2018-2019學(xué)年高中英語北師大版版必修2課件：Unit6SectionⅧ(自修課)Writing—描寫建筑物

1、寫作技法指導(dǎo)XIEZUOJIFAZHIDAO一、寫作要領(lǐng)描寫建筑物屬于說明文，時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第三人稱為主。在描寫建筑物時，我們應(yīng)注意以下幾點：1. 抓準(zhǔn)特征。描寫建筑物時，首先必須弄清楚從哪些方面進(jìn)行描述，要挑出其區(qū)別于其他建筑物的顯著特點，而不必面面俱到。2順序恰當(dāng)。介紹建筑物除了可以按照空間順序，即由宏觀到微觀，由外部到內(nèi)部，由總體到局部，還可以按照修建的時間順序。3.表現(xiàn)手法多樣，切忌平鋪直敘，缺乏變化。要抓住有代表性的細(xì)節(jié)，詳略得當(dāng)，盡可能在較小的篇幅中給讀者下深刻的印象。4.語言要科學(xué)、客觀、具體、嚴(yán)密，簡潔明了。二、增分佳句1. 常用詞匯(1) 表示方位：in th

2、e east/west/north/south, on the right/leftside of in (the) front of，behind，at the back of，opposite，across by the side of 等。(2) 表示面積：square meter(s)/kilometer(s) hectare(公頃)等。(3) 表示形狀：shape, round, square, oval (橢圓形)，triangle（三角形）等。2. 常用句式(1) It is located in/to ./It stands in/to/at/on (2) It was bui

3、lt in /It is .years old/It dates back to .(3) It covers .square meters/It s very large with an areaof(4) It is .meters long/wide/high/. with a IengtIVwidth/heightof .meters.(5) It is made of stone/wood/brick/steel/concrete .題目要求請以aMy Dream House為題，根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇作文。1. 位于綠樹之間的一座兩層樓的大房子；2. 一樓是個大客廳，有舒適的沙發(fā)和電

4、視；3最主要的房間是樓上的起居室，有很多家具，如書架等;4.屋頂有太陽能帆板(solar panel),供應(yīng)洗澡和學(xué)習(xí)；房子有特殊材料，冬暖夏涼;5喜歡住在這樣的房子里，因為設(shè)計地既節(jié)能又環(huán)保。注意：1詞數(shù)100個左右;2. 不要逐句翻譯。第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵 一、審題1. 確定體裁：本文為描寫性說明文;2. 確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應(yīng)為第三人稱;3. 確定時態(tài)：本文應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。構(gòu)思第一部分，簡單介紹自己的理想房子。第二部分,房內(nèi)外環(huán)境。第三部分,表達(dá)自己的感想。第二步：核心詞匯想周全1 two-storey2. locate3. energy-saving4. environmen

5、t-friendly5. comfortable6. fufniture7. bathe8 provide9. electricity10 material兩層的 位于 節(jié)能的 環(huán)境友好型 舒適的 家具 洗澡，沐浴 提供 電 材料第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)1. 我理想的房子是一座兩層樓的大房子。My dream house is quite a large two-storey house2. 它位于綠樹之間。It is located among green tall trees.3. 一樓是個大客廳，有舒適的沙發(fā)和彩電。（倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）On the ground floor is a big ha

6、ll with comfortable sofa and color TV.4. 最主要的房間是樓上的起居室。The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs.5. 樓上的起居室有很多家具，如書架，書桌等。（there be句型；such as） In the sitting rooms upstairs there is a lot of furniture such as bookshelves and desks,6. 屋頂有太陽能帆板，供應(yīng)電能以便洗澡和學(xué)習(xí)。（which非限制性定 語從句）On the

7、 roof there are solar panels，which can provide electricity to let me bathe and study with.7.The house also has got special materials.&It is cool in summer and warm in winter.9.專門設(shè)計既節(jié)省能源又環(huán)保。It is specially designed to be both energy-saving andenvironment-friendly.第四步:句式升級造亮點1用過去分詞作定語合并句1和句2My dre

8、am house is quite a large two-storey house located among green tall trees.2.將句4和句5合并成含有定語從句的句子The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs, where there is a lot of furniture such as bookshelves and desks.3.用so that改寫句7和句8The house has got special materials so that it is cool in

9、 summer and warm in winter.第五步：過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇My Dream HouseMy dream house is quite a large two-storey house located among green tall trees with a large garden in front of it. It is specially designed to be both energy-saving and environment-friendly.On the ground floor is a big hall with comfortable sofa a

10、nd color TV.The most important part in the house is the sitting rooms upstairs, where there is a lot of furniture, such as bookshelves and desks.On the roof there are solar panels, which can provide electricity to let me bathe and study with. The house has got special materials so that it is cool in

11、 summer and warm in winterI would like to live in such a dream house forever.*單元小結(jié)美文串記核考點單元主干知識 一篇美文串起 詞匯復(fù)現(xiàn)識 高效簡潔無比There are many kinds of arts in China, including drawing and paper-cutting. Many well-known artists left their names in Chinese history. Xu Beihong and Qi Baishi were typical examples.M

12、r Xu developed the tradition of combining poetry with paintinge In his Racing Horsey we can see a horse running at high speed like a missile flying straight to its target. It often makes the audience hold their breath for its vivid image. He was also good at using different shades of grey to show th

13、e details. Mr Xu held several exhibitions in Europe to promote Chinese art.Qi Baishi is one of China s greatest painters. He was especially good at drawing daily objects and creatures, such as vegetables, flowers, birds and insects. In his painting Cabbage, to emphasise the contrast, he drew a big c

14、abbage and a tiny insect. The tiny insect fixed its eyes on the big cabbage. What would it like to do? It depends on your imagination.Their paintings are very valuable and collectors are willing to collect them at a price.Chinese paper-cutting has a long history and dates back to the Northern and So

15、uthern Dynasty. It' s used for decoration, religious purpose and design patterns.During holidays or happy occasions, people use red paper cuts to show their happiness. That paper cut is related to religion sounds sort of strange, but it is really used to make offerings for the dead. Many people

16、try out paper-cutting. Perhaps some of them will become an artist in this field one day. Then the art won' t be ruined because young generations show little interest in it.ID在中國有多種藝術(shù)形式，其中包括繪畫和剪紙。許多著名的藝術(shù)家在中國歷史上留下了他們的名字。徐悲鴻和齊白石就是典型的例子。徐悲鴻發(fā)展了將詩歌和繪畫結(jié)合起來的傳統(tǒng)。在他的奔馬圖中，我們看見一匹馬快速地奔跑著，就像一枚徑直飛向目標(biāo)的導(dǎo)彈。它生動逼真的形象經(jīng)常使觀眾屏住呼吸。他也擅長使用不同的灰色陰影呈現(xiàn)細(xì)節(jié)。徐悲鴻在歐洲舉辦過多次展覽以弘揚中國藝術(shù)。齊白石是中國最偉大的畫家之一。他尤其擅長畫日常生活中的物體和生物，如蔬菜、花、鳥和昆