中考英語作文高分攻略和猜題

1、1、老師拿到的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)寫作水平的高低和文章的好壞，分?jǐn)?shù)是最直接的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，也是考生們最關(guān)心的。但是多少考生真正透徹知道中考英語寫作的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)？什么樣的文章才是閱卷老師眼中的好文章？評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1。 整篇作文滿分20分，其中內(nèi)容8分，語言8分，結(jié)構(gòu)4分。2。 內(nèi)容貼切，句子流暢，用語準(zhǔn)確，加整體印象分1分。3。 不滿60個(gè)詞，少15個(gè)詞扣 0.5分，610個(gè)詞扣1分。4。 所有給出問題涉及的三項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，每少一項(xiàng)扣3分。5。 每個(gè)拼寫，大小寫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分；同一的拼寫錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)扣分，扣分總和不超過2分。6。 語法錯(cuò)誤每項(xiàng)扣1分，同一錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)扣分，扣分總和不超過2分。2、老師想看到的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)語言（

2、8分）： 詞固定搭配、高頻重點(diǎn)詞匯；句復(fù)雜句（各種從句）、特殊句型、正確的句子！內(nèi)容（8分）： （總、分）論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)支持句；簡潔、切合主題的記敘內(nèi)容。結(jié)構(gòu)（4分）： 語言結(jié)構(gòu)句子重點(diǎn)突出、內(nèi)容清晰；內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)論點(diǎn)、論據(jù)以及記敘之間的邏輯關(guān)系；句數(shù)控制對于相對內(nèi)容的句數(shù)掌握；亮點(diǎn)、出彩點(diǎn)排比、擬人、諺語、成語、押韻等。 五種2016中考英語作文萬能模板在初三這個(gè)寶貴的時(shí)間里，同學(xué)們一定要把英語的基礎(chǔ)搞扎實(shí)，萬丈高樓平地起，我們一定要做好鋪墊。中考英語作文是必考項(xiàng)，重要性不言而喻。它也是讓大多數(shù)學(xué)生最頭疼的事情。英文寫作是一項(xiàng)系統(tǒng)工程，提高英語寫作能力不是一蹴而就的，不僅有賴于扎實(shí)的語言基本 功，即

3、聽、說、讀、寫綜合技能，而且有賴于大量的寫作訓(xùn)練。整理了2016中考英語作文萬能模板，供大家參考。2016中考英語作文萬能模板：圖表作文框架_as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthetable(graph/picture/pie/chart)， _作文題目的議題_ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases)，significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from_

4、in _ to _ in _。 From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart， it goes without saying that _。Thereareatleasttwogoodreasons accounting for _。 Ontheonehand， _。 Ontheotherhand，_ isduetothefactthat _。Inaddition， _ isresponsiblefor _。Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow _。Butitisgenerallybelievedthatth

5、eabovementionedreasons arecommonly convincing。AsfarasIamconcerned，I hold the point of view that _。 Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded。2016中考英語作文萬能模板：說明利弊題型這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測)1。 說明事物現(xiàn)狀，2。 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)3。 你對現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法Nowadays many people p

6、refer A because it has a significant role in our daily life。 Generally， its advantages can be seen as follows。 First -(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一)。 Besides -(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二)。But every coin has two sides。 The negative aspects are also apparent。 One of the important disadvantages is that -(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))。To make matters worse，-(A的第二個(gè)缺

7、點(diǎn))。Through the above analysis， I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones。 Therefore， I would like to -(我的看法)。(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A， we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in。 Only by this way，

8、 -(對前景的預(yù)測)。)2016中考英語作文萬能模板：闡述主題題型要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述。1。 闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義。2。 分析并舉例使其更充實(shí)。中考英語作文萬能模板：解決方法題型要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑1。 問題現(xiàn)狀，2。 怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))In recent days， we have to face I problem-A， which is becoming more and more serious。 First， -(說明A的現(xiàn)狀)。Second， -(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A， we should

9、take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation。 For one thing， -(解決方法一)。 For another -(解決方法二)。 Finally， -(解決方法三)。Personally， I believe that -(我的解決方法)。 Consequently， Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -(帶來的好處)。2016中考英語作文萬能模板：現(xiàn)象說明文Recently _，what amazes us most is

