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1、英語作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分原則：1. 總分15分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。中檔屬于第三檔（7-9分）。2. 評分時(shí)，先跟據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。3. 總詞數(shù)不足的，可在本題總得分中扣去1分。4. 評分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和正確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。各要素的權(quán)重大體為：卷面書寫（1分），內(nèi)容9分（其中要點(diǎn)5分，語意連貫4分），語法結(jié)構(gòu)、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)（4分），詞數(shù)（1分）。5. 拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言正確性的一個(gè)方面，評分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮?！靖鳈n次的給分范圍和要求】第一檔（13-15

2、分）：寫出全部內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句流暢?；緹o語法和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，少數(shù)錯(cuò)誤主要是由于較高級詞匯或復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)所致。詞數(shù)達(dá)到要求。基本無單詞拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第二檔（10-12分）：寫出大部分要點(diǎn)類容。語句較流暢。有少量語法和詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，但不影響理解。有少量單詞拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第三檔（7-9分）：寫出部分要點(diǎn)。語句基本通順。有一些語法和詞匯錯(cuò)誤，有少量單詞及標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（4-6分）：寫出少量內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句不通順。語法、詞匯、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤較多。只有少量句子表達(dá)正確。第五檔（0-3分）：基本上沒有寫出內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語法、詞匯、單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤較多。基本上沒有通順的句子。只寫出一些單詞，不知所云。【說明】

3、1、要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。2、對緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。凡不寫任何內(nèi)容，抄襲、所寫內(nèi)容無法看清者一律給0分。 2016河南中考英語作文預(yù)測 (一） 1 每個(gè)人的成長都是一種蛻變的過程，從幼稚走向成熟，從逆境走向成功。請你用英語寫一篇80詞以上的短文，談?wù)勀阍诔砷L過程中所經(jīng)歷的最大的一次蛻變。內(nèi)容要求：1.變化前后分別是什么樣子的？2.促成你轉(zhuǎn)變的主要原因是什么？3.你為變化而付出了怎樣的努力？注意：短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。I used to be a naughty boy and 

4、;my mother used to be angry with me. Now Id like to say Ive changed a lot. In fact, It is because of my mothers diaries. One day I saw my mothers 

5、;diary book by accident while I was looking for my notebook. I was surprised and began to read my mothers diaries. In her diaries, she showed her deep love 

6、;for me. She also expressed her disappointment when I made mistakes. She said she loved me so much and she believed I could be a good boy. Icouldnt help cr

7、ying after reading my mothers diaries.Since that day, I have changed a lot. I work hard and share some housework. I ll try to understand my mothers feelings. 2 .最近，你

8、們班就“幸福是什么”進(jìn)行了一次討論，學(xué)生們發(fā)表了自己的看法，他們認(rèn)為：1. 認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)是幸福，父母總是關(guān)心他們的生活與健康，是幸福2. 有時(shí)當(dāng)他們做錯(cuò)了事，周圍的人會(huì)幫助他們改正，他們感到幸福。3. 你同意同學(xué)們的看法，你認(rèn)為當(dāng)你做你也會(huì)感到幸福。要求：第三要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容需用三到四句話展開合理想象，進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù)80左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Happiness is for everyone. Some students think happiness comes 

9、from studying hard at their lessons. Their parents are always taking good care of their life and their health. They feel happy.Some students say when they do somethi

10、ng wrong, people around them will help them to correct it. They believe this is happiness. I agree with them. I love my friends congratulating me when I enjoy s

11、uccess. When I do something kind to others, like congratulating them, I feel happy, too. When we think of these things, we realize that happiness is all around us.3.

12、 “安全你我他，幸福千萬家”，關(guān)愛生命，確保平安，讓我們的生活更加幸福安康。請以“Keeping safe_ (at home/ at school /on the road)為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。     要求：補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題：條理清晰，語言流暢；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名。內(nèi)容包括：(1) Is it important to keep safe.?(2) Why do 

13、;you think so?,     (3)How can you be safe.?  Keeping safe at schoolIts important for us to keep safe at school and it will make us study better 

14、and live more happily. In order  to keep safe at school, we must do like these.First, be in order when we are going upstairs or downstairs. Second, make sure

15、60;to be safe when we are doing sports. Try not to be hurt. Third, know about some knowledge of safety. Its helpful to us. If we follow the advice, well ma

