（整理版高中英語）高考英語書面表達(dá)0202圖畫式練與評（1）

1、高考英語書面表達(dá)02-02：圖畫式練與評1假定你是某生英語報(bào)的小記者；以下漫畫內(nèi)容是你和你的朋友們上星期六在“the fairy lake park觀光時(shí)的所見所聞，請根據(jù)要求寫一篇英語短文投稿。及發(fā)表個(gè)人感想。2.考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；50左右短文標(biāo)題已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；參考詞匯：告示牌signmind your behavior in public places 講 評公民道德話題的看圖寫作，均是現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的片段展示，探討面對公民道德缺失的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象個(gè)人的感想，即公民道德缺失原因與解決方法，考生應(yīng)該有話可說。本篇是看圖作文，屬于先敘后議的文體。認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合文字和圖畫，確

2、立所要表達(dá)的主題是什么。本篇的主題就是標(biāo)題所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容“mind your behavior in public places，無需考生多想。圍繞確立的主題，仔細(xì)看圖和文字，列出文字提示和圖中的要點(diǎn)。文字提示中的要點(diǎn)：“我和“我的朋友們上星期六在“the fairy lake park觀光。這是交代事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)遣詞造句注意多重表達(dá)1.last sunday, my friends and i went travelling in the fairy lake park.last sunday, i ,as well as my friends went to pay a visit t

3、o the fairy lake park.last sunday, together with my friends ,went sightseeing in the fairy lake park.last sunday, i went sightseeing with my friends in the fairy lake park.2.the park was full of fresh air and beauty of spring . the sun was shining. birds were singing beautifullythere was fresh air a

4、nd beauty of spring here and there in the park with sun shining and birds were heard singing beautifully.the park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.3.a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly. they didnt realize that there was

5、somebody else around. they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake without noticing the sign “dont throw rubbish into the lake.a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there was nobody else nearby. they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake and they seemed not to

6、 notice the sign “dont throw rubbish into the lake.a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there was nobody else nearby. they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, turning a blind eye to the sign “dont throw rubbish into the lake.a young couple in a boat were eat

7、ing, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “no littering nearby.美與丑形成鮮明比照。連貫成篇(注意紅體字局部)last sunday, i went sightseeing with my friends in the fairy lake park. the park was full of

8、 freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. when we were enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. to my surprise, a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. what's

9、worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “no littering nearby. what a shame!發(fā)表個(gè)人感想時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但內(nèi)容要符合邏輯，層次要清楚，銜接要自然。圍繞漫畫主題自擬感想可以按照這樣的思路去自擬感想：這對夫婦的行為給了“我什么印象如果人人都這樣會(huì)造成什么后果我們應(yīng)該怎么做總結(jié)性話語。遣詞造句注意多重表達(dá)1.what the couple did made a bad impression on me. what the co

10、uple did left me in thought.i had no choice but to take what the couple did into consideration.such behavior did left me deep in thought.2.if we do what the couple did as was shown in the above picture, all lakes will be seriously polluted and soon turned into huge dustbins.if all people visiting th

11、e fairy lake park do as the couple did, the lake will be seriously polluted and turned into a huge dustbin sooner or later.if all visitors to the fairy lake park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.3.littering pollutes the environment; bad man

12、ners ruin the beauty of tourist attractions. dear countrymen, mind your behavior in public places.i think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. for example, make sure to throw rubbish into a dustbin or into our plastic bags and dont make any noise in publ

13、ic places ,please.4.only in this way can we live harmoniously with nature.only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.參考答案mind your behavior in public placeslast sunday, i went sightseeing with my friends in the fairy lake park. the park was full of freshness and beau

14、ty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. when we were enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. to my surprise, a young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. what's worse, they spat an

15、d even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “no littering nearby. what a shame!such behavior left me deep in thought. if all visitors to the fairy lake park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. i think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. for example, make sure to throw rubbish into a dustbin or into our plastic bags and dont make any noise