(kuò)充后三段的主題句分別為：It is very importantto have good health .（將名詞 importanee 變成形容詞 important）There are four ways to keep fit for me . （用 there be 句型）My own practices are the following . （采用原詞）n主題句又稱主旨句或關(guān)鍵句，是一個(gè)段落中最重要的句子，是段落的 綱”說明段落的中心思想和作者的寫作目的，是段落發(fā)展的依據(jù)。n段落的每句話都應(yīng)緊密地聯(lián)系主題句所表達(dá)的中心內(nèi)容。n寫好主題句是文章成功的關(guān)鍵。n

7、（common practice of scoring in CET-4）主題句的構(gòu)成n Topic sentence = a topic + a controlling idea about the topicn 主題句=主題+中心思想n主題：段落所談的話題，問題n中心思想：限定話題的范圍，確定話題的發(fā)展方向。整個(gè)段落都以這個(gè)中心思想為依據(jù)，圍繞它進(jìn)行。中心思想用關(guān)鍵詞（key words） 來表達(dá)。Examples:pleaseide ntifythetwo partsn Developing private cars in China has many positive aspects.

8、n Keeping pets is beneficial to people in several aspects.effects.n Smoking results in a series of negativeto success.n The following factors contributen The reasons why bicyclesare so popular in China lie as follows.主題句位于段首n開門見山，點(diǎn)岀主題。n There are many ways through which we can improve our English. A

9、bove all,we should read as many English books, newspapers and magazines as possible. Next, we may listen to English programs on the radio or watch English proevery opportunimportant to fgrams on TV every day. Besides,_ it is necessary for us to seize ity to speak English both in and after class. Fin

10、ally, it is equally orm the habit of taking notes and keeping a diary in English. 主題句的寫法：如何寫好n主題句應(yīng)盡量清晰明了，簡練，用詞準(zhǔn)確，力求用一句話清楚地表達(dá)該段的中心。n Environmental n Environmental ttention.pollution is important.pollution is an importantproblem that deservesour special an The moreI read, the morehungryn The moreI rea

11、d, the morehungry主題句的寫作技巧n 表示人的名詞或代詞主語的句子I feel.I feel for knowledge.(1)n College studentsshouldtake part in social practiceand get to know the world.Peopletake part in recreationalactivities because of several reasons.We benefita lot from doingpart time jobs.n Young people today are badly influence

12、d by TV.主題句的寫作技巧（2）n 表示物的名詞做主語的句子 n Information plays an indispensable role in modern life. n Diligence is a key factor to success.n Sports benefit people in many ways.n Recreational activities fall into two major types.主題句的寫作技巧（3 ）n用動(dòng)名詞短語來表達(dá)主題，做主語。nOwning a private car is very convenient.nKeeping p

13、ets can lead to some problems.nStudying abroad benefits students in many aspects.主題句的寫作技巧（4 ）areseveralreasonswhy weshoulddeveloptheindustryofprivatecaareinnumerableadvantagesof keepingpets.arediversesolutionsto thehousingprobleminbig cities.areeffectivemeasuresthatwe canadopt todealwith theissue of

14、risn用“There +be +名詞句型來寫主題句。n There rs.n There n There n Thereing crime rate.主題句的寫作技巧（5 ）n用 It is + Adj.+forsb. todo sth.句型nIt is beneficialforcollegestudentsto take part in various social activities.nItisnecessaryfor us togetto knowaboutthesociety.nItisdesirable/advisableforyoungpeopleto goabroadto

15、studyStudytheTopicSenten cesnOwningacar can bevery costly.n Travelingby air is moreconvenientthantravelingby train.n Computersplaya varietyof roles in ourlife.n College studentsdream of going abroadto study mainly on accountollowingthree reasons.n Readingplaysan importantrole in languagelearning.of

16、the fn In choosing a career, studentsshould consider various factors.三確保文章條理清楚保證不跑提示寫作當(dāng)中第一任務(wù)，第二個(gè)重要任務(wù)就是要做到條理清楚。對(duì)于議論文來說， 正反面要清楚，對(duì)于說明文來說條理要清楚，對(duì)于描述文來說，誰干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good health來說，第一段保持正反面要清楚救應(yīng)這樣寫：正面(With good health ,we can)，反面( Without good health,we can do nothing .We can do.)為了使文章更具有條理性，我們可以用 first(ly)

