2021年2021屆高考英語作文熱點話題指導與解讀：消費

1、高中英語新高考 - 熱點話題指導與解讀：消費（江蘇高考）第五部分：書面表達 滿分 25 分請閱讀下面文字，并根據(jù)要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章；li jiang6 july, sunnyour family will goon a trip next month and need asuitcase. two days ago. mom asked me to find relevant information on theinternet. butthe information i got was rich and varied, or even contradictory. conf

2、used, i simply based my decision on the ratings. within five minutes, we ordered the one we were satisfied with. thisafternoon, mom received the case and told me she liked it very much.su hua6 july, sunnythismorning,our familywent out,hanginground in thedowntown area.we found a rating of the top ten

3、 restaurants, and went into one ofthem.we spentquitealotofmoney,butwerenothappy.mom complaineda lot, and said that despite its high ratings, the foodwas not to our taste.iwas puzzled.should i believein theseratings, or should i not.【寫作內(nèi)容】1. 用約 30 個詞概括上述利用排名 ratings進行消費的現(xiàn)象；2. 談談你如何看待消費排名，然后用2-3 個理由或論

4、據(jù)支撐你的看法；【寫作要求】1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2. 作文中不能顯現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；3. 不必寫標題【評分標準】內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當；一、如何寫概括：1. 題干的關(guān)鍵詞關(guān)鍵詞：排名 ratings進行消費，這就是概括的核心；2. 段落的關(guān)鍵詞對于記敘文，一般有兩種情形，一是舉例；二是通篇一個故事；對于前者，只需要知道例子說明什么論點，對于后者， 需要知道主要角色做了什么事， 帶來什么結(jié)果；結(jié)合題干可知，要求概括現(xiàn)象，即兩個例子說明白什么現(xiàn)象；切忌寫例子里面的每個人發(fā)生了什么事；兩個故事都是對ratings的評判，第一個的評判：like it;其次個評判：

5、complaining；3. 關(guān)鍵詞的替換1. like it- produce positive effects, a good impression2. complain - don t meet needs, negativ eeffects, mislead基本上概括不需要很復雜的句型，主要是把大意說明白： 先看概括示范：the traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. it notonly affects oureverydaylife,butmayalsothreatenpeople slives.the threeselections prese

6、nted above are typical examples.我的寫法：ratingsforcommoditiesareadouble-edgedsword.theycanhelp consumers make sound decisions,but sometimesmisleadthem and bring aboutcomplaints.thetwostoriespresentedabovearetypical examples. 30個詞 我的心得：針對現(xiàn)象的概括，不要詳細寫內(nèi)容，重點是：現(xiàn)象是什么，一般都是什么趨勢；結(jié)果或評判是什么，一般都是帶來什么影響，支持或反對；二、如何寫正文

7、思維：我這里以反對為例：1. 從政府角度（可能涉及到法規(guī)，監(jiān)管）：缺乏詳細法規(guī)（ there areno laws or policies and supervision）來規(guī)范市場排名2. 從商家的角度（可能涉及到責任）：過多廣告投入，而不是質(zhì)量（give priority to ads）3. 從個人角度：盲目隨大流（ follow the crowd blindly） 思維有了，但仍需要整合的：前兩個要點可以合并， 政府缺少法規(guī)， 導致商家可以不擇手段來提高排名；其實也可以舉例，譬如百度競價排名，但寫起來不簡單；關(guān)鍵是如何論證消費者只是盲目隨大流，考生可能有兩種摸索：1. 消費者想當然認為

8、排名代表了質(zhì)量實際上質(zhì)量高的許多產(chǎn)品由于投入不高無法參與排名2. 消費者想當然認為排名代表了受歡迎度實際上產(chǎn)品只是定制部分消費者的，他們的體驗被夸大而影響別人第一個論據(jù)和前面第一個論點重復了，由于前面說的是質(zhì)量，這里仍是說質(zhì)量；其次個論據(jù)就比較切合文章的其次個例子：the food was not to our taste.i don tsupport such ratings.first,the absenceofpolicies and supervisionsallowsproducersto earnhighratingsby allmeans.chances are thattop

9、priorityis given to advertisement, whichisanopeninvitationtomisleadinginformation.eventually, ratingsrelyheavilyoninvestmentinadvertisementrather thanthequalityofservices.besides,itisnotuncommon forindividualstofollowthecrowdblindlywithoutcritical thinking.theytake it for granted thatratings definit

10、ely equal popularity. actually, many products are targeted at special consumers, whose experience tends to be exaggerated and influences others.so,itissafetoconcludethatratingsofpurchases,ifnot handledproperly,weighagainstthedevelopmentofahealthy market and cause unfair marketcompetitions 正文 130 個詞t

11、ips:1. the absence of缺乏也可以用： there is no，但是這個句型我比較喜愛用抽象名詞作主語來替換，這樣就省去了一個定語從句；2. allow sb to do這里表達的是“使某人”；表達使動概念，不一定用 make；3. by all means無論如何；實際上這里我原來用by hook or by crook（不擇手段），但考生考場上很難想到，而且不能保證閱卷人第一眼能識別出來，就舍棄了；4. chances are that有可能這是我代替 it is likely that.的一個句型，超級順手5. 表示重視的詞組： give top priority to

12、6. be an open invitation to很大的誘因這是教材模塊 7 的一個詞塊，被我代替cause, be responsible for 7.rely heavily on過度依靠于8. rather than不是9. it is not uncommon for對于是一個常見的現(xiàn)象10. follow the crowd隨大流11. critical thinking批判思維12. take it for granted that想當然認為13. be targeted at目標在于14. tend to往往15. it is safe to conclude that可以穩(wěn)

13、妥得出這樣結(jié)論16. if not handled properly，省略句結(jié)構(gòu)17. weigh against對不利末段in short,internetvoting,to someextent,is unfair,ifnot immoral, and cannot be trusted.therefore, rules should be worked out andstrictlyobserved.everyoneinoursocietyshouldhelpthoseinneed, but it is more important to be sincere andearnest.so

14、,it s safeto concludethatitisreasonableto includeenglish which facilitatesdaily communication.完整的文章：ratingsforcommoditiesareadouble-edgedsword.theycanhelp consumers make sound decisions,butsometimesmisleadconsumers and bring about complaints. thetwo stories presented above are typical examples.i don

15、 tsupport suchratings. first,the absenceofpolicies andsupervisionsallowsproducers to earn highratingsby all means.chances are thattop priorityis given to advertisement, whichisanopeninvitationtomisleadinginformation.eventually, ratingsrelyheavilyoninvestmentinadvertisementrather thanthequalityofservices.besides,itisnotuncommon forindividualstofollowthecrowdblindly withoutcritical thinking.theytake it for granted thatratings definitely equal popularity.actually,manyproducts are t