高考英語書面表達：建議信寫作(新)備課講稿

1、高考英語書面表達：建議信寫作(新)寫作攻略寫作攻略2 2：建議信寫作的注意事項：建議信寫作的注意事項a. 這類文章一定要符合英語這類文章一定要符合英語信件的基本格式信件的基本格式。b. 這類文章的這類文章的基本時態(tài)多用現(xiàn)在時和一般將基本時態(tài)多用現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時來時。c. 掌握建議信的掌握建議信的語言特點語言特點：語氣要：語氣要誠懇誠懇，有有禮貌禮貌；建議；建議內(nèi)容要詳盡具體內(nèi)容要詳盡具體，不能含糊其辭；，不能含糊其辭；可提供的建議通常是多個，因此要注意可提供的建議通常是多個，因此要注意各條各條建議之間的銜接建議之間的銜接。d. 熟悉熟悉建議信的常用句型建議信的常用句型。寫作攻略寫作攻略3 3

2、：建議信常用句式：建議信常用句式A建議信開頭常用句式建議信開頭常用句式 (照應材料，表明意圖照應材料，表明意圖)1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to3. I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter.4. I am writing to you in reply to .5. You have asked me for my advice on how

3、 toand Ill try to make some suggestions.6. I am writing to express my views on/ concerning7. Its my pleasure to offer you some advice on.B. 建議信正文常用句式建議信正文常用句式（詳述建議，合情入理）（詳述建議，合情入理）1. Have you considered doing./ So why not do.?2. Dont you think it more beneficial if you could 3. I would like to sugge

4、st that you (should)4. If I were you, I would5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to make a suggestion that you (should)7. Youd better do./ It is/ seems better for you to do.8. The best way to do sth is to do / There is no

5、 better way to do sth than to do sth .9. How/ What about doing.?10. What if.?11. It would be a good idea if.C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式建議信結(jié)尾常用句式（歸納總結(jié)，提出希望）（歸納總結(jié)，提出希望） 1. I believe you will take my advice into consideration.2. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful.3. I will be more than happy to see

6、 improvements in this regard(在這一點上在這一點上).4. I do hope that my ideas will work.5. In the end, I will be glad if you find these ideas useful.6. I would be ready to further discuss this matter/ discuss this matter with you in further detail.7. I am looking forward to your early reply.8. Lets keep in to

7、uch. I hope to hear good news from you. 9. I hope whats mentioned above might be helpful.10. I will appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions/tips.11. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you.12. These are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for a better fu

8、ture of.寫作攻略寫作攻略4 4：建議信常用常用關聯(lián)詞：建議信常用常用關聯(lián)詞1. 表示表示總結(jié)總結(jié)/歸納歸納的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:in a/ one word, altogether, all in all, on the whole, to sum up/ conclude/ summarize, in conclusion/ summary/ sum, in short2. 表示表示遞進遞進/ 增補增補的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語moreover ; whats more; besides; in addition; also; whats worse; worse stil

9、l; even worse; to make matters/ it worse; even; again; as well (as); apart from; too/ either; further more; not onlybut also; and ; neithernor; both and 3. 表示表示轉(zhuǎn)折轉(zhuǎn)折/讓步讓步的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:but; however; yet; although; even if/ though; evenso/ not; whatever.; however.; . as.; despite; in spite of; regardl

10、ess of; while.; on the one hand, but on the other hand, ; after all; some, but others; otherwise; for one thing., but for another (thing).4. 表示表示原因原因的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:because, since, as, for, now that, because of, thanks to, due to（由于）（由于）, owing to, in view of, on account of, as a result/ consequence

11、of5. 表示表示結(jié)果結(jié)果的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:so, thus, therefore, consequently, accordingly, as a result/ consequence, in consequence, so that, for this reason, the reason for/ why.is that.6. 表示表示條件條件的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:if, unless , as long as, on condition that., once.7. 表示表示時間時間的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:(and) then, after that, ne

12、xt, finally, eventually, later, in the end, recently, at the same time, (in the) meanwhile, at first, at last, from now on, until/ till, afterwards, on/ upon doing, shortly/ soon after, before long, at the beginning of8. 表示表示論述順序關系論述順序關系的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語: first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdl

13、y, above all, first of all, to begain/ start with, last but not least, lastly9. 表示表示解釋說明解釋說明的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:in other words; that is (to say); namely; ., which means10. 表示進行表示進行舉例說明舉例說明的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:for instance, for example, such as, like, examples include., .and so on, and/ or the like, take. for e

14、xample11. 表示表示比較對比比較對比的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:instead; instead of; meanwhile; on the contrary; unlike; different from.; as. as.; on the one hand, and on the other hand, ; some, and/ while others; . while.; for one thing., and for another (thing).; similarly; equally; similar to.; in the same way/ manner 12.