10、_， it is true that_。There are many reasons explaining_。 The main reason is_。what is more_。thirdly_。As a result_。Considering all there，_。 For one thing_， for another_。In Conclusion_。中考英語作文萬能模板：說明原因型題型Currently， XX has been the order of the day 。This does demonstrate ，the theory - nothing is more valu

11、able than XX 。It is clear that ( 1 )。 If you ( 2 )， as a result ，your dreams will come true 。 On the contrary， if you (3)。Failure will be followingwith you 。It turns out that all your plan falls through 。No one can deny another fact that (4) 。You dont have tolookvery far to find out the truth ， in r

12、espect that we all know (5) 。It will exert a profound influence upon (6)。With reference to my standpoint ，I think ( 7)。1) 要求論述兩個(gè)對立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。1。有一些人認(rèn)為 2。另一些人認(rèn)為3。我的看法The topic of -(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently。 There are two sides of opinions of it。 Some people say A is heir favorite

13、。 They hold their view for the reason of-(支持A的理由一)What is more， -理由二)。 Moreover，-(理由三)。While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons。 Firstly，-(支持B的理由一)。 Secondly (besides)，-(理由二)。 Thirdly (finally)，-(理由三)。From my point of view， I think -(我的觀點(diǎn))。 The reason is that-(原因)。

14、 As a matter of fact， there are some other reasons to explain my choice。 For me， the former is surely a wise choice 。2) 給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生反對這一觀點(diǎn)Some people believe that -(觀點(diǎn)一)。 For example， they think-(舉例說明)。And it will bring them-(為他們帶來的好處)。 In my opinion， I never think this reason can be the point。 For o

15、ne thing，-(我不同意該看法的理由一)。 For another thing，-(反對的理由之二)。 Form all what I have said， I agree to the thought that-(我對文章所討論主題的看法)。2016年中考英語得滿分作文四大妙招目前這時(shí)間，有的同學(xué)開始焦慮：距離中考越來越近，那么如何才可以在這段時(shí)間內(nèi)提高自己的寫作水平呢？其實(shí)，中考英語寫作是很容易提高的。作者總結(jié)了以下寫作文時(shí)需要注意的四個(gè)方面，希望對大家有所啟發(fā)。第一，詞匯量要充足。詞匯量多少很大程度上決定作文是否能寫得下去。第二，審題要充分。我所教的學(xué)生中在寫英語作文時(shí)，普遍存在這

16、樣一個(gè)情況：看完作文題，就開始寫，想到哪寫到哪，只要把字?jǐn)?shù)湊夠了就停筆了。這樣寫出來的文章，看起來就像在記流水帳，沒有任何邏輯，雜亂無章，毫無條理，同時(shí)容易出現(xiàn)用錯(cuò)時(shí)態(tài)、用錯(cuò)格式等的情況。試想，如果你是試卷的命題人，你出作文題的時(shí)候，肯定有出這道題的獨(dú)特的道理。所以仔細(xì)審題和構(gòu)思就成了寫作的第一步。審題的重點(diǎn)放在寫作體裁、格式、字?jǐn)?shù)方面，確保第一遍審題就能保證得到基本分。同時(shí)還要文體和時(shí)態(tài)，因?yàn)椴煌奈捏w要求的寫作格式也是不同的，時(shí)態(tài)的要求也非常重要。第三，提綱要詳細(xì)。審?fù)觐}后一定要列提綱。很多學(xué)生認(rèn)為，中考英語作文譯成中文，最多是小學(xué)二年級的語文作文水平，所以根本沒有必要列提綱。其實(shí)，這種想

