describe a person 2如何描述人物

1、話題寫作之二：話題寫作之二：Describing a person Short hair, straight hair, black hairLong hair,Curly hair,Blond hairHow to describe appearanceHow to describe appearanceSection A RevisonHe has short,blond hair and lots of little wrinkles on his forehead.What does he look like?How to describe build(How to describe

2、build(體格體格) and height) and heightThe man has a medium build ,and he is one head taller than the woman.Yao Min is 2.26m tall and weighs 87 kilos.1. 全面性全面性(Comprehensiveness):要點(diǎn)全面要點(diǎn)全面. 2. 正確性正確性(Accuracy):語法正確并符合英語的表達(dá)語法正確并符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣習(xí)慣。3. 多樣性多樣性(Variety):詞匯短語豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，句詞匯短語豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)多樣，句型復(fù)雜。型復(fù)雜。4. 連貫性連貫性(Logi

3、c):恰當(dāng)使用承上啟下的詞語和連接恰當(dāng)使用承上啟下的詞語和連接詞，使全文流暢連貫，渾然一體。詞，使全文流暢連貫，渾然一體。Section BSteps for Writing English Essays1、審題到位：內(nèi)容（要點(diǎn)）體裁，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、審題到位：內(nèi)容（要點(diǎn)）體裁，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)2、要點(diǎn)成句、要點(diǎn)成句:(1)正確正確符合英語語法和英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。符合英語語法和英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。(2)優(yōu)美優(yōu)美豐富的詞匯，豐富而高級(jí)的豐富的詞匯，豐富而高級(jí)的結(jié)構(gòu)句式結(jié)構(gòu)句式. 3. 聯(lián)句成文：巧用過渡語和連接詞聯(lián)句成文：巧用過渡語和連接詞.4.檢查修改檢查修改:語法語法,拼寫拼寫,字母大小寫字母大小寫,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)標(biāo)

4、點(diǎn)符號(hào).注意：注意：(1) 開頭的交代句與結(jié)尾的總結(jié)句開頭的交代句與結(jié)尾的總結(jié)句,增強(qiáng)呼應(yīng)增強(qiáng)呼應(yīng) .(2)牢記常識(shí)性套話的習(xí)慣表達(dá)牢記常識(shí)性套話的習(xí)慣表達(dá).(3)諺語，成語諺語，成語四四 個(gè)個(gè) 步步 驟驟 1.General introduction: aged 23; born into a workers family in Beijing on Oct. 23, 1985; grow up in where he received his education; _,Lu Xun, was the father of Chinese modern literature.盡量用分詞短語，使

5、文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順盡量用分詞短語，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順Lu Xun,_, was born in Zhejiang Province .概概況況:age, sex, birth-place, background魯迅魯迅, 浙江紹興人浙江紹興人, 是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)之父。是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)之父。Section CBorn in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Provincethe father of Chinese modern literature同位語結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順同位語結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡(jiǎn)潔，通順2.Appearance外表外表Medium build, fat, a bit overweig

6、ht, good-looking 我的語文老師是個(gè)溫和的女人我的語文老師是個(gè)溫和的女人,身材矮小，她長(zhǎng)著兩身材矮小，她長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼睛，帶著一副眼鏡。只大眼睛，帶著一副眼鏡。My Chinese teacher ， _， has two big eyes and wears a pair of glasses.My Chinese teacher，_, has two big eyes and wears a pair of glasses.My Chinese teacher is a gentle ,short woman _巧用同位語巧用同位語巧用定語從句巧用定語從句巧用巧用with介詞短

7、語做后置定語介詞短語做后置定語a gentle ,short womanwho is a gentle, short womanwith two big eyes and a pair of glasses.3. character 性格Absent-minded, bad-tempered, warm-hearted, patientMr Zhang,我們的物理老師我們的物理老師, 善良，而且負(fù)責(zé)又有耐心。善良，而且負(fù)責(zé)又有耐心。(一句一句多譯多譯)a. Mr Zhang,_ , is kind, responsible and patient.b. Mr Zhang,_ , is kind

8、, patient and responsible.c. Mr Zhang, our physics teacher ，is _ kind to us, _responsible and patient. d. Mr Zhang, our physics teacher, is a kind person_.our physics teacherwho is our physics teachernot onlybut alsowith great patience and responsibility4.特長(zhǎng)愛好特長(zhǎng)愛好Likes or dislikesBe delighted in doi

9、ng, be good at, long for sthlong to do在她的業(yè)余時(shí)間里她大都聽音樂讀小說在她的業(yè)余時(shí)間里她大都聽音樂讀小說.b. In her spare time she _much time _ music and _novels.a. She enjoys listening to music and reading novels a lot in her leisure time.spendslistening toreading 5. Education教育狀況教育狀況在清華大學(xué)主修自然科學(xué)，四年后畢業(yè)，在清華大學(xué)主修自然科學(xué)，四年后畢業(yè)，他繼續(xù)到海外深造學(xué)習(xí)并