16、ke ourselves safe at school.4. 醉酒駕車，已經(jīng)成為嚴(yán)重的社會(huì)問題，越來越受到人們的關(guān)注，根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā，F(xiàn)象許多人不遵守交通規(guī)則，仍酒后駕車，對自己和他人的安全不負(fù)責(zé)任后果因?yàn)榫坪篑{車，給自己和他人和很多家庭帶來傷害建議為了自己和他人的安全，呼吁司機(jī)不要酒后駕車，呼吁更多嚴(yán)格的規(guī)則和制度出臺(tái)提示詞：酒后駕車drunk driving  不負(fù)責(zé)的 irresponsible  交通事故 traffic accid

17、ent 對造成傷害   do harm toEveryone should obey the traffic rules. Yet there are still many people drunk driving. Its irresponsible(不負(fù)責(zé)任的) not only to the drivers themsel

18、ves but also the others.Many drivers drive very fast in the street, or even in the crowded traffic while they are drunk. Drunk drivers caused a lot of accidents

19、. Thousands of people were killed and many more were injured every year. In order to keep the public safe, we shouldnt drunk drive. We must obey the traffic

20、0;rules. If you drink too much, you shouldn't drive by yourself. Youd better take a taxi or ask others for help. The government is supposed to make more ser

21、ious rules and laws as soon as possible.  5. Keep Healthy Every one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But we dont pay attention to our health.

22、60;Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at weekends. Many boys

23、60;think it is cool to drink or smoke.It is important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for&

24、#160;a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.6. 以“I want to do something for my school（我想為學(xué)校做一件事）” 為題寫篇不

25、少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。） I want to make school clean. You may think it is very simple. But I don't think so. Our teacher said, "School is your home, you should keep it clean. "But I have never done anything to make school clean. For example, I have never t

26、old my classmates to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground. I also threw the rubbish on the ground. So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me. During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. We will make

27、 school clean every weekends next term as well. Now, do you think it is simple?7. 全國實(shí)施公共場所禁煙規(guī)定，針對這一話題，某中學(xué)對該校學(xué)生的吸煙情況進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查，結(jié)果如圖所示。請就此話題用英語寫一篇短文。要求：1. 對調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行描述；     2表明自己的看法并提出建議；        3詞數(shù)在80左右。 提示詞: do a survey about(做一個(gè)有關(guān)的調(diào)查)  

28、0;      3% of the students (百分之三的學(xué)生)  A survey about smokers in a middle school tells that although 90% of all students never smoke, 3% of them often smoke and 7% sometimes do. In other words, 10% of the students smoke. Thats terrible. As we know, smoking is harmful to our h

29、ealth. Every year, thousands of people lose their lives because of it. Smoking not only does harm to your health, but also wastes money. Because, a fire may be caused by cigarette ends. Its a pity to learn that one ends in death by smoking. In short, smoking is so dangerous that we should keep away

30、from it.8. 目前，越來越多的中學(xué)生利用周末上各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班或請家教。對于這一現(xiàn)象，存在兩種不同觀點(diǎn)：有些人認(rèn)為有必要 另一些人認(rèn)為沒有必要跟老師學(xué)比自己學(xué)好可以鞏固課堂所學(xué)內(nèi)容可以學(xué)到更多的東西 容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息請您根據(jù)以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary ?為題，寫一篇120 詞左右的短文，反映表中內(nèi)容，并簡要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章開頭已給出， 不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。要求：層次清晰，連貫流暢；表達(dá)靈活，不要逐字逐句翻譯。參考詞匯：鞏固strengthen； Is a Training

31、Class or Family Teacher Necessary?More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it._【參考范文】 Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary? More and more middle school students are go

32、ing to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it. Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, its more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what we learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot

33、 more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing, students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another, students need time to relax from time to time. In my opinion, whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain

34、 subject, maybe its OK for you. But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.9. 最近，你班同學(xué)就“父母是不是最好的老師”這一話題展開了討論。有些人認(rèn)為父母是最好的老師，有些人認(rèn)為也不盡然。請根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇短文介紹討論結(jié)果以及你的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。觀點(diǎn)原因 同意 不完全同意1 教會(huì)如何生活 過分溺愛2 指出缺點(diǎn)，指明方向 強(qiáng)加興趣、價(jià)值

35、觀3 教會(huì)富有愛心 希望值過高要求：1、根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文通順連貫；      2、詞數(shù)110左右；      3、開頭已給出，不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)。                          

36、0;               【參考范文】 Recently, we have had a discussion in our class about whether parents are our best teachers. Some students agree to the point because they think parents help to point out their mistakes in their lives.

