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1、 1、寫(xiě)作題材貼近學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。、寫(xiě)作題材貼近學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。2、信息點(diǎn)多，、信息點(diǎn)多，必須用必須用5句話表達(dá)。句話表達(dá)。3、信息呈現(xiàn)方式多為文字、表格、圖表等。、信息呈現(xiàn)方式多為文字、表格、圖表等。4、以翻譯為基礎(chǔ)、注重考察表達(dá)能力。、以翻譯為基礎(chǔ)、注重考察表達(dá)能力。一、題型特點(diǎn)：一、題型特點(diǎn)：二、能力要求:Ex : 改正下列病句。改正下列病句。1. My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.2. Last week we hold a discussion about this topic.3. The future li

2、fe will become more and more better.4. The fire destroied their houses.5. He spends two hours to study English every night._應(yīng)改為應(yīng)改為include_應(yīng)改為應(yīng)改為held_應(yīng)改為應(yīng)改為better and better_應(yīng)改為應(yīng)改為destroyed_應(yīng)改為應(yīng)改為studying 6. Although we missed the film, but we felt very happy. 7. We should do some exercise every day,

3、 it is good for our health. 8. The girl is my good friend. She is standing under the tree.合并成合并成定語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句刪去刪去butit前加前加and_ _The girl who is standing under the tree is my good friend. 1、寫(xiě)作題材貼近學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。、寫(xiě)作題材貼近學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。2、信息點(diǎn)多，、信息點(diǎn)多，必須用必須用5句話表達(dá)。句話表達(dá)。3、信息呈現(xiàn)方式多為文字、表格、圖表等。、信息呈現(xiàn)方式多為文字、表格、圖表等。4、以翻譯為基礎(chǔ)、注重考察表達(dá)能

4、力。、以翻譯為基礎(chǔ)、注重考察表達(dá)能力。一、題型特點(diǎn)：一、題型特點(diǎn)：三、表達(dá)能力訓(xùn)練三、表達(dá)能力訓(xùn)練1.1.寫(xiě)好簡(jiǎn)單句寫(xiě)好簡(jiǎn)單句簡(jiǎn)單句的五種基本句型：簡(jiǎn)單句的五種基本句型：1 1）主語(yǔ)）主語(yǔ)+ +不及物動(dòng)詞不及物動(dòng)詞 (S+V)2 2）主語(yǔ)）主語(yǔ)+ +及物動(dòng)詞及物動(dòng)詞+ +賓語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ) (S+V+O)3 3）主語(yǔ)）主語(yǔ)+ +系動(dòng)詞系動(dòng)詞+ +表語(yǔ)表語(yǔ) (S+V+P) 4 4）主語(yǔ)）主語(yǔ)+ +及物動(dòng)詞及物動(dòng)詞+ +雙賓語(yǔ)雙賓語(yǔ) (S+V+O+O)5 5）主語(yǔ)）主語(yǔ)+ +及物動(dòng)詞及物動(dòng)詞+ +賓語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)+ +賓補(bǔ)賓補(bǔ) (S+V+O+C)四、如何使文章連貫？四、如何使文章連貫？(過(guò)渡詞的使用過(guò)渡詞的使用)1

5、) 時(shí)間：時(shí)間：then, suddenly, meanwhile, before, after2) 空間空間: around, inside, outside, opposite to, next to3) 列舉：列舉：for example, such as, first(ly), besides, forone thingfor another thing 4) 比較比較: on the one handon the other hand,asas, while, the former, the latter,someothers, other, compared with5) 邏輯關(guān)系

6、：邏輯關(guān)系：a. 并列：并列：and, as well as, alsob. 轉(zhuǎn)折：轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, yetc. 遞進(jìn)：遞進(jìn)：besides, apart from, in addition, whats more, furthermored. 原因：原因：because, because of, as, since, for that reasone. 結(jié)果：結(jié)果：so, therefore, thus, as a result f. 讓步：讓步：though, although, in spite of2 2、如何做到句式靈活？、如何做到句式靈活？1)1)并列句并列句2)2

