英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)課

1、初中英語書面表達初中英語書面表達寫作技巧訓(xùn)練寫作技巧訓(xùn)練中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中考作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（第一檔（11-12分）分）信息完整，表達流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。信息完整，表達流暢，無語言錯誤或基本無語言錯誤。第二檔（第二檔（9-10分）分）信息基本完整，表達較流暢，有少量語言錯誤，但不影響意思表信息基本完整，表達較流暢，有少量語言錯誤，但不影響意思表達。達。第三檔（第三檔（7-9分）分）能傳達部分信息，表達不夠流暢，語言錯誤較多，但句子基本可讀。能傳達部分信息，表達不夠流暢，語言錯誤較多，但句子基本可讀。 第四檔（第四檔（4-6分）分）只能傳達少量信息，表達不流暢，語言錯誤多，只有少

2、量句子可讀。只能傳達少量信息，表達不流暢，語言錯誤多，只有少量句子可讀。 第五檔（第五檔（1-3分）分）只能傳達個別信息，表達不清楚，只有個別句子可讀。只能傳達個別信息，表達不清楚，只有個別句子可讀。 認真認真審題審題，找出文章要表達的中心。找出文章要表達的中心。寫作第一步健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一際健康組織對此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的

3、信息，請為國際所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的健康組織寫一篇完整的調(diào)查報告調(diào)查報告, ,并提倡大家并提倡大家進行假日休閑。進行假日休閑。審審travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 用簡單的句子或短語用簡單的句子或短語列出列出文章要文章要點。點。列列寫作第二步 根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點子列出文章的要點 如何度假如何度假 調(diào)查報告調(diào)查報告 倡議假日休閑倡議假日休閑stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel A lot of people

4、 travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列加加 加首尾加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。 可以采取總分總結(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡潔，漂亮。寫作第三步：A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.How do peo

5、ple spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body連連 恰當(dāng)運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個部分銜接自然。寫作第四步：1.表示并列或遞進表示并列或遞進: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示選擇表示選擇: or, eithero

6、r;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折表示轉(zhuǎn)折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示條件表示條件: if , unless6.表示對比表示對比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解釋表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示順序表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of

7、 all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示強調(diào)表示強調(diào): also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示結(jié)論表示結(jié)論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to

8、 it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連連 _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like

9、 doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.美美 選好詞句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫作第五步： We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our survey report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get

10、 away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.美

11、美 Express in different waysOur parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got more excited. T

12、he more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.書面表達寫作技巧書面表達寫作技巧列列加加連連美美 以以 “I have a dream”為題寫一篇不少于為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，個詞的短文， 標(biāo)點符號不占格。標(biāo)點符號不占格。 Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型以下句型供參考）供參考） My dream is to be/to do/to go I enjoy /like/

13、prefer To make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true I have a dreamHave you ever watched a bike racing? The riders are cool! Yeah, its my dream to be a professional bike rider.I fell in love with bike rider for the first time I rode. Since that, Ive been riding for 5 years. Some people think

14、its dangerous, I dont think so. During a bike riding, you will be in a high speed and feel the wind rushes quickly. Exciting? That is!To make my dream come true, Ill practice more after middle school. Also, Ill watch more bike racing to learn from the riders. I hope my dream will come true, if so, I

15、 can enjoy the life I like best.Passage One I have a dreamAnybody has a dream. But different people have different dreams.Most people always dream to be popular or rich. But my dream is very special, I just want to be a bird. Why I have such a dream? Just because I admire theyre free, they can do ev

16、erything they want.When theyre flying in the sky, they look beautiful, even theyre the most beautiful animals. I really want to enjoy the feeling of flying in the sky. However, I know it wont be achieved any more.Its just a dream, in my heart.Passage TwoPassage Three I have a dreamMy dream is to be

17、a basketball player. I like it because I think it very interesting. It can make me become very happy and healthy. To make me dream come true. I need try to do it. And I need take some time to do it. I need practice every day. If my dream come true, I will more try to do it. 自教育部提倡初中生每天長跑自教育部提倡初中生每天長跑1500米后，校園里課間可以看到很多米后，校園里課間可以看到很多學(xué)生跑步的身影。對于這樣的倡議，你在學(xué)校做了一個調(diào)查，有些學(xué)學(xué)生跑步的身影。對于這樣的倡議，你在學(xué)校做了一個調(diào)查，有些學(xué)生覺的好，有些學(xué)生覺的不好。請你把調(diào)查的結(jié)果用英語寫成短文，生覺的好，有些學(xué)生覺的不好。