中科院考博英語培訓(xùn)資料（作文）problemsinwriting-10,January

1、.作文題：09年12月份的作文真題1。表達(dá)“一些人。一些人。還有一些人?！盨ome people; some; some others.2. 詞性問題：（1）Maybe diligent is not a source of joy- Maybe diligence is not a source of joy（2）Study hard must be a good choice for me to realize the dream-Studying hard study 也可以做名詞，表示“學(xué)習(xí)”“書房”等，但是在這里，它后面接了副詞，就不是做名詞的用法了，所以應(yīng)該改為動(dòng)詞。只有動(dòng)詞后面才

2、能緊接副詞。Study hard was not wrong in any cases.-Studying hard was .（3）Many people would criticize the first types lazy -laziness(4) There is more and more competitive in todays society.- There is more and more competition in todays society.（5）the interesting of learning make us concentrate on what we a

3、re doing-the interest of learning makes us .(6) From that time on, thinking became my biggest interest and brought me lots of funny.- From that time on, thinking became my biggest interest and brought me lots of fun. 3. which的用法 History，English，Politics often make me confused. Which lead a malignant

4、 instance that I work hard on some subjects I preferred while ignore some abhorred ones. -Historyconfused. This leads to such an undesirable situation that I work hard on some subjects.Malignant指腫瘤 “惡性的”，不用在這個(gè)語境里。4。冠詞的用法Studying hard must be a good choice for me to realize the dream of the comfortab

5、le life. -a comfortable life先前的上下文中提到了這個(gè)事物，它再次出現(xiàn)時(shí)候才用the，否則，第一次出現(xiàn)應(yīng)該用 a / an 。當(dāng)然，有些專有名詞即便是第一次出現(xiàn)，也用the 。如：I have come to the Chinese Academy of Sciences. As far as I am concerned, I am a last one.- As far as I am concerned, I am the last one. .表示順序或者數(shù)字的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該用定冠詞the 。 5。what的用法Furthermore，the major what

6、 I study is agriculture. n -Furthermore，the major that I study is agriculture. What 當(dāng)引導(dǎo)詞，引導(dǎo)一個(gè)名詞性從句，而且特別的是，what本身在這個(gè)名詞性從句中還充當(dāng)一個(gè)名詞。這是what 和其他引導(dǎo)從句的引導(dǎo)詞不一樣的地方。換言之， what=the thing that它身兼雙職。e.g., What he has said is true. = The thing that he has said is true. 上例的句子中已經(jīng)有名詞the major ，所以不再需要what 來充當(dāng)一個(gè)名詞了。另一個(gè)例

7、子：They are not fond of what their study.- They are not fond of their study. 此處連從句都沒有，用what引導(dǎo)詞有何用？I have done something what I want since I became a graduated student-I have done something that I want since I became a graduated student6. only Although you may be not the top, you should try your best,

8、 and only this, would you make progress, of course, you will get more money.- Although you may not be the top person, you should try your best. Only by this way, would you make progress. Of course, you will get more money.注意及時(shí)斷句。7。In conclusion, the study to my life as air and water to body.- In con

9、clusion, the study is to my life what air and water is to the body. e.g,. Air is to human being what water is to fish.8. 句子結(jié)構(gòu)紊亂：(1) There are some reasons can account for my choice.-There are some reasons that can account for my choice.(2)A majority of students who really want to study and do it wel

10、l including me.- A majority of students really want to study and do it well, including me.(3) Here, a question that what kind of students am I is displayed beyond me.- Here, a question of what kind of students I am is raised before me. 賓語從句是肯定句句式，主謂語的位置還是主語在前，謂語在后。9. 專有名詞 博士生 doctor-student -doctorate student 西部地區(qū) west parts-west regions 知識(shí)爆炸 Knowledge explos