考研英語寫作——何凱文版

1、考研英語寫作三段論：第一段-描述圖畫或圖表 第二段-解釋寓意 第三段-給出評(píng)論第一段：第一句1、As is shown above , 描述圖畫（倒裝）.There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper.報(bào)紙上有一張圖畫引起人們廣泛的關(guān)注。描述圖畫注意： 第一步：尋找圖畫的中心事物，并確定中心事物的位置。 第二部：描述中心事物，可以從動(dòng)作和狀態(tài)兩個(gè)方面來描述。 第三部; 尋找中心事物周圍相關(guān)的事物，并進(jìn)行簡單的描述。模式： 在圖畫中央有-(倒裝)，它-（主謂一致、現(xiàn)在分詞、非限定性定語從句），周圍有-（獨(dú)立主

2、格作狀語）第二句-總結(jié) The picture , at the fist glimpse , seems to be simple , but only a penetrating sight can pierce through its superficial meaning.這幅畫初看好像很簡單，但是只有具有洞察力的人才能看穿其膚淺的含義。 The authors real purpose is not the fact itself , but to lead us to find what hides behind the ice burg.作者的真實(shí)目的不是圖畫本身，而是要引導(dǎo)我們

3、去探求在圖畫背后究竟隱藏著什么。第二段第一句-觀點(diǎn)的提出 (1) The picture tells us that nothing can be compared with the 重要主題 . In no country , other than china ,it has been said , is this phenomenon more obvious .(2) The picture does revel certain disturbing social phenomenon , that is , people tend to overlook the fact that 有

4、害主題 . ( 或 The picture does reveal that 有害主題 is not only harmful , but also damaging .) The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy owing to the reform and opening-up policy carried out , bringing some problems at the same time , with the above one being the foremost .在過去的十年間，由于改革開放政策

5、的執(zhí)行，我國的經(jīng)濟(jì)有了巨大的發(fā)展，但同時(shí)帶來了一些問題，上面的問題是最嚴(yán)重的。（或In no country other than china , it has been said m is this problem more serous . ）萬能觀點(diǎn)： 圖畫主題的重要性Nothing can be compared withis not only necessary , but also indispensable remains to be an integral part in 圖畫主題的有害性Nothing is more harmful or damaging.is not on

6、ly harmful , but also damaging.in large measure detrimental.第二句-進(jìn)一步講解人們的態(tài)度（重視/不重視） (1) The public fails to attach due attention to 有害主題 . (2) The public attach due attention to 重要主題 .give priority to優(yōu)先考慮 attach attention to對(duì)注意 emphasize the importance of 強(qiáng)調(diào)的重要性 stress the fundamental role of 強(qiáng)調(diào)的根本作用

7、第三句-對(duì)主題進(jìn)行展開 （3-4句） By doing so , 十一個(gè)角度平行展開（也可用科學(xué)論據(jù)法或舉例法）(一)、十一個(gè)萬能理由（角度）物質(zhì)回報(bào)： 主題 can provide (offer) people with not only delicious food but fashionable clothes and such benefits as comfortable dwellings and handsome automobiles. The industrious and insightful people will never fail to profits from (

8、benefit from) doing 主題.時(shí)間角度 節(jié)約時(shí)間 It can make the most of ones time , chance and technology. 主題(e.g. Learning more western culture) , occupying spare time so constructively , makes a person contented , with no time for boredom/wondering and helps them achieve a more broaden horizon. 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間As all known

9、, the days of youth should not be friend/idled away and time should be cherished , but (主題 e.g. star worship) wastes hours , lavishes days and even squanders years , which leads us to say kills an even murders youngsters prime time.效率角度 主題（e .g. Star worship/Addiction to the Internet）makes people we

10、ary of other important things , discourages him to learn more , and finally lose their interest to learn , and lead to low grades / low efficiency / underachievement . Ones energy gradually wears off and ones thought , creative thinking and exploration has been stifled by doing 主題 .方便和快捷 主題 （e.g. Wi

