高考英語作文的審題與結(jié)構(gòu)（21PPT）

1、 To Perfect the Structure of Our English Writing By the end of the lesson, the students will be able to have a better command of the whole structure before writing. attach importance to the topic sentence while writing each part. raise the awareness of making the topic sentence and the supporting se

2、ntences cohere. 題型題型Part 1Part 1Part 2Part 2Part 3Part 3 現(xiàn)象解釋型現(xiàn)象解釋型描述現(xiàn)象描述現(xiàn)象 說明現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的說明現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的 原因原因 表明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度或表明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度或 闡述個(gè)人做法闡述個(gè)人做法 對(duì)比選擇型對(duì)比選擇型 表明一方表明一方 或雙方的或雙方的 觀點(diǎn)觀點(diǎn) 表明另一方的觀表明另一方的觀 點(diǎn)及理由，或指點(diǎn)及理由，或指 出雙方觀點(diǎn)的不出雙方觀點(diǎn)的不 足之處及理由足之處及理由 表明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度或表明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度或 闡述個(gè)人做法闡述個(gè)人做法 問題解決型問題解決型提出問題提出問題 分析問題，給出分析問題，給出 解決方案解決方案 表明個(gè)人觀

3、點(diǎn)態(tài)度或表明個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度或 闡述個(gè)人做法闡述個(gè)人做法 觀點(diǎn)論證型觀點(diǎn)論證型提出論點(diǎn)提出論點(diǎn)例證論點(diǎn)例證論點(diǎn) 得出結(jié)論或表明個(gè)人得出結(jié)論或表明個(gè)人 看法與做法看法與做法 應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文描述事實(shí)描述事實(shí)闡述原因闡述原因表明觀點(diǎn)或提出建議表明觀點(diǎn)或提出建議 常見的作文結(jié)構(gòu)可以參看下表：常見的作文結(jié)構(gòu)可以參看下表： 1. 落實(shí)段落結(jié)構(gòu)落實(shí)段落結(jié)構(gòu) Part1：30個(gè)詞的材料概括個(gè)詞的材料概括 Part2：各種分析：各種分析(原因；影響；感受等原因；影響；感受等) Part3：結(jié)合個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)，談具體做法：結(jié)合個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)，談具體做法 全文 全文 Part1材料概括可以用這種結(jié)構(gòu)：材料概括可以用這種結(jié)構(gòu)： Not

4、e: The adverbial can refer to time, reason, condition, purpose or concession(讓步讓步), and the attributive clause introduced by which can be used to present a result. 狀語狀語(非非 謂語謂語/從從 句句) + 主句主句 + 非限制性非限制性 定從定從 范例范例1： Although most people have a dream, only the minority of them can make it a reality lik

5、e the little boy, who keeps his dream regardless of the negative comments. （省聯(lián)盟大聯(lián)考） 范例范例2：In a bid/ gesture to encourage people to take action to protect the environment, a man is driving a truck releasing waste gas, from which the trees along the road suffer a lot.（1.8模） 范例范例3：Dissatisfied with the

6、 current schooling system, a father in Luzhou had his daughter quit school and taught her personally for 11 years, which has received both support and opposition. （揚(yáng)泰通淮宿 徐2017屆高三3月聯(lián)考） 1.越來越多的學(xué)生選擇休學(xué)一年獲越來越多的學(xué)生選擇休學(xué)一年獲 取技能和生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)而不是直接上大學(xué)，取技能和生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)而不是直接上大學(xué)， 這給了他們?cè)谡夜ぷ鞣矫娴膬?yōu)勢這給了他們?cè)谡夜ぷ鞣矫娴膬?yōu)勢。 _, an increasing num

7、ber of students are choosing to take a gap year to gain skills and life experience, _ _. Instead of going straight to university which gives them an edge over others in job hunting 2.自從超女在自從超女在20042004年一炮走紅以來年一炮走紅以來 ，各種各樣的，各種各樣的才藝表演才藝表演深受大眾歡迎，深受大眾歡迎， 可這也引起了社會(huì)廣泛爭議?？蛇@也引起了社會(huì)廣泛爭議。 _, various talent show

8、s are well received by the public,_ _. Since Super Girl became an instant hit in 2004 which, at the same time, brings about social extensive controversy 3.擔(dān)心孩子的吵鬧聲給他人帶來不便擔(dān)心孩子的吵鬧聲給他人帶來不便 ，一些母親分發(fā)紙袋，附上以孩子的名義，一些母親分發(fā)紙袋，附上以孩子的名義 寫的歉意信，對(duì)此人們的反應(yīng)不一。寫的歉意信，對(duì)此人們的反應(yīng)不一。 _ _, some mothers hand out bags with notes t

9、o express apologies in the name of their babies, _ _. Worried that their babies noises may bring inconvenience to other peoples reaction to which was mixed 4.多虧了他媽媽的鼓勵(lì)，作者在若多虧了他媽媽的鼓勵(lì)，作者在若 干次失敗之后成功找到了工作，這表明干次失敗之后成功找到了工作，這表明 在陷入困境時(shí)我們要采取一種積極的生在陷入困境時(shí)我們要采取一種積極的生 活態(tài)度。活態(tài)度。 _, the author succeeded in landing

