初中英語書面表達技巧和方法完整版及練習題及解析

1、初中英語書面表達技巧和方法完整版及練習題及解析 一、英語書面表達 1 “iPad”English 的消息引起了學生和家長們的討論。你們學校的進課堂近日，某中學NewsletteriPads, coming into the classrooms為題舉行征文活動，請根據(jù)右側(cè)表格提正在以 示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文。 學生們認為 偶像 1.不需要背沉重的書包去上學 2.很新鮮，學習更感興趣 3. 梅西，有足球天賦 家長們認為 夢想 1. 1.影響孩子視力 2.增加家庭負擔 1點）考生自擬（至少 不需要出門；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累 你的觀點 優(yōu)點2. advantage）（3. 1. 2. 價格通

2、常比較便宜 可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多 注意： 1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫； 2）所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中所有的相關信息，觀點可作適當發(fā)揮； 903詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；）詞數(shù)： 4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。 iPads, coming into the classroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method._ _ iPads, coming i

3、nto the classrooms【答案】Can you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students dont think they have to carry heavy bags any more. Its cool to have lessons over eresting to study like that. They believe that they wi

4、ll learn more and better.iPads. Its very intHowever,parents think using ipads for too long will influence childrens eyesight. And some poor families cant afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. Its easy for us to chat

5、 with our classmates and teachers about our lessons.iPad進課堂這一現(xiàn)象，以及人們對此【解析】根據(jù)題目要求，需要書寫一篇議論文，探討的不同觀點和態(tài)度。文章需要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱。結合觀點式議論文的段落格式，首先在第一段提出問題現(xiàn)象，第二段表達支持這種行為做法的原因和好處，第三段描述反對人的觀點及原因，最后一段表達自己的觀點。注意多使用固定短語，固定句型，使 文章增色。 點睛：對立觀點式 第一段：提出現(xiàn)象。 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. 第二段：They point

6、out the fact that _X 的第一個原支持 X They also argue that _的另一個原因。支持因。 However, other people stand on a different ground. 第三段： They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that _X 的第一個理反對 An example can give the details of this argument: _一個例子。由。 There is some truth in both arguments. 第四段： But

7、I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一個 壞處。 2書面表達“”生低碳地球是我們的家園，我們作為地球的主人，就應該好好保護地球?，F(xiàn)在正在倡導活，只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境，不浪費地球的能源，就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠，生活變得更美好。作為中學生，我們應該怎樣做呢？談談你的想法。內(nèi)容應該包括以下幾 點：1. 2. 3. 節(jié)約糧食，在更多的土節(jié)約用水

8、、用電；節(jié)約紙張，循環(huán)使用舊課本，保護森林； 4. 不亂丟雜物，保護環(huán)境；地上種樹； 80詞左右要求：短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名； the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式提示詞： How does our earth turn better? The earth is our home. _ _ If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better. How does our earth turn better?

9、【答案】The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn o

10、ff the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment

11、. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better. 【解析】 【詳解】how to dolive inaround ，這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如，us such asas a middle school studentand so onclose down the waterturn off the ，lightscut downmake a contribution to our earthpollute our envi

12、ronmentbetter and ，betterBut how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I think as a middle 和等。而固定結構school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasa

13、nts will plant more trees on their farm.等復雜從句結構的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適 當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。 【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得 到較高的分數(shù)。 3 2019年全國兩世界衛(wèi)生組織的一項研究報告顯示，我國青少年近視率居世界第一。“”成關注重

14、點，防控青少年近視迫在眉睫。以下表格是學校針對本校學生近會當中小眼鏡Jack，請根據(jù)所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇調(diào)查報視問題做的調(diào)查表，假如你是校報編輯 告，陳述學校調(diào)查結果，并表明你自己的觀點和理由。 我校學生的近視問題調(diào)查 60%的本校學生戴眼鏡。情況 1. 不良的看書習慣，如在床上或陽光下看書 2. 長時間玩手機、看電視、玩電腦原因 3. 學習時間長，作業(yè)多 1. 認真做眼保健操 建議2. 多吃胡蘿卜等對眼睛有益的食物 3. nearsighted 近視參考詞匯： 1. 內(nèi)容須包括所提示的信息，可適當發(fā)揮；注意： 2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校名稱； 80-1003. ，開頭已經(jīng)給

