讀后續(xù)寫浙江省歷年高考真題及范文欣賞

1、浙江高考 ：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the wayan unpleasant subjectcame up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so a ngry that she said to Tom. Im going to find a be

2、tter spot for us to camp and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized t

3、hat she was lost.“Tom! she cried. Help!No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag withTom. Jane keptmoving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Ja

4、ne wanted very much to be with Tomand her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some b

5、erry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is thatfor me?Unfortunately, the

6、 trees madeit impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .應(yīng)使用5個以上短文文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語：3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

7、4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up.On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to

8、 make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （騎行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him

9、.Man, thats a big dog! ” hethought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn t a dog atall, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mad sheart jumped.He foundout his can of hear spray. With one handon the bars,he firedthe spray atthe wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the anima

10、l,and to Macsrelief,it fell back,shakingits head. But a minute later, it was by hisside again.Then itattacked theback of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. Hefired at thewolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追趕）。Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelle

11、d at passing cars but was careful notto show down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he d be easy caught up and the wolf s teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn t think m

12、uch of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a manon a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Macheard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as

13、 the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .應(yīng)使用5個以上短文文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語：3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph 1The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.2017 11. 浙江高考 A vacation with

14、 my motherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-loving,sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. Onestrange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and

15、 my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the firstday of our trip approached,David, my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good- bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we d ever seethem again? Finally,the moment of our dep

16、arture arrived, and we loaded suitcases,books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. Webravely drove off again two hours later after we d returned hometo get the purse and traveler s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas s

17、tation bathrooms ifMomwas driving while Dadslept: You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go. I had terrible pictures in my mind: Honey, where are the kids? ”What?! Oh, Gosh I thoughtthey were being awfully quiet. We were nev

18、er actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn t we finda house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we

19、could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Momnever could understand our a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the

20、 next town.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2 .應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語;3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paral:The next day we rememberedthe brand-new tent we had brought withus.Para2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.2018 6It was summer, and my dad wanted t

21、o treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.Wetook a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of NewMexico. Wereached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Peco

22、s.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening tothe frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. The day starts at

23、 dawn on my farm, he said.After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze（吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad andUncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose r

24、ide, and he saidyes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. Don t be late for supper, Uncle Paul cried, and keep to the track so that you don t get

25、lost! OK! my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven（編織的）blanket spread out upon

26、 the ground just for us.注意：1 .所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為l50左右；2 .至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語：3 .續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4 .續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horseWe had no idea where we were and it got dark.參考范文一：Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jan

27、e had to stayalone in the forest for another cold night. At that moment （時間），she felt a little sad, but she wasn t so frightened （ 情感 ）.She reminded herself constantly,（心理）“Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe （情感）he was in one ofthem and will return soon（動作）！ I have to guide him tomorr

28、ow. She felt asleep（動作）and dreamed of seeing Tom （ 動作）.Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then（時間）walkedalong the stream, hoping （心、理）to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter.She walked and walked, exhausted but full of hope. Suddenly （時間）,she spotted （動 作

29、）a huge flat rock. She managed （動作）to climb onto it and waited with patience. The moment （時間）the helicopter appeared （ 動作）again. The nearer it got （ 動作）, the more she waved （動作）the yellow blouse. To her great joy,（情感）the helicopter didn t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. T

30、om jumped off the helicopter and rushed （ 動作）towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly （情感）and burst into tears （ 情感）.參考范文二：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the back door of the car. It was locked. He then ran around to the passenger door, but it

31、 was locked, as well, so he began to climb through the open window. When spotting this ,Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the door behind him. Paul looked out the back window and saw the wolf standing over Mac s bike as if it were a kill. Shortly after, the an

32、imal ran off.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived .Mac emerged from the car andhugged his friends . I thought I was going to die, Mac cried to them. Mac retrieved （取回） his bicycle, and the three men resumed（ 繼續(xù)） their road trip, agreeing to keep in one another s sight line. A few mile

33、s down the road, Mac pulled over and burst into tears . The rest of the trip was amazing, but I had to let the former emotion out.” 參考范文三：Para1: The next day we rememberedthe brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we must make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I loo

34、ked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea.To our great disappointment, he agreed. Wespent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and set up our tent before the night fell. It was the first time that I had thought momcould be wise as I admiring our stunning tent. Oh, I forgot the pillow

35、s! ” what a misconception. Despite the ache of my neck, we had some great nights.Para1: Wedrove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The bright blue sky, the limitless green grass, the group of sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept

36、 me spellbound. Not only did we see the picturesque scenery, we also managed to consider mom s scandals as a kind of fun. I really love my Mum.To our relief, we arrived at grandparents place and went back to our homewith all of four people. It was so fortunate to see my friends again. 范文四：Paragraph

37、1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of myhorse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind

38、, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.Paragraph 2Wehad no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Muchto our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorter when I stayed together