10、取得博士學(xué)位。他繼續(xù)到海外深造學(xué)習(xí)并取得博士學(xué)位。_, he graduated from Qing Hua University and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies and received a doctors degree.靈活運(yùn)用多種結(jié)構(gòu)靈活運(yùn)用多種結(jié)構(gòu),如非謂語動(dòng)詞非謂語動(dòng)詞, 使使文章精煉文章精煉Majoring in nature Science 6. Health健康狀況健康狀況住了六周的院住了六周的院,現(xiàn)在她看上去很虛弱現(xiàn)在她看上去很虛弱._in hospital for six weeks, now sh

11、e looks very weak.Having been 7. 詳細(xì)特色詳細(xì)特色Something in detailHe was strict with everybody and in everything he did. One day, we were having classes whenHe was very forgetful. Once he came across an old friend of his in the street and . .Big events in his or her life time生平大事生平大事2004年8月27日，雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)男子110米

12、欄決賽上，劉翔以12秒91奪得了金牌，創(chuàng)造了亞洲人在短道項(xiàng)目上的奇跡和神話！ 多種結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力多種結(jié)構(gòu)增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力On August 27, 2004 in the Athens Olympic Games man 110-meter hurdles Liu Xiang finally won the gold medal by 12 seconds 91 ,_!On August 27, 2004 in the Athens Olympic Games man 110-meter hurdles Liu Xiang finally won the gold medal by 12 s

13、econds 91, _creating the Asian miracle and myth!which created the Asian miracle and myth 9. Evaluation(評(píng)價(jià)）評(píng)價(jià)） think highly of him and all respect him; be recognized/ considered as one of the most influential figures in human history; make great contributions to; will always be remembered as; 1）叢飛為我們

14、樹立了好榜樣，人人都高度評(píng)價(jià)并尊敬他。）叢飛為我們樹立了好榜樣，人人都高度評(píng)價(jià)并尊敬他。2）袁隆平為農(nóng)業(yè)作出了重大貢獻(xiàn)。）袁隆平為農(nóng)業(yè)作出了重大貢獻(xiàn)。 注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語、注意運(yùn)用一些動(dòng)詞、形容詞等短語、詞組詞組;適當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語適當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語Cong Fei set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .Yuan Longping has made great contributions to agriculture. Summary: 怎樣讓你的文章更有亮

15、點(diǎn)怎樣讓你的文章更有亮點(diǎn)?一一.審題得當(dāng)審題得當(dāng):不遺漏要點(diǎn)不遺漏要點(diǎn),文體文體,人稱人稱,時(shí)態(tài)正確。時(shí)態(tài)正確。二二.句式表達(dá)靈活多變句式表達(dá)靈活多變,長(zhǎng)短句兼而有之長(zhǎng)短句兼而有之,但不賣弄但不賣弄.三三.巧用非謂語動(dòng)詞，介詞短語，詞組以增強(qiáng)文章巧用非謂語動(dòng)詞，介詞短語，詞組以增強(qiáng)文章 的表現(xiàn)力。的表現(xiàn)力。四四.適當(dāng)運(yùn)用適當(dāng)運(yùn)用過渡語過渡語使句子更美，上下文更加使句子更美，上下文更加 協(xié)調(diào)連貫協(xié)調(diào)連貫。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下資料說明，使用請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下資料說明，使用5個(gè)規(guī)范句子寫一篇介紹劉個(gè)規(guī)范句子寫一篇介紹劉翔的文章，具體內(nèi)容如下：翔的文章，具體內(nèi)容如下：姓名姓名:劉翔劉翔 出生地出生地:上海上海 生日生日

16、:1983.7.13項(xiàng)目：田徑項(xiàng)目：田徑 身高：身高：188 cm 體重：體重：74 Kg 教練：孫海平教練：孫海平 2004年年8月月27日雅典日雅典奧運(yùn)會(huì)男子奧運(yùn)會(huì)男子110米欄決賽米欄決賽中以中以12秒秒91獲得冠軍，使獲得冠軍，使他成為世界矚目的焦點(diǎn)。他成為世界矚目的焦點(diǎn)。在在2008年北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的男年北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的男子子110米欄預(yù)賽中，劉翔米欄預(yù)賽中，劉翔由于腳傷，遺憾地在首輪由于腳傷，遺憾地在首輪就退出了比賽，再一次使就退出了比賽，再一次使他成為世人關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)他成為世人關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。參考詞匯：參考詞匯：雅典雅典Athens 預(yù)賽預(yù)賽 the first heat 男子男子110米欄米

17、欄 man 110-meter hurdles 田徑田徑Track and Field 退出比賽退出比賽 quit from the competition fail to start Liu Xiang, born in Shanghai on July 13, 1983, is 188 centimeters tall and weighs 84kg . / His project is Track and Field and his coach is Sun Haiping. /On August 27, 2004 in the Athens Olympic Games man 110-meter hurdles he won the gold med