四級考試作文寫作

1、四級考試作文寫作概要2012年一、 評分原則 1、 作文是否體現(xiàn)主題思想。 2、組織結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理。 3、語法文字是否有重大錯誤。 4、卷面布局是否整潔。啟示 重視文章的內(nèi)容與語言 盡量避免語法錯誤 語言要有閃光點(diǎn)二、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 命題作文：滿分15分 14分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本無語言錯誤。 11分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量的語言錯誤。 8分：基本切題。表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文字上連貫，但語言錯誤較多，其中有少量嚴(yán)重錯誤。 5分：基本切題。表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字連貫性差，有較嚴(yán)重的語言錯誤。 2分：條理不清，思想紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多為嚴(yán)重

2、錯誤。 便條：滿分為10分 作文格式：格式需正確。 內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容完整，不能遺漏。 語言：語言要簡單明嘹，用詞平易。 語言得體性：語言風(fēng)格還應(yīng)與情景一 致 。 行文中都應(yīng)體現(xiàn)態(tài)度誠懇禮貌。 舉例 Section B Note-writing (10min) Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. An

3、d you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. 范文： May 20 Dear Jane, I have heard that you are thinking of subscribing to an English-lang

4、uage newspaper. Id like to recommend 21st century to you. The paper is also characterized by its simple language and lots of information. You can not only learn English but also broaden your horizon by reading it regularly. I hope you can find the newspaper that you want. Yours, Mary便條種類 1、祝賀 2、慰問/安

5、慰 3、邀請 4、接受/拒絕邀請 5、致歉 6、詢問/建議 7、留言 8、告示/廣告 1.邀請便條：發(fā)出邀請 （告知、解釋、詢問、確認(rèn) p62） 發(fā)出邀請a April 20, 2008Dear Fiona, I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours. The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. Today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very

6、happy time together. Please let me know whether you can make it.Yours,Amelia 發(fā)出邀請b April 20, 2008Dear Fiona,Here is a piece of good news for you. The * will give a performance in the * tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it .The performance will begin at seven oclock sharp. I

7、 will wait for you at the theater entrance. Please let me know whether you can make it at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Amy 發(fā)出邀請c April 20, 2008Dear Professor Zhou,I am Amelia from class 052; I need you to give me some suggestion on my project. If it doesnt trouble you too much, shall

8、we have a meet at your office tomorrow? Time is up to you.Respectful yours,Amelia發(fā)出邀請d（通知） April 20, 2008Dear girls and boys in Class 0403,This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m. to 9 p. m., at Singeing dining hall, there will be a ball held by Class 0301. We warmly invite you to take part in it. There y

9、ou can enjoy yourselves with dance, music and various games. And well have a chance of communication, which will enhance the friendship between us. Come and enjoy ourselves together.Yours, MikeMonitor of Class 0301接受邀請 (致謝、取悅、期待、希望） April 20, 2008Dear Amelia,Its so kind of you to invite me to the di

10、nner party, I would like to come. I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m. this evening. (如果是如果是辦在家里：辦在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward

11、 to seeing you soon.Yours,Fiona 拒絕邀請（致謝、取悅、抱歉、解釋、留機(jī)會、祝福） April 20, 2008Dear Amelia，Its so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to but I have a meeting to attend this evening, please give my best regards to them all and I hope my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenie

12、nce, have fun.Yours, Amelia2請假條 April 20, 2008Dear Ms. Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this morning two periods of English Class （ Im terribly sorry to apply for ten days leave from the Aug. 23rd to Sep. 3rd）due to a bad cold and high fever. I will show you the certificate

13、 from the doctor to support my application. I will go back to school as soon as I recover.（I promise I will do my best to catch the missed lessons on after I come back.）Wish for your allowance.Yours respectfully, Amelia 3請求便條a講清事情的因由（為什么請求） b請求行為c請求實(shí)現(xiàn)方式 d致謝 套句：請求幫助： Would you do me a favor? Would yo