17、 seco nd(ly)third(ly) 等副詞，他們可以是文章的條例性更加突岀。作文是主觀題，想得告分就必須引起老師的主意，老師的時(shí)間很短(每篇作文只有一兩分鐘就要閱完)，所以我們?cè)诹姓{(diào)試最好不用：To be with,. after that ,then， The next , . The following , . As last .。因?yàn)橛眠@樣的詞語不利于老師 看出你作文的條理性。四保證作文符合字?jǐn)?shù)要求的十二句作文法考生一般都希望作文達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)而又不至于寫得太多，因?yàn)閷懙锰嘁环矫姹┞蹲约赫Z言上的弱點(diǎn)，另一方面又會(huì)占用過多的時(shí)間。寫得太多還易跑題，一個(gè)有效的方法就是十二句作文法。即主題

18、句加120-1我們知道，四級(jí)作文都是三段式。我們算一下，如果我們?cè)诿恳欢沃袑懮纤木?，兩三句擴(kuò)展句和一個(gè)結(jié)論句就可以了。這樣全篇在十二句左右，每一句十多個(gè)詞，就又50個(gè)字。大家可以試圖找一些作文題練一練。文章的結(jié)構(gòu)n 一個(gè)完整的段落包括三部分：主題句，推展句和結(jié)論句。n 一篇完整的四級(jí)作文包括三部分：引言，正文和結(jié)論。又稱：三段論。n 因此，可以說，文章是段落的擴(kuò)展，段落是文章的壓縮。文章的結(jié)構(gòu) 十二句作文法n 具體地說，四級(jí)作文實(shí)際是一個(gè)十二句話短文（十二句作文法）n 引言段三句或四句話：開頭句 +主題句（中心思想句+承上啟下的組織句）n 正文段四或五句話：主題句 +三個(gè)擴(kuò)（推）展句n 結(jié)論段

19、四句或三句話：主題句 +擴(kuò)（推）展句+結(jié)論句Examplen Losing Weightn1）減肥已成為時(shí)尚。n2）人們熱衷于減肥的原因。n3）減肥的有效方法。n1) 2 sentencesn2)4 sentencesn3)4 sentencesLos ingWeightn Nowadays,many peopleare very much worriedaboutbeing overweight.2)And people,the young andwomenin particular,are tryingvarious ways tolose weight.n3)Thereare manyr

20、easons whymore and more people are concernedabout losingweight.4)Tobeginwith,they areall aware ofthe danger of being overweight,whichmayleadto manydiseasessuch as hyper-tension,diabetesand heartattacks.5)Secondly,more! peoplehave becomeconcernedabout their shapeand theywanttoappearenergeticand young

21、.6)What s more, losingweightcan helpthemfeelmentallyhealthierand buildup their self-esteem.n7)Therearediffere ntmeans throughwhich people can achieve theirgoaloflosing weight.8)Firstof all, some ofthe people who want toremovetheirfateat lessoreat nothing.9)Besides,they take weight-reducingdrugs.10)B

22、utthe mosteffectiveandhealthywayto lose weightis to takeproperexercises.文章開頭寫作的兩點(diǎn)原則n 要緊扣文章標(biāo)題，即開頭點(diǎn)題。n 要能順利地引岀下文，和下文（文章中間部分一一正文）的內(nèi)容相聯(lián)系，引發(fā)讀者興趣，使人想讀下去。引言段的常用寫作方法n 提問式n引用名言諺語法n 話題式/現(xiàn)象法1. 提問式n以提問開頭，激發(fā)讀者興趣，可自問自答，自然而然地引岀下文。n What is essential for happiness? Our world is a big world, complex and ful l of man

23、y diverse people. So different people may have different opinions. In my opinion, happiness lies in the service that you give other people.此種開頭段的構(gòu)成n 這種開頭段的構(gòu)成方法如下：n 問題+答案（過渡句+提供答案的進(jìn)一步論述）+中心思想句常用句型，常見寫法n What is ？Have you ever ？nHave you ever taken a part-time job? What are the advantages of college s

24、tudents doing part -time jobs? As to this questions, different students may hold totally differentideasSome st uden tstakethepositionthat it isbeneficialfora collegestudenttodo atemporaryjob.Theyhavethe followingreasonsOn the con trarytherearestill otherswhodisapproveof studentstakingpart-time jobs.

