2018高三短文改錯(cuò)二輪改錯(cuò)公開(kāi)課PPT課件

1、2018高三高三英語(yǔ)二輪英語(yǔ)二輪 短文改錯(cuò)短文改錯(cuò) 考點(diǎn)歸納與應(yīng)考策略考點(diǎn)歸納與應(yīng)考策略12021/7/24In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I f

2、orgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sto

3、p just in the middle on the road. （作者暑假學(xué)車(chē)的經(jīng)歷作者暑假學(xué)車(chē)的經(jīng)歷, 8句，句，109詞）詞）17年高考年高考I卷改錯(cuò)卷改錯(cuò)eighteenththe / mybutwentwordsTurn latersudden of數(shù)詞誤用數(shù)詞誤用冠詞冠詞/ 代詞的漏用代詞的漏用連接詞邏輯錯(cuò)誤連接詞邏輯錯(cuò)誤謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤名詞數(shù)的誤用名詞數(shù)的誤用謂語(yǔ)與非謂語(yǔ)的錯(cuò)用謂語(yǔ)與非謂語(yǔ)的錯(cuò)用副詞的多余副詞的多余副詞的語(yǔ)義錯(cuò)誤副詞的語(yǔ)義錯(cuò)誤詞性誤用詞性誤用介性誤用介性誤用22021/7/24 My uncle is the owner of a restaur

4、ant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oi

5、l are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. (叔叔開(kāi)的飯店生意興隆及成功秘訣叔叔開(kāi)的飯店生意興隆及成功秘訣, 8句，句，93詞）詞）16年高考年高考I卷改錯(cuò)卷改錯(cuò)wherehavehonestyandusedofasteadilyhis連接詞邏輯錯(cuò)誤連接詞邏輯錯(cuò)誤連接詞錯(cuò)用連接詞錯(cuò)用連接詞重復(fù)使用連接詞重復(fù)使用動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤動(dòng)詞時(shí)

6、態(tài)錯(cuò)誤詞性誤用詞性誤用介詞漏用介詞漏用冠詞錯(cuò)用冠詞錯(cuò)用代詞邏輯錯(cuò)誤代詞邏輯錯(cuò)誤詞性誤用詞性誤用動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)的誤用動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)的誤用32021/7/24短文改錯(cuò)考些什么短文改錯(cuò)考些什么？怎么考？怎么考？你你有什么解題經(jīng)驗(yàn)和大家分享？有什么解題經(jīng)驗(yàn)和大家分享？1. 長(zhǎng)度：長(zhǎng)度：2. 內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容：3. 體裁：體裁：4. 考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn) ：5. 考法考法：短文有短文有610句話(huà)，含句話(huà)，含92119個(gè)詞。個(gè)詞。取材于學(xué)生習(xí)作，貼近學(xué)生生活。取材于學(xué)生習(xí)作，貼近學(xué)生生活。除除2013年年卷是說(shuō)明文外，其余都是記敘文。卷是說(shuō)明文外，其余都是記敘文。動(dòng)，名，形，副，介，冠，代，連詞等動(dòng)，名，形，副，介，冠，代，連詞等。1

7、) 8:1:1的規(guī)律的規(guī)律 即：即：8個(gè)改錯(cuò)題，個(gè)改錯(cuò)題，1個(gè)加詞題，個(gè)加詞題， 1個(gè)刪詞題個(gè)刪詞題2）每個(gè)句子最多不超過(guò)兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤每個(gè)句子最多不超過(guò)兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤, 一詞改一詞一詞改一詞42021/7/24改錯(cuò)要容易，考點(diǎn)須牢記；根據(jù)考點(diǎn)找錯(cuò)誤，逐一排查高速度。改錯(cuò)要容易，考點(diǎn)須牢記；根據(jù)考點(diǎn)找錯(cuò)誤，逐一排查高速度。三個(gè)步驟三個(gè)步驟1.從語(yǔ)篇入手，理解大意，著眼時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)。從語(yǔ)篇入手，理解大意，著眼時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)。2.從句子入手，依據(jù)考點(diǎn)，逐句分析，推敲語(yǔ)法。從句子入手，依據(jù)考點(diǎn)，逐句分析，推敲語(yǔ)法。3.從行文邏輯入手，兼顧上下，審查連代。從行文邏輯入手，兼顧上下，審查連代。52021/7/241. (

8、2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷)Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, but once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. 2. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) The instructor kept repeating the words, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” 3. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) It is

