新人教版新目標(biāo)英語七級上冊各單元創(chuàng)新寫作附范文

1、 unit 1 my name is gina. 創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三步五要素法介紹自己】寫作思路分三步第一步：確定自我介紹的內(nèi)容和順序。第二步：列舉自我介紹的句型，多多益善。第三步：成段成篇，修訂完善。文章的內(nèi)容五要素 1姓名：（姓、名、中文名英文名）my name ismy first/last name is 2年齡：i amyears old. 3性別：i am a girl/ boy. 4所在學(xué)校和班級：i am atmiddle school, i am in class，grade 5聯(lián)系方式（電話號碼、qq號碼、郵箱等）：my telephone number is 可拓展內(nèi)容：生

2、日、出生地、職業(yè)、興趣愛好等?！痉段男蕾p】 brief introduction about myself hello, everyone, now i want to give you a brief introduction about myself. my name is gina green. gina is my first name and green is my family name. i am a girl at the age of 12, and i graduated from nanjing foreign language primary school. i lik

3、e chatting on the internet（上網(wǎng)）,and my qq number is 7845362. whats yours?點(diǎn)評：該文作者開開門見山地介紹了自己的姓名，并運(yùn)用到了本單元的重點(diǎn)句型；文章恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用連接詞now, and分層介紹自己的個人信息，而且在結(jié)尾時候介紹了自己的聯(lián)系方式，符合文章寫作要求；最后收篇提出了了解其他同學(xué)qq的想法，作為自我介紹很自然的收尾?！緦懽麽槍π杂?xùn)練】 假設(shè)你是kate jane brown，你剛剛結(jié)交了一位新的筆友jennifer。請寫信告訴她你的個人情況和在校的情況。要求：1.詞數(shù)60左右。 2. 敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫。 3文

4、中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名。參考詞匯 1單詞：and，but，student，my，old 2短語：first name，phone number, last name, middle name, full name 3句子:i am .years old. i am a girl.dear jennifer, yours, kateunit 2 this is my sister. 創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【總分總?cè)椒ń榻B家庭】 總：第一步總體介紹家庭人口數(shù)量。 分：第二步分述各自家庭成員的職業(yè)，也可加上興趣愛好等。 總：第三步再進(jìn)行對家庭的感情表達(dá)或評價，起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用?！痉段男蕾p】dear t

5、om, thank you for your letter and the photo of your family . its a nice photo. i like it very much. now let me tell you about my family. there are three people in my family. they are my father, my mother and i. here is my family photo. this is my father. he is a worker. this is my mother. she is a n

6、urse. this is me. i am a middle school student. i love my family. wish you happy every day! see you soon! your friend, zhan hui點(diǎn)評：本文中格式與四要素方法一致，全文結(jié)構(gòu)如下：稱呼dear.正文對收到來信致謝： thank you for your letter.介紹家庭情況： there are.people in my family, this is. / she(he) is/i am表達(dá)祝愿：wish you happy every day!/ see you

7、soon!結(jié)束語yours, /your friend,. 用到的短語，如中的of所有格為本單元中內(nèi)容；在正文介紹家庭部分中，首先用一句話過渡，即；之后用there be句型介紹家庭中人員的數(shù)目以及成員，然后用介紹人的句型，之后介紹三人的職業(yè)，最后點(diǎn)明自己的感情。全文行文流暢、自然、完整?！緦懽麽槍π杂?xùn)練】 假如你是vera，準(zhǔn)備將自己全家福寄給在上海的筆友rosie，并寫信向她介紹你的家庭成員。 要求：1詞數(shù)：60詞左右；2介紹家庭成員，可添加姓名、職業(yè)、年齡等。 參考詞匯： 1單詞：father，mother，family 2句型：there are. people in my famil

8、y. unit 3 is this your pencil? 創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【六要素法寫失物招領(lǐng)尋物啟事】寫作內(nèi)容六要素物品名稱丟失撿到時間姓名物品特征丟失撿到地點(diǎn)聯(lián)系方式【范文欣賞】lost : i lost my notebook. its yellow. my school id card is in it. my phone number is 8339669. please call me at this number. thank you. jane 點(diǎn)評：首先用lost點(diǎn)明是尋物啟事。說明筆記本的特征。介紹聯(lián)系方式以方便拾到者歸還。此句表示感謝。 全文內(nèi)容全面、條理清晰、結(jié)構(gòu)合理，