15、出，不計入總詞數(shù)。詞數(shù)：According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China._ _According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are 【答案】nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So i

16、t is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, dont keep your eyes work for a long time. Dont spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Dont read in the sun; dont read in bed or in a movin

17、g bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted. 【解析】

18、【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)表格中的相關信息介紹一下如何保護視力。所提供的表格中列舉了近視的原因和建議。主要從原因和建議兩個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。注意作文中必須包含表格上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，表達具 有條理性。 【高分句型一】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的視力對每個人都很重 要。 +for sb. to

19、so sth. It is +形容詞本題運用句型： 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 當你讀這本 書的時候，你應該把它從你的眼睛里移開一英尺。 whenwhen you read引導的時間狀語從句。是由 4書面表達,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請他來你假如你是華你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣 ,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游 : :1,安做省南部中國東部位置 ,2.:秋季涼爽氣候春暖花開 : :3.山和古村落景點 :4.茶、

20、黃梅戲文化 5.建議 Huangmei Opera:黃梅戲提示詞 80-100:1.詞數(shù)注意 ,2.使行文連貫?？蛇m當增加細節(jié) 3.文中不得出現(xiàn)自己真實的校名和人名 ,4.不計入總詞數(shù)開頭和結展己給出 Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun? Dear Dave，【答案】I know you are interested in C

21、hinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. Fo

22、r example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, dont forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. Whats more, come and watch Huan

23、gmei Opera. Its easy to understand and wont let you down! rward to seeing you here!Welcome to Anhui! Im looking fo Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【詳解】Dave安徽一游，這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友寫信，邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化，并給出建議。短文應使用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的

24、連貫。另外，英語的表達習慣和漢語是不同的，因此寫作時不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應從句子的整體結構出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡單句結構，易于掌握，不容易出錯。但為提升文章檔次，也應穿插一些并列句結構或復合句，以及使用一些 復雜結構，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。 【點睛】Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請的景點和文化。短文有如下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具容，并對細節(jié)進行補充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實、豐富。短文先對體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短

25、文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式結構完整，符合英語的表達習慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時來敘述，注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結構以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復合句，還有一些好的The best time to come here is in autumn, because its really cool and you can just take 句型，如some light coatsBesides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so 、o

26、n.Whats more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. Its easy to understand and wont let you 、 Im looking forward to seeing you here!down!等。、 Lucy5想要感受中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。周末你和父假如你叫李華，最近你班里的美國交換生母商議后，打算邀請她去老舍茶館。你通過微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何時 何地見面。 Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示詞語： Where are you g

27、oing?提示問題： What will you do there? When and where will you meet? Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe 【答案】Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teah

28、ouse. We can experience Chinese ? See you.traditional culture there. Lets meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OKLucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何時何【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，我通過微信告訴 地見面。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂I want 一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Lets meet atWe are going totoWe can等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代

29、， 詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我想要邀請你去老舍茶館，接下來介紹我們want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do 去那里做什么，最后指出我們要在何時何地見面。此處 sth, at the gate of等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。 6書面表達”“活動，你們班開展了一次主題班會。請你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下為了配合足球進校園 列表格中的要點提示，用英語向同學們介紹足球這項運動并談談自己的夢想。 歷史悠久，深受喜愛識常 4年舉行一次世界杯 男生女生皆可參加 利于培養(yǎng)團隊精神好處 1點）考

30、生自擬（至少 901. 左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；注意：詞數(shù) 1.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順； 2.短文中不得真實的人名、校名等相關信息。 Messi參考詞匯：梅西 Dear classmates, -themed schools by 2020.Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football Thank you for your attention. Dear classmates，【答案】 000 football-themed schools by 2020Im

31、 very excited to hear that China will build 20，F(xiàn)ootball has a very long historyIt is liked by people all over the worldThe World Cup takes place every four yearsPlaying football has lots of advantagesFirstboth boys and girls can ，take part in itSecondit helps develop team spiritWhats moreplaying foo