15、表示表示強調(diào)事實強調(diào)事實的過渡詞或短語的過渡詞或短語:in fact/ reality/ truth/ practice, to tell you the truth, to be honest/ frank/ sure, as a matter of fact, honestly speaking, actually, above all, after all, anyway, anyhow, certainly/ surely, indeed, really, especially, in particular, truly, importantly, most important, ob

16、viously, only/ just/ simply/ merely, without doubt/ out of question13. 表示表示選擇選擇的過渡詞或短語：的過渡詞或短語：either. or., or, or else, otherwise14. 表示表表示表目的目的的過渡詞或短語：的過渡詞或短語：for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to, with the purpose of 假設你是某報社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封假設你是某報社編輯，最近收到讀者李華的一封來信。來信。信中李華提到自己在學習英語的過程中遇到信中李

17、華提到自己在學習英語的過程中遇到了困難，這讓他很苦惱。了困難，這讓他很苦惱。請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇請根據(jù)以上提示，寫一篇回給李華的建議信回給李華的建議信，幫他解決困難，促進學習。，幫他解決困難，促進學習。 建議內(nèi)容：建議內(nèi)容： 1. 1. 不要灰心，保持良好心態(tài)；不要灰心，保持良好心態(tài)； 2. 2. 掌握學習方法；掌握學習方法； 3. 3. 培養(yǎng)對英語的興趣愛好。培養(yǎng)對英語的興趣愛好。注意：注意：1. 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右； 2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 3. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫?？蛇m當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 建議信寫作

18、范例第一步：審題第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習慣。高考書面表達養(yǎng)成重視審題的習慣。高考書面表達是半封閉性的寫作，審題十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談談如何審題：思考的問題思考的問題樣題分析樣題分析第幾人稱？（第幾人稱？（person）文章的文章的體裁體裁是什么？是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么要寫的文章主題是什么 (topic)怎樣安排信息點的順序？怎樣安排信息點的順序？ (order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài)時態(tài)) (when)第一人稱第一人稱書信書信對英語學習給出建議對英語學習給出建議說理的邏輯性說理的邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時第二步：構思第二步：構思-建議信結(jié)構及內(nèi)容要點建

19、議信結(jié)構及內(nèi)容要點n三段式：三段式：第一段：第一段： 點明主題：點明主題：表明寫作意圖表明寫作意圖， （有時要簡單介紹自己）。（有時要簡單介紹自己）。第二段：第二段： 陳述事實，提出建議，給出理由陳述事實，提出建議，給出理由 （是什么，為什么，怎么樣）（是什么，為什么，怎么樣）第三段：第三段： 總結(jié)全文，表明希望總結(jié)全文，表明希望草稿草稿修改修改謄寫謄寫審題審題建議信重點第二段：第二段： 說明說明建議的內(nèi)容建議的內(nèi)容；（是什么）；（是什么） 提出具體建議的提出具體建議的原因原因；（為什么）；（為什么） 指出采納建議的指出采納建議的益處益處。（怎么樣）。（怎么樣）注意事項：注意事項：語言要委婉、

20、禮貌，顧及對語言要委婉、禮貌，顧及對方感受。方感受。適當運用模板適當運用模板 Dear Li Hua, Ive received your letter, saying+ 你碰到的問你碰到的問題題. Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. My suggestions are as follows. Firstly, _, because_. Secondly, youd better_, because_. Thirdly, youd better _. Only in this way can you _. What

21、s more, _. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx Dear Li Hua, Ive received your letter, saying you have some difficulties in learning English. Im sorry to hear that you have such a difficult problem. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. My

22、suggestions are as follows. Firstly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Secondly, the best way to learn English is reading it well and knowing the meanings of it. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking ab

23、ilities. Whats more, the most important advice is reading English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx 范文范文其他模板其他模板Dear_, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _./ I know that _ from_. Backgrounds a

24、nd problems（1） Here are a few suggestions/ Here is some advice that/ on_. First, it is important to _. Then/ Second/ Also, _. Besides/ In addition/ Furthermore, it should be a good idea to _. I am sure that/ I hope that_. Suggestions, thanks and hope Thanks for your consideration. Im looking forward

25、 to/ Looking forward to _. Yours, _ Signature Dear _,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主題引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建議的句式提出建議)As to , I su

26、ggest (有時根據(jù)需要具體有時根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面到某一反面). In addition, (其他建議其他建議). Im sure (預測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的預測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心信心和決心).Im looking forward to (表達愿望表達愿望). Yours sincerely , Li Hua（2）Dear_, You have asked me for my advice on how to., and Ill try to make some suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise

27、to take the following actions: First, . If you do this, . Second, . This way, . And last, . By doing this, . I hope youll find these ideas useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you. Yours, XXX （3）寫作訓練寫作訓練1 假設你是的李華，下面是你校英語報第一假設你是的李華，下面是你校英語報第一期

28、第二版的主要內(nèi)容。請你給編輯寫一封信，期第二版的主要內(nèi)容。請你給編輯寫一封信，對該版內(nèi)容發(fā)表評論并提出改進建議。對該版內(nèi)容發(fā)表評論并提出改進建議。版面主要內(nèi)容：體育新聞、學習方法、疑難問版面主要內(nèi)容：體育新聞、學習方法、疑難問答等。答等。注意：注意： 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右； 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；1.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear editor, I was glad to read our English newspaper, especially Section B edited by yo

