[英語(yǔ)四六級(jí)]四級(jí)作文

1、.找觀點(diǎn)：十個(gè)角度1. money1) earn money = economic development2) save money3) waste money=values, consumerism2. time1) save time= efficiency2) waste time = efficiency3) kill time=entertainment3. health 1) beneficial to health2) detrimental to health4. knowledge and education1) broaden horizons2) enrich exper

2、ience3) acquire skills / knowledge4) obtain information5. psychology1) sense of achievement 2) addiction 3) loneliness4) stress, depression6. emotion1) interpersonal relationship, emotional ties2) sense of responsibility3) patriotism7. power and ability1) duty / obligation2) ability 8. environment1)

3、 conserve the environment2) contaminate the environment 3) facilities, equipment 9. culture1) heritage, protect the culture2) exchange10. morality and crime1. 現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚2. 網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有很多好處，但是也有不少問(wèn)題Advantages1. save money for consumers 2. save time for consumers 3. detailed information about commodities

4、 4. flexible and comfortableDisadvantages1. the information is not completely accurate 2. consumers rights can not be guranteed sometimes3. unable to get the commodity immediately4. likely to be cheated Currently, many people _ in order to _, which has made online shopping _. Obviously, _. Moreover,

5、 _. Furthermore, _.Currently, many consumers are crazy about shopping on line in order to buy the commodities which they desire; therefore, online shopping has become a fashion.Obviously, online shopping enables consumers to buy bargains because online shop owners do not involve a large amount of in

6、vestment and cost. Moreover consumers are able to save time since they only sit in their rooms to get detailed information about commodities. Furthermore, potential customers can enjoy flexible schedules and comfortable environments while they do the shopping online.Currently, many consumers are cra

7、zy about online shopping in order to buy the commodities that they desire, which has made online shopping a fashion. Obviously, online shopping enables consumers to save money because online shop owners do not need to pay for shopping and office space and they can reduce their costs. Moreover, onlin

8、e consumers tend to save time for shopping due to no need to go from one store to another. Furthermore, comparing the qualities or prices of commodities can be easily done on line, which can assist consumers in making wise choices. 闡述的時(shí)態(tài)句型：1 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)2 Will, can3 Tend to, be likely to do Currently, many

9、 people are crazy about online shopping in order to buy some commodities which /what they desire, which has made online shopping become a fashion. Obviously, online shopping can help customers save some money because online shop owners do not need to pay for storage and office space and reduce their

10、 costs. Moreover, customers can save time by shopping on line because they do not need to go from store to store personally Obviously, apparently, undoubtedly Online shopping can help consumers save a large amount of money because online shop owners need not Advantages:1. save money 2. save time 3.

11、easy to compare and analyze Disadvantages: 1. addiction 4. be likely to be cheated 5. the true quality can not be guaranteed 6. difficult to control the expenditure 1. 背景信息2. 正反雙方觀點(diǎn)3. 中心思想4. 結(jié)尾提建議5. 主體部分闡述1. 英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)能力2. 邏輯思維能力背景信息：句型1：平鋪直敘說(shuō)現(xiàn)象+目的（目的盡量籠統(tǒng)）：目的表達(dá)：for the purpose of doing, for the sake of

12、doing, in order to do通常還要表示時(shí)間Currently, at present, in the contemporary era, in the Information Age, in the modern times, in recent years現(xiàn)象：現(xiàn)象蘊(yùn)含在問(wèn)題中，有三種情況：1. 已經(jīng)發(fā)生：現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)2. 計(jì)劃進(jìn)行：plan to do，expect to do，anticipate doing, intend to do 3. 充滿熱情：be crazy about doing, be enthusiastic about doing 強(qiáng)調(diào)現(xiàn)象的普遍性：很多

13、Many, a vast number / amount of ., an increasing number / amount of .Currently, many (a large number /amount of)_ have done (are planning to do) (are crazy about doing) _ in order to do 籠統(tǒng)_.Therefore, _ (, which has made online shopping _)Currently, many consumers are crazy about shopping on line in

