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1、No pain, no gain.要點結(jié)構(gòu)邏輯語法亮點要求必須在文章中有所體現(xiàn)三段式， “觀點要點總結(jié)” 邏輯詞，最常用的就是表示遞進的， 轉(zhuǎn)折的，總結(jié)的邏輯詞等。單詞的使用，時態(tài)等。高級一點的詞匯，詞組，句型。有有錯錯就就改改1. Then he got the way to became one of the successful football player .2. He keeps modest whenever anybody praise him.3. whats more, he never give up .4. He has a great influence for me

2、 for his strong will.ssson有有錯錯就就改改1. His body is not the best accrosing the basketball players among (all)2. Thats the reason I love him.why3. He pushes him very hard.himself有有錯錯就就改改1. She is too smart to get over all the troubles.She is so smart that she can get over. 2. She makes me hardworking in

3、 learning English.3. The doctor said he couldnt grow higher in the future.The doctor said he couldnt grow taller any more in the futureTo be hard-working, thats what I learn from her.華華麗麗升升級級1. She looks like a Chinese. She can speak six languages.合成定語從句1. She looks like a Chinese who can .2. He use

4、d to get injured, but he never gives up.He used to get injured, but never does he give up. 遇到如never/seldom/hardly/little等否定詞，可使用倒裝句華華麗麗升升級級1. 注意詞匯和句型的多樣性 例如喜歡可以有：like、prefer、admire 連詞but也可以換用though2. 注意多用銜接詞使文章更流暢 例如喜歡可以有：besides, furthermore, whats more/worse等3. 注意文章的邏輯以及材料的選取和組織，避免重復拖沓。 4. 適當使用復合句

5、。 廈門中考9大熱點話題健康環(huán)境學習表格愛好時事家鄉(xiāng)書信寫人愛好四川資陽2009我的愛好(My hobby)Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers. What exactly your hobby is; When and how you became interested in this hobby; Why you enjoy your hobby;寫作要求：1.根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容，適當拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的信息

6、體現(xiàn)在文章中。2.條理清楚，語句通順，書寫清晰、規(guī)范。3.詞數(shù)60-80.愛好愛好內(nèi)容內(nèi)容-1-1-何時何時, ,如何如何-2-2-原因原因 -3- -3-Part1 Part1 : : 愛好內(nèi)容愛好內(nèi)容網(wǎng)游網(wǎng)游飆車飆車看美女看美女Different people have different hobbies. What hobbies do you have ?做飯做飯睡覺睡覺喝酒喝酒吃肉吃肉 My Hobbies I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and keeping a diary. In

7、school, I often hear the P.E. teacher say, sports do good to ones health, and will make one live longer. So, I like sports very much. These sports have kept me healthy. At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer and a violinist when I grow up. In order to attain these goa

8、ls. I go to the teachers home for a lesson every Saturday, and practice singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy. Of all my hobbies I like reading books best. In my bedroom there are nearly six hundred books. There are story books, textbooks, magazines, and others. Wh

9、en I grow up, I will serve the people with the knowledge I have learned from them.積極健康積極健康Part1 : 愛好內(nèi)容愛好內(nèi)容內(nèi)容內(nèi)容原因原因?qū)δ銓W習生活有幫助對你學習生活有幫助Part1 : 愛好內(nèi)容愛好內(nèi)容內(nèi)容內(nèi)容原因原因積極健康積極健康對你學習生活有幫助對你學習生活有幫助閱讀閱讀 拓寬視野，豐富知識，拓寬視野，豐富知識，打發(fā)時間，解除疑問打發(fā)時間，解除疑問widen my horizonenrich my knowledgekill timefind out all I want to know. Di

10、fferent people have different hobbies, and I.頭文字D D 型 One of my favorite hobbies is reading.其中之一 My hobby is reading. I spend a lot of time reading many different kinds of books.開門見山型 Interest is the best teacher.名言警句型Part1 -開頭寫內(nèi)容首段：頭文字D正文：1.When 何時喜歡上閱讀 ？2. How 怎么喜歡上閱讀？3. Why 為什么喜歡閱讀？尾段：總結(jié)強調(diào)總結(jié)+not

11、only but(點題：閱讀的重要性。) Different people have different hobbies, and I am fond of reading.be fond of 替換like或likebest正文：when where why Different people have different hobbies, and I am fond of reading. 當我七歲時，我對閱讀產(chǎn)生了興趣。那時我和我奶奶住在一起。她是一名語文老師。她過去常常給我買很多的書，并且告訴我看書的重要性。很多人沒有意識到閱讀是多么的重要。這個事實讓我很失望。有很多原因使我喜歡閱讀。首