7、)復(fù)合句復(fù)合句 ( (定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句定語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、名詞性從句) )3)3)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型強(qiáng)調(diào)句型4)4)非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞5)5)其他句型及結(jié)構(gòu)其他句型及結(jié)構(gòu)須注意的要點(diǎn) 加強(qiáng)基礎(chǔ)詞匯和基本句子結(jié)構(gòu)的加強(qiáng)基礎(chǔ)詞匯和基本句子結(jié)構(gòu)的學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)習(xí) 提高綜合運(yùn)用復(fù)合句的能力提高綜合運(yùn)用復(fù)合句的能力 注意句子間的過(guò)渡與銜接（連詞）注意句子間的過(guò)渡與銜接（連詞） 仿寫(xiě)、背誦、熟讀一些話題范文仿寫(xiě)、背誦、熟讀一些話題范文須注意的要點(diǎn)一、句子結(jié)構(gòu)必須正確。一、句子結(jié)構(gòu)必須正確。單句單句: 主語(yǔ)主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)+其他成分。其他成分。復(fù)合句：從句中須有主語(yǔ)、謂語(yǔ)，主句有主復(fù)合句：從句中須有主語(yǔ)、謂語(yǔ)，

8、主句有主 語(yǔ)、謂語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)、謂語(yǔ)。二、人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)必須一致。當(dāng)主語(yǔ)是單數(shù)時(shí)，二、人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài)必須一致。當(dāng)主語(yǔ)是單數(shù)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)要一致。謂語(yǔ)要一致。三、有一些自己熟練掌握的句型、短語(yǔ)、過(guò)三、有一些自己熟練掌握的句型、短語(yǔ)、過(guò)渡詞。渡詞。四、避免花費(fèi)太多無(wú)用功，掌握規(guī)律，穩(wěn)定四、避免花費(fèi)太多無(wú)用功，掌握規(guī)律，穩(wěn)定發(fā)揮發(fā)揮。 在表達(dá)過(guò)程中，應(yīng)選用自己熟悉的和在表達(dá)過(guò)程中，應(yīng)選用自己熟悉的和有把握的詞匯及句型，千萬(wàn)有把握的詞匯及句型，千萬(wàn)不能不能自己自己去去創(chuàng)造或生搬硬套漢語(yǔ)式的句子創(chuàng)造或生搬硬套漢語(yǔ)式的句子。如。如果遇到確實(shí)難以回避的內(nèi)容，一時(shí)又果遇到確實(shí)難以回避的內(nèi)容，一時(shí)又想不起確切的表達(dá)法，那就要想不起確

9、切的表達(dá)法，那就要“拐彎拐彎抹角抹角”地去表達(dá)，地去表達(dá)，盡量找同義或近義盡量找同義或近義的詞語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)代替的詞語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)代替，英語(yǔ)有句諺語(yǔ)：，英語(yǔ)有句諺語(yǔ)：“All roads lead to Rome.”這樣既可節(jié)這樣既可節(jié)約時(shí)約時(shí) 間又可避免犯大的錯(cuò)誤。間又可避免犯大的錯(cuò)誤。 寫(xiě)作要求：假如你是李華，請(qǐng)就本校寫(xiě)作要求：假如你是李華，請(qǐng)就本校食堂食堂服務(wù)的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信。食堂食堂服務(wù)的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信。 內(nèi)容包括：內(nèi)容包括： 、優(yōu)點(diǎn)：食堂干凈，飯菜可口，服、優(yōu)點(diǎn)：食堂干凈，飯菜可口，服務(wù)態(tài)度好務(wù)態(tài)度好 、不足：價(jià)格偏高，種類(lèi)偏少，等、不足：價(jià)格偏高，種類(lèi)偏少，等候時(shí)間較長(zhǎng)候時(shí)間較長(zhǎng)

10、、建議：盡快解決問(wèn)題、建議：盡快解決問(wèn)題Dear Mr. Principal, I am a student of our school and Id like to say something about the canteen service in our school. In general, we are satisfied with the clean and tidy dining hall. However, the price of the food is a little high and we can only have a limited variety of dishe

11、s to choose from. In addition, we often have to wait a long time for buying food.you could understand how precious time is to us students, so may I suggest that the problem be solved as soon as possible so that we can all enjoy our meals at school? Thanks for your consideration.Dear Mr. Principal, I

12、 am a student of our school and Id like to say something about the canteen service in our school. In general, we are satisfied with the clean and tidy dining hall.However, the price of the food is a little high and we can only have a limited variety of dishes to choose from. In addition, we often ha

13、ve to wait a long time for buying food. You could understand how precious time is to us students, so may I suggest that the problem be solved as soon as possible so that we can all enjoy our meals at school? Thanks for your consideration.第一種：第一種：要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。的看法。 1 有一些人認(rèn)為有一些人認(rèn)