11、de World Web）provides people with up-to-date , concrete and accurate and vivid information . 主題 （e.g. MSN and other instant messengers）can shrink the distance between cities and even continents ; smooth the communication between residents and rid of the barrier between people .安全角度 主題 can secure his

12、 food and shelter. 主題 can shield people from various kinds of hazards ranging from injury , robbery , assaults to traffic accidents .身心健康 （主題）can relieve not only pressure but also anxiety and such problems , stress , isolation and solitude . By doing (主題) people stay healthy , and therefore prevent

13、 heart diseases , hypertension , diabetes or fattiness . (主題) can also have added benefit of increasing ones knowledge and giving us a new perspective of the outside world .生活?yuàn)蕵?Its a major means of entertainment that relieves ones pressure , boredom , stress and burden .表“受益”的詞組：Broaden ones mind E

14、nrich ones experienceEnhance vigor and put more enthusiasm to ones work It is well received as an instructive mode of entertainment that provides people with not only a bulk of information , but a source of imagination as well. It provides a variety of leisure activities that enhance your energy , e

15、nthusiasm and charm . It adds a special means of entertainment to you seemingly tedious , routine and monotonous life .有助成長和成功（自己和他人） People can obtain financial aids , material support , mental comfort , or spiritual back from your support . They can draw on experience from you . Through your speec

16、hes , instructions or assistance , they can broaden their minds , increase their income . Through your encouragement , they cultivate the spirit of competition , participation and cooperation and finally find their own ways to fulfill their pursuit of happiness . Though your assistance , not only ca

17、n they accumulate wealth , but will also establish their career , fit into society , and even attain social status . People who treat others with love , sincerity , sympathy , enthusiasm , hospitality or generosity always win respect from others . It dose / doesnt necessarily cultivate talent , conf

18、idence , selfworth ,selfreliance and dignity .文化價(jià)值觀 It cannot help people treat the world with benevolence , confidence and tolerance . It can sometimes intensify conflicts and tensions between nations . It put harmonious human relationship in danger . It cannot promote mutual understanding . It can

19、 breach the friendly ties , and widen the gap between people .環(huán)境保護(hù) It means that central authority can set aside more funds to eliminate air pollution , noise pollution , reduce soil erosion or desertification , prevent the thinness of ozone layers , reduce industrial sewage , and rescue the dwindli

20、ng tropical jungles . It government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation , thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment .社會(huì)宏觀角度 It can minimize inflation , economic stagnation , economic recession , unemployment rate . It can maintain s

21、ocial order and reduce crime rate . It means that revolutionize the scientific level of a country , means of co communication and quality of life . It means that the authorities can allocate more funds to the construction and quality of infrastructure ranging from kindergartens , hospitals , medical

22、 center , museums , school libraries , trains to highways and express ways . It means that people can have equal opportunity to college education , employments , selfrealization and pursuit of material wealth .（二）、科學(xué)論據(jù)法According to a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Science （CAS）， According to

23、 a survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Social Science (CASS) , China Daily interviewed for people from four professions a surgeon , a while collar worker , a carpenter and a farmer . The survey discovers that all of them are of the idea that 主題重要或有害. （三）、舉例子 Our human history has been filled with

24、 a variety of examples of , with the following one being the foremost . 我們?nèi)祟悮v史上與這個(gè)話題相關(guān)的例子有很多，下面這個(gè)是最有說服力的。 Among all the touching facts relating to that I have hoard , noticed , and experienced , the most impressive one is 在我所聽到的、看到的、經(jīng)歷過的所有和這個(gè)話題相關(guān)的例子之中，最有說服力的是第四句 （結(jié)尾句虛擬語氣和利弊句）虛擬語氣：（1）積極的主題如果沒有，我們可能根本做不了 Were there no sth , never would we do sth .（2）消極的主題如果情況繼續(xù)下去，我們將付出更加昂貴的代價(jià)。Were the situation to continue as it is , we would pay the high price .e.g. Were the tendency to continue as it is , our future generation would not bother to think of excuse for us . 利弊句：(1)弊大于利The disadv