書面表達復習

1、九年級英語復習之書面表達Shima Middle SchoolHuangjie Requirement and status 要求與地位要求與地位Writing points 寫作要點寫作要點Practice 實戰(zhàn)演練實戰(zhàn)演練getting high marks高分突破高分突破書面表達書面表達摘錄英語課程標準五級技能對寫的要求1能根據寫作要求；收集、準備素材素材。2能獨立起草短文、短信等，并在教師的指導下進修改。3能使用常見的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關系。4能簡單描述人物或事件。5能根據圖示或表格圖示或表格寫出簡單的段落或操作說明應用文應用文題型題型分值分值比例比例單項選擇題151/6完形填空10

2、1/9閱讀理解202/9詞匯運用101/9首字母填空101/9任務型閱讀101/9書面表達151/6中考作文評分標準中考作文評分標準 第五檔（13-15分） 信息完整，表達流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。 第四檔（10-12分） 信息基本完整，表達較流暢，有少量語言錯誤，但不影響意思表達。 第三檔（7-9分） 能傳達部分信息，表達不夠流暢，語言錯誤較多，但句子基本可讀。 第二檔（4-6分） 只能傳達少量信息，表達不流暢，語言錯誤多，只有少量句子可讀。 第一檔（1-3分） 只能傳達個別信息，表達不清楚，只有個別句子可讀。 2014無錫市中考英語書面表達（滿分10分）假設你是一名中學生，名叫田梅

3、。你從南京青奧會英文網站上獲悉他們正在招收志愿者，你想給組委會寫一封英文自薦信。內容提示見下表：網站上獲悉他們正在招收志愿者，你想給組委會寫一封英文自薦信。內容提示見下表：注意事項：1自薦信須包括所給內容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2“相關經歷”一欄中省略部分須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當發(fā)揮；3詞數在80個左右，信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計人總詞數；4信件內容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上 .基本信息基本信息城中學九年級學生，城中學九年級學生，16歲歲個人品質精力充沛，隨和，有耐心主要特長英語說得好，擅長與他人合作相關經歷今年4月，成為“2014無錫國際馬拉松賽”志愿者，Dear Sir

4、 or Madam, I visited the YOG website and know that you are looking for volunteers. My name is Tian Mei. I am a Grade9 student in New Town Middle School. I am 16-year-old. I am very energetic. I seldom feel tired. I am also patient, confident and organized. I think I can do anything if he tries his b

5、est and I never forget the things I need to do. I never get angry easily too. I am always helpful. I will help us with our lessons if we are absent from school. I also good at working with any other people, the April of this year, I became a member of the 2014 WuXi International Marathon. I believe

6、I would be a good volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Tian MeiOther experiencesProblems（1）內容不完整，作者的相關經歷沒有呈現(xiàn)。（2）表達較流暢，但是簡單句較多。（3）語言錯誤較多。審題不清審題不清沒有沒有很好很好的修的修改和改和潤色潤色二、寫作要點 “一審”即審題。 “二寫”即列綱。 “三連”即連句成文。 “四改”即修改潤色全文。 審題：做做到三審到三審 體裁體裁看清楚題目要求，讀懂題目所表達看清楚題目要求，讀懂題目所表達的含義，抓住要點，

7、注意文體是什么的含義，抓住要點，注意文體是什么 時態(tài)、人稱時態(tài)、人稱如果是日記和故事，宜采如果是日記和故事，宜采用過去時態(tài)；如是簡介之類的，宜采用現(xiàn)用過去時態(tài)；如是簡介之類的，宜采用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。在時態(tài)。 2014江蘇省中考書面表達題體裁分析體裁體裁篇篇數數比比例例卷卷別別應用文646% 南京市、無錫市、常州市、揚州市、泰州市、淮安市議論文538%蘇州市、南通市、連云港市、宿遷市、鹽城市記敘文18%徐州市半記敘文半議論文18%鎮(zhèn)江市2014無錫市中考英語書面表達（滿分10分）假設你是一名中學生，名叫田梅。你從南京青奧會英文網站上獲悉他們正在招收志愿者，你想給組委會寫一封英文自薦信。內容提示見下表：

