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1、專八寫作熱點話題預(yù)測 III III 作者:劉莉華來源:英語專業(yè)八級考試寫作標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文背誦時間:2006-08-24【寫作題目】People used to regard college life as most carefree days, but now depression, an xiety and eve n suicide are creep ing onto campus. How should college students react to this change? Write an essay of about 400 words en titled:How to Surv
2、ive College LifeIn the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argume nt, and in the sec ond part you should support your argume nt with appropriate details .In the last part you should bring what you have written to a n atural con clusi on or make a summary.【范文呈現(xiàn)1】How to Survive
3、 College LifeThe college life should be joyful and colorful, but on campus you can also see the sights: somestudents are extremely embarrassed when it s time for them to pay the tuition; some students may have difficulty in going to sleep, when its time for them to have final exam or hand in term pa
4、pers; some freshmen are on the verge of breakdown because of loneliness or homesickness . Maybe you are suffering from one of these troubles. Do you want to get rid of it and enjoy a more pleasant and rich college life?Here is my advice abouthow to cope with financial, academic and emotional problem
5、s .First of all, there are several ways to reduce your financial pressure. The best way is to take a part-time job, such as being a tutor or a part-time cleaner. By doing so, you can increase both your income and experience. Next, ifpart-time earning is not enough or you have no extra spare time to
6、take one, you can try to apply for a loan fund from government. The good news is that it is usually interest-free and you are allowed to pay back by installment after graduation . Then besides earning money, you should learn to spend carefully and wisely. Set priorities and avoid unnecessary expense
7、s for luxuries such as new clothes or snacks. Besides, to release academic pressure, you can take the following suggestions into account. First, you can ask teachers for help directly when you have difficulty in understanding lessons. Most often, the teachers can not only help you solve the problem
8、but also help you improve learning methods. Second, you should relax yourself after long time study. You can do someexercise, or listen to music to release your physical tiredness and mental tension. Third, you must keep a positive attitude toward your studies. Don t feel frustrated when you fail an
9、 exam; stay confident and be eager to learn when facing excellent competitors. Above all, set yourself long-term goals and fix your eyes on them, which enable you to go ahead despite temporary setbacks . When it comes to the problem of homesickness, here are a few tips for freshmen . Obviously, you
10、can write to your family or call homeevery few days. Meanwhile, you should adapt to the new environment as soon as you can by making new friends, joining someclubs, taking part in all sorts of activities. In addition, cultivating a hobby is another effective way to shake off the loneliness and enric
