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1、19:08:10顧家2017/7/919:08:10lifestyle 19:12:58【小班長】172Ada08032017/7/919:12:58顧家2017/7/919:13:38顧家2017/7/919:14:42city on 顧家1males7.5millionfemales 7.5milli2017/7/919:14:49city2males.females.19:16:51顧家2017/7/919:16:51city1populationbirthrate.unemploymentrate.19:19:43顧家2017/7/919:19:43【小班長】172Ada0803201

2、7/7/919:21:1019:22:04顧家2017/7/919:22:04Thetablecomparesthe populationofthreedifferentcities forthintwodifferentyears, eyear1990.顧家2017/7/919:22:34withtheprojectionsprovided19:24:45顧家2017/7/919:24:4512Number,proportion,percentage,amountofdifference,figure.Increase,growth,decline,gap,trend,pattern345t

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4、lation Shanghai. 2017/7/9ofSanPaulowasbiggerthanthatofJakarta19:29:33San顧家Paulohad 2017/7/9thelargest 19:30:29populationin1990SanPaulohadthelargestpopulation,withthe figurerisingfrom15millionto 18millionin2000.顧家2017/7/919:30:36San on,Paulohadthelargest andthefigurealsopopulationin1990,with15milli 2

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6、erosepopulationin1990(9milliononly)significantlyto14million in2000.顧家2017/7/919:41:19Similarly,the o14millionpopulationofJarkatasaw wasamarkedincreasetin2000, althoughitsmallerthanthefiguresforothercities 19:46:10in1990.顧家2017/7/919:46:10.was顧家Itisworthnotingthattheactualpopulationin2000higherthanth

7、eprojected 2017/7/919:46:20figure(11.5million).OnedifferencebetweenJarkataandSanPauloisthatthepopulationgrowthofJarkata th19:53:01顧家2017/7/919:53:01wasmuchbiggerthanexpected,wiAdifferenttrend fallingslightly assurprising,as ntheyear2000.was to itseen 12.5inShanghai,withitspopulationmillion.Thisdemog

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9、eSan growthintheir rink.ThefiguresPauloandJarkataexperienced aremarkablepopulations,Shanghaisawitswerepopulationshfor thesecitiesin2000alllowerthanprojectedlevels. 20:03:08顧家2017/7/920:03:08Thetablecomparesthe populationofthreedifferentcitiesintwodifferentyears, eyear1990.withtheprojections provided

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13、consistentwithprojections.顧家2017/7/920:06:57Thetablecomparesthe populationofthreedifferentcitiesintwodifferentyears, eyear1990.withtheprojections providedforthSanPaulohadthelargestpopulationinbothyears,withth The theefigurerisingfrom15millionto butitwas18million in2000.growthwasremarkable,6millionle

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16、920:08:1520:10:13顧家2017/7/920:10:13（1主語（subject） 相同還是不同，高低)2連接(linking,coherence)3對比(趨勢4數(shù)字特點 5幅度6詞性）【小班長】172Ada08032017/7/920:11:43顧家2017/7/920:12:0520:17:23顧家2017/7/920:17:23第一要點：在 teachingquality 上，business 滿意度最高，其次是 computing，其次是 math第二要點：在 tutorsupport 上，business 滿意度最高，其次是 maths，其次是 computing第三要

17、點：在 coursecontent 上，大家差不多第四要點：在 pre-courseinformation 上，差不多第五要點：在 resources 上，差不多20:25:31顧家2017/7/920:25:31Theproportion tutorsupport 顧家2017/7/9ofbusiness was96%.20:27:09studentswhoweresatisfiedwith96%ofbusinessstudents 20:28:39顧家2017/7/920:28:39ratedtutorsupportasverygood.Studentswhoratedtutorsuppo

18、rtasverygoodaccountedfor96%ofbusinessstudents.20:41:01顧家2017/7/920:41:0120:45:25顧家2017/7/920:45:2520:47:45顧家2017/7/920:47:45Thetablegivesinformationaboutstudentsopinionsondifferentaspectsofcourses 012.theyattendedinauniversityin2顧家2017/7/920:48:20Theatableshowsstudents attitudestowardsthreecoursesof

19、universityinasurveyconductedin2012.20:52:22顧家2017/7/920:52:2293%ofbusinessgood,while88% ndonly64%ofstudentsdescribedteachingqualityasvery coursesaofstudents whoattendedcomputingstudentswhostudiedmathsgave thisrating.顧家2017/7/920:54:22（1主語（subject） 2連接(linking,coherence)3對比(趨勢相同還是不同，高低)4數(shù)字特點 5幅度6詞性）顧

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24、pytutorsupport,slightlyhigherthanthefiguresforswhostudiedother subjects(85%forcomputing math).and90顧家2017/7/921:08:39（1主語（subject） 2連接(linking,coherence)3對比(趨勢相同還是不同，高低)4數(shù)字特點 5幅度6詞性）顧家2017/7/921:09:5193%ofbusinessgood,while88%studentsdescribedteachingqualityasvery coursesaofstudents whoattendedcompu

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26、hlysimilar,rangingfrom69%to74%.顧家北Bycomparison,thelevels courseinformation,withofsatisfactionwere thantwothirds positiveremarks.lowerinpre- ofstudentsinlessthesethreecourses giving顧家2017/7/921:23:23（1主語（subject） 2連接(linking,coherence)3對比(趨勢相同還是不同，高低) 21:27:404數(shù)字特點 5幅度6詞性）顧家2017/7/921:27:40Itisnotice

27、ablethatresourceswerethe studentsworstpartofeverycourse,andlessthan60%ofconsidered resourcestobe Overall,partsgood.teachingqualityandtutorssupportwerethebestofbusinesscoursesandcomputingcourses,whilethestudents supportterthanwhoattendedmathclasseswerehappy.Businesscourseswithtutorsperformedbetandcoursecontentcomputingandmathinallstandardsexceptpre-courseinformation.顧家2017/7/921:35:05Theatableshowsstudents attitudes universityinasurvey conductedtowardsthree in2012.coursesofAvastmajorityofbusinessstudents(93%)describedteachingqualityasverygood,while88%ofstudent