8、網站上獲悉他們正在招收志愿者，你想給組委會寫一封英文自薦信。內容提示見下表：注意事項：1自薦信須包括所給內容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2“相關經歷”一欄中省略部分須用2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當發(fā)揮；3詞數在80個左右，信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計人總詞數；4信件內容必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上 .基本信息基本信息城中學九年級學生，城中學九年級學生，16歲歲個人品質精力充沛，隨和，有耐心主要特長英語說得好，擅長與他人合作相關經歷今年4月，成為“2014無錫國際馬拉松賽”志愿者，同學們，不要怕，咱們一起來審題！體裁體裁（文體）（文體）時態(tài)人稱應用文應用文一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時（描述相一般現(xiàn)

9、在時和一般過去時（描述相關經歷）關經歷）第一人稱第一人稱2014蘇州市中考英語書面表達（滿分蘇州市中考英語書面表達（滿分20分）分）假設你校為了配合創(chuàng)建“文化校園高效課堂”活動，最近以“學生做作業(yè)時是否應該在網上找答案？”為題做了一個調查。調查發(fā)現(xiàn)一些學生贊成，但許多學生反對這種做法。請你根據調查情況和下列表格中的要點，以“Think before you search online”為題用英語寫一篇短文。贊成者贊成者反對者反對者你自己你自己觀點1不會做題2. 學習別人3節(jié)省時間1不利于能力提 2. 不利于思維發(fā)展考生自擬（至少兩點）注意：1.詞數90左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

10、2.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。 體裁（文體）體裁（文體）時態(tài)時態(tài)人稱人稱議論文議論文一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時贊成者和反對者的觀點你自己的觀點第三人稱第三人稱 和和 第一人稱第一人稱2015年鎮(zhèn)江市書面表達人物人物職業(yè)與愛好職業(yè)與愛好具體活動具體活動爸爸爸爸電腦工程師修理為鄰居檢修電腦為鄰居檢修電腦媽媽媽媽公司經理DIY為社區(qū)老人包粽子為社區(qū)老人包粽子李華李華中學生下棋教小學生下棋教小學生下棋你你幫助他人，快樂自己。李華一家常在周末去社區(qū)參加志愿者活動。假如你是李華的同學，請根據提供的信息介紹李華一家，描述他們上周六

11、所做的事，你對他們的做法有何感想？你是否愿意參與類似的活動？說明理由。要求：1所寫內容必須包括提供的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮。2評價李華一家的做法：表達你的意愿，并說明理由。3文章不少于90詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。4語氣通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整。5文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名及地點。I am Li Huas classmate and Ive known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work. _審題 體裁： 時態(tài)：半記敘文半議論文一般現(xiàn)在時一般

12、現(xiàn)在時 2、描述李華一家上周六所做的事一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時3、表達你的感想與意愿。一般將來時一般將來時1、描述李華一家的職業(yè)與愛好人稱第三人稱第三人稱第一人稱第一人稱第一人稱第一人稱Try it!列綱 詞匯詞匯短語短語句式句式 列出要點巧用同/近義揚長避短力求地道電腦工程師/ 公司經理/ 中學生_為鄰居檢修電腦_為社區(qū)老人包粽子 _教小學生下棋 _a computer engineer / a manager of the company / a middle school student check the computers for the neighboursmake the rice

13、dumplings for the old people in the communityteach the primary students to play chess連句成文段落分明（段落分明（Introduction- Main body -Conclusion）句式靈活運用（長、短句，簡單句，復合句要搭配運用） uShe is my neighbour. She is my good friend.uShe is very young. So she cant go to school.I want to make my dream come true. I decide to wor