9、寫得不錯?！緦懽麽槍π杂?xùn)練】 假如你是露西，1月1日你把你的一個黑色筆記本遺失在學(xué)校操場，你的手機(jī)號碼請寫一則30詞左右的尋物啟事。 unit 4 wheres my schoolbag?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【范文欣賞】 hi, every one! this is my room. it is not very big but very nice. there are many things in it. first, you can see the desk. some books and a computer are on it. under the desk, it

10、is my chair. beside the desk there is a bookcase. i like books very much. so i have a lot of books. wheres my bed? its beside the bookcase. i like my room. what about you?【寫作針對性訓(xùn)練】 介紹一下你的臥室(bedroom)。 要求：1.不少于60詞； 2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 unit 5 do you have a soccer ball?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三步三層法談?wù)撐锲肥詹亍?寫作思路分三步： 第一步：確定談?wù)摰膶ο螅纭拔业?/p>

11、體育用品收藏我爸爸的郵票收藏等”。 第二步：運(yùn)用動詞have/has來具體談?wù)撌詹仄返臄?shù)量、顏色及其他特征。 第三步：結(jié)束語來說明此人對收藏的感受或?qū)κ詹叵矏?的程度等。2文章的結(jié)構(gòu)分三層： 第一層：起篇（開頭句） 第二層：正文主體部分，談?wù)撌詹仄穬?nèi)容，如數(shù)量、顏色、大小、外形等，以及對個別物品的感受。 第三層：收篇（結(jié)尾句）【范文欣賞】 sam has a great sports collection. he has six basketballs, eight volleyballs and ten ping-pong balls. he has four baseball bats a

12、nd two ping-pong bats. and he has a sports t-shirt and three pairs of sports shoes. sam likes sports, but he doesnt play sports-he only watches them on tv.【寫作針對性訓(xùn)練】根據(jù)下列圖表中的物品，談一談amy的體育收藏。不少于50詞。six basketballseight ping-pong batsnine volleyballsten tennis racketsten tennis ballsfour baseball batstwe

13、lve soccer ballstwenty pairs of sports shoes eight baseballsfive sports t-shirts unit 6 do you like bananas?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三層次三要素法寫談?wù)摵脨杭安惋嬍场?寫作思路二層次：表達(dá)喜歡的事物；表達(dá)不喜歡的事物。2寫作內(nèi)容三要素：早餐、午餐、晚餐【易錯點(diǎn)點(diǎn)提示】1本文主要用like句型like+sth.，可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)表示一類。2. like的否定形式dont/doesnt like.3談?wù)撊惋嬍秤镁湫蚮or breakfastlunchdinner.，注意介詞for。4注意可數(shù)名詞和不可數(shù)

14、名詞。5注意第三人稱單數(shù)。【典例】根據(jù)下面表格的提示，寫出你和你的朋友mike一日三餐喜歡吃什么和不喜歡吃什么。(60詞左右)youmikebreakfast eggs, hamburgers/tomatoes, breadlunch/cola(可樂) ,french fries broccoli(西蘭花)，apples/dinner/vegetables, meatdessert(甜點(diǎn))，chicken/【參考詞匯】單詞：breakfast, eggs, hamburgers, tomatoes, bread, cola, french fries, broccoli, apples, lu

15、nch, vegetables, meat, dessert, chicken, dinner 短語：for breakfast/lunch/dinner 句子：1. i like . for breakfast/lunch/dinner. 2. he likes. 【范文欣賞】 i like eggs and hamburgers for breakfast. mike doesnt like tomatoes or bread for breakfast. i dont like broccoli or apples for lunch. mike likes cola and frenc

16、h fries for lunch. mike likes vegetables and meat for dinner. i dont like dessert or chicken for dinner.點(diǎn)評：本文談?wù)撟约汉团笥裮ike -日三餐喜歡的食物和不喜歡的食物。 短文從早餐到晚餐，列舉具體喜愛的食物或不喜愛的食物，條理清晰，所用語言簡潔，全篇行文流暢。從句子可以看出，文中使用了句型“i like.”和“mikelikes.”表達(dá)喜愛。用“i dont like.”和“mike doesnt like.”來說出不喜歡的食物，作者正確地表達(dá)了喜惡?！緦懽麽槍π杂?xùn)練】 根據(jù)實(shí)際情況，描

17、寫自己及一位家庭成員的一日三餐好惡。 unit 7 how much are these socks?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【首尾呼應(yīng)法寫廣告詞】1. 開門見山進(jìn)行宣傳，多為號召性語言。 如：come and buy your clothes at great sale! come and look at the clothes for yourself.2介紹產(chǎn)品物美價廉，有各種樣式可供選擇，針對不同人群有不同樣式，達(dá)到激發(fā)顧客購買欲望的目的，細(xì)節(jié)要具體到品種、顏色、價位等句式可有：品種：do you need.? / do you like？/ for，we have/ you can buy/ w