14、 order to buy the commodities which they desire; therefore, online shopping has become a fashion.Currently, many consumers are crazy about online shopping in order to buy the commodities that they desire, which has made online shopping a fashion. Go after fashion Pursue fashion 句型2：過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)+by+原因，現(xiàn)象：注

15、意過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)的邏輯主語(yǔ)和句子主語(yǔ)的一致。否則是語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)包括：motivated by激勵(lì), stimulated by刺激, boosted by推動(dòng), encouraged by鼓勵(lì), prompted by促進(jìn), driven by驅(qū)使, 后面的名詞包括：goal為之努力, purpose一般, aim一般, objective具體可行, expectation期待, anticipation期待 (of) 或者desire欲望, aspiration熱切的盼望, ambition 抱負(fù)(for)過(guò)去分詞by目標(biāo)做.事情，現(xiàn)象At present, motivated by

16、 the goal of doing ., many (a large number / amount of, quite a few)have done (are planning to do, are crazy about doing) .Currently, many consumers are crazy about shopping on line in order to buy the commodities which they desire; therefore, online shopping has become a fashion.At present, motivat

17、ed by the goal of buying the commodities which they desire, many people are crazy about online shopping. 觀點(diǎn)闡述主體段落方面1123主體段落的注意事項(xiàng)：1 使用表示順序的連接詞：第一點(diǎn)obviously, apparently, undoubtedly, above all, 第二點(diǎn)，moreover, besides, also, next, plus, 第三點(diǎn)furthermore, then2 注意主語(yǔ)的改變：三角形結(jié)構(gòu)3 注意引用他人的觀點(diǎn)：Proponents (opponent

18、s) of 主題詞匯 argue that 觀點(diǎn)Those who support (favor, approve of, are in favor of) 主題詞匯 believe that 觀點(diǎn)Those who oppose (disapprove of, are opposed to, object to) believe that觀點(diǎn)According to the proponents (supporters) of , 觀點(diǎn)According to the opponents of ,According to those who support (favor, approve o

19、f, are in favor of), According to those who oppose (disapprove of, are opposed to, object to),For those who support (favor, approve of, are in favor of),For those who oppose (disapprove of, are opposed to, object to),上述句型使用在第一層次4 邏輯要嚴(yán)密：簡(jiǎn)單句表示觀點(diǎn)目的(for the purpose / sake of, in order to， so that )，原因(d

20、ue to/ owing to, as a result of +名詞或者動(dòng)名詞, in that/because /since+句子)，結(jié)果(, which, ；therefore， thus, hence )Learning English can help young people find a desirable job in that English is the lingua franca in most multinational corporations. Learning English can help young people find a desirable job,

21、which enables them to be financially independent or to achieve their values in lives.1， 引起，造成Cause, result in, lead to, bring about, give rise to, induce, trigger, spark,2， 促進(jìn)，發(fā)展Develop, advance, expand, promote, boost, enhance3， 使得make sb do Enable somebody to doPrompt somebody to doEncourage someb

22、ody to doAllow somebody to doCompel somebody to do Tempt somebody to do Allure somebody to doAttract somebody to do 4， 提供，給giveProvide somebody with somethingOffer somebody somethingRender something to somebody5， 培養(yǎng)Cultivate, foster, develop6， 展示，顯示Demonstrate, reveal, show, display, exhibit7， 緩解All

23、eviate, relieve8， 加劇Intensify, aggravate, worsen, deteriorate9， 污染Contaminate, pollute9， 調(diào)整，改變，適應(yīng)Adjust, adapt, change, transform, evolve, coordinate11節(jié)省Save, economize on12阻礙Prevent, discourage, impede, hinder sb from doing13影響Influence, affect, interfere with14拓寬，開(kāi)闊Expand, broaden, widen15使豐富Enric

24、h, diversify16. 幫助Assist sb in doing Facilitate sb in doing Help sb do 兩種中心思想：1 文章第一段：In my opinion, to my mind, 2 文章最后一段：Currently, an increasing number of museums are opened free to the public in order to provide more chances for them to learn about Chinese history and culture. Obviously, free access to museums can help citizens acquire