32、tball is good for ， our healthIm a football fanMessi is my heroHe has a gift for playing footballMy dream is to become I hope China will hold the World Cup some daya famous football player like Messi Thank you for your attention 【解析】 【詳解】試題分析：本題要求按提綱的提示，介紹足球運動并談談自己的夢想。要求仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確本文主要從三

33、個方面來寫：介紹足球運動及其好處；說說自己的偶像；談談自己的夢想。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來 寫。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；語言表達要符合英語習慣。Football has a very long history. It is liked by 寫作亮點：本文語言精煉，像第二自然段的people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. Whats more, playing football is good for our

34、 health. 等等句子，簡潔，但是句意表達清楚；同時，本文用了被動語態(tài)、動名詞作主語、不定式作表語等等語法形式，使表達生 first, second等使得短文層次清楚。動；用了 7 假如你是李華，你們學校準備組織學生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教Peter參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件，告訴他集合的時間和地點，在那里可以做什么，以 及參觀時需要準備什么。 school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示詞語： to meet?When and where are you going 提示問題： What are you going to d

35、o there? What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit? Dear Pete, How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in Yanqing._ _ Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Peter， How is it going?I am writing to invite you to

36、 visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different

37、cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. Youd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you. Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【詳解】1. 題干解讀：這是一篇給材料作文，屬于應用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，寫作中，應注意描述

38、的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；提 示的問題就是寫作的基本方向，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮即可。 2. 例文點評：文章采取郵件格式，時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應該符合語法 的結構，語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性。 3. 高分亮點： plan to doa lot ofschool gateinvite sb. to do。短語：； Im looking forward toYoud better not onlybut also。；句型：； 8, , 某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化“Stand in the snow to wait f

39、or Master Cheng respectfully”是其中一個選題。請你程門立雪（） , 用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示 內(nèi)容提示： 1. 楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口 , 2. 發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。通過介紹這個故事 要求： . 1001. , 左右以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)：可以適當增加細節(jié) 2. 不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名。Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, 【答案】Chengyi.

40、 Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didnt wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was ver

41、y deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply. After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard. 【解析】 【詳解】, “Stand in the snow to wait for 程門立雪（這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事Master Cheng respectfully”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去

42、時，）靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或:There was/ 者觀點。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如 were.注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系，具有條理性。 9Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。最近他對母親節(jié)你在博客里假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Song of the parting son）很感興趣，給你寫信想了解該詩，請你根據(jù)以下發(fā)的游子吟（ 提示給他回信： 1.作者：孟郊 2.時間：唐朝 3.內(nèi)容：母親為兒子做衣服 4.主題：母愛的偉大 注意： 1.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名和學校名稱； 2.語言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，

43、書寫規(guī)范； : 80-1003.詞左右，信件的開頭與結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。詞數(shù) Dear Jack, .Im glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son_ _ Yours, Dear Jack,【答案】Im glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now Im writing to tell you something about

44、 it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily lifea mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mothers love can be. In a word

45、, this short poem has touched many peoples hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】 【分析】 這是一篇材料作文。 【詳解】 根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知，這是一篇書信類文章。時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。 英語作文一般分為三個部分：Jack熱愛中國的唐詩宋詞。我將給你介紹游子吟朋友第一部分：交代寫信目的 Song of the parting son）這首詩。（ Song of the parting son）這

46、首詩。第二部分：文章主體部分具體介紹游子吟（ 1.作者：孟郊 2.時間：唐朝 3.內(nèi)容：母親為兒子做衣服 4.主題：母愛的偉大如果對方有任何問題，可以繼續(xù)問自己，并期待收到對方的來第三部分：信的結語 信。 10 “”已成購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。網(wǎng)購隨著網(wǎng)絡的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng) 上購物的文章。 1.看不到商品本身只看到圖片， 缺點 disadvantage）（ 2.造成浪費容易購買大量不太需要的東西， 你的觀點 cause goods; shopping online; 導致商品提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購 1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的