18、e sell顏色：we havein價位：we haveat very good prices/we haveonly for/we sell.only for.3畫龍點(diǎn)睛，首尾呼應(yīng)，再次號召：come to buy some good clothes!【易錯點(diǎn)提示】在寫價錢的時候，注意美元“$”，元“rmb”的符號，如果用符號，錢數(shù)要跟在其后，yuan單復(fù)數(shù)同形，而dollar的復(fù)數(shù)需加s?！镜淅棵b店開張了，請你根據(jù)提示寫一篇60詞左右的廣告。要求：廣告簡單易懂，同時突出商品的亮點(diǎn)。 要求靈活運(yùn)用所學(xué)過的單詞、短語及句子。 要寫清商品及價格?！緟⒖荚~匯】：單詞：store, hat,

19、 bag, socks, skirt, sweater. price, yourself, color 短語：at a very good price, bags for sports, football socks, come and see, have a look at., different colors句子：we have.for. for boys, you can buy. for girls, we have. 【建議模塊】開頭：（點(diǎn)出商店名字）come and buy your clothes at maomao clothes store!正文：（所售商品及價格）we ha

20、ve + 商品名 (hats, bags, skirts.) + for + (價格). for boys. for girls.結(jié)尾：（宣傳語） come and see for yourself!【范文欣賞】 maomao clothes store sale!come and buy your clothes at maomao clothes store! do you like hats? we have black and blue hats for y12. we have sweaters at a very good price-only￥60 ! do you need b

21、ags for sports? we have great bags for only￥45. for boys, you can buy football socks for only￥8. for girls, we have skirts in different colorsfor only￥18! come and see for yourself!點(diǎn)評：全文簡單明了，開篇點(diǎn)明服裝店名稱，用了號召句型如句；后又用幾個疑問句引出所談商品如句和句，親切而自然，句式靈活；句子運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確如句，we have.；短語運(yùn)用也恰當(dāng)如in different colors，讓人印象深刻，語言流暢，重點(diǎn)

22、突出；最后句與首句呼應(yīng)，再次點(diǎn)題?！緦懽麽槍π杂?xùn)練】 請根據(jù)所提供的信息，給一家商店寫廣告詞。1. skirts 2. shirts 3.t- shirts 4. trousers 5. shoes 6. socks big sale ! liangli clothes store come to liangli unit 8 when is your birthday?創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三步五要素法介紹自己朋友家人】1.寫作思路分三步 第一步：確定介紹的對象、內(nèi)容及其順序。 第二步：列舉介紹自己朋友家人的句型，多多益善。 第三步：成段成篇，修訂完善。2文章內(nèi)容的五要素 姓名性別：（姓、名、中文名

23、英文名）my name is./my first/ last name is. 年齡出生日期出生地：i am. years old. 愛好：i like playing the piano. 所在學(xué)校和班級：i am at. middle schooli am in class.，grade.。 聯(lián)系方式（電話號碼、郵箱等）：my telephone number is. 補(bǔ)充：如果所介紹的朋友是外國人還需要介紹其國籍?！痉段男蕾p】 my name is jin lin. i am at the age of thirteen. and i am a student at no.2 middl

24、e school. my birthday is on october 3rd. in my family, there are four people. they are my father,my mother, my sister and me. my father and my mother are both doctors. my fathers birthday is on april 13th, and my mothers birthday is on july 10th. when is my sisters birthday? its on august 14th. and

25、she is nine years old this year. when is your birthday?點(diǎn)評：該文采用“三步五要素法”介紹自己和家人。作者開篇充分運(yùn)用本單元重點(diǎn)句型介紹自己的姓名、年齡、職業(yè)、出生日期等信息，如廁線部分；接下來又介紹了自己家庭成員的信息，也都運(yùn)用到了本單元重點(diǎn)句型及日期表達(dá)法；收篇時作者用所學(xué)句型提出問題，自然結(jié)束；該文章條理清楚，語句通順，用詞得當(dāng)。將提示中的信息都寫入了文章?！緦懽麽槍π杂?xùn)練】 根據(jù)下面的信息寫一篇短文，了解和介紹這些名人。edison愛迪生1847 -2 -11 americalu xun魯迅1881-9 - 25 chinali s