14、為 2 另一些人認(rèn)為另一些人認(rèn)為 3 我的看法我的看法如何寫(xiě)好正反觀點(diǎn)的文章？如何寫(xiě)好正反觀點(diǎn)的文章？Writing structure -How to write an essay (議論短文議論短文)( In my opinion，I think-/As for me, I think-/Personally, I think -. )( There are different opinions about whether-.) ( Some people think that -.Whats more/Moreover-. However, other people hold the o

15、pposite opinion that-.and worse still-. )The theme of the essay(陳述議論的主題陳述議論的主題)Opinion 1Opinion 2Reasons 1,2Reasons 1,2Personal opinion注意事項(xiàng)：注意事項(xiàng)：條理要清晰，觀點(diǎn)明確；條理要清晰，觀點(diǎn)明確；文章必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)切記用文章必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)切記用5句連篇；句連篇；運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，副詞，短語(yǔ)等來(lái)銜接句子；運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，副詞，短語(yǔ)等來(lái)銜接句子；注意時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)，議論文形式還是以現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主議論文形式還是以現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主.對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式議論短文的基

16、礎(chǔ)對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)式議論短文的基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作模板寫(xiě)作模板： There are different opinions about whether_. Some people think that _. Whats more/Moreover/Furthermore _. However, others hold the opposite opinion that_, and worse still， _.As for me/In my opinion / Personally, I think that_.Task :Writing ?人們對(duì)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物持有不同意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于網(wǎng)上人們對(duì)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物持有不

17、同意見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)你的看法。購(gòu)物的短文，介紹人們的不同觀點(diǎn)，并表達(dá)你的看法。贊成的理由贊成的理由反對(duì)的理由反對(duì)的理由自己的看法自己的看法1 1網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物更方便，省時(shí)網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物更方便，省時(shí)2 2人們可以在網(wǎng)上買(mǎi)到各人們可以在網(wǎng)上買(mǎi)到各種各樣的東西，而且價(jià)格種各樣的東西，而且價(jià)格也較便宜也較便宜.3 3是一種時(shí)尚而新潮的購(gòu)是一種時(shí)尚而新潮的購(gòu)物方式物方式 1 1無(wú)法預(yù)先體驗(yàn)商品無(wú)法預(yù)先體驗(yàn)商品2 2人們?nèi)菀咨袭?dāng)受騙，因人們?nèi)菀咨袭?dāng)受騙，因?yàn)楹茈y確保商品的質(zhì)量為很難確保商品的質(zhì)量寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 1文章必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn)文章必須包括所有提示要點(diǎn), 但

18、不要逐條譯成英語(yǔ)但不要逐條譯成英語(yǔ); 2請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提示，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上提示， 最后談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)；最后談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)；寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)作要求 只能用只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部的內(nèi)容。詞匯詞匯: 商品商品: goodsgoods 體驗(yàn)體驗(yàn): : experienceexperience 預(yù)先：預(yù)先： in advancein advance 上當(dāng)受騙上當(dāng)受騙: be cheated: be cheated 人們對(duì)是否應(yīng)該網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物持有不同人們對(duì)是否應(yīng)該網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物持有不同意見(jiàn)。意見(jiàn)。一些人認(rèn)為一些人認(rèn)為網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物更方便，網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物更方便，省時(shí)，省時(shí)，人們可以在網(wǎng)上買(mǎi)到各種各人們可以在網(wǎng)上買(mǎi)到各種各樣的

19、東西，而且價(jià)格也較便宜樣的東西，而且價(jià)格也較便宜. 而且這是一種時(shí)尚而新潮的購(gòu)物而且這是一種時(shí)尚而新潮的購(gòu)物方式。方式。另一些人相反的觀點(diǎn)，認(rèn)為另一些人相反的觀點(diǎn)，認(rèn)為人們?nèi)藗儫o(wú)法預(yù)先體驗(yàn)商品，他們?nèi)菀谉o(wú)法預(yù)先體驗(yàn)商品，他們?nèi)菀咨袭?dāng)受騙，因?yàn)楹茈y確保商品的質(zhì)上當(dāng)受騙，因?yàn)楹茈y確保商品的質(zhì)量。量。依我看來(lái)，依我看來(lái)，Correct the mistakes There are different opinions about whether go shopping online. people should Some people think that buy goods is very eas