11、h your life.Life is a journey full of stumbling blocks, dangerous traps and unexpected crises; as part of it, college days are no exception . However, those who survive and succeed are not lucky people who slide by, but tough nails that react bravely and positively. So, be tough, take right actions,
12、 and you will free yourself from the present predicament soon.【范文呈現(xiàn) 2】How to Survive College Life Many high school graduates cheerfully receive university admissions, painting a rosy picture of college life in mind. However, after stepping onto campus, they are confronted with all sorts of problems
13、and haunted by depression and anxiety . Therefore, it takes both a positive attitude and proper actions to lead a happy college life.Many freshmen, suddenly falling into acompletely strange environment, are frustrated to realize that their living and learning habits in high school are no longer prac
14、tical at college. Theyhave to managetheir life and plan spare time on their own, while in high school almost everything is assigned by teachers and supervised by parents. This change may puzzle them for a short time, but certainly can be overcome with a little effort.In daily life, theyshould learn
15、to do chores such as washing and shopping either by calling home or by consulting experienced roommates. In their studies, they should set up a busy schedule in order not to waste time, exchange ideas with juniors and seniors so as to improve learning methods, talk to teachers voluntarily when havin
16、g questions or dissatisfactions. By following the above advice, a first year student can easily go through this stage of adjustment.Money shortage also inflicts pain on a large number of undergraduates. Some may be tightfisted due to their family conditions; some may encounter a financial problem be
17、cause of poor management of their pocket money. What can those students do? Both should try to balance between earning and spending. The former can do part-time jobs such as a private tutor or a salesperson of McDonald, or obtain a scholarship by studying hard, or get a bank loan. Yet, the latter ou
18、ght to make better use of their money, spending only on necessities and cutting down expenses on luxuries .In addition to the above matters, many students suffer depression for unrequited love. Some become obsessed with his or her crush; some feelheartbroken when being rejected; even there is a few
19、who have tried murder or suicide at the time of breakup. How should they relieve themselves from such pain? An effective remedy is to pour out to closed friends, who can always listen to their worries, share their frustration, give rational advice and heal their confidence. In the meantime, they can
20、 divert their attention by developing more hobbies and engaging in various healthy social activities such as charity or recreational programs.Few expect to face so many problems in a short period of 4 years, but once it happens, provided one has enough confidence, courage and will to change, he can