25、Theyhavetheirown reasons againstit.2. 引用名言諺語法n 引用名人名言或諺語，俗語等，這些語句常具有權(quán)威性或?yàn)榇蠹宜J(rèn)，引用在文章中有一定的說 服力。(CnOf alltreasures” ,saysan ancientsaint,“ knowledgeis themostprecious,for itcanneitherbestolen,given away, nor consumed, ”Fromthat,we can see thegreatimportanceofeducation.n Shakespearesaid:One who is unha

26、ppycan never geta beneficialresult.That is tosay, happinessis very importantinour life.n FrancisBacon oncesaid,Some booksareto be tasted,others tobe swallowed, andsome few tobe chewed anddigested.Perhapsthis is thebest ad vice on howto read.此種開頭段的構(gòu)成n引用的諺語或名言+意義+主題（中心思想）n There is an old English sayi

27、ng whichgoesNo pains,no gains.Itillustrates the importanceof hard work in theprocessof success.In otherwords, digence is a key factor to success.話題式/現(xiàn)象法n With the rapid developmentof society/modernlife/scienceandtechnology/people s living standard,an increasingnumberof people havebecome awareof the

28、importanceofn Recently,the issueofhas becomeincreasinglycontroversial.n Nowa days, a largenumber of studentshavebecome concernedabout分析下列開頭段落的寫法isetShoulda veryWhatme tellcollege studentscontroversialdo you usuallyyou somethingtime. Stamp collectingtopicdokeep part-timeand itin yourabout myis my fav

29、oritejobswhilethey are in school? Thisbringsaboutmanyheateddiscussions.sparetime?Whatis yourfavoritehobby? Lhobby.hobby.I liketo collect stamps in my freeAll work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. is a popular saying in English. There is much truth in this old saying. It means that in order to keep

30、 us in good health, we must take sufficient recreation.文章結(jié)尾的寫法文章的結(jié)尾n常言道：編筐編簍，全在收口 ”。一篇優(yōu)秀的文章其結(jié)構(gòu)和氣勢(shì)應(yīng)為：虎頭，牛身，豹尾?！眓我們的考生四級(jí)考試時(shí)所寫的文章往往由于時(shí)間緊張而虎頭，蛇尾”。n其實(shí)，文章結(jié)尾的好壞也在很大程度上影響文章的global impression.文章結(jié)尾的作用n 1.歸納總結(jié)概括全文，得岀結(jié)論。n All in all , traveling on one s own has both advantages and disadvantages.n 2.突岀主要論點(diǎn)，重申強(qiáng)化主

31、題（中心）。nIn a word,my life oncampusis really colorful andmeaningful.n 3.表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)，闡述立場(chǎng)。nAs for me,I take thepositionthat atest ofspokenEnglishis extremely necessary and it should be included in CET.文章結(jié)尾的常用寫作方法n重申主題句法n總結(jié)（結(jié)論）法n發(fā)表個(gè)人看法，總結(jié)全文n反問結(jié)尾法n引言結(jié)論法n提倡議號(hào)召（喊口號(hào)）法重申主題句法n In_conclusion,nothing is_more valuabl

32、e than health In good health, we can absorb knowledge more readily. In good health we can achieve more success and make more contributionto our country.necessary for good health but intellectualrecreationprovides the most pleasun弓1言段Whenevaluatinga jobnapplicant,most companieswould placemuch weighto

33、none s educationalcertificate.Of course, one s educationor one s educationalcertificatedoes tellsomethingabout the applicant.However,it is not theonlymeansthroughwhich we canjudge whethertheapplicantisqualifiedornot.常用句型表達(dá)nInconclusionnToconcludenInallnAllthings considerednToconclude,nosuccess can b