14、k hard at English.巧用高級句型巧用高級句型=She is both my neighbour and my good friend.=She is so young that she cant go to school.=She is too young to go to school.=She isnt old enough to go to school.=In order to realize my dream, I decide to work hard at English.1.Jack came home at 7am yesterday.2. I was car

15、eless. I lost a bag on the ground. 3. Your advice is valuable to me.Some played basketball and football. They were happy.-Jack didnt came home until 7am yesterday.-I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. -Your advice is of great value to me. - Some played basketball and football. They enj

16、oyed themselves/had a good time/had fun.What happy they were! 1.表示并列或表示并列或遞進遞進:2.表示選擇表示選擇:3.表示轉折表示轉折:4.表示因果表示因果:5.表示條件表示條件:6.表示對比表示對比: 7.表示解釋表示解釋: 8.表示順序表示順序: 9.表示表示強調強調10.表示結論表示結論:bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;or, eitheror;but, however, although, though, because, so, thereforeif , unlessins

17、tead, on the one handon the other hand;for example, such as, that is to say, in other words;firstly, second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; whats more, actually, in fact, in a word, generally speaking, Tip:注意連接詞的適當使用注意連接詞的適當使用 _ I am tired, I keep on working till mid

18、night. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert_. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _ my classmates _ I love eating apples.Though/ Althoughinsteadsuch asNot only / both but also / andThe person I admire most Everyone has a hero. As for me, I admire my mother most. My

19、 mother is not rich, she is not famous. She is not perfect. for me, she is my mother, my teacher and good friend.We do lots of things together. She is very busy with her work, she can still spare some time for me. We go shopping, go to the cinema and so on. She stays up late to watch a football game

20、 with me. My mother always loves and cares for me. She helps me with my schoolwork and teaches me how to get on with other people. She always knows what to say, I feel sad or angry. I need help, she is always there for me. I love my mother very much. She is, and always will be, my hero.neither rich

21、nor famous But for me, not only my mother but also my teacher and good friend.Although she is very busy with herFor example, we goShe even stays up late to when I feel sad or angry. Whenever I need help,how I can get on with描述李華一家上周六所做的事Discuss and write your ideas in group of four, and pay attentio

22、n to the tense and personal pronouns.(時態(tài)和人稱代詞)表達你的感想與意愿。Discuss and write your ideas in group of four,and pay attention to the tense and personal pronouns.(時態(tài)和人稱代詞)I am Li Huas classmate and Ive known that he and his parents often go to the community centre to do some voluntary work. His father is a

23、 computer engineer. Hes good at repairing things.His mother is a manager of a company. She likes DIY. Li Hua is a middle school student. He plays chess well.Last Saturday, his family went there again and did something for others. His father checked and fixed computers for neighbours. His mother made

24、 rice dumplings for the elderly people there.Li Hua taught some primary school students to play chess.I think what his family do is meaningful. I also want to be a volunteer, like Li Hua. I will clean the house for the old people.As we know, helping others is helping ourselves, it can also bring hap

25、piness to us all.四、高分突破四、高分突破 1、造句、造句 Let life be beautiful like summer flowers and death like autumn leaves. 使生如夏花之絢爛，死如秋葉之靜美使生如夏花之絢爛，死如秋葉之靜美 2、摘錄好句、積累名言諺語、摘錄好句、積累名言諺語 學習學習 A good beginning is half done.良好的開端是成功的一半。 A good book is a good friend.好書如摯友。 All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。 All things are

26、difficult before they are easy.凡事總是由難而易。 All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只會用功不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。 An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之計在于晨。 Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。 Doing is better than saying.與其掛在嘴上，不如落實在行動上。 Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today.今日事，今日畢。 Every minute counts.分秒必爭。Easier said than done.說得容易，做得難。 Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。 Great hopes make great man.偉大的抱負造就偉大的人物。 Knowledge is power.知識就是力量。 It is neve