10、 a job after several failures,_ _ _. Thanks to his mothers encouragement which indicates that we should adopt a positive attitude towards life when in trouble 5.不管負(fù)面的言論和他人的失敗，不管負(fù)面的言論和他人的失敗， 這只小聾青蛙成功地到達(dá)了高塔頂部，這只小聾青蛙成功地到達(dá)了高塔頂部， 這表明堅(jiān)持是通往成功的唯一道路。這表明堅(jiān)持是通往成功的唯一道路。 _ _, the tiny deaf frog succeeded in reach

11、ing the top of a tall tower,_ _. Despite the negative comments and others failure which indicates that perseverance is the only road to success 6.父親曾經(jīng)在工廠工作父親曾經(jīng)在工廠工作8 8年，之后年，之后 上了師范，做了十年老師。現(xiàn)在他在家上了師范，做了十年老師?，F(xiàn)在他在家 安度晚年。安度晚年。 Having worked in a factory for 8 yeas, my father was admitted to a teachers co

12、llege and served as a teacher for a decade, who is now enjoying the rest of his life at home. 7.為了重視中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，浙江為了重視中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，浙江 溫州的學(xué)校禁止過圣誕節(jié)。圣誕節(jié)在中溫州的學(xué)校禁止過圣誕節(jié)。圣誕節(jié)在中 國青少年中已經(jīng)流行了幾十年。國青少年中已經(jīng)流行了幾十年。 _ _, schools of Wenzhou in Zhejiang province are banned from celebrating Christmas, _ _. To attatch importance

13、to Chinese traditional festivals which has already been popular among teenagers in China for decades Part2/Part3的段落結(jié)構(gòu)的段落結(jié)構(gòu): Part2 主題句主題句 支撐句支撐句1/拓展句拓展句1 支撐句支撐句2/拓展句拓展句2 Part3 主題句主題句 支撐句支撐句1/拓展句拓展句1 支撐句支撐句2/拓展句拓展句2 結(jié)論句結(jié)論句 主題句的好句式：主題句的好句式： 1) 材料分析材料分析 As can be learnt from the passage, It can be learn

14、t from the passage that What we can learn from the picture / cartoon is that 2）結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，舉例表達(dá)：）結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷，舉例表達(dá)： The story sets me thinking of one such occasion, when Id like to take myself as an example to show you . When it comes to the relationship between parents and children, Im reminded of my parents,

15、 who once quarreled with each other the moment they met. 3) 表達(dá)支持表達(dá)支持/反對(duì)：反對(duì)： The reasons why I support/oppose the practice can be listed as follows. To begin with, . In addition,Most importantly, Everything considered, such practice does more good than harm to us. In the long run, it will have a nega

16、tive/positive influence on constructing a harmonious society. 4）結(jié)論表達(dá)）結(jié)論表達(dá) From my point of view, what we have to do is /something must be done to Personally/Consequently, its high time that measures should be taken to . Therefore, I am firmly convinced that So vital a role does praise play in our li

17、ves that never can we stress the significance of it too much. Its high time that we abandoned the idea of schooling at home, no matter how attractive it seems! Practice：按題目要求寫主題句：按題目要求寫主題句 Task1：2016江蘇省高三英語聯(lián)考江蘇省高三英語聯(lián)考 b) 以自己或朋友、家人的經(jīng)歷說明以自己或朋友、家人的經(jīng)歷說明“堅(jiān)持就會(huì)成功堅(jiān)持就會(huì)成功”或或 者不堅(jiān)持導(dǎo)致失敗。者不堅(jiān)持導(dǎo)致失敗。 The story sets

18、me thinking of one such occasion, when I failed in an important English test. I was so discouraged that I even thought of abandoning English. Fortunately, I realized my mistake and devoted more time and efforts to learning English. Eventually, my efforts paid off and I made great progress in English

19、. Task2：2015廣東高考英語廣東高考英語 2. 請(qǐng)以約請(qǐng)以約120個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)個(gè)詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)“夢想成就偉人夢想成就偉人”的看法，包的看法，包 括如下要點(diǎn)：括如下要點(diǎn)： (1)談?wù)剦粝氲闹匾?；談?wù)剦粝氲闹匾裕?(2)談?wù)勀闶侨绾螆?jiān)持你的夢想的談?wù)勀闶侨绾螆?jiān)持你的夢想的 Dreams play so vital a role in our lives that never can we give up our dreams no matter what difficulty we may come across. Id like to take myself as an example

20、to show you how I stick to my dream. When I was young, I dreamt of becoming a scientist, inventing more devices to make our lives more convenient. Whenever Im discouraged, Im reminded of my dream, telling myself to keep on going. Thanks to my dream, Ive reached where I am today. Task3：前黃高級(jí)中學(xué)：前黃高級(jí)中學(xué)2017屆高三一模適應(yīng)性考試屆高三一模適應(yīng)性考試 以約以約120個(gè)詞發(fā)表你個(gè)詞發(fā)表你“對(duì)吃苦教育對(duì)吃苦教育”的看法，內(nèi)容包括：的看法，內(nèi)容包括： （1）你對(duì)）你對(duì)“吃苦教育吃苦教育”概念的理解；概念的理解