34、e achieved without laboring. Success is simply the fruit of hard work.n In all, our school lifeis really interesting and colorful.總結(jié)（結(jié)論）法nIn_short,the_advantagesof_travelingoutnumberthe_disadvantages. Therefore, let go traveling when we have the time and enjoy the beautiful scenery and broaden our h

35、orizon.常用句型nTosumup, the advantagesof -far outnumber/outweighthe di sadvantages.nAllthingsconsidered,thebenefitsof aremore than theproblems.nHavingtaken all thefactorsintoconsideration,we can seethat doing something.doesmore goodthanharmto somebody.發(fā)表個(gè)人看法，總結(jié)全文useful to those who live in retirement.a

36、ren In my opinion, the balance of these two kinds of activities might be more In other words, physical activitiesre.常用句型nIn my opinionnPersonally,I think/believenI take thepositionthatnI hold/taketheattitudethatnAs far as IamconcernednWere it lefttometo decide引言結(jié)論法n True friendshipcannot be boughtwi

37、th money.The proverb“ A friendin need is a friend indeed” is reallytrue.反問結(jié)尾法nDon t you thinkit is high timethat we tookeffectiveactions to fightagainstfake commoditiesinthe market?nDon t y ou agreewithmy ideathat atestoforal English shouldbeincludedin CET-4 and 6?常用句型nDon t you thinkit isnecessaryf

38、or usto?nDon t you thinkit ishigh/abouttimethatwedid sth.?nDon t you agreewithmy idea/opinionthat?提倡議號(hào)召（喊口號(hào)）法nLet sjoinin our effortsto fightagainstthe fakecommoditiesandprotecttheinterestsof our peopleand ournation.nLet sspareno effortsto protectour environmentfrom beingfurtherdamagedand saveour pl

39、anet.常用句型nLet sjoinin the efforts to donLet sspareno effortsto donLet stakeeffectivemeasurestodonLet stakeimmediateactionstodonLet stakepracticalsteps todoAn alyzethefollowi ngparagraphsnIn my opinion,what reallycounts is not failureitself,but whatwe think of the failureand whatwe doafterthe failure

40、.Solong aswe don t give up, and believeinourselves,and inthemeantimelearnsomething.Fromfailure,wewill certainlymakeour marksinthe end. So I ami neverafraid offailure,forI believe thatfailureis not abadthing,“ failure isthe mother of success. ”nPollutioncan bereduced.Butit can only be reducedifpeople

41、everywherereallyaddressthe situationand makea continuingand intensiveefforttoreducethe quantityofpollutantemissionsinto the air.Talkingaboutit isnotenough.Positiveactionwill have to betaken.n Therefore,thereis nothingwrongwith the media.Comicbookscanbebador good. It is a question how they are used.四

42、六級(jí)考試寫作檢查四六級(jí)考試時(shí)間緊張，匆匆完稿之后，疏漏在所難免，因而有必要復(fù)查，修改，及時(shí)糾正偏差,堵塞漏洞，從而將作文質(zhì)量再提高一步。檢查主要針對(duì)四個(gè)重點(diǎn)部位：1）是否切題它又分三個(gè)層面： 一是整篇文章內(nèi)容是否切合文章標(biāo)題要求；二是段落主題句的內(nèi)容是否與各段落提示句內(nèi)容相一致；三是段落內(nèi)部的內(nèi)容是否與段落主題句的表達(dá)相-致。如果發(fā)現(xiàn)任何一個(gè)層面不切題，應(yīng)盡可能彌補(bǔ)，刪除那些多余的或不切題的地方；增添殘缺的、語義表達(dá)不足 的地方。由于時(shí)間所限，刪的內(nèi)容一定要精，要切中要害，切忌動(dòng)大手術(shù)”。2）是否連貫檢查上下文是否連貫，句子銜接是否自然流暢，檢驗(yàn)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)主要是句子是否通順，該用連接詞的地方用了沒

