2020-2021年中考英語書面表達(dá)培優(yōu)卷

1、2020-2021 年 中考英語書面表達(dá)培優(yōu)卷一、中考英語書面表達(dá)（含答案詳細(xì)解析）1 隨著社會的發(fā)展，通訊的方式從遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代的書信到當(dāng)今的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)，經(jīng)歷著巨大的變化。請你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀銓ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些？2. 它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么？3. 你認(rèn)為使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具要注意什么？要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱和姓名；2. 語意連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods no

2、w. As for me, 【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As forme, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the

3、sound by phones.By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobi

4、le phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍ΜF(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：thereare ;I prefer to , Mobile phones bring , we can , we should ,So let 等旬式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。【點(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我喜歡使用的通訊方式有哪些；接下來介紹它們的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)是什么，以及使用現(xiàn)代通訊工

5、具要注意什么；最后呼吁號召大家合理使用現(xiàn)代通訊工具。此處prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, concern about, in one s opinion,try one s bisg些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。2 寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫Tiger Mom 的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。請你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。I m the mother of a fourteenyear -old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 stu

6、dents or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?寫作要點(diǎn)：1.表明自己的看法。2 .陳述自己的理由。3 .提出至少2條建議?！敬鸢浮縃i,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea

7、is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.There aremany examples around us. Some all-A students in school h

8、ave turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take

9、 your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl ; let herhave more friends and social activities ； and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學(xué)生家長的博客進(jìn)行回復(fù)。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一 般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓 結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： My idea is t

10、hatThere are；Some all-Astudents in school have , The reason is ,- So I suggest that 等句式的應(yīng)用。 寫作中注 意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介 紹自己的建議。 此處 turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one 等own詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。4 .書面表達(dá)隨著電子時(shí)代的

11、到來，西方文化如潮水般涌來，中國傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認(rèn)為學(xué)校應(yīng)當(dāng)開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課( set up traditional culture classes ),但也有人認(rèn)為沒有 必要。假如你是 Mike,請你用英語寫一封郵件，給你校英文報(bào)投稿寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談?wù)勀銓﹂_設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root (根) of Chinese culture, know more about, spread, developYour suggestionDear editor,As we

12、 all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays.Yours, Mike【答案】Dear editor,As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapiddevelopment of international technology nowadays

13、. In my opinion, it s necessary for schools toset up traditional culture classes.First, traditiona l culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldn t give up our traditionalculture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about

14、 our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let schools to set up traditional culture classes!Y

15、ours, Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談?wù)勎覍﹂_設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本 文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系 表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： Chinese traditional culture is facing , it s necessary for schools to, we shouldn t,- They can raise, it is of greatimportance to等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語

16、言簡練。開頭介紹了中國傳統(tǒng)文化面對的問題，接下來介紹我認(rèn)為開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因，最后號召更多的學(xué)校開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處becauseof, in one s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on這些詞組 的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。4. 假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Bill給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件，想了解你的夢想職業(yè)。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件，根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實(shí)際情況給他寫封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006 america. comSubj

17、ect: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China. Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future? What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? Wha

18、t do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求：1.參考提示語，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2 .語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3 .文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4 .詞數(shù)：不少于70詞（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job.Yours, Li Hua【答案】 例文 Thank you for your l

19、etter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the schools environment appeals to me and staying with students helps t

20、o keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job! Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過描寫夢想中的職業(yè)，讓學(xué)生對未來有憧憬，給一部分提示詞，讓學(xué)生有話可說?！驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋

21、為什么喜歡該工作，因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢想，正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問 題，結(jié)束全文?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your letter. 然后開始主要內(nèi)容，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because， Besides， To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上 口，不失為一篇佳作。5 “ inspire 一詞的漢語解釋是 ”“激勵(lì)；鼓舞；賦予靈感；或啟發(fā)思考”等。請以“ Theperson who inspired me 為題寫一篇不少于 ”80 詞的短文，向校報(bào)的英語園

22、地投稿。要點(diǎn)： 1. What kind of person is he/ she ？2. How did he/ she inspire you ？要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。2. 語言流暢，字跡清楚?！敬鸢浮縏he person who inspired meMany people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng

23、.Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesnt talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the ear

24、ly morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last years ping-pang competition.You can see the good personality and the spir

25、it of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The person who inspired me 為題，介紹一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過你的人。題目中用問題的形式給予了提示，審題可知，短文應(yīng)包括兩個(gè)部分的內(nèi)容：首先介紹這個(gè)激勵(lì)過你的人是誰，他是怎樣的一個(gè)人；然后介紹他是如何激勵(lì)你的。學(xué)生們可以這兩個(gè)問題為提綱，發(fā)揮想象力，充實(shí)細(xì)節(jié)信息，組織語言，連貫成文。短文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主來敘述，人稱是第三人稱和第一人

26、稱，注意謂語動詞形式的變化。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：首先要符合題目要求，包括題目中要求的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意上下文的銜接。其次應(yīng)注意英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語的不同，不要按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯。應(yīng)該從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)入手，寫完整的句子。可以簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)為主，輔以并列句、復(fù)合句。為提升文章檔次，應(yīng)使用高級詞匯以及復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成 分使文意連貫、自然。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，介紹了一個(gè)曾經(jīng)激勵(lì)過自己的人。短文有以下幾個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，層次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介紹了這個(gè)人是誰，第二段描寫了這個(gè)人身上的品質(zhì)以及對自己的應(yīng)選；最后一段結(jié)尾。各部