26、iguang李四光1889 -10-26 chinanewton牛頓1643 -1-4 englandcurie居里夫人1867-11-7 french要求：1.詞數(shù)60左右。 2介紹中包括名人的姓名、出生日期、國籍等。 3可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮參考詞匯：be from.來自， was born on，出生于（天）scientist科學(xué)家， writer作家 unit 9 my favorite subject is science.創(chuàng)新寫作指導(dǎo)【三步三層法寫信發(fā)郵件談?wù)搨€人喜好】1寫作思路分三步 第一步：確定寫信的對象及談?wù)摰脑掝}。如最喜歡(不喜歡)的學(xué)科、老師、一天等； 第二步：運(yùn)用品質(zhì)形容詞來談?wù)撓?/p>

27、歡（不喜歡）的理由； 第三步：描寫自己最喜歡的事物及平時的一些做法。2文章的結(jié)構(gòu)分三層 第一層：起篇（開頭句）； 第二層：正文談?wù)撟约鹤钕矚g的事物，同時運(yùn)用品質(zhì)形容詞來描述喜歡的原因； 第三層：收篇（結(jié)尾句）?！痉段男蕾p】dear frank, as a middle school student, i go to school from monday to friday. i have seven classes every day: four in the morning and three in the afternoon. among all the lessons, my favor

28、ite subject is english because english is very important. whats more, my english teacher ms li often makes her class very interesting. and she is very friendly to me. so i often listen to her carefully in class. after class i often ask her questions about english. ms li also tells me to watch englis

29、h movies on weekends. it is really useful. i love english best, and l will study very hard to get good grades. yours, tom點(diǎn)評：作者開篇介紹自己的身份及自己每天的課程；正文部分運(yùn)用because, so. and, also, whats more等連詞分層介紹自己喜歡的課程及理由，而且介紹了自己的做法；最后收篇介紹自己今后的想法。【寫作針對性訓(xùn)練】 假設(shè)你是gina，你的筆友john寫信想了解一下你目前所在的年級和在校的學(xué)習(xí)情況，請你寫信告訴他你最喜歡的科目及原因，并向他介

30、紹你最喜歡的老師及原因。要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2敘事清楚，語句通順，語意連貫；3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名。參考詞匯：1表示并列、轉(zhuǎn)折或原因的詞：and，but，because.2表示喜好的詞匯：like，lovefavorite.3表示品質(zhì)的形容詞：interesting, kind, friendly.4拓展詞匯：among.在之中（三者以上）， whats more而且， be strict嚴(yán)格的， get good grades取得好成績dear john， 創(chuàng)新寫作針對性訓(xùn)練參考答案unit 1 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案dear jennifer, my full name is ka

31、te jane brown. kate is my first name and jane is my middle name. brown is my last name. i am a student at no. 2 middle school in nanjing. i am /n class 12, grade l, and i am 12 years old now. my favorite color is blue. my telephone number is 184-3546. i have a good friend at school her name is mary.

32、 her phone number is 254-3975 whats your telephone number? can you write and tell me about you? yours, kateunit 2 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案dear rosie, here is a photo of my family. there are ten people in my family. these are my grandparents. and this is my father and that is my mother. my parents are teachers. the

33、 girl is my sister. her name is anna. this boy is my brother, tom. those are my uncle and aunt. and that boy is my cousin, mike. i love my family. best wishes! yours, veraunit 3 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案lost: i lost a black notebook on the playground on jan. 1st. if you found it, please call me at than

34、k you. lucyunit 4 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案look! this is my room. its really tidy, there is a desk in my room. on the desk there are some books and a computer. and my bed is beside the desk. i like my bed very much because its comfortable（舒適的）.next to the bed there is a sofa. you can see a dog on the sofa. and its

35、name is wang wang. my room is not very big, but its very nice. what do you think? unit 5 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案amy has a great sports collection. she has six basketballs, nine volleyballs, ten tennis balls, twelve soccer balls and eight baseballs. she has eight ping-pong bats, ten tennis rackets and four basebal

36、l bats. she has twenty pairs of sports shoes and five sports t-shirts.amy likes sports, and she often plays sports.unit 6 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案 i have a healthy lifestyle(生活方式)my eating habits are good. i like milk and eggs for breakfast. my mother likes bread for breakfast. for lunch, i like chicken, salad and

37、 rice. my mother likes noodles and dumplings. for dinner, l like salad and soup. my mother likes rice and some meat. i think im healthy. what about you?unit 7 創(chuàng)新寫作 參考答案big sale! liangli clothes store come to liangli clothes store. do you want skirts? we have nice skirts for girls. they are only $ 18 for each. do you like shirts? we have white, blue, green, black and red shirts for $ 20 each. these white, yellow and blue t-shirts are only $25. f