9、always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that4. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking. haveTurnwentused考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)1 謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的錯(cuò)誤謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的錯(cuò)誤62021/7/245. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) I had grown not only physic

10、ally, but also mentally in the past few years. 6. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. 7. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) We can chose between staying at home and taking a trip. 8. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) Some classmates

11、 suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. havebecamechooseshould72021/7/249. (2014全國(guó)全國(guó)II卷卷) My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of flowers and We can lie on the grassThe teachers here are kindThey are not only our teachers looks歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)，主謂一致、語(yǔ)氣等。主要考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)

12、和語(yǔ)態(tài)，主謂一致、語(yǔ)氣等。 82021/7/241. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, which is on the rooftop of their house. 2. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) When summer comes, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables! 3. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) We can choose between stayin

13、g at home and take a trip. interestedto考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)2 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的錯(cuò)誤非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的錯(cuò)誤taking92021/7/244. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.5. (2016浙江浙江) He would ask who we were and pretend not to knowing us. wearingknow歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查動(dòng)詞不定式、動(dòng)詞主要考查動(dòng)詞不定式、動(dòng)詞-ing形式以及過(guò)去分詞的用法、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)形式以及過(guò)去分詞的用法、謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞與

14、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的混用、并列結(jié)構(gòu)中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的誤用等。詞與非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的混用、并列結(jié)構(gòu)中非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的誤用等。 作主語(yǔ)或作介詞賓語(yǔ)，該用動(dòng)詞作主語(yǔ)或作介詞賓語(yǔ)，該用動(dòng)詞-ing形式時(shí)卻用了原形。尤其注意分清形式時(shí)卻用了原形。尤其注意分清to是介詞還是介詞還是不定式符號(hào)。固定結(jié)構(gòu)中不定式符號(hào)的缺失與多余。情感類(lèi)動(dòng)詞的是不定式符號(hào)。固定結(jié)構(gòu)中不定式符號(hào)的缺失與多余。情感類(lèi)動(dòng)詞的-ed分詞與分詞與-ing分詞的區(qū)別。分詞的區(qū)別。作定語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)或補(bǔ)語(yǔ)時(shí)，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式用錯(cuò)。作定語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)或補(bǔ)語(yǔ)時(shí)，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式用錯(cuò)。102021/7/241. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) The instructor kept repea

15、ting the word，“Speed up！” “Slow down！”. 2. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) My uncle tells me that the key to success is honest. 3. Jay began his performance with one of his most famous song.考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)3 名詞錯(cuò)誤名詞錯(cuò)誤wordshonestysongs112021/7/244. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. 5.

16、(2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.6. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.Tips : 可數(shù)名詞大于一時(shí)要用復(fù)數(shù)，不可數(shù)名詞一般沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。如可數(shù)名詞大于一時(shí)要用復(fù)數(shù)，不可數(shù)名詞一般沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。如air, milk, water等物質(zhì)名詞與等物質(zhì)名詞與music, advice, fu

17、n，knowledge，progress等抽象名詞是不可數(shù)名詞，一般等抽象名詞是不可數(shù)名詞，一般是沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式的。還有是沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式的。還有l(wèi)uggage / baggage, furniture, equipment, information等都是容等都是容易出錯(cuò)的不可數(shù)名詞。易出錯(cuò)的不可數(shù)名詞。informationknowledgeyears122021/7/247 .(2011全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷) When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.表示表示“某人的某人的”本應(yīng)用名詞的所有格，文中卻沒(méi)用。本應(yīng)用

18、名詞的所有格，文中卻沒(méi)用。如上題。注意，以下如上題。注意，以下情況中，名詞所有格后的名詞可省略：情況中，名詞所有格后的名詞可省略：a butchers (shop)肉鋪，肉鋪，a tailors (shop)裁縫店，裁縫店，a barbers (shop)理發(fā)店，理發(fā)店，a doctors (office)診所，診所，my sisters (home)我姐姐家，其中我姐姐家，其中shop, office, home等表示處所的詞都可以省略，直接等表示處所的詞都可以省略，直接用名詞所有格表示。用名詞所有格表示。friends歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查名詞的數(shù)主要考查名詞的數(shù)(可數(shù)還是不可數(shù)，單

19、數(shù)還是復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)還是不可數(shù)，單數(shù)還是復(fù)數(shù))，偶爾考名詞，偶爾考名詞的格，以及轉(zhuǎn)換成名詞詞性的用法。的格，以及轉(zhuǎn)換成名詞詞性的用法。132021/7/241. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.2. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) Instead, he hopes that his business will grow steady. 3. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and