27、分內(nèi)容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，文章以第三人稱和第一人稱為主來敘述，主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)，動詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，注意了第三人稱單數(shù) 形式以及過去式形式的變化，語法規(guī)范。用詞準(zhǔn)確，語言得體，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語 的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中使用了一些較好的句型和短語，如 But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesnt talk too much, b

28、ut always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。6.環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以 Change for a better Chin

29、a為主題，結(jié)合自己家 鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項(xiàng)：1 .短文應(yīng)包括表格中的所有提示內(nèi)容，條理清楚，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2 .短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名，詞數(shù)不少于80。狀況水污染，大氣污染.應(yīng)對措施立即阻止此類活動，治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）.感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好.Change for a better China【答案】 We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well.But some people don t care about it .They throw litter

30、 into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think e

31、veryone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has star

32、ted to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了部分提示，動筆先應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀提示，確定寫 作內(nèi)容。寫作中注意表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)時(shí)的常用句式，注意在表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，連詞的使用。內(nèi)容 上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。【點(diǎn)睛】本文緊扣要求對家鄉(xiāng)做了簡單介紹，內(nèi)容完整，用了

33、表格中的信息。2. 句式豐富。表述靈活。銜接自然，順暢。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there aremore cars on the road these days. ； We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy. 給文中增色不少。7 環(huán)境保護(hù)人人有責(zé)，如果我們每一個(gè)人都能珍愛美麗地球保護(hù)自然資源，相信我們的家園會越來越美好。某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一

34、篇短文投稿，談?wù)勎覀兠媾R的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望。提示詞語：pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題： What are the main environmental problems we have? What can we do in ourdaily lif e? What s your wish?Now there are many environmentalproblems.【答案】例文Now there are many environmental problems. Such as ai

35、r pollution, water pollution and so on.I believe that there are many things we can do in our daily life, we can save energy by go to school by bike or on foot. We can use less water by turning off the tap while we brush our teeth, and taking shorter showers. When we see litter on the ground, we must

36、 pick it up and put it into different bins.I hope everyone can take action. Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can make a big difference. Let work to gesther to make a better place to live.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時(shí)要把我們面臨的主要環(huán)境問題是什么，為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么，以及你的期望全部包括。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用的是三段式；用第一人稱來

37、敘述為改善環(huán)境我們能做什么；時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述建議時(shí)，描寫具體，條理清晰。高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：save energy; brush our teeth ; put it into different bins ； take action； make a big difference。句型： When we see litter on the ground, we must pick it up and put it into different bins ； Although each one of us may only do a little, together we can mak

38、e a big difference ?！军c(diǎn)睛】首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn) 中可能要用至U的表達(dá)，例如 save energy; brush our teeth ; put it into different bins ； take action ； make a big difference o以及狀語從句等；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作，在寫作過程 中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較 等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn) 符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，

39、有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合要求等。8 .書面表達(dá)中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國家供你選擇 游玩。請根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息，將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介紹。BritainTimeJuly 1 - July 14Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace（白金漢宮）visit the British Museum （大英博物館）watch football matchesAttentionchangeable weatherCost20,000 yuanAustraliaTimeAugust 15 -Aug

40、ust 24Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera House travel around the Gold Coast（黃金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalasAttentionwinterCost16,000 yuan要求：1 .所寫內(nèi)容必須包括某一國家的所有信息及選擇的理由；2 .結(jié)合游玩國家的情況，自擬希望可以安排的活動，并提出1-2點(diǎn)出游的注意事項(xiàng);3 .文章不少于90詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4 .語義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范；5 .不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。The summer holi

41、day is coming. I think it s a good idea to travel abroad.I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】 The summer holiday is coming. I think it s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countriesBritain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go toBritain.The time is jul

42、y 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope

43、 to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And its expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England. I hope I will have a good time there!

44、【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。中考后暑假即將開始，你和一些同學(xué)準(zhǔn)備結(jié)伴出國旅行。旅行社提 供了兩個(gè)國家供你選擇游玩。要求根據(jù)旅行社提供的信息將你的選擇用英文向同學(xué)們介 紹。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè) 要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文 章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的 結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的 復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文 章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核

45、檢查，確保正確無誤。9 .目前，許多中學(xué)生不重視課外閱讀。請你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，對這一現(xiàn)狀進(jìn)行分 析并提出建議。要點(diǎn)：/、重視課外閱讀的原因1 .作業(yè)太多2 .沒有讀書習(xí)慣3 .時(shí)間花在電腦或網(wǎng)絡(luò)上課外閱讀的好處1 .更多地了解世界2 .學(xué)會如何思考3 .生活更加豐富多彩對學(xué)校或同學(xué)的建議（至少一點(diǎn)）注意：1.詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右（開頭已給出的內(nèi)容不記入總詞數(shù)）；2 .內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；3 .條理清楚、語句連貫；4 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名。At present only a few students do some reading after

46、 class. Here are several reasons.AAAAAA【答案】 At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world.Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.Here ar