17、法是非常錯(cuò)誤的，因?yàn)樘峋V不僅能使文章的結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，還有很重要的一點(diǎn)：防止漏掉作文內(nèi)容。因?yàn)橹锌加⒄Z作文有一個(gè)很重要的要求：要點(diǎn)要全。如果你漏掉了需要寫的內(nèi)容，即使文章寫得再優(yōu)美，用詞再準(zhǔn)確，也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿，然后修改。這樣可以保證錯(cuò)誤降低至最少或者沒有錯(cuò)誤，同時(shí)也能保持卷面整潔。第四，文化差異要注意我們要時(shí)刻牢記一點(diǎn)，中英文表達(dá)方式有很大的差異，所以體現(xiàn)在作文表達(dá)上也常常會出現(xiàn)生硬的中國式作文表達(dá)，降低了我們的作文質(zhì)量。所以注重中英語言差異，并努力找到兩者之間的表達(dá)方式上的共通點(diǎn)，并且有意識的運(yùn)用就能避免類似的問題。第五，細(xì)節(jié)錯(cuò)誤要摒棄。很多孩子在寫作文時(shí)常常感覺寫得非常好，用上了

18、幾個(gè)高級句型或者不錯(cuò)的詞匯短語，以為可以得高分，但最終結(jié)果出來后卻與預(yù)想差距很大。主要的原因是很多細(xì)節(jié)沒有注意。比如第三人稱單數(shù)，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)，大小寫，甚至標(biāo)點(diǎn)、書寫、段落安排等，這些細(xì)節(jié)問題也很重要。最后：背誦閱讀優(yōu)秀的中學(xué)生的作文集寫作很容易在短時(shí)間內(nèi)有大的飛躍，要做的就是積累一些經(jīng)典的句型、地道的表達(dá)方式?？梢员痴b閱讀優(yōu)秀的中學(xué)生的作文集，把精彩的段落和句子抄下來并仿寫，最后整理出幾十個(gè)最常用、最精彩的表達(dá)法，寫作文時(shí)有意識地想一想，總能用上幾個(gè)。做好以上幾個(gè)方面，中考英語寫作是很容易提高的！2016中考英語作文預(yù)測：Make Track for a StarAt present mor

19、e and more students chase stars,especially many middle school students.When it comes the problem of star-worshipping,people hold the different ideas. Some people agreewith star-worshipping. There are many reasons.Firstly, it's fashionable for students to discuss stars'things among their clas

20、smates. Secondly, they can realize more culture. Thirdly, they can study stars'advantages and achieve our own aim extremely hard. However, others are against the idea above.They think that star-worshipping costs a lot of money and time. They blindly worship easily and lose direction. They coda i

21、mitate stars and easily get bad habit. Even, they waste school work.In my opinion, star-worshipping is a bad thing. Tow reasons can explain my idea. On the onehand, we spend a lot of afford to understand the stars' entertainment news. On the otherhand. It affects our study. After all, it's v

22、ery important for us to have our own career. In a word,we must have a rational way to worship star .1.沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲 題目：李華沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎么幫他呢?請用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇不少于80字的短文。字跡工整，語言流暢。 提示詞：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in 范文 Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell beh

23、ind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think its very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, espe

24、cially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do

25、it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 2.怎樣學(xué)好英語 世界在發(fā)展，文化在交融，英語已經(jīng)成為人們溝通的橋梁。怎樣學(xué)好英語是我們一直在探索的問題。幾年的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷你一定積累了許多成功的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，請從聽、說、讀、寫四方面談?wù)勀愕?/p>

26、建議。 要求：1. 詞數(shù)：80100詞(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)) 2. 字跡工整，語言流暢，表達(dá)正確，邏輯清晰。 范文 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Seco

27、nd, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes youll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. Its good for us. At last, we shoul

28、d recite some good passages and keep diaries. In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well. 3.如何減壓讓生活更美好 許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會使人產(chǎn)生壓力,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題,你們班特意開展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"為主題的英語演講比賽,請你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享,內(nèi)容包括:

29、(1) 同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么; (2) 我的壓力是什么; (3) 我是如何成功緩解我的壓力的。 注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)80100。 范文 Less Pressure, Better Life Hello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with their classmates, while others may

30、 worry about their exams. Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother a

31、greed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Thats all. Thank you!4.學(xué)做好人好事 今年是學(xué)習(xí)雷鋒五十周年紀(jì)念日，雷鋒同志說過：“我要把有限的生命，投入到無限的為人民服務(wù)之中去。” 請寫一篇意思連貫，符合邏輯，不少于80字的作文。 在作文中，簡單表述你對雷鋒的崇敬之情，為什么向雷鋒叔叔學(xué)習(xí)以及你在日常生活中是如何幫助他人的。 范文 Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help