14、u be so kind as to?/ Could I trouble you to send this book for me?/ If it is not too troublesome, could you?/ I hope this request will not trouble you too much. April 20，2008Dear Professor Hu,I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American Literature”. But it is a pity that

15、 I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout. Your lecture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the handout to the address: .Heartfelt thanks.Respectfully yours,Amelia 4抱怨投訴便條(關(guān)鍵詞complain, dissatisfaction

16、)a抱怨投訴行為 b投訴內(nèi)容具體描述c要求彌補(bǔ)糾正賠償 d抱怨投訴者對彌補(bǔ)糾正賠償?shù)鹊亩卮倩蛲{ 套句：行為描述Im writing to bring your attention to the problems I have had with . Heres the problem解決方式的要求：It would be very kind( considerate) of you toaddress this problem soon. / take steps to rectify this situation soon. / turn it down a little?敦促或威脅: Fr

17、ankly, I really cant put up with the situation any more. You must rectify the situation, or I will take it to the court. / If you cant give me a satisfactory answer, I will complain it to the Consumer Association.5. 祝賀（獲悉、祝賀、取悅、祝愿、期望）強(qiáng)調(diào)對方的成就語言要真摯熱情例子：Directions: you are Jean. You have got a letter f

18、rom your friend Eric, which tells you his marriage lately. Write a note to express your heartfelt congratulations and wish a good future to the new couple. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. February 14 Dear Eric, I have just received your letter telling me

19、 of your recent marriage. This happy event in your life prompts me to offer you my hearty congratulations and good wishes. You are lucky! I sincerely wish that peace, health and happiness may attend both you and your wife forever. All in all, I offer my best wishes to you. Jean 慰問 (獲悉，慰問，鼓勵，建議，期望，祝福

20、） Directions: You name is Mary. Your friend Jacobson was not doing well with his business in recent days. Write a note to offer your sympathy and comfort him. Dear Jacobson, I am sorry to hear that you have not been successful in your recent business. Although I am sending you my sympathy, I feel yo

21、u ought not to be unduly distressed at the result. Right now, youd better relax and have a good rest. You are always excellent. I am confident that the situation will be better soon. Good luck! Mary 致歉（致歉，解釋，補(bǔ)救，請求原諒，再度致歉，期待回復(fù)） Directions: you are Katherine. You have made a meeting with your business

22、 partner Sam on Mar.6. Unfortunately, you have to be out of town that day. So you want to postpone the date to the same time two days later. Write a note to tell him the delay and make an apology. Dear Sam, I am sorry to say that I shall be out of town on business on Mar.6, so I am afraid I will hav

23、e to postpone our meeting to Friday, Mar. 8 at the same hour. I hope that you can still come, and I am regretful for the inconvenience that this postponement brings to you. Please tell me if you can come on Friday. Katherine 詢問/回復(fù) （寒暄， 詢問事件， 告知方式， 感激，期盼） Directions: Your name is David. You have atte

24、nded a conference on the pollution issue. During the conference, you heard Samanthas speech and got interested in her opinions. Write a note to ask for the copy of her speech. Dear Samantha, Congratulations on your excellent speech at the conference. I am deeply impressed by your unique opinions abo

25、ut the pollution issue. I would be grateful is you do me a favor to send a copy of your speech to me. Thank you very much for your kindness. Hope to hear from you soon. David留言 （留言原因， 留言目的，詳細(xì)解釋，期待答復(fù)）Directions: You are Wang Ming. Today, you went to visit Li Hua, a friend of yours. You heard an Ameri

26、can professor would give a speech in your school this Sunday, so you were going to ask Li Hua if he was interested in it. However, he was not at home at present. Leave him a note for the whole thing. Dear Li Hua， Just now I came to your house, while you were out. I want to tell you an important matt

27、er that an American professor will give a speech in our school this Sunday. If you would like to listen to the speech, we could go together. Please contact me as soon as possible. Wang Ming 告示/ 廣告 （告知，解釋，宣傳，資格，希望） Directions: You are a member of the school drama group. This Saturday evening, your dr