20、y on the Internet, and need little time. Some people think that shopping online is more convenient and it can help people to save much time, people can shop for a variety of things at lower price on the Internet.buyingit can help people to save much timeWhats more, people are not only can buy kinds

21、of things, but also the price is more cheap.allcheaperWhats more, It is a fashion way of shopping.able and newHowever, others hold the opposite opinion that people cant in advance experience the goods，and worse still it is easy to be cheated, because it is difficult to make sure the quality of the g

22、oods. easy 后加后加for peopleAs for me, I think that it has advantages and disadvantages.As for me, I think that shopping online is not safe so we need to be more careful/it is good for us to buy things without going out.參考范文：參考范文： There are different opinions about whetherThere are different opinions a

23、bout whether people should go shopping online. people should go shopping online. Some people Some people think thatthink that shopping online is more convenient shopping online is more convenient and it can help people to save much and it can help people to save much time,people can shop for a varie

24、ty of things time,people can shop for a variety of things at lower price on the Internet. at lower price on the Internet. Whats more,Whats more, It is a fashionable and new way of shopping. It is a fashionable and new way of shopping. However, others hold the opposite opinion However, others hold th

25、e opposite opinion thatthat people cant experience the goods in people cant experience the goods in advanceadvance，and worseand worse stillstill they are easy to be they are easy to be cheated, because it is difficult to cheated, because it is difficult to make sure make sure the quality of the good

26、s. the quality of the goods. As for me,As for me, I think I think thatthat people could be more enjoyable when people could be more enjoyable when shopping online carefully. shopping online carefully. My unforgettable Journey During the Labor Day holiday my family and I took a trip to five cities in

27、 the east of China . It took us seven days to finish the wonderful journey and it has broadened my horizons. First, we took a plane to Nanjing. We arrived in Nanjing in the morning and we visited Sun Yat _sen Mausoleum in the afternoon, which was built in memory of Mr.Sun Yat _sen . The next day,we

28、went to Wuxi and Suzhou.As we know,SuZhou is an old and beautiful city. But what interested me most is HangZhou . We bought some beautiful silks here. At night ,we stood on the Oriental pearl TV Tower , admiring the beautiful night scene in Shanghai . This was the end of our happy journey . I like t

29、his trip very much , and I will never forget it. 介紹地理位置介紹地理位置的作文的作文 某地位于 xxx is located/situated in/on/ to xxx lies in/on/ to the east/west/ south/ north/ northeast/southwest of .的東/西/南/北/東北/西南部lie in 位于,xxx（位于范圍內(nèi)）Guangzhou lies in the south of China. 廣州在中國(guó)的南部。lie/is located on 位于東南西北 (兩地接壤)India li

30、es on the southwest of China.印度在中國(guó)的西南。lie to 位于 （兩地不接壤）Japan lies to the east of China. 日本在中國(guó)以東。 It covers an area of +數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)字+ thousand square kilometers 它覆蓋它覆蓋平方公里平方公里 Covering an area of , XXX is It covers an area of 9600000 square kilometers.表示面積（表示面積（Area) Its population is +人口數(shù)人口數(shù) The population

31、of xxx is人口人口數(shù)數(shù) It has a population of +人口數(shù)人口數(shù) With a population of 有有人人口口 China has a population of 1.4 billion.人口（人口（Population） have a history of+數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)字 with a history of + 數(shù)字?jǐn)?shù)字 有有年歷史年歷史 China has a history of 5000 years. China has a population of 1.4 billion with a history of 5000 years.歷史（歷史（hist

32、ory） there are many places of interest ,such as這里有很多名勝 it is a country/city with green hills and beautiful rivers 這是一個(gè)山清水秀的歷史文化名城、風(fēng)景名勝、特色歷史文化名城、風(fēng)景名勝、特色/產(chǎn)等產(chǎn)等 As we all know, it is famous/well-known for 眾所眾所周知，它以周知，它以而著名而著名 This country/city is rich /high /abundant in. 這個(gè)這個(gè)有豐富有豐富的的 The special character of XXX is. There is a variety of climate in XXX, so in the east it is warm/cold/wet/windy, while in the west it is 氣候特征氣候特征： 實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí)實(shí)戰(zhàn)練習(xí) 2010年廣州將主辦第年廣州將主辦第16屆亞運(yùn)會(huì)，屆亞運(yùn)會(huì)，屆時(shí)將有來(lái)自亞洲各國(guó)的體育健兒、屆時(shí)