(浙江專版)2017高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題限時(shí)集訓(xùn)1讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練1

1、專題限時(shí)集訓(xùn)（一）讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練1A（2016 紹興市期中考試）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Last summer when myfamily was road tripping to Montana we arrived in Great Falls late one night.The kids had fallen asleep in the car, so my husband went and checked in while I stayed with the kids.When he returned with the room keys , we

2、woke up our children and took them out of the car, through the hotel , up the elevators and into our guest room.We kept the room dark , leaving only the entry light on, and quickly put the kids into bed hoping they'd drift back to sleep.My husband went to put our waters in the mini - fridge only

3、 to notice some beers. "That's strange”, he said and I agreed , but having discovered left-behind drinksin hotel fridges in the past I didn't think much about it.Ifigured the housekeepershad forgotten to check it.In the meantime, my husband ran to the store and I wentinto the bathroom t

4、o get ready for bed.As I washed my face I looked down to see cardboard beer containers in the trash.I felt my heart begin to pound.We were in_someone else's room!Now panicked , I checked the closet.Nothing.I then went to the dresser drawers.Nothing.My eyes scanned the door room's floor and t

5、here it was： A black bag that looked like one of ours.But it wasn't!I immediately called the front desk and the waitress in charge responded with an “Oh, my God! This is not good !”By now the kids were wide - awake, jumping on the beds as I was trying to put all of our things back into our overs

6、ized suitcase . Just while we were packing our things , I heard someone was unlocking the door , which made my heart beating wildly.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1 ：The door opened and in came a young man. Paragraph 2 :I did

7、n't know how to deal with the matter but luckily the waitress【寫作指導(dǎo)】讀后續(xù)寫的前提是將所給材料讀透，弄清故事前半部分?jǐn)⑹龅膬?nèi)容。根據(jù)所給材料可知， 作者一家人旅途中去賓館住宿，但卻發(fā)現(xiàn)服務(wù)員把他們帶進(jìn)了別人的房間。根據(jù)續(xù)寫部分第一段所給出的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)可以判斷，“a young ma6是登記入住這個(gè)房間的人；根據(jù)續(xù)寫部分第二段中的"but luckily the waitress ”可知，服務(wù)員恰當(dāng)?shù)靥幚砹诉@件事。因此續(xù)寫部分 要抓住兩個(gè)關(guān)鍵點(diǎn)：年輕人回到自己的房間卻發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有陌生人，他們會(huì)面的場(chǎng)景會(huì)是怎樣的？服務(wù)員

8、又是怎樣處理這件事的？因此學(xué)生在構(gòu)思時(shí)應(yīng)將重點(diǎn)放在怎樣讓故事銜接得更 自然、更流暢。其次，應(yīng)注意續(xù)寫時(shí)要使用5個(gè)以上原文中的畫線詞語(yǔ)。【參考范文】The door opened and in came a young man.After seeing us packing our things into our suitcase , he was shocked and angry.I tried to explain what had happened.However , he wouldn't listen to me.He talked with me in a loud voi

9、ce , making my kids frightened.The kids began to cry.Just at that time my husband returned, with somethings bought from the store in his hands.Thinking the young man was unfriendly,he started to quarrel with him.I didn't know how to deal with the matter but luckily the waitress arrived out of br

10、eath.Watching the waitress, all of us stopped talking.She explained that her mother became badly ill last night , which contributed to her fault.After explaining the reason to us , the waitress burst into tears.The young man, my husband and I ,even mykids , tried to comfort the waitress . Wesaid sor

11、ry to each other.The special experience in someone else's room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.【導(dǎo)學(xué)號(hào)：85602023】B閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。I worked from the time I was four and raised seven children , all of them college graduates.It seemed I'd done everything I'd ever w

12、anted to do in mylife , but I had one regret . I was born in 1898, the oldest of five kids.Papa couldn't spare me to go to school , so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old.Everywhere I went , I learned some hard lessons about what happens to a man who even can't read the a

13、lphabet . People cheat you out of wages.They sell you a ticket to one city , take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.By 1928, I'd been wandering for nine years.I met a womannamed Elzenia.We fell in love , married and moved to Dallas , where I got work fixing roads for the city.Wh

14、en Amelia , the oldest of our seven children , first went to school , I took my wife aside. "Elzenia ； I said. "I don't want the kids toknow I can't read or write. ”In 1938, one day my boss called me in. "George,“ he said. "No one knows those machines like you do.I'd