37、 They teach them a lot about how to live a meaningful life. Whats more, parents love helps to teach them how to love others. So parents are their most important teachers.  However, not all of us hold the same views. Some think that their parents give them too much love, and they are too eager t

38、o pass on their values and interests to them. Moreover, their parents sometimes expect too much of them, which makes them feel their goals too difficult to reach.  In my opinion, parents are our important teachers. But parents should also try to understand their children more and limit the gene

39、ration gap. 10. 新農(nóng)村-A New Village Yesterday we went to visit a village. On our way to the village, we were glad to see a lot of nice rice, vegetables and fruit in the fields. Also we saw new schools, factories and buildings. We got a warm welcome at the village. Some farmers invited us to their

40、 houses. They had moved to the new buildings. Their living room was large and bright. In it there were all kinds of new furniture. Nearly every family had color TV sets, fridges,washing machines and some of them even have bought motorbikes. Everyone had a smile on their faces. It was said that some

41、guests from a foreign country would come to visit it. We were very glad to find the farmers' life had changed a lot. We hope their life will become better and better.11.許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"為主題的英語演講比賽,請你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與

42、同學(xué)分享,內(nèi)容包括:同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么； 我的壓力是什么； 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。 詞數(shù)80100；短文的開頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。 Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. _Thats all. Thank you! 參考范文: Less Pressure, Better LifeHell

43、o, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they

44、 send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Thats all. Thank

45、 you!12. 你心目中的好老師是什么樣子的？一名受歡迎的老師應(yīng)該有什么樣的特點(diǎn)?圍繞這個(gè)主題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文。The Good Teacher in Your Heart Firstly, a teacher should be able to play different roles in school. He can care about us like a mother. He can give us knowledge. He can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend. Secondly, a

46、teacher should be patient and helpful. When we are in trouble, he can always help us patiently. Thirdly, a teacher should be fair. He should have the same rules for everybody. Fourthly, a teacher should be fun. He can make his class interesting and make us laugh.13.愛是心中的太陽，融化你我身邊的冰雪。假設(shè)你是李明，你們學(xué)校的“Eng

47、lish Garden”正在舉辦主題為“付出即是收獲”的征文活動(dòng)，請你聯(lián)系自己平時(shí)的愛心行為和感受寫一篇文章投稿。要求：1.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。    2. 80100詞。標(biāo)題和文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Giving is ReceivingI am a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates wi

48、th their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up my house. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. I often visit the Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I also help people in trouble. I think giving is receivi

49、ng. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?中考英語書面表達(dá)背誦范文（二） 一、Great changes in my hometownMore than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didnt have enough food to eat and wore old cloth

50、es. They had a hard life .Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people

51、 have cell phones and personal computers. Peoples living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the governments efforts . My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful . 二、Save the earthHow to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .Its our duty to protect

52、our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We sho

53、uldnt leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustnt pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better . 三、Improve our environmentGood environment c

54、an make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we shoul

55、d pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Dont spit in public places . Dont draw on public walls . Its our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy . 四、Pollution around usIn recent years, our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Its very bad for our life

56、. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We havent enough clean water to drink in citi

57、es. Now we are in danger. Its very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better . 五、Make our world more beautiful !Protecting the environment

58、is becoming more and more important to humans . Its our duty to take care of the nature around us . Animals and plants are our best friends ., and we should share the world with them . We shouldnt kill wild animals , and we must protect forests because they are animals home . We must plant more tree

59、s and grass , they can make the world greener . The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have . Lets do our best to make the world beautiful. 六、Keep our school cleanWe are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, su

60、ch as in the library, in the class. We shouldnt leave rubbish here and there. Dont draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school . We should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I

61、m sure our school will be more beautiful . 七、My country lifeI like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I

62、 read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. Its very quiet . What a nice place I live in ! 八、How to learn English wellAs we know , English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language in China . English is widely spoke

63、n in the world and it is the most useful language around the world . But how to learn it well ? The best way is to use it all the time . If we can talk in English , think in English we can learn it well . At school , we should learn to hear , speak, read and write carefully . We should spend enough

64、time in practicing English . If we keep on working hard at English , we will be able to be good at it one day . 九、How I learn EnglishHello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well . I like English very much . I always preview and master the main idea of the l

65、esson before class. In class , I listen carefully , speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary . After class , I do my homework carefully . I watch English movies and listen to English songs . I have booked an English newspaper . Its Times English Post , I can learn a lot from it .

66、 I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good methods . I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day . Thats all . 十、How I improved my EnglishWhen I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I