書面表達(dá)句型的多樣性

1、高考英語高考英語 書面表達(dá)句型的多樣性書面表達(dá)句型的多樣性 謝麗鳳 方法一：巧妙運(yùn)用連接和合并手段方法一：巧妙運(yùn)用連接和合并手段 方法二：靈活進(jìn)行句式轉(zhuǎn)換方法二：靈活進(jìn)行句式轉(zhuǎn)換 方法三：增添法，增添句子成分，擴(kuò)轉(zhuǎn)句子方法三：增添法，增添句子成分，擴(kuò)轉(zhuǎn)句子 方法四：避免漢語式英語方法四：避免漢語式英語 Eg 1 . 一大早，史密斯就在花園澆花。 考生常用句式： It was early morning .Mr Smith was in his garden.He was watering flowers. 連接合并： In early morning，Mr Smith was watering

2、 flowers in his garden。 方法一：巧妙運(yùn)用連接和合并手段方法一：巧妙運(yùn)用連接和合并手段 Eg 2.夏雨又考試不及格，這使得他父 母很生氣。 考生常用句式：Xia yu failed his English test again, which made his parents very angry . 連接合并： What made his parents very angry is that Xia yu failed his English test again。 練習(xí)題(1-5 合并成一句 6-8 連接) 1 ) A girl was crossing a road

3、.the girl was pretty.the road was wide . 2) In the middle of the road ,the girl stopped to look at her skirt .her skirt was new .she was silly. 3）A truck turned around in the corner . The truck turned suddenly .the truck was big. 4）The scream woke up the girl .the girl was absent-minded. 5）The truck

4、 stopped in front of the girl .it stopped just in front of her truck .the girl was frightened. 6) Go to see the doctor at once.your cold may get worse. 7) Some people waste food ,other people havent enough food . 8) Our class won the game , we had expected it . 方法二：靈活進(jìn)行句式轉(zhuǎn)換方法二：靈活進(jìn)行句式轉(zhuǎn)換 建議：1，簡(jiǎn)單句，并列句，

5、復(fù)雜句相互轉(zhuǎn)換 2，主動(dòng)與被動(dòng)語態(tài)的相互轉(zhuǎn)換 3， 不同句型的轉(zhuǎn)換 Eg 1 . 那個(gè)小孩太小了，他自己不會(huì)穿衣服。 學(xué)生常用句式：學(xué)生常用句式：The child was too young ,so he couldnt dress himself . 其他句式表達(dá)： Too.to.結(jié)構(gòu) Not enoughto do Sothat. The child couldnt dress himself, for he was too young. Eg 2. 在那座山頂上有一座古廟。 考生常用句式：考生常用句式： There is an old temple on the top of the

6、hill. 其他表達(dá)方式： On the top of the hill is an old temple. An old temple stands on the top of the hill . 練習(xí)題： 1)Mr.Green is a tall man ,who wears a pair of glass. (介詞短語作伴隨狀語) 2)我們明天在會(huì)議上討論的問題很重要。（不定式 做定語） 3) I havent met such a man before.(倒裝句) 4)We had to go to the railway station by taxi,or we would mi

7、ss the train.(狀語從句) 5) He lay in bed and listened to the sound of the rain outside.（非謂語動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語） 6)The ice on the lake is too thin for us to skate on. (用sothat改寫) 方法三：增添法，增添句子成分，擴(kuò)轉(zhuǎn)句子方法三：增添法，增添句子成分，擴(kuò)轉(zhuǎn)句子 對(duì)于英語作文詞數(shù)老是寫不夠的學(xué)生很有用吆對(duì)于英語作文詞數(shù)老是寫不夠的學(xué)生很有用吆 添加句子成分應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)： A 選擇爭(zhēng)取的詞性，短語,從句（句型） B 確定修飾成分在句子中的位置 （定語，狀語，

8、 補(bǔ)語，同位語） C 選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語 Eg 2. 全班所有同學(xué)都給了劉翔一份禮物。 考生常用：All the classmates gave Liu Xiang a gift. 擴(kuò)展： All the classmates gave Liu Xiang a nice ,simple gift (which/that) they had made themselves. 練習(xí)題： 1 ,Students should learn English.（10詞以上） 2 ,The children are running.（10詞以上） 3 ,The girl looks nice .（10詞以上）

9、4 ,The train will leave soon. （15詞以上） 5 ,The film will be on . （20詞以上） 6 ,The rain prevented them froming going out .（20詞以上） 7, Yao Ming has bought me the book . （20 詞以上） 8 ,The trees have grown into a big ones . （20詞以上） 方法四：避免漢語式英語方法四：避免漢語式英語 注意：1）漢語句子語序和英語句子語序的不同 2）符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣 好好學(xué)習(xí)，天天向上 “good good s

10、tudy ,day day up ” Eg :他身體很好. 考生常用： 英語習(xí)慣表達(dá)： He is very well 。 He is very healthy 。 He is in good health. 練習(xí)題：(修改使符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣) 1) My English level is low. 2)Teenage smokers are becoming more &more . 3) The ball hit his head . 4) He has died for 10years . 5) If you are convenient,please call me tomorrow

11、. 鞏固教學(xué)成果鞏固教學(xué)成果 以下是一篇初二學(xué)生的作文，請(qǐng)大家用剛才所學(xué)的四種方法潤 色一下文章，使成為一篇符合高三水平的文章 I like to do housework . I often do housework instead of my parents. Doing housework make my parents relaxed. I feel very happy. I am the apple of my parents eyes. But I have done the housework since I was young. I still remember that d

12、ay. When I was only six years old，I stayed at home with my grandmother. I washed my parents clothes and I cleaned the room. My parents spoke highly of me. I was so happy! I like to do housework, I think its our duty. Summary &Homework 請(qǐng)大家用本節(jié)課所學(xué)的四個(gè)基本方法，把以下文章 （53 words）潤色成不少于120字的短文. English is a common language that are speaking in the world. We need to learn English. as economys developes, there are more and more oppotunities for us to visit other countrie