28、ama group would give a performance in the school theater. Write a note to tell all those people to come if they would like to. You should tell them all the detailed information about the performance. Dear schoolmates, There will be a performance of our drama group on Saturday evening, June 7, at sev

29、en in the school theater. We have prepared for three months for the excellent performance. Every schoolmate who is interested in the performance is welcomed. We are expecting your attendance. The School Drama Group 致不熟悉的人，宜用較莊重的套語，如致不熟悉的人，宜用較莊重的套語，如Yours sincerely，Sincerely yours，或，或Sincerely等。等。 對上

30、級、長者，除了可用上述較莊重的套語，對上級、長者，除了可用上述較莊重的套語，也可用也可用Yours respectfully或或Respectful yours。 對一般朋友或熟人可用中提到的較莊重的套語語，也可用Yours等等較為隨便的套語。 對密友則采用較隨便的套語為宜。例如，Yours，Love，With love，Best wishes，Best regards等等。 對親屬可用下列任何一種：Love，With love， All my love， Yours affectionately，Affectionately yours，Lovingly yours，Yours loving

31、ly，Your loving son(Dad?)； 語法錯誤 便條中的語法錯誤有多種，常見的有冠詞、詞性、動詞的時與體、句子結(jié)構(gòu)等錯誤。 (1)冠詞錯誤冠詞錯誤，如Im anxious to make a(應(yīng)為an) appointment with you (2)詞性錯誤詞性錯誤，如I must make an apologize(正確為apology) for failing to turn up for the appointment (3)動詞的時與體等方面的錯誤，動詞的時與體等方面的錯誤， 例如： aIf you will be free tomorrow, we shall mee

32、t again (應(yīng)把will be改為are) bI am sorry to fail to turn up for the appointment yesterday (正確為to have failed而不是to fail，因事情已發(fā)生) (4)句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤， 例如：Im very sorryI didnt turn up for the appointment with youBecause my mother was seriously ill yesterday and I had to take her to see the doctor (應(yīng)改為Im very so

33、rry I didnt turn up for the appointment with you yesterday because my mother was seriously ill and I had to take her to see the doctor)提醒： 考試時注意在看到題目要求后不要忙于動筆。雖說作考試時注意在看到題目要求后不要忙于動筆。雖說作文的字?jǐn)?shù)充其量在一百多個單詞左右，但是最好還是要在文的字?jǐn)?shù)充其量在一百多個單詞左右，但是最好還是要在腦子里理清思路，打到腹稿。在仔細(xì)審題以后，認(rèn)真列個腦子里理清思路，打到腹稿。在仔細(xì)審題以后，認(rèn)真列個提綱，這樣更有利于思路清晰。寫

34、作時，注意表達(dá)清楚以提綱，這樣更有利于思路清晰。寫作時，注意表達(dá)清楚以下幾個方面。首先交代清楚寫信目的下幾個方面。首先交代清楚寫信目的;其次為了讓閱卷者其次為了讓閱卷者對你的文章結(jié)構(gòu)及表意一目了然，注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞或銜接詞的對你的文章結(jié)構(gòu)及表意一目了然，注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞或銜接詞的運(yùn)用運(yùn)用;接下來，應(yīng)該對個人的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述接下來，應(yīng)該對個人的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述(在寫作有此必在寫作有此必要的時候要的時候)。 最后，行文間要注意簡化描述。用簡短的語句代替冗最后，行文間要注意簡化描述。用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句。在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺長的語句。在作文完成的時候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚

35、的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)。 作文練習(xí)： Directions: Your friend Mary interests in musical performance very much. Occasionally, you have got two admission cards to the Italian National Bands performance in the Beijing Grand Theater. Write a note to invite her to the performance. Tell her the exact time, place

36、and other details. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Directions: Your friends. Mr. and Mrs. Kramer, will hold a cocktail wine party on April 18th. They have sent you the invitation. You are happy to join them. Writing a note to accept their invitation and

