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1、2018高三高三英語二輪英語二輪 短文改錯短文改錯 考點歸納與應(yīng)考策略考點歸納與應(yīng)考策略12021/7/24In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I f

2、orgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly sto

3、p just in the middle on the road. （作者暑假學(xué)車的經(jīng)歷作者暑假學(xué)車的經(jīng)歷, 8句，句，109詞）詞）17年高考年高考I卷改錯卷改錯eighteenththe / mybutwentwordsTurn latersudden of數(shù)詞誤用數(shù)詞誤用冠詞冠詞/ 代詞的漏用代詞的漏用連接詞邏輯錯誤連接詞邏輯錯誤謂語動詞時態(tài)錯誤謂語動詞時態(tài)錯誤名詞數(shù)的誤用名詞數(shù)的誤用謂語與非謂語的錯用謂語與非謂語的錯用副詞的多余副詞的多余副詞的語義錯誤副詞的語義錯誤詞性誤用詞性誤用介性誤用介性誤用22021/7/24 My uncle is the owner of a restaur

4、ant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oi

5、l are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. (叔叔開的飯店生意興隆及成功秘訣叔叔開的飯店生意興隆及成功秘訣, 8句，句，93詞）詞）16年高考年高考I卷改錯卷改錯wherehavehonestyandusedofasteadilyhis連接詞邏輯錯誤連接詞邏輯錯誤連接詞錯用連接詞錯用連接詞重復(fù)使用連接詞重復(fù)使用動詞時態(tài)錯誤動詞時

6、態(tài)錯誤詞性誤用詞性誤用介詞漏用介詞漏用冠詞錯用冠詞錯用代詞邏輯錯誤代詞邏輯錯誤詞性誤用詞性誤用動詞語態(tài)的誤用動詞語態(tài)的誤用32021/7/24短文改錯考些什么短文改錯考些什么？怎么考？怎么考？你你有什么解題經(jīng)驗和大家分享？有什么解題經(jīng)驗和大家分享？1. 長度：長度：2. 內(nèi)容：內(nèi)容：3. 體裁：體裁：4. 考點考點 ：5. 考法考法：短文有短文有610句話，含句話，含92119個詞。個詞。取材于學(xué)生習(xí)作，貼近學(xué)生生活。取材于學(xué)生習(xí)作，貼近學(xué)生生活。除除2013年年卷是說明文外，其余都是記敘文。卷是說明文外，其余都是記敘文。動，名，形，副，介，冠，代，連詞等動，名，形，副，介，冠，代，連詞等。1

7、) 8:1:1的規(guī)律的規(guī)律 即：即：8個改錯題，個改錯題，1個加詞題，個加詞題， 1個刪詞題個刪詞題2）每個句子最多不超過兩個錯誤每個句子最多不超過兩個錯誤, 一詞改一詞一詞改一詞42021/7/24改錯要容易，考點須牢記；根據(jù)考點找錯誤，逐一排查高速度。改錯要容易，考點須牢記；根據(jù)考點找錯誤，逐一排查高速度。三個步驟三個步驟1.從語篇入手，理解大意，著眼時態(tài)和語態(tài)。從語篇入手，理解大意，著眼時態(tài)和語態(tài)。2.從句子入手，依據(jù)考點，逐句分析，推敲語法。從句子入手，依據(jù)考點，逐句分析，推敲語法。3.從行文邏輯入手，兼顧上下，審查連代。從行文邏輯入手，兼顧上下，審查連代。52021/7/241. (

8、2017全國全國卷卷)Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, but once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. 2. (2017全國全國卷卷) The instructor kept repeating the words, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” 3. (2016全國全國卷卷) It is

9、always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that4. (2016全國全國卷卷) Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking. haveTurnwentused考點考點1 謂語動詞的錯誤謂語動詞的錯誤62021/7/245. (2017全國全國卷卷) I had grown not only physic

10、ally, but also mentally in the past few years. 6. (2017全國全國卷卷) About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. 7. (2016全國全國卷卷) We can chose between staying at home and taking a trip. 8. (2016全國全國卷卷) Some classmates

11、 suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. havebecamechooseshould72021/7/249. (2014全國全國II卷卷) My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of flowers and We can lie on the grassThe teachers here are kindThey are not only our teachers looks歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)，主謂一致、語氣等。主要考查動詞的時態(tài)