12、先，閱讀能幫助我放松自己。其次，我能在書里找到我想知道一切。并且閱讀能幫助我拓展自己的眼界，豐富我的知識。the importance of readingbecome interested inrelax oneselffind out all I want to knowwiden my horizonused to do enrich my knowledgePart 2 -內(nèi)容,時間方式當我七歲時，我對閱讀產(chǎn)生了興趣。那時我和我奶奶住在一起。她是一名語文老師。When I was 7 years old, I became interested in reading. 改進方式： 動作

13、瞬間轉(zhuǎn)延續(xù)have/has donesince+過去時間點/一般過去時從句I have been interested in reading since I was 7 years old.名代重復用定從 (代詞換成引導詞)改進方式：I lived with my grandma. She was a Chinese teacher. I lived with my grandma who was a Chinese teacher.她過去常常給我買很多的書，并且告訴我看書的重要性。She used to buy me a lot of books and told me about the

14、importance of reading. A lot of people dont realize how important reading is. The fact makes me disappointed. 改進方式： 解釋內(nèi)容用同位語從句The fact that a lot of people dont realize how important reading is makes me disappointed.很多人沒有意識到閱讀是多么的重要。這個事實讓我很失望。Part 2 -內(nèi)容,時間方式萬能句型The fact that+從句 makes me disappointed

15、學習類學習類環(huán)保類環(huán)保類健康類健康類人們覺得學英語無趣讓我失望。人們覺得環(huán)保不重要讓我失望。人們覺得做運動沒必要讓我失望。萬能句型The fact that+從句 makes me disappointed.The fact that people find English boring makes me disappointed.The fact that people find protecting the environmentunimportant makes me disappointed.The fact that people find doing sports unnecess

16、ary makes me disappointed.Part 2 -內(nèi)容,時間方式改進方式：有很多原因使我喜歡閱讀。首先，閱讀能幫助我放松自己。其次，我能在書里找到我想知道一切。Many reasons make me like reading.活用 there be 結(jié)合定從: There are many reasons why I enjoy reading.“能”變成“好方式” it is a good way to do sth.改進方式：First of all, reading can help me relax myself. First of all, it is a goo

17、d way to relax myself.Whats more, I can find out all I want to know in books. Part 2 -內(nèi)容,時間方式最后閱讀能幫助我拓展自己的眼界，豐富我的知識。Last but not least, reading can help me widen my horizon and enrich my knowledge. 閱讀對我們是很有益的。改進方式： 增強情感轉(zhuǎn)感嘆：Reading is beneficial for us. How beneficial reading is for us!首段：頭文字D正文：尾段：總

18、結(jié)強調(diào)總結(jié)+not only but(點題：閱讀的重要性。) Different people have different hobbies, and I am fond of reading. I became interested in reading since I was 7 years old. I lived with my grandma who was a Chinese teacher. She used to buy me a lot of books and told me about the importance of reading. The fact that a

19、lot of people dont realize how important reading is makes me disappointed. There are many reasons why I enjoy it. First of all, reading is a good way to relax myself. Whats more, I can find out all I want to know in books. Last but not least, reading can help me widen my horizon and enrich my knowle

20、dge. How beneficial reading is for us! 總而言之，我不僅因為閱讀而感覺好，而且我花時間做我喜歡做的事情。To sum up, not only do I feel good about reading books, but I get to spend time doing what I love to do. Different people have different hobbies, and I am fond of reading books. I became interested in reading since I was 7 years

21、old. I lived with my grandma who was a Chinese teacher. She used to buy me a lot of books and told me about the importance of reading. The fact that a lot of people dont realize how important reading is makes me disappointed. There are many reasons why I enjoy it. First of all, reading is a good way

22、 to relax myself. Whats more, I can find out all I want to know in books. Last but not least, reading can help me widen my horizon and enrich my knowledge. How beneficial reading is for us! To sum up, not only do I feel good about reading books, but I get to spend time doing what I love to do.though

