廣州市中考英語(yǔ)作文專題復(fù)習(xí)(一)個(gè)人情況

1、2018年廣州市中考英語(yǔ)作文專題復(fù)習(xí)（一）個(gè)人情況2018 年廣州市中考英語(yǔ)作文專題復(fù)習(xí)（一）個(gè)人情況一、與專題相關(guān)的話題項(xiàng)目：Personal information/ Daily routines/ personal interests/ feelings and moods二、與話題相關(guān)的知識(shí)準(zhǔn)備：1. 相關(guān)單元：七上Unit 2 Daily life, Unit8 Collecting things七下 Unit 8 From hobby to career八下 unit 8 Life in the future2. 語(yǔ)法相關(guān)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)3. 詞語(yǔ)相關(guān)：描寫人物

2、外貌特征的形容詞有：tall ， short, old, young, thin/slim, strong, heavy, beautiful, attractive, handsome, fat/plump, well built 等描寫人物性格特征的形容詞：kind, friendly, smart, outgoing ， funny, cute, serious, clever, quiet, lovely, honest, shy, lovel，y hardworking, generous, careful, confident, active 等。描寫興趣愛好時(shí)可能用到的單詞或短語(yǔ)

3、有：hobby, favorite , be interested in, be fond of, enjoy /like doing, be keen on ,be friendly to ,prefer等。4. 經(jīng)典句型：? I study at Middle School.? I'm in Class Grade .? I am good at? My best subject is? I am keen on? I am interested in? My hobby is doing? I enjoy doing very much.? I think it is to .?

4、 I study very hard at school.? I want to be in the future.? I used to be ? I ' m interested in? I often ? I practice very hard.? I am glad ? I want to when I grow up.? My favourite subject is ? You are the candle lighting my future.（你就像一支蠟燭，照亮我的前程）二、經(jīng)典例題：（2009年 廣州市中考考題）你叫李華，你校將開展一個(gè)題為“All about m

5、e勺英文寫作活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)按要求寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括：1、你的愛好；2、你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)；3、用具體事例說明你的某個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)或缺點(diǎn)。注意：1、詞數(shù)80左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；2、不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。All about meMy name is Li Hua and I ' m from Class 2, Junior 3.解題思路：1 .審題：a.本文共有工個(gè)要點(diǎn)b.時(shí)態(tài)主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)c.人稱是 I2 .可能用到的短語(yǔ)和句型a.你的愛好enjoy /like doing, be friendly to ,prefer等。 to ? My hobby

6、 is doing .? I am keen onb.你的優(yōu)點(diǎn)hard-working, generous, careful, confident, active? My best subject is? I am good at? My favourite subject is c.你的缺點(diǎn)? My weakest subject is .? I am poor at .3 .成文：I like playing football and basketball. I am always playing basketball onP.E. lesson. Atmy free times,I of

7、ten play football with my friends. We are enjoy ourself. At study, I good at maths, but I poor in English. I can ' t get high grade at my English. I can' t get high gradeI atrnnycEmorsh, nowEnglish exectriseso that I can improve my English. I should do more in my study.點(diǎn)評(píng)：整篇文章對(duì)要點(diǎn)的把握基本到位，但是拼寫

8、和簡(jiǎn)單的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較多。部分句子的表達(dá)過于中 式4 .檢查思路： 完成作文自查表：1 .如果沒有問題的，請(qǐng)?jiān)陧?xiàng)目后打 02 .如果有問題，請(qǐng)?jiān)陧?xiàng)目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改。項(xiàng)目第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)人稱時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致動(dòng)詞搭配、介詞搭配拼寫錯(cuò)誤好詞好句分項(xiàng)分檔評(píng)分表項(xiàng)目要素給分表內(nèi)容6分切合題意， 體現(xiàn)要點(diǎn) 有所發(fā)揮65. 554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510準(zhǔn)確性6分語(yǔ)法詞匯機(jī)械性：大 小寫，拼寫 和格式等錯(cuò) 誤6-5.554.54-3.543-2.521.510流暢性3分結(jié)構(gòu)3-2.52-1.5210.50000自評(píng)總分：10.55.參考例文：My name is L

9、i Hua and I ' m from Class 2, Junior 3. I like pop music. I' ve collected a lotalways do my homework with music on. My friends think I am a happy boy and they like to spend time with me. But I ' m not a very hard-working student like some of my friends. I often go to movies during weeken

10、ds, sometimes I watch TV late at night and play sports a lot even before important exams.My parents feel worried about me, but I still do well at schoolMaybe I should study harder, then I can learn better.,曾力口正能量，石臺(tái)老師好印象 0練習(xí):假如你叫李芳，昨天從報(bào)紙上看到海珠區(qū)要組織一次全民學(xué)英語(yǔ)”活動(dòng)，在暑假要招聘一批英語(yǔ)志愿者的廣告，你想應(yīng)聘。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一封簡(jiǎn)短的書信，根據(jù)表格提供信

11、息，表示愿意 為廣州市民服務(wù)。姓名年齡15身高160cm健康狀況良好性格外向（outgoing）愛好體育運(yùn)動(dòng)英語(yǔ)，唱歌，跳舞其他情況E-mail addressDear Sir,d liI read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you I volunteer for the Haizhu district.注意：1.詞數(shù)80-100個(gè)2 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地址和姓名3 .可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。解題思路：1 .審題：a.本文共有一個(gè)要點(diǎn)b.時(shí)態(tài)主要采用c.人稱是2 .可能用到的詞語(yǔ)（寫在要點(diǎn)旁邊）

12、3 .可能用到的句型6 / 64 .成文：檢查思路：完成作文自查表：1 .如果沒有問題的，請(qǐng)?jiān)陧?xiàng)目后打 02 .如果有問題，請(qǐng)?jiān)陧?xiàng)目中圈出來，并在文中做出修改項(xiàng)目第一次自查第二次自查布局與內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)人稱時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致動(dòng)詞搭配、介詞搭配拼寫錯(cuò)誤好詞好句參考例文：Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday, I am writing to tell you I' d likvolunteer for the Haizhu district.My name is Li Fang. I am fifteen, and

13、 I am 160 cm. I am an outgoing girl, so I would like to makefriends with others. In my free time, I like doing some sports,such as running, swimming, playing table tennis and so on. I think it is good for ourhealth and I am quite healthy. I am also good at singing and dancing.y best subject is English. I always find the chance to practise my English. And I w