12、和語態(tài)，主謂一致、語氣等。 82021/7/241. (2017全國全國卷卷) In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, which is on the rooftop of their house. 2. (2017全國全國卷卷) When summer comes, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables! 3. (2016全國全國卷卷) We can choose between stayin

13、g at home and take a trip. interestedto考點考點2 非謂語動詞的錯誤非謂語動詞的錯誤taking92021/7/244. (2016全國全國卷卷) I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.5. (2016浙江浙江) He would ask who we were and pretend not to knowing us. wearingknow歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查動詞不定式、動詞主要考查動詞不定式、動詞-ing形式以及過去分詞的用法、謂語動形式以及過去分詞的用法、謂語動詞與

14、非謂語動詞的混用、并列結(jié)構(gòu)中非謂語動詞的誤用等。詞與非謂語動詞的混用、并列結(jié)構(gòu)中非謂語動詞的誤用等。 作主語或作介詞賓語，該用動詞作主語或作介詞賓語，該用動詞-ing形式時卻用了原形。尤其注意分清形式時卻用了原形。尤其注意分清to是介詞還是介詞還是不定式符號。固定結(jié)構(gòu)中不定式符號的缺失與多余。情感類動詞的是不定式符號。固定結(jié)構(gòu)中不定式符號的缺失與多余。情感類動詞的-ed分詞與分詞與-ing分詞的區(qū)別。分詞的區(qū)別。作定語、狀語或補語時，非謂語動詞形式用錯。作定語、狀語或補語時，非謂語動詞形式用錯。102021/7/241. (2017全國全國) The instructor kept repea

15、ting the word，“Speed up！” “Slow down！”. 2. (2016全國全國卷卷) My uncle tells me that the key to success is honest. 3. Jay began his performance with one of his most famous song.考點考點3 名詞錯誤名詞錯誤wordshonestysongs112021/7/244. (2017全國全國卷卷) Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. 5.

16、(2016全國全國卷卷) If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.6. (2016全國全國卷卷) The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.Tips : 可數(shù)名詞大于一時要用復(fù)數(shù)，不可數(shù)名詞一般沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。如可數(shù)名詞大于一時要用復(fù)數(shù)，不可數(shù)名詞一般沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式。如air, milk, water等物質(zhì)名詞與等物質(zhì)名詞與music, advice, fu

17、n，knowledge，progress等抽象名詞是不可數(shù)名詞，一般等抽象名詞是不可數(shù)名詞，一般是沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式的。還有是沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式的。還有l(wèi)uggage / baggage, furniture, equipment, information等都是容等都是容易出錯的不可數(shù)名詞。易出錯的不可數(shù)名詞。informationknowledgeyears122021/7/247 .(2011全國課標卷全國課標卷) When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.表示表示“某人的某人的”本應(yīng)用名詞的所有格，文中卻沒用。本應(yīng)用

18、名詞的所有格，文中卻沒用。如上題。注意，以下如上題。注意，以下情況中，名詞所有格后的名詞可省略：情況中，名詞所有格后的名詞可省略：a butchers (shop)肉鋪，肉鋪，a tailors (shop)裁縫店，裁縫店，a barbers (shop)理發(fā)店，理發(fā)店，a doctors (office)診所，診所，my sisters (home)我姐姐家，其中我姐姐家，其中shop, office, home等表示處所的詞都可以省略，直接等表示處所的詞都可以省略，直接用名詞所有格表示。用名詞所有格表示。friends歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查名詞的數(shù)主要考查名詞的數(shù)(可數(shù)還是不可數(shù)，單

19、數(shù)還是復(fù)數(shù)可數(shù)還是不可數(shù)，單數(shù)還是復(fù)數(shù))，偶爾考名詞，偶爾考名詞的格，以及轉(zhuǎn)換成名詞詞性的用法。的格，以及轉(zhuǎn)換成名詞詞性的用法。132021/7/241. (2017全國全國) It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road.2. (2016全國全國卷卷) Instead, he hopes that his business will grow steady. 3. (2017全國全國卷卷) I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and