20、planes, playing pop music, and collecting the latest music albums. 4. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) They were also the best and worse years in my life.5. (2014全國(guó)全國(guó)I卷卷) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)4 形容詞及副詞錯(cuò)誤形容詞及副詞錯(cuò)誤suddensteadilyworsttastydifferent142021/7/246. (2015全國(guó)全國(guó)II卷卷) Mom said, “How ni

21、ce to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 7. (2013全國(guó)全國(guó)II卷卷) Interesting, it had a connection to the British porcelain (瓷器瓷器) industry. 8. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes

22、late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.terriblyInterestingly later152021/7/249. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)I卷卷) I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. 10. (2015全國(guó)全國(guó)II卷卷) He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. 11. I found the test difficult, but I tried

23、hardly to do it.hard歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查形容詞和副詞的詞性辨析（混淆錯(cuò)用）、詞義辨析、比較主要考查形容詞和副詞的詞性辨析（混淆錯(cuò)用）、詞義辨析、比較等級(jí)和最高級(jí)的錯(cuò)用等。等級(jí)和最高級(jí)的錯(cuò)用等。 adj. 作定語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)、賓補(bǔ)作定語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)、賓補(bǔ) adv. 修飾動(dòng)詞、形容詞、副詞或整個(gè)句子作狀語(yǔ)修飾動(dòng)詞、形容詞、副詞或整個(gè)句子作狀語(yǔ)162021/7/241. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road. 2. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) My uncl

24、e says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time. 3. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) They have also bought for some gardening tools. 4. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) Now I am leaving home to college. 5. (2015 陜西陜西) My soccer coach retired in last week. 6. (2015全國(guó)卷全國(guó)卷) Tony saw a toy on a shop window. 考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)5 介詞錯(cuò)誤介詞錯(cuò)誤ofoff

25、or總結(jié)歸納：總結(jié)歸納：in主要考查介詞的意義和用法、固定搭配中介詞的誤用、介詞的主要考查介詞的意義和用法、固定搭配中介詞的誤用、介詞的缺失與多余等。缺失與多余等。 172021/7/241. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) I still remember how hard first day was.2. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time.3. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) They live far from the school，and it takes t

26、hem about a hour and a half to go to work every day. 4. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) But in that case，we will learn little about world.考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)6 冠詞錯(cuò)誤冠詞錯(cuò)誤theaanthe182021/7/245. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) At the first, I thought I knew everything and6.(2015全國(guó)全國(guó)II卷卷) He liked it so much that he quickly walked into the shop A woman saw hi

27、m crying and told him to wait outside a shop.the歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查主要考查固定搭配中的冠詞誤用固定搭配中的冠詞誤用，定冠詞和不定冠詞，定冠詞和不定冠詞表示泛表示泛指和特指指和特指的的誤誤用，不定冠詞用，不定冠詞a 和和an的混用，以及冠詞的缺失的混用，以及冠詞的缺失與多余等。與多余等。 192021/7/241. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)I ) Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steadily. 2. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in o

28、ur school3. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.4. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot. 5. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. 考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)7 代詞錯(cuò)誤代詞錯(cuò)誤hisbothmymuchmyself202021/

29、7/246 (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. 7. When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain.I總結(jié)歸納：總結(jié)歸納：主要考查各類(lèi)代詞的用法（人稱(chēng)代詞主要考查各類(lèi)代詞的用法（人稱(chēng)代詞 / 形容詞性的物主代詞形容詞性的物主代詞 / 反身代詞反身代詞 / 不定代詞）、代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致、代不定代詞）

30、、代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致、代詞的缺失或多余以及詞的缺失或多余以及it的不當(dāng)使用等。的不當(dāng)使用等。 212021/7/24 1. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)) Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructors orders，so once I started the car，my mind went blank.2. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area. 3. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) My uncle is

31、 the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. 4. (2016全國(guó)全國(guó)) Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are used for cooking.考點(diǎn)考點(diǎn)8 連詞錯(cuò)誤連詞錯(cuò)誤butwhereand222021/7/245. (2017全國(guó)全國(guó)卷卷) In their spare time, they are interested in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the ro

32、oftop of their house. 6. When Jay began to sing the seventh song, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not interrupted7. (2013全國(guó)全國(guó)I卷卷) He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful.whichHoweverand總結(jié)歸納：總結(jié)歸納：232021/7/24 When I was a child,

33、 I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we b