32、 to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character. Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “l(fā)earn fro

33、m Leifeng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict. To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I

34、would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them. I strongly propose that we shall see a better world if each of us treat Leifeng as our model and copy his spirit. 5.怎樣保持健康的生活習(xí)慣 健康的生活習(xí)慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認(rèn)為健康的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的呢?請根據(jù)下面的信息提示,寫一篇短文,首句已給出。 信息提示：健康飲食;早睡早起,不熬夜

35、;參加運(yùn)動,強(qiáng)身健體。 要求:根據(jù)信息提示,把握要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不逐字翻譯。字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右。 范文 I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds

36、of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we dont feel well, we should

37、go to see the doctor at once. 6.畢業(yè)感想 初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了,三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想(請不要寫出真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱以及真實(shí)姓名)。 提示詞語: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry 范文 How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school

38、 in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldnt do well in it and almost gave it

39、up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, Ive become interested in English and Im good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. Ive learned a lot from her. I wi

40、ll try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others. 9.幸福 幸福是什么?幸福是父母為你營造的溫馨的家，幸福是老師望向你的贊許的目光，幸福是孤獨(dú)時(shí)朋友送來的一杯奶茶，幸福是 請以My happiness為話題，寫一件曾經(jīng)發(fā)生過的令你感到幸福的事情。 要求：條理清晰，語言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確, 字跡工整，80-100詞。 范文 Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around y

41、ou if you put your heart into it. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesnt matter, my child. Remember well be always beside you when you nee

42、d help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents love. I want to be a good child for my parents.10.感恩 對父母心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o予我生命，讓我健康成長;對老師心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我教誨，讓我拋卻愚昧;對朋友心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄?/p>

43、給了我友愛;對社會心存感恩，因?yàn)樯鐣o了我智慧和力量。自從國家實(shí)施義務(wù)教育以來，書本免費(fèi)，食宿免費(fèi)，而且還有貧困助學(xué)金等。面對這些，我們應(yīng)該心存感恩，感謝祖國對我們的厚望和期盼。讓我們永遠(yuǎn)記?。焊兄x父母、感謝老師、感謝朋友、感謝全社會!請以“感恩”為話題寫一篇80100字的作文。 范文 What should we thank? The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping wi

44、th us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for. The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the

45、human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life! The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us. The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us

46、 no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life. The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food. Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man.13.愛好 范文 My Hobby I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3.

47、 Though I am occupied with my study, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet. One of my favorite hobbies is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time, but also, more importan

48、t, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xun, I come back to the old time of China. 14.興趣 范文 My best subject English is one

49、 of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact

50、, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. 八、校園安全篇 15.校園安全 建設(shè)平安校園是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任與義務(wù)。作為一名學(xué)生，我們更

51、應(yīng)該珍惜自己的生命，更應(yīng)該注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并擔(dān)任校學(xué)生會主席，請你就安全問題，向全校學(xué)生發(fā)出倡議，寫一封安全倡議書。 內(nèi)容提示：(1)不帶管制刀具到學(xué)校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上學(xué)放學(xué)的途中應(yīng)該注意安全;(5)遇緊急情況，立即報(bào)告警察或老師。 參考詞匯：管制刀具：restricted knives or things;洗澡：have a bath;打架：fight;緊急情況：emergency;交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。 寫作要求：(1)用詞恰當(dāng)，要點(diǎn)全面，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。(2)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右，

52、開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)嚴(yán)禁出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息。 范文 Dear students, As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustnt bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in

53、 rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police

54、or our teachers. In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace. Yours, Li Hua 16.飲食安全 假如你是一所國際學(xué)校校辦英文雜志的學(xué)生編輯.你看了下面這封信后，也想寫一篇關(guān)于該信的讀后感，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：你對此事件的看法;解釋你的理由并提出你的建議;向受害者表達(dá)盡快康復(fù)的祝愿. 范文 Today, I received the reader's letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking, I think

55、 we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. What's more, some businessmen shouldn't be only interested in making money. They must care about people's health. We'd better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health. Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon. 1