37、express your appreciation to them. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Directions: You are Dr. Smith. Several days ago, your friend, professor Wang, on behalf of his institution, invited you to give a speech in his department on December 20th Although you wo

38、uld like to accept it, you are not feeling well recently. Write a note to reject their invitation. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.命題作文 35分鐘（P12） 審題：1-2分鐘 寫提綱， 組織素材，細(xì)節(jié)和關(guān)鍵詞：4-5分鐘； 起草：20-23分鐘； 修改定稿：4-5分鐘。 撰寫： 第一段提出的論點(diǎn)要簡潔明了，開門見山； 第二段論據(jù)要能充分說明論點(diǎn)，論證條理清楚； 第三段結(jié)論要

39、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)完整，切忌草率。 檢查和修改： 拼寫正確。 搭配正確。 語法正確。 (P20)1， 如今，人們普遍在討論是否應(yīng)該在網(wǎng)上交友。 There is much discussion today about whether to make friends on the internet. 2. 對于大學(xué)生或高中生打工這一現(xiàn)象，校園里存在著廣泛的爭論。 There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job. 3

40、. 我們應(yīng)該存錢還是花明天的錢呢？ 人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同。 一些人認(rèn)為存錢是個好習(xí)慣，另一些人覺得花明天的錢能夠提高生活質(zhì)量。 Should we save money or spend tomorrows money? Opinions vary from person to person. Some regard saving money as a good habit. Others believe that spending tomorrows money can improve our living quality. 4. 我同意后者，有如下理由： For my part, I agr

41、ee with the latter opinion for the following reasons: In my opinion/ From my perspective/ I would prefer/ As to this issue/ I think/ As for me 5. 就我而言， 我同意教育不應(yīng)該隨著畢業(yè)而結(jié)束的觀點(diǎn)，有以下原因： As for me , Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons: 6. 盡管許多人

42、認(rèn)為隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的高速發(fā)展，騎自行車的人數(shù)會減少，自行車可能會消失，然而我卻不這樣認(rèn)為。這幾年我收集的一些信息讓我相信自行車仍然會繼續(xù)在現(xiàn)代社會中發(fā)揮極其重要的作用。 Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle is decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out, I think quite differently. The information Ive collected

43、 over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society. Although the popular belief is But I think quite differently. / No opinion is more dangerous than/ But I cant accept that 7. 最近的調(diào)查顯示相當(dāng)多的孩子對家庭作業(yè)沒什么好感。 The latest surveys show tha

44、t quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework. ( Thee is a typical example/ Recent studies indicate/ Although, the available information shows) 8. 最近的研究顯示， 大學(xué)生能夠?qū)で髮W(xué)業(yè)和兼職之間的平衡。 Recent studies indicate that college students can make a balance between academic study and part-time job

45、. 9. 通過以上討論， 我完全相信，隨著現(xiàn)代社會的進(jìn)步，悠閑地生活方式正在消失并不是件壞事。 From what has been discussed above, I am fully convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society, and it is not necessarily a bad thing. (From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion/ In

46、 summary, it is important to know that/ The evidence upon all sides points to.)亮點(diǎn)詞句 1. 對年輕人的生活可能產(chǎn)生不好的影響。 Some negative influence this may exert on young peoples life. 2. 各行各業(yè) Every walk of life. 3. 各種文化背景。 Diversified cultural background. 4. 即使他們住在遙遠(yuǎn)的村莊，或大洋彼岸。 Even is they live in a remote village o

47、r on the other side of the ocean. 5. 無拘無束地交流我們的想法。 feel free to get across our ideas to them. 6. 警惕潛在的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。 Be fully aware of the potential risk. 7. 保護(hù)自己免受欺騙。 Protect ourselves from being cheated. 8. 現(xiàn)代生活的主要特征。 Predominant feature of modern life. 9. 它給我們的生活帶來了很多的便利，以至于有些人會想電話是否會取代書信呢。 It provides us w