29、u. As far as I know, most of the students are fond of this section because it provides us with a lot of news both from the school and around the world. Whats more, it gives us sports news, as well as tips on how to study. My favorite part , though, is Ask and Answer, since our questions can be answe

30、red by teachers in time. It also helps us communicate with our teachers and schoolmates, which is of great help to our growth. 范范 文文 Despite the good it has done to us, I would still like to make some suggestions. The section would attract more readers if you were to add more entertainment contents,

31、 such as hunorous stories or jokes which would make it more lovely and interesting. Im looking forward to reading more interesting stories in our English newspapers. Yours, Li Hua寫作訓練寫作訓練2 假設你是的李華，最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)學校里的浪假設你是的李華，最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)學校里的浪費現(xiàn)象非常嚴重。請給英語讀寫園地（費現(xiàn)象非常嚴重。請給英語讀寫園地（English Reading and Writing Space)的編輯投稿反映

32、的編輯投稿反映該現(xiàn)象，并提出自己的建議。該現(xiàn)象，并提出自己的建議。注意：注意： 詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右； 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)； 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫?？蛇m當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：美德參考詞匯：美德virtue;提倡提倡advocateDear editors, I am Li Hua, a student in class One, Grade One. _ I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, LihuaDear editors, I am L

33、i Hua, a student in Class One, Grade One. Recently, I have found that the waste on our campus is getting serious, such as the waste of water, food and electrical energy.范范 文文 Faced with these phenomena（現(xiàn)象）（現(xiàn)象）, I really feel worried. So here is some advice I hope will help. English Reading and Writi

34、ng Space is a good medium to advocate（倡議）（倡議） that saving is a traditional virtue. So would you publish more instructive articles on this topic first? Then, some activities such as holding debates or seeing movies about the phenomenon will help students get aware of the harm of wasting and realize t

35、he importance of saving. Do you agree with me? I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 假設你是學生李華，你的英國朋友假設你是學生李華，你的英國朋友Tom目前正目前正在努力學習漢語，但在學習中遇到了一些困難，因此在努力學習漢語，但在學習中遇到了一些困難，因此他在幾天前給你發(fā)電子郵件求助，詢問怎樣才能學好他在幾天前給你發(fā)電子郵件求助，詢問怎樣才能學好漢語。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回復一封郵件：漢語。請根據(jù)以下要點給他回復一封郵件： 1感謝他之前對你英語學習的建議和幫助；感謝他之前對你英語學習的建議

36、和幫助； 2介紹漢語語言的特點以及學習漢語的方法；介紹漢語語言的特點以及學習漢語的方法； 3邀請他暑假期間來中國，交流語言學習經(jīng)驗。邀請他暑假期間來中國，交流語言學習經(jīng)驗。注意：注意： 1詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：100左右左右; 2可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。寫作訓練寫作訓練 3 3Dear Tom, Im so glad to receive your last letter. I cant thank you enough for your advice and help in my English study, due to which Ive made great

37、progress in learning English. As for your language study, Im concerned to know that you are facing some difficulties when studying Chinese. Im willing to offer you some help. As you know, Chinese is so flexible that you need to pay attention to the different meanings of a word or phrase in different

38、 situations. Besides, it is difficult for foreigners to write Chinese characters, especially for the beginners. So I advise you to learn some oral Chinese first. Then you may begin to try writing some simple Chinese characters. Finally, there is one point for you to remember: practice makes perfect.

39、 Another suggestion is that you should experience the native Chinese language environment in person. How about coming to China during the summer holiday? We can talk about our experience in language learning with each other. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua精華點評精華點評 建議信的寫作關鍵在于作者給出建議的語氣委婉而建議信的寫作關鍵

40、在于作者給出建議的語氣委婉而中肯中肯, 使對方容易接受。很多學生習慣使用祈使句或者使對方容易接受。很多學生習慣使用祈使句或者You should的句型表示建議的句型表示建議, 這樣比較生硬，因此應轉(zhuǎn)這樣比較生硬，因此應轉(zhuǎn)換不同的句型使語言豐富換不同的句型使語言豐富, 如使用如使用you should., you had better., remember to do等句型。在最后祝愿對等句型。在最后祝愿對方成功的時候方成功的時候, 可以用簡明扼要的句型可以用簡明扼要的句型, 如如wish you good luck / wish you success / may you succeed, 使

41、文章長短句結(jié)合得當。使文章長短句結(jié)合得當。附附：請求信模板：請求信模板Dear_, I am writing to formally request to_(請求請求的內(nèi)容的內(nèi)容) The reason for_ is that_(給出原因給出原因). I_, so I_(給出細節(jié)給出細節(jié)) I would also like to request_(提出進一步的要提出進一步的要求求). I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me