15、like to promote you. " But my thrill and surprise were cut short when he said , “Fill out this application and we'll get you a ra ise. " I couldn't admit the truth . I thanked him and walked out of his office.I did stay right where I was , until I turned 65 and my boss made me reti

16、re.But I didn't stop working.For the next 25 years , I lived a happy life , but it still seemed to me like something was missing.A young fellow handed mea piece of paper.It's information about adult education classes . People can learn to read and write.Now I'm 98.I thoughtof my friends

17、andneighbors and what they might think if they found out I couldn't read.After all these years , my secret would be out.But all my life I've wanted to read.It was high time for action.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1T

18、he young man drove me to Paragraph 2 :I'm still going to school.【寫作指導(dǎo)】文章大部分在敘述作者從小因家庭貧困而沒(méi)有讀書(shū)，因此在工作中錯(cuò)失晉升的良機(jī)。文章最后一段尤其是最后一句"It was high time for action. ”給出了提示，說(shuō)明接下來(lái)要 續(xù)寫的是作者自己重新走進(jìn)學(xué)校的情況。根據(jù)關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)展開(kāi)適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想即可成文?！緟⒖挤段摹縏he young man drove me to an old building.I knew it wellit was where all mychildren h

19、ad gone to school . I looked into the classroom to get a look at who I would be going to school with the next day.The students all looked like babies to me.There was a lady in her fifties but most of the rest were in their twenties and thirties.I went back to the school the next day.I'd been ins

20、ide the building so many times before with mychildren.That old building looked the same, and it smelled the same.But this time it was different because this time it was going to be my school.First came learning the alphabet , then words.In three months , I was reading.It was not very exciting , but

21、I loved it.I'm still going to school.I didn't stop there.After all, now I know why I'mhere.I'm here to learn. I'm here to tell the students it's never too late.C閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。It was shortly after one o'clock in the morning and Mr.Fairfax was really tired .

22、 He had been driving for over five hours, heading for a small town far awayfrom home.The weather was clear but it was dark and Mr.Fairfax could not find a motel to spend the night.Completely exhausted , he decided to stop by the roadside for a few hours' sleep at the wheel of his car.He fell asl

23、eep almost the moment he closed his eyes.But soon he was awakened by a man tapping on the car window."I say , youdon't happen to know the time , do you ? ” the stranger asked.Mr.Fairfax wound down the window and thrust his head out."It's around oneo'clock he answered.Then he wo

24、und up his window and soon fell back into a deep slumber.Half an hour later , another guy came up and knocked on his window whoalso inquired about the time.Once again , Mr.Fairfax gathered his thoughts and told him that it was just after one thirty.When the same thing happened yet again , Mr.Fairfax

25、 became increasingly irritated.Sleep - deprived , he began to raise his voice at the passer-by： "It's two o'clock , God damnit ! And why can't you get yourself a watch like the rest of us?"This time when he was winding up the window, Mr.Fairfax figured out how to make sure no o

26、ne else disturbed him.He found some paper and a pencil and wrote a note that he placed on the windscreen of his car.It said: "I don't know what time itis ! ” Amused by his goodidea,he happily drifted off backto sleep again.Not long afterwards,thenote was spotted bya policeman on his nightpa

27、trol.Intent on fulfillinghisduty to assist motorists, he tapped on Mr.Fairfax'scar window.“Well, sir the policeman said. "Now it is five past three !"注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph 1“For the sake of God ! ” With

28、 a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel, the carwindow was wound down.Paragraph 2 :"I'm sorry Mister , but I think sleeping in the car by the roadside is not a good choice said the police. 【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇讀后續(xù)寫是一篇記敘文。主要敘述了Mr.Fairfax 夜間將車停在路邊休息時(shí)多次被人打擾的故事。文章著重刻畫了主人公睡覺(jué)時(shí)屢遭打擾后的情緒變化，隨著情緒從剛開(kāi)始的平靜到不耐煩，再到想到好主意之后的高興，最后變得憤怒，文章在用詞上也有所變化，尤其是人物說(shuō)話時(shí)的用詞和語(yǔ)氣。因此在續(xù)寫時(shí)，學(xué)生應(yīng)關(guān)注人物的情緒變化，并根據(jù)其變化采用不同的表達(dá)方式。同時(shí)，在描述人物的話語(yǔ)時(shí)，注意要口語(yǔ)化，從而更貼近實(shí)際生活?！緟⒖挤段摹俊癋or the sake of God ! ” With a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel, the carwindow was wound down. Mr.Fairfax thrust his head out again, staring at t