21、still achieve what he wants.Besides, as the old saying goes, every cloud has a silver lining . Looking back, he mayeven treasure and thank for the past difficulties, which have made him strong and prepared him for his future.【范文賞析】 兩篇范文立意相近,但結(jié)構(gòu)安排各有特點, 展示了面對 “問題解決型” 寫作任務(wù)時, 同 學(xué)們可采取的兩種基本組織模式: 前者在首 段通過描
22、述了大學(xué)生活常見的三類問題, 在 文章主體分別從三個角度予以解決; 后者則 是在每個主體段落中, 逐個描述分析問題再 對癥下藥。從選詞造句的角度來說,二者都大 量運用了平行結(jié)構(gòu)和排比句, 這樣既加強 了列舉事例的簡潔性,又突出了語言的節(jié) 奏感,例如:第一篇文章的首段中 on campus you can also see the sights: some students are extremely embarrassed when it s time for them to pay the tuition; some students may have difficulty in going
23、 to sleep, when it s time for them to have final exam or hand in termpapers; some freshmen are on the verge of breakdown because of loneliness or homesickness; 第二篇文章中的 Some become obsessed with his or her crush; some feel heartbroken when being rejected; even there is a few who have tried murder or
24、suicide at the time of breakup 。此外,兩篇短文雖都在提建議, 前者采用了第二人稱, 多處使用了簡練有力 的祈使句; 后者采用了第三人稱, 多處采用 了分詞、 動名詞結(jié)構(gòu), 表意主次鮮明, 同時 體現(xiàn)了句式變化。 選詞的亮點分別在于: 前者使用了 on the verge of sth (在 的 邊緣),fix one s eyes on (集中注 意力在 ; 關(guān)注) , stumbling block (絆 腳石), tough nails (堅強的人) ; 后者 使用了短語 inflict pain on (使痛 苦), cut down expenses(減
25、少開支),及諺語 every cloud has a silver lining(每朵烏云都鑲有銀邊)。當(dāng)我被上帝造出來時,上帝問我想在人間當(dāng)一個怎樣的人,我不假思索的說, 我要做一個偉大的世人皆知的人。于是,我降臨在了人間。我出生在一個官僚知識分子之家,父親在朝中做官,精讀詩書,母親知書答 禮,溫柔體貼,父母給我去了一個好聽的名字:李清照。小時侯,受父母影響的我飽讀詩書,聰明伶俐,在朝中享有“神童”的稱號。 小時候的我天真活潑,才思敏捷,小河畔,花叢邊撒滿了我的詩我的笑,無可置 疑,小時侯的我快樂無慮?!芭d盡晚回舟,誤入藕花深處。爭渡,爭渡,驚起一灘鷗鷺?!鼻啻旱奈胰?同一只小鳥,自由自在,
26、沒有約束,少女純凈的心靈常在朝陽小,流水也被自然 洗禮,纖細(xì)的手指拈一束花,輕拋入水,隨波蕩漾,發(fā)髻上沾著晶瑩的露水,雙 腳任水流輕撫。身影輕飄而過,留下一陣清風(fēng)??墒峭砟甑奈覅s生活在一片黑暗之中, 家庭的衰敗,社會的改變,消磨著我 那柔弱的心。我?guī)缀鯇ι罱^望,每天在痛苦中消磨時光,一切都好象是灰暗的?!皩ひ捯捓淅淝迩迤嗥鄳K慘戚戚”這千古疊詞句就是我當(dāng)時心情的寫照。最后,香消玉殞,我在痛苦和哀怨中凄涼的死去。在天堂里,我又見到了上帝。上帝問我過的怎么樣,我搖搖頭又點點頭,我 的一生有歡樂也有坎坷,有笑聲也有淚水,有鼎盛也有衰落。我始終無法客觀的 評價我的一生。我原以為做一個著名的人,一生應(yīng)
27、該是被歡樂榮譽所包圍,可我我來到人間,我是一個平凡的人,我既不著名也不出眾,但我擁有一切的幸 福:我有溫馨的家,我有可親可愛的同學(xué)和老師,我每天平凡而快樂的活著,這 就夠了。天兒藍(lán)藍(lán)風(fēng)兒輕輕,暖和的春風(fēng)帶著春的氣息吹進(jìn)明亮的教室,我坐在教室 的窗前,望著我擁有的一切,我甜甜的笑了。我拿起手中的筆,不禁想起曾經(jīng)作 詩的李清照,我雖然沒有橫溢的才華,但我還是拿起手中的筆,用最樸實的語言, 寫下了一時的感受:人生并不總是完美的,每個人都會有不如意的地方。這就需要我們靜下心來 閱讀自己的人生,體會其中無盡的快樂和與眾不同?!案徊蛔x書富不久,窮不讀書終究窮。”為什么從古到今都那么看重有學(xué)識 之人?那是因
28、為有學(xué)識之人可以為社會做出更大的貢獻(xiàn)。 那時因為讀書能給人帶 來快樂。自從看了丑小鴨這篇童話之后,我變了,變得開朗起來,變得樂意同別 人交往,變得自信了因為我知道:即使現(xiàn)在我是只“丑小鴨”,但只要有自 信,總有一天我會變成“白天鵝”的,而且會是一只世界上最美麗的“白天 鵝”我讀完了這篇美麗的童話故事,深深被丑小鴨的自信和樂觀所折服, 并把故 事講給了外婆聽,外婆也對童話帶給我們的深刻道理而驚訝不已。 還吵著鬧著多 看幾本名著。于是我給外婆又買了幾本名著故事,她起先自己讀,讀到不認(rèn)識的字我就告訴她,如果這一面生字較多,我就讀給她聽整個一面。漸漸的,自己的 語文閱讀能力也提高了不少,與此同時我也發(fā)
29、現(xiàn)一個人讀書的樂趣遠(yuǎn)不及兩個人 讀的樂趣大,而兩個人讀書的樂趣遠(yuǎn)不及全家一起讀的樂趣大。于是,我便發(fā)展“業(yè)務(wù)”帶動全家一起讀書現(xiàn)在,每每遇到好書大家也不分男女老少都一擁而上,爭先恐后“搶書”,當(dāng)我說起我最小應(yīng)該讓我的時候,卻沒有人搭理我。 最后還把書給撕壞了,我生氣地哭了,媽媽一邊安慰我一邊對外婆說:“孩子小, 應(yīng)該讓著點。”外婆卻不服氣的說:“我這一把年紀(jì)的了,怎么沒人讓我呀?” 大家人你一言我一語,誰也不肯相讓 讀書讓我明白了善惡美丑、悲歡離合, 讀一本好書,猶如同智者談心、談理想,教你辨別善惡,教你弘揚正義。讀一本 好書,如品一杯香茶,余香繚繞。讀一本好書,能使人心靈得到凈化。書是我的 老師,把知識傳遞給了我;書是我的伙伴,跟我訴說心里話;書是一把鑰匙,給 我敞開
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