20、planes, playing pop music, and collecting the latest music albums. 4. (2016全國全國) They were also the best and worse years in my life.5. (2014全國全國I卷卷) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.考點考點4 形容詞及副詞錯誤形容詞及副詞錯誤suddensteadilyworsttastydifferent142021/7/246. (2015全國全國II卷卷) Mom said, “How ni

21、ce to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 7. (2013全國全國II卷卷) Interesting, it had a connection to the British porcelain (瓷器瓷器) industry. 8. (2017全國全國卷卷) I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes

22、late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.terriblyInterestingly later152021/7/249. (2017全國全國I卷卷) I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. 10. (2015全國全國II卷卷) He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. 11. I found the test difficult, but I tried

23、hardly to do it.hard歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查形容詞和副詞的詞性辨析（混淆錯用）、詞義辨析、比較主要考查形容詞和副詞的詞性辨析（混淆錯用）、詞義辨析、比較等級和最高級的錯用等。等級和最高級的錯用等。 adj. 作定語、表語、賓補作定語、表語、賓補 adv. 修飾動詞、形容詞、副詞或整個句子作狀語修飾動詞、形容詞、副詞或整個句子作狀語162021/7/241. (2017全國全國) It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road. 2. (2016全國全國) My uncl

24、e says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time. 3. (2017全國全國) They have also bought for some gardening tools. 4. (2016全國全國) Now I am leaving home to college. 5. (2015 陜西陜西) My soccer coach retired in last week. 6. (2015全國卷全國卷) Tony saw a toy on a shop window. 考點考點5 介詞錯誤介詞錯誤ofoff

25、or總結(jié)歸納：總結(jié)歸納：in主要考查介詞的意義和用法、固定搭配中介詞的誤用、介詞的主要考查介詞的意義和用法、固定搭配中介詞的誤用、介詞的缺失與多余等。缺失與多余等。 172021/7/241. (2017全國全國) I still remember how hard first day was.2. (2016全國全國) My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of time.3. (2017全國全國) They live far from the school，and it takes t

26、hem about a hour and a half to go to work every day. 4. (2016全國全國) But in that case，we will learn little about world.考點考點6 冠詞錯誤冠詞錯誤theaanthe182021/7/245. (2016全國全國卷卷) At the first, I thought I knew everything and6.(2015全國全國II卷卷) He liked it so much that he quickly walked into the shop A woman saw hi

27、m crying and told him to wait outside a shop.the歸納總結(jié)：歸納總結(jié)：主要考查主要考查固定搭配中的冠詞誤用固定搭配中的冠詞誤用，定冠詞和不定冠詞，定冠詞和不定冠詞表示泛表示泛指和特指指和特指的的誤誤用，不定冠詞用，不定冠詞a 和和an的混用，以及冠詞的缺失的混用，以及冠詞的缺失與多余等。與多余等。 192021/7/241. (2016全國全國I ) Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steadily. 2. (2017全國全國) Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in o

28、ur school3. (2017全國全國) This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.4. (2016全國全國) It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot. 5. (2016全國全國) At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. 考點考點7 代詞錯誤代詞錯誤hisbothmymuchmyself202021/

29、7/246 (2016全國全國) At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. 7. When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain.I總結(jié)歸納：總結(jié)歸納：主要考查各類代詞的用法（人稱代詞主要考查各類代詞的用法（人稱代詞 / 形容詞性的物主代詞形容詞性的物主代詞 / 反身代詞反身代詞 / 不定代詞）、代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致、代不定代詞）

30、、代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致、代詞的缺失或多余以及詞的缺失或多余以及it的不當使用等。的不當使用等。 212021/7/24 1. (2017全國全國) Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructors orders，so once I started the car，my mind went blank.2. (2016全國全國) Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area. 3. (2016全國全國) My uncle is

31、 the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. 4. (2016全國全國) Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are used for cooking.考點考點8 連詞錯誤連詞錯誤butwhereand222021/7/245. (2017全國全國卷卷) In their spare time, they are interested in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the ro

32、oftop of their house. 6. When Jay began to sing the seventh song, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not interrupted7. (2013全國全國I卷卷) He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful.whichHoweverand總結(jié)歸納：總結(jié)歸納：232021/7/24 When I was a child,

33、 I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we b