Module 6 外研版英語九（上）模塊主題寫作詳解與訓練

1、外研版英語九（上）Module 6模塊主題寫作詳解與訓練模塊主題寫作整體感知 話題分析本模塊以“Problems”為話題，講述了青少年在成長過程中遇到的一些問題，并提出了解決問題的方法。通過本模塊的學習，要求學生能正視問題，并樂于幫助他人排憂解難，學生應該樹立正確的人生觀和價值觀，并能學會運用if條件句，同時熟練運用提建議的句型來描寫某種假設情況。該話題是常考點，在考查角度上，多以某個問題或煩惱為切入點，讓學生提出合理建議。 常用表達1. I would like to suggest that. 我想建議2. If I were you, I would. 如果我是你，我會3. It see

2、ms to me that you could. 我認為你可以4. I think it would be better if you. 我想如果你可能會更好。5. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful. 我希望這些建議對你來說有用/有幫助。實例分析 典型例題假如你是劉斌, 昨天你在放學回家的路上看到一只受傷的小鳥, 于是你把它帶回家養(yǎng)傷, 可是卻遭到媽媽的反對, 因為她擔心養(yǎng)鳥會影響你的學習。你很苦惱, 想從知心姐姐Angel那里得到幫助。請你用英語給她寫一封70個詞左右的信。信的開頭和結尾已給出, 但不計入總詞數(shù)。 思路

3、點撥1. 體裁：應用文；2. 人稱：第一人稱；3. 時態(tài)：一般過去時為主。寫作模板描述問題Yesterday I saw a little bird on my way home.心理活動I worried about the bird. I feel very sad and helpless now.征求建議What should I do? 連句成篇Dear Sister Angel, Yesterday I saw a little bird on my way home. The bird was hurt. I worried about the bird. It was so p

4、oor that I decided to take it home to look after it. When I got home and told my mother all about it, my mother said I couldnt leave it home. She said the bird would make noise and be bad for my study. I feel very sad and helpless now. I dont want the bird to die and I dont want to make my mother un

5、happy. What should I do? I look forward to your reply. Yours,Liu Bin范文欣賞（一）張燕是九年級學生。她父親在一家公司工作，家里幾乎天天來客人。他們在客廳高聲談笑，有時還一起打牌，弄出許多噪音。這種吵鬧的環(huán)境使張燕無法集中精力學習。她不知道如何解決這個問題。請你幫她給青少年輔導員王老師寫一封信，談談她的煩惱并請王老師提出寶貴意見。Dear Mr Wang,My name is Zhan Yan. Im a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I need your help.My

6、father works in a company. There are always many people coming to my home.They talk to each other loudly and sometimes they even play cards together. They make a lot of noise and this is really terrible. I cant focus on my study. I dont know how to deal with this problem. Can you offer me some sugge

7、stions? They would be most valuable. Thanks a lot.Best wishes！Yours sincerely,Zhang Yan（二）初中學生蘇梅遇到了難題：好朋友Peter總想抄他的作業(yè)。蘇梅想制止他，但又怕Peter會不理解自己。假如你是蘇梅，請給Peter寫封70詞左右的信，說明你對抄作業(yè)的態(tài)度，并告訴她，你和他永遠是好朋友。Dear Peter, I know that you didnt have enough time to finish your homework yesterday. So you wanted to copy my

8、 homework this morning. Im sorry I cant give my homework to you. Because I think copying others homework is a bad habit. If you copy others homework, youll never know how to solve problems and may become lazy. I think it would be better if you do your homework by yourself. Its good for your study an

9、d finally youll get good grades in the tests. I hope youll do well in your test.yours,Su Mei（三）下面是某報刊登的一封讀者來信，請你以編者Serina 的身份給這位同學回信，并針對她的問題給出合理的建議。80詞左右，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Serina,Lisa and I are in the same class and she sits next to me. She is an excellent student and I can learn a lot from her

10、. However, she talks so much that sometimes I cant pay attention to my studies. I want to change seats with another girl, but Im afraid it will hurt Lisas feelings. What should I do?Yours, WinnieDear Winnie,Im sorry to learn that Lisa is making it difficult for you to pay attention to your studies.

11、However, I think Lisa talks to you because she likes you. Whats more, she can help you with your studies. In my opinion, you should get to know her better. Once you become close friends, it will be easier for you to talk to her and tell her how you feel about the problem. Im sure she will understand

12、 you.I hope you like my suggestion.Yours,Serina（四）假設你是某文雜志的“知心姐姐”（Agony Sister），Helen，請閱讀下面的這封求助信，并根據(jù)信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。要求：1. 70詞左右，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 文中不要出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實信息。Dear Helen,Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the park. I wanted to take some photos. My father was out at that time, so I took his ca

13、mera without telling him. Unfortunately, the camera was out of my bag and dropped on the ground when I was climbing the hill. It didnt work at all. I put it back quietly after I returned home. And I havent told him till now. when I face to my father, I feel terrible. What should I do?Yours,DavidDear

14、 David,First, I think youd better tell your father immediately. It you tell him the truth, hell be angry with you. But at least youll prove how honest you are. Then I think you should offer to pay. But you shouldnt use your pocket money. Yes, a camera is expensive, maybe you cant afford it. If you o

15、ffer to do some jobs around the house, hell realize that youre truly sorry. Oh, remember to be careful next tune.Yours,Helen自我展示假如你是心理醫(yī)生Dr. Clark，你收到學生Lucy的來信。她在信中說，自己很喜歡看電視，但是父母擔心影響她的學習，不讓她看，她有時和父母爭吵，很煩惱，卻不知道怎么辦。請你給Lucy回封信，給出解決辦法。80詞左右，信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。文中不要出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實信息。提示詞：argue with sb. 和某人爭吵Dear Lucy, Yours, Dr. Clark外研版英語九（上）Module 6模塊主題寫作自我展示答案Yours, Dr. ClarkDear Lucy,Thanks for telling me about your problems. First, stop arguing with your parents. Arguing with them cant solve any problems and makes you angry. Remember: your parents love you deeply. Second, you shoul