高考英語求助信公開課

1、編輯ppt1How to write a letter for help?編輯ppt2Lead-inWhat did Harry Potter say when he asked for help?編輯ppt3Before writing:Before writing: 假定你是李華。請你給筆友假定你是李華。請你給筆友PeterPeter寫封信，告訴他你寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，詢問他是否可以接叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中需涉及如下內(nèi)容：機(jī)。信中需涉及如下內(nèi)容：1.1.航班號：航班號：CA985CA9852.2.到達(dá)：到達(dá)：8 8月月6 6日上午日上午

2、11:3011:30 3. 3.李明的外貌特征李明的外貌特征 4. 4.李華托李明帶了一副李華托李明帶了一副PeterPeter想要的中國畫給他想要的中國畫給他注意：注意：1. 1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100100左右；左右；2.2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫使行文連貫;3.;3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,How are you doing?How are you doing?_Looking forward to your reply.Looking forward to your reply. YoursY

3、ours Li HuaLi Hua編輯ppt4 1.1.我是李華。我是李華。 2.2.我寫信告訴你我寫信告訴你 3.3.我叔叔李明將去你的城市我叔叔李明將去你的城市開會開會。 4. 4. 你能否去你能否去接機(jī)接機(jī)? ? 5.5.航班號航班號是是CA985(flight number)CA985(flight number) 6.6.他他8 8月月6 6日上午日上午1111：3030到。到。 7.7.李明的外貌特征李明的外貌特征 8.8.我已經(jīng)讓叔叔帶了你想要的我已經(jīng)讓叔叔帶了你想要的中國畫中國畫給你給你 。(Chinese painting)(Chinese painting)attend a

4、 meetingpick sb up at the airport編輯ppt5 I am Li Hua.I am Li Hua. Im writing to tell you thatIm writing to tell you that My uncle Li Ming My uncle Li Ming is going to/will is going to/will go go to your city to attend a conference.to your city to attend a conference. Can you go to meet my uncle at th

5、e Can you go to meet my uncle at the airport? airport? He He will arrivewill arrive at 11:30am August 6. at 11:30am August 6. The flight number is CA985.The flight number is CA985.8.I 8.I have asked have asked my uncle to bring you my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you the Chin

6、ese painting (that/which) you want.want.請注意時態(tài)及人稱和數(shù)的統(tǒng)一請注意時態(tài)及人稱和數(shù)的統(tǒng)一編輯ppt6While writingWhile writing Para 1：Purpose: asking for help Para 2：Body: situation Para 3：Conclusion: express your hope and appreciation1.Paragraph：2. Linking words or sentences:3. Politeness:并列并列:besides, in addition, whats more

7、轉(zhuǎn)折轉(zhuǎn)折:However, On the contrary, but順序順序:First of all, First/Second/Finally編輯ppt7Politeness:Politeness:1. Send me the book.2. Could you please send me the book? 3. I hope you can send me the book as soon as possible. 4. I would appreciate it if you could send me the book.5. You should send me the book

8、 .7. I wonder if you could send me the book.8.Would you do me a favor to send me the book?編輯ppt8 (I am Li Hua.) Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference. Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport? He will arrive at 11:30am

9、August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long hair. By the way, I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want. I would appreciate it if you could help me.編輯ppt9polish the passage polish the passage plex plex sentences(attributive clause, sentence

10、s(attributive clause, adverbial clause, nonfinite adverbial clause, nonfinite verb and so on)verb and so on) e.g. I have asked e.g. I have asked my uncle to my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want.(that/which) you want. 2.advanced vocabulary2.a

11、dvanced vocabulary e.g.: want be fond ofe.g.: want be fond of編輯ppt10 3.invent some 3.invent some realistic and realistic and reasonablereasonable information: ask information: ask yourself some questions according yourself some questions according to the passageto the passage e.g. How to make Peter

12、find my e.g. How to make Peter find my uncle easily?uncle easily?uI will send you the picture of my uncle.uMy uncle will wear a red hat that day.AttentionAttention: Its unnecessary to write too much. If you cant make it reasonable and realistic, dont write it down.編輯ppt11Check your passage: 檢查檢查單詞拼寫

13、、時態(tài)語態(tài)、名詞單詞拼寫、時態(tài)語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、標(biāo)點符號單復(fù)數(shù)、標(biāo)點符號等。等。 檢查檢查要點要點是否遺漏。是否遺漏。 檢查檢查句子結(jié)構(gòu)句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否正確。是否正確。 估計估計字?jǐn)?shù)字?jǐn)?shù)是否符合要求。是否符合要求。 Post-writing編輯ppt12 How to write a good letter for help?Summary編輯ppt13四個步驟四個步驟Step 1 Identify overall requirements and list the key points（審題列要點）（審題列要點）Step 2 Form a passageStep3. Polish the pas

14、sage（成文潤（成文潤色）色）Conclusion:Step4. Check the passage編輯ppt14三段法模式三段法模式 第一段：第一段：Purpose: Asking for help 第二段：第二段：Body: Situation 第三段：第三段：Conclusion: Express your appreciation and hope編輯ppt15常用句型：常用句型：1.寫作目的：寫作目的：Im writing to tell you that2. 求助的句型：求助的句型：I wonder if you could If it is convenient to you,

15、 would you please?Would you do me a favor to ?3.表達(dá)期待或謝意。表達(dá)期待或謝意。Looking forward to (receiving) your early reply. I would appreciate it if you could help me.編輯ppt16 (I am Li Hua.) Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference. Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport? He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long h