43、有，以及所用的連接詞是否合適。3）是否有語法錯(cuò)誤主謂是否一致，動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、語氣的使用是否正確，詞組的搭配是否合乎習(xí)慣。為避免不必要的語法錯(cuò)誤，對(duì)把握性不大的詞組、句型絕不要用。而應(yīng)使用那些自己熟悉的詞組、句型來表達(dá)相同或相近的意思。4）是否有大小寫、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤在這些細(xì)枝末節(jié)上，謹(jǐn)慎細(xì)心地處理，無疑會(huì)進(jìn)一步提高文章的整體質(zhì)量。在檢查、改錯(cuò)的過程中，切忌亂涂亂抹。保持卷面清潔，無疑會(huì)給閱卷者留下好印象。另外，在上述幾個(gè)寫作關(guān)鍵步驟中，時(shí)間的分配大致應(yīng)該為：審題、擬題綱10分鐘，擬主題句、完成段落15分鐘，檢查5分鐘。總之，對(duì)于四六級(jí)考試作文，由于其題型比較固定，對(duì)應(yīng)試者要求相對(duì)不高，因此

44、，應(yīng)試者有必要掌握一些寫作技巧，多加練習(xí)，力爭提高寫作的質(zhì)量和水平。高分作文標(biāo)志1:是否長短句交叉；2、是否會(huì)使用插入語；3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。四級(jí)寫作中如何選詞Compare the Follow ingSenten cesnWeshould use differentways toget to knowthesociety.nWeought to make use ofvariousmethodstogetto knowthe society.nWeare supposedto t

45、akeadvantageof diversemeans toget to know thesociety.選詞的基本原則n盡量用四級(jí)范圍內(nèi)的積極的，活躍的，常用的詞或詞組n盡量用表達(dá)最貼切，最生動(dòng),最有力的詞或短語。n盡量用最符合所寫話題,所用文體的詞或表達(dá)。Summaryn 文章無論長短都是由詞匯構(gòu)成的。如果掌握的詞匯量不夠，寫岀的文章就會(huì)詞不達(dá)意，嚴(yán)重影響文章 的表達(dá)。所以，要盡可能學(xué)好詞匯，掌握詞，詞組和常用表達(dá)，打好寫作基礎(chǔ)。四級(jí)考生在措詞方面存在的問題:n1可供 調(diào)遣”的詞匯量貧乏，用詞大部分局限于中學(xué)詞匯。Eg. Good points=benefits,advantages,me

46、rits.Problems,bad points=drawbacks,disadvantages,shortcomings,defects.n2表達(dá)相近意義時(shí)，常重復(fù)用一個(gè)詞，用詞單調(diào)Eg. Good= helpful, useful, beneficial, favorable, advantageous, does good to, b enefit.策略n1調(diào)動(dòng)大學(xué)期間學(xué)過的更生動(dòng)，更豐富的詞匯表達(dá)意思。Eg. Cause, lead to, result in, bring about, give rise/birth ton2用具體，生動(dòng)，有針對(duì)性的詞語。Eg. Use, make

47、use of, make (good, effective, wide, wise, full) use of sth, take(full) advantage ofn 3文中如需要多次表達(dá)同一詞義時(shí)，以原詞，同義詞，近義詞等避免重復(fù)使用同一詞。Eg. Adapt to, adjust, make fit, get used to, be accustomed toF面給岀寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng):we / I （ 比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)1. 適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí)，句子開頭不要總是用不用 we should pay attention to而用 Attention should b

48、e paid to.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾 2004 年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approac，its competitihes were impleme nted by the service in dustry like that. By doing so ve edge will be sharpe ned effectively.2. 善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。如however / therefore /for ex

49、ample/I believe做插入語放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。比如說：Other in dividuals, however, take the attitude that3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要岀現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等）比如上面例子中， applicable 替換 proper, approaches 替換 ways, i mplement 替換 carry out, sharpenone scompetitive edge替換 enhance

50、one sompetitiveness（提高某物競(jìng)爭力）下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提 高。Computer and I By SimmyI n ever forget the exceed in gly thrilli ng day whe n my mother bought me a comput er as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i

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52、erested in sth.google 替換 searchan army of 替換 a lot ofThe daw n of the new cen tury wit nessed the in creas ing popularity of computers. C oin cide nt with the adva nceme nt of scie nce and tech no logy, computers pouri ng int o the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no ex aggerati on to say we have bee n submerged by