如何用英語描寫節(jié)假日活動

1、話題 10 如何用英語描寫節(jié)假日活動Festivals，holidays and celebrations 必走三步 假設你是李華，對本班同學過生日的方式進行了全面調查，其結果如下表所示。請根據表格中提示的內容，寫一篇 100 詞左右的短文，說明同學們過生日的方式及想法。開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數。比例方式想法40%開一個生日派對同學、朋友聚會、聊天，增進感情20%近郊旅游放松心情，感受大自然30%獲得特別的禮物父母等送給自己特別想要的禮物，如手機等10%種生日樹美化環(huán)境，有紀念意義 Everyone likes to spend their birthday，but they have di

2、fferent ways to spend it_ _ 第一步：認真審題，提煉要點 一審格式：本文是一篇介紹性說明文，題材是同學們感興趣的話題，即：生日的過法。這種話題也是高考的一種命題角度，即中學生不僅要關注社會熱點、校園趣事、學業(yè)任務，同時也要對自己身邊經歷過的生活小事有自己的評價。此類話題適合中學生的思維和心理特點，易于培養(yǎng)學生的表達能力。 二審結構：由于本文要求根據表格內容寫作文，所以，最好的表述語句要用并列句和復合句，以此把數據與內容連貫地表達出來。具體步驟是： (1) 提出調查的主題，以起到引入的效果。 (2) 對表格中的數據進行梳理，通順地寫出來。 (3) 自己對表格數據的感受以

3、及對生日禮物的評價。 三審要點：用英語思維，理出寫作要點。 have a birthday party have a wonderful time travel on their birthday get close to the nature receive the special presents a mobile phone or a computer plant a tree to celebrate their birthday make the hometown more beautiful 第二步：緊扣主題，擴點成句 Everyone has different ways to

4、spend their holidays We have four ways to spend our birthday About half of us would like to have a birthday party with their friends and classmates They can talk，sing and do anything at the party and often have a wonderful time Some classmates like to travel on their birthday They want to get close

5、to nature and relax themselves One third of my classmates hope to receive the special presents from their parents One classmate in ten wishes to plant a tree to celebrate their birthday 第三步：補充修改，連句成篇 Everyone likes to spend their birthday，but they have different ways to spend itIn our class，we have

6、four ways to spend their birthday About half of us would like to have a birthday party on their birthday with their friends and classmatesThey can talk，sing and do anything at the party and often have a wonderful timeSome classmates like to travel on their birthdayThey want to get close to nature an

7、d relax themselvesHowever，about one third of my classmates hope to receive the special presents on their birthday from their parents，such as a mobile phone or a computerAt last，one classmate in ten wishes to plant a tree to celebrate their birthday which makes our home more beautiful I think the las

8、t way to celebrate the birthday is very interestingNext year I will grow a tree on my birthday 滿分作文滿分書信三 假設你是某中學學生會主席李華，你校與本地一所國際學校經常舉辦聯誼活動。你計劃在重陽節(jié)組織學生到養(yǎng)老院去慰問老人，擬邀請國際學校的學生參加。請你根據以下內容要點給國際學校的學生會主席 Tony 寫一封信。 要點：1向老人贈送禮物(鮮花、自制賀卡)； 2為老人提供服務(做清潔、陪老人聊天)； 3為老人表演節(jié)目(唱歌、跳舞)。 注意：1詞數為 100 左右； 2信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好(不計入

9、你所寫詞數)。 Dear Tony， Chongyang，the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly，is coming aroundWe are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day，and we would like to invite students from your school to join us. Looking forward to your early reply Yours， Li Hua (2007 年湖北卷) 范文： Dea

10、r Tony， Chongyang，the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly，is coming aroundWe are planning to visit the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day，and we would like to invite students from your school to join usWe have planned several activitiesWhen we get there，we will visit the elderly in t

11、heir rooms in groups，presenting them with beautiful flowersThen we will do some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses As some old people feel lonely，we may chat with them about their old days，changes of our city，or anything they are interested inWe may also give them some perform

12、ances：singing，dancing and so on I am sure we will both gain a better understanding of the elderly in ChinaIf you have any suggestions，please let us know Looking forward to your early reply Yours， Li Hua 點評： 本文層次清楚、要點全面、銜接得當、行文過渡自然，整篇文章結構緊湊，表意準確、連貫，恰到好處地使用了復雜短語和語法，如：現存分詞作狀語(presenting them with.)、wit

13、h 復合結構(with the help of the nurse)本文作者運用語言的能力很強，達到了寫作目的。 必做練習： 假定有一批外賓要在中國過春節(jié)，他們很想了解關于我國春節(jié)的一些情況，請你根據下列要點寫一篇短文，詞數大約 100 字左右。 1春節(jié)就是中國的新年，一般在一月下旬或二月份。 2春節(jié)前人們要大掃除，給孩子們買新衣。大年夜家人在一起吃年夜飯。 3年初一人們梳妝打扮，看望父母，走訪親友。 4人們在春節(jié)過得很愉快。 答案： The Spring Festival Before the Spring Festival，the Chinese people usually give their houses a general cleaning and buy new clothes for childrenOn the last day of the old year，there is a big family din