2016屆高考英語短文改錯集訓(xùn)(11)及答案解析

1、2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（十一）【專項突破】短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Passage 1Nowadays, many parents expect too many of their sons or daughters. They

2、hope that their sons or daughters should study hard in order to admitted into an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict in their children. However, they dont realize how a great pressure they had put on their children. It is the great pressure that often get

3、 their children very anxiously.So I hope that parents can provide a proper environment for our children. Only in this way they try their best and success at last.Passage 2 Can you imagine wear a pretty sweater made of garbage? It could not happen! A few companies across the country are making clothe

4、s from things those are thrown away by peopleFor example, the company makes sweaters from old plastic bottlesFirst, the bottles are cut into small piecesThe pieces is meltedThen the melting plastic is made into long and thin threadsThe threads are used to making sweaters which are very soft and ligh

5、tBelieve it not, these sweaters sell well in spite of the fact that they are not expensive at allMany people think that these recycled clothes can help us cut up on garbagePassage 3A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introduc

6、ing a 1:30 7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. She said a research on neuroscience (神經(jīng)學(xué)) shows students productivity increases unless they can slee

7、p longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”Passage 4I love camping. It is my favouritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last

8、 year, my families and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At ni

9、ght, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesnt cost many to camp. What I believe its the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.Passage 5Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my f

10、riends. There was a lot of new books. I didnt know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen th

11、e film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. Thats a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing. What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.Passage 6Last Saturday, Mum gave me two tickets for a film Although she was too busy to go with me, she told m

12、e to sell the extra ticket if possiblyAt the gate of the cinema I met a handsome young man who was offered to have them, but he had only an l00-yuan note, He asked me to wait a while for him change it in the cinema's storeWithout much thinking, I agreedHe walked so fast that I could hard keep up

13、 for him Soon he disappeared, I stood there without knowing how to doSuddenly I realized the handsome young fellow has cheated meHe had saved money, but lost his honorPassage 7Dear Peter,Im very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay wit

14、h. Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house was big enough to enable you to have a room of your own. Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will make your visits difficult. Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personal

15、ities, Im sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them. Above all, they hosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience. In addition, the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.Hope you enjoy your stay he

16、re. Yours, Li Hua2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓(xùn)（十一）答案Passage 11. too many 改too much2. in order to admitted. 在admitted前加be3. are strict in. in改為with4. how a great pressure. how 改為what5. they had put. had改為have6. that often get. get改為gets7. very anxiously. anxiously改為anxious8. our sons 改 their sons9. they try they 前

17、加 can 或 will10.and success at last success改為succeed Passage 21.wear改為wearing 2.去掉not 3.those改為that/which 4.the改為a 5.is melted改為are melted 6.melting改為melted 7.making改為made8.Believe it or not 9.expensive改為cheap 10.up改為downPassage 3第一句：1. 劃去been 2. on the mornings 將on改為in第三句：3. It will become an o

18、nly school將an改為the 4. start 前加to第四句：5. 將grade 改為grades第五句：6.將She 改為 He 7. 將unless 改為 if第六句：8. 將that 改為 where 9. 將good 改為 well第七句：10. 將adds 改為 addedPassage 4I love camping. It is my favoritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year, favorite my families and I went camping in the countryside. It

19、was one of the excited family excitingexperiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. We evercooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw wonderfullovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind andb

20、lowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesnt cost many to camp. What I felt muchbelieve its the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty. toPassage 51. does改為is 2. go改為went 3. was改為were 4. what改為which5. cinema前加the 6. but改為and 7.去掉been 8. moving改為moved9. tear改為tears 10. very改為wellPassage 61.Althou改為As/Because 2.possibly改為possible 3.was offered改為offered 4.them改4.them為it 5.an改為a 6.change改為to change 7.hard改為hardly 8.for改為with 9.how改為what 10.has改為hadPassage 7Dear Peter,Im very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host