23、thoughsuch assuch assincesincenot onlynot onlybut alsobut also 我最大的愛好是閱讀。它是一個有益的體驗并且改變了我很多。 我喜愛讀書有三個原因：首先，書籍帶我進入一個新世界，這個世界五顏六色沒有時空限制。通過讀書，我可以追溯到占代埃及這個人類文明的搖籃(cradle)。書能把我?guī)У矫绹?，那個我一直想去游覽的充滿魅力的地方。其次，讀書能夠拓寬我的視野、提高我的技能并使我更睿智。此外，我認為一本好書就像我忠實的朋友。它可以在我開心激動的時候增添我的歡樂，也可以在我難過孤單的時候減輕我的痛苦。 讀書在我的夢想和目標架起 了一座橋梁。不耕耘

24、怎得收獲。為了在將來的工作生涯中獲得成功，我要堅持讀書。我最大的愛好是閱讀。它是一個有益的體驗并且改變了我很多。My favorite hobby is reading ,a rewarding experience and it has changed me a lot! 我喜愛讀書有三個原因I like reading for three reasons. / There are three reasons why I like it. 首先，書籍帶我進入一個新世界，這個世界五顏六色沒有時空限制。First of all, books introduce me to a new world

25、, which is colorful and without time and space limit. / There are three reasons make me like it. 通過讀書，我可以追溯到占代埃及這個人類文明的搖籃。Through reading, I can trace back to ancient Egypt, the cradle of human civilization.書能把我?guī)У矫绹莻€我一直想去游覽的充滿魅力的地方。 It can bring me to the United states, a glamorous land I have bee

26、n longing to visit. 此外，讀書能夠拓寬我的視野、提高我的技能并使我更睿智。Further more, reading can widen my sights, improve my skills and make me wise.I think a good book is my faithful friend.It can increase my happiness when I am cheerful and happy; and it can lessen my pain when I am sad or lonely. 此外，我認為一本好書就像我忠實的朋友。它可以在

27、我開心激動的時候增添我的歡樂，也可以在我難過孤單的時候減輕我的痛苦。為了在將來的工作生涯中獲得成功，我要堅持讀書、思維和實踐。不耕耘，怎得收獲。In order to succeed in my career in the future, I must keep reading, my favorite hobby.No pain no gain.讀書在我的夢想和目標架起 了一座橋梁。Reading bridges the gap between my dream and goal . 每個人都有一些愛好，我也是。我最大的愛好是聽音樂。從我兒時起，我就愛上音樂了。有時候我甚至為之瘋狂。關于這個

28、有一些理由的。 首先，每個人對音樂的鑒賞都不同，而我更喜歡輕音樂。我從音樂當中收獲了很多，并且，音樂也已經(jīng)很大程度上改變了我的思想。其次，音樂是積極的。當我感到苦惱、孤獨甚至發(fā)脾氣的時候，聽音樂可以使我平靜下來?，F(xiàn)在我變成了一個樂觀女孩并會試著去欣賞每一天和每件事。最后，音樂就想我們的語言，它也可以抵達我們的精神并且在我們的靈魂與外在世界之間建立起橋梁。 總之，我必須說，音樂是世界共同的語言。享受音樂，你會從中收獲很多快樂。 每個人都有一些愛好，我也是。我最大的愛好是聽音樂。從我兒時起，我就愛上音樂了。有時候我甚至為之瘋狂。關于這個有一些理由的。 Everyone has some hobbi

29、es. So do I. My favorite hobby is listening to music. I fell in love with music since I was a youngster . Sometimes I am even crazy about it. There are several reasons for it. 首先，每個人對音樂的鑒賞都不同，而我更喜歡輕音樂。我從音樂當中收獲了很多，并且，音樂也已經(jīng)很大程度上改變了我的思想。 First, different people have different appreciation about music,

30、and I prefer light music. Ive reaped/gained the benefit of music and it also has changed my mind a lot. 其次，音樂是積極的。當我感到苦惱、孤獨甚至發(fā)脾氣的時候，聽音樂可以使我平靜下來。現(xiàn)在我變成了一個樂觀女孩并會試著去欣賞每一天和每件事。Second, music is active and positive. When I feel upset, alone or sometimes even lose my temper, then listening to music can cool

31、 down my mind. Now Ive become an optimist girl who will try to appreciate everyday and everything. 最后，音樂就像我們的語言，它也可以抵達我們的精神并且在我們的靈魂與外在世界之間建立起橋梁。Last but not least, music is the same as our language which is able to reach my spirit and bridges the gap between my soul and the external world. 總之，我必須說，音樂是世界共同的語言。享受音樂，你會從中收獲很多快樂。In a word, I must say, music is the common langu