48、ith so much convenience and pleasure that some people are wondering if phones will kill letter writing some day. 10. 不如晚年 Go into their later stage of life. 11. 眾所周知。 It is generally acknowledged that 12.未雨綢繆 For the rainy day Eg. Saving for the rainy day is a long and fine tradition of Chinese nati

49、onality. 13. 我支持后面這種觀點(diǎn) Im supportive of the latter point. 14. 考慮到手機(jī)和信件的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，我們很自然地得出結(jié)論， Judging from the pros and cons of phones and letters, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that . 15. 隨著科技的發(fā)展， 電腦已經(jīng)不僅應(yīng)用于辦公室中而且應(yīng)用于許多家庭中。 With the development of science and technology, computers have been found a

50、 wide application not only in offices, but also in many families. 16. 考慮到問題的嚴(yán)重性，在事態(tài)進(jìn)一步惡化之前， 必須采取有效地措施。 In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. 17. 應(yīng)該采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧┫拗仆鈬慰偷臄?shù)量，努力保護(hù)當(dāng)?shù)丨h(huán)境和歷史不受國際旅游也得不利影響。 Proper measures must be taken to limit the nu

51、mber of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism. 18. 人民生活狀況的改善原因有兩點(diǎn)。首先，我們一直在貫徹執(zhí)行改革開放政策。其次，國民經(jīng)濟(jì)正在迅速發(fā)展。 There are two reasons for the improvement in peoples living conditions. In the first place, w

52、e have been carrying out the reform and opening-up policy. Secondly, there has been a rapid expansion of our national economy. 19. 而且，學(xué)生生活在自己家中，有舒適的生活，并有更多機(jī)會和父母交流，這對他們個性的培養(yǎng)是有利的。 Furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a comfortable life and have more opportunities to comm

53、unicate with their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their character. 20. 我們可以使用替代汽油作為解決之道。 We may use substitution instead of petrol as a solution to the problem. 21. 最后，我們既不需要限制車輛的使用，也不需要減少車輛的數(shù)量。 As a result, we will not have to impose restrictions on the use of vehicles. Nor

54、 will we need to trim down the number. 22. 現(xiàn)今，大學(xué)生心理健康成為一個普遍關(guān)注的問題。 Nowadays, the mental health of college students has aroused more and more attention of the whole society. has recently become a heated topic. Nowadays, it is a heated discussed topic that More and more people pay attention to Currentl

55、y has become a matter of concern More and more people begin to realize the importance of 23. 一個人必須衡量有點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)兩個方面來決定哪種方法好。 To decide which the best way is, one has to weigh the advantages and disadvantages on both sides. 24. She was sympathetic, tolerant, and people respected her.(p86) She was sympathet

56、ic, tolerant, and respected by people.（improved） 25. The Prime Minister stepped off the plane. Journalists immediately surrounded her. The Prime Minister stepped off the plane. She was immediately surrounded by journalists (improved) 26. We have an old musical instrument. People call it a clavichord

57、. Someone made it in Germany in 1681. We have an old musical instrument. It is called clavichord. It was made in Germany in 1681. (improved) 27. To cooperate with others well, one needs to know something about cooperation. To cooperate with others well, one should be tolerant, considerate and should

58、 have a sense of teamwork. (improved) 28. Every graduate has the equal chance. Every graduate has the equal chance to get a satisfactory job in job-hunting. (improved) 29. I enjoy sports very much. Participating in sports activities occupies most of my spare time in the university. (improved) 30. Ex

59、amination is important to get to know the students. Testing students by examinations has always been regarded as the reliable method to measure students level. (improved) 31. There was a strong earthquake in Wenchuan in 2008. A terrible earthquake hit/struck Wenchuan in 2008. (improved) 32. a). The

60、young pilot was on his first overseas training. b). He felt very uneasy. 1). The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. 2). The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. 3). The young pilots first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. 4). Extreme u