【二輪專題練】五改錯專項選自最新時材

1、【二輪專題練】（五）改錯專項假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注忌：1 .每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。AHowdoesthediseasepresent?Well,fromwhatisknownsofar,therecanbethenumberofsymptomsrangefrom

2、mildtosevere.Therecanbefeverandrespiratorysymptomssuchascoughandshortofbreath.Inmoreseverecase,there'sbeenpneumonJOddneyfailure（腎衰竭）,anddeath.Themortalityrate（死亡率）wasnotknownyet.Howcanwetellifsomeoneisinfectedornot?Theinfectioncanbediagnosed（診斷）byatestcallingPCRorPolymeraseChainReaction（聚合酶鏈反應(yīng)）.

3、Thistestidentifiesthevirusbasingonitsgeneticfingerprint.Thereiscurrentnospecificmedicationforthevirusandtreatmentissupportivecare.There'novaccine（疫苗）toprotectthevirus.Treatmentandvaccinesareindevelopment.BStickingtoavegandietmightsounddifficult,especialwithmanypopulardishescontainingmeatorothera

4、nimalproducts.Yetinrecentyears,veganismhasbecomeoneofthefastest-growinglifestyletrendintheworld.AccordingtoHuffPost,morethan3millionpeopleintheUnitedStatesarevegans.IntheUK,about542,000peoplechooseveganismoverthepastdecade.Whatisdrivingthisgrowthinveganism?Onereasonmaybethatpeoplewanttoprotecttheenv

5、ironment.Producemeatanddairyproductsisknowntobestressfulfortheenvironment.Accordingtoa2013studybytheUNFoodandAgricultureOrganization,globalmeatmanufacturingcausesabout18percentoftheworld'greenhousegasemissions.Thisfigureishighthanalltheworld'csars,trainsandplanescombined.AccordingtoBBCNews,a

6、notherreasoniswhymanyoftoday'syoungpeoplebelieveit'swrongtokillanimalsforfood.Formanypeople,veganismsimplymeanseatingnomeat,cheeseoreggs,andgoinganimal-freealsoappliestofashionandmanufacturing.Forexample,leatherisusedtomakeshoesandclothing.Everyyearmorethanabillionanimals,fromcowstosnakes,ki

7、lledtomakeleatherproductsfromtheirskins.Now,manybrandsarelookingothermaterials.So,ifyou'reinterestedinprotectinganimalsandtosavingtheenvironment,youmightwanttogiveveganismatry.CWhenIwasyoung,Ididn'tknowwhatfriendship.Whetayedwithmyfriends,awarmfeelingcameoutofthebottomfrommyheart.NowIhavegro

8、wnupandgotmanyfriend.AndIhavebeentastedthepleasantfeelingoffriendship.WhenIamhappy,theyarealsohappyandsharedthehappinesswithme.WhenImakeprogress,theywillbeveryexciting.Instead,whenI'minadficultsituation,theywillofferhelptome.Sofriendshipisneveranone-wayticket.Ifwewanttogetthem,wemusttreatothersw

9、ellatfirst.Weshouldalwaysbereadytohelpothers,especiallythattheyareindifficultsituations.DIcan'tswbecauseIhaveastrongfearofwater.Lookbackmychildhoodexperiences,Ithinkthatthreereasonsmightexplainthefear.ThefirstreasonisthatIwasnotallowtogonearthewaterwhenIwasachild,formymotherhadaunreasonablefearo

10、fit.So,evenasachildthatIwastaughttoseethewaterassomethingdanger.Second,myeyesbecamebadwhenIwasfive.IfItookoffmyglassinthewater,Icouldn'tseeanything,orthisincreasedmyfear.TheworstpartofmyexperienceisthatasachildIsawaneighbordrowning.AfterthenIhavebeenmorefrightened.EGetagoodeducationismoreimporta

11、nttodaythaneverbefore.InCanadamostlychildrenattendpublicschools.Publicschoolsaremainlyfoundbygovernmentsthroughtaxincome.StudentsinCanadataughtinEnglishandinFrench.TherestofCanadianchildrenattendprivateschools,thataresupportedmainlybyfeespayingbyparents.Inlaw,thechildrenmustattendtheschoolfrom5to16.

12、ThereisseveraldifferentlevelsintheCanadianeducationsystem.ThefirstwascalledElementarySchools,whichincludekindergartensthroughgrade7or8.AfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,ItookpartatacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIcanspeakGermanwellinGermany,Ithoughtthatitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlan

13、guage.Inthefirstclass,theteacheraskedustodoapronunciationexercise,inwhichhewouldsayonewordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhat."Ifinditgreatfuns.It'sthefirsttimeI'AmehcardspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent,“heexp

14、lainedit.DearLinda,Iamverysorrytohearthatyouarebadillinhospital.Areyougettingbetternow?Pleasedon'tworryaboutmyillness.Allyoishoulddonowistohavegoodrestandfollowthedoctordvscas.Atpresent,wearelearningsomenewlessons.Theyaren'tverydifficult,butyoudon'tneedtoworraboutyourstudy.Whenyougotback

15、toschool,weareallwillinglytohelpyouwiththosemissinglessonsattheweekend.Youwillnotmissonthefinalexam.Ourheadteacher,togetherwithourclass,aregoingtothehospitaltoseeingyounextWednesday.Ihopeyouwillrecoversoon.Bestregards.Yours,LiHuaIliveinatypicalChinesefamilyoffourgenerationslivedtogetherundersameroof

16、.Everyonehasfunswitheachotherhere.Everynight,wewillhavedinnertogether,talkingorlaughingaroundthedinnertablesothatalltheworriesofthedaywillbesweptaway.Atweekends,DadwilltakeGrandpa,thatlikesoutdooractivitiesalot,tothecountrysidetofish.MomandGrandmawillcookdeliciousfoodforourselves.Whentheweatherisfin

17、e,Iwillpushmy95-year-oldgreatgrandmotherinawheelchairtosunbatheintheyard.MyfamilyissuchharmoniousthatIhavebeengrownupintoapersonwithloveandresponsibility.IwilldefiniteteachwhatIhadalreadylearnedtomyfuturechildren.參考答案A1 .第一段第2句：the改為a2 .第一段第2句：range改為ranging3 .第一段第3句：short改為shortness4 .第一段第4句：case改為

18、cases5 .第一段第5句：was改為is6 .第二段第1句：if改為whether7 .第二段第2句：calling改為called8 .第二段第3句：basing改為based9 .第二段第4句：current改為currently10 .第二段第5句：protect后面加againstB1 .第一段第1句：especial改為especially2 .第一段第2句：trend改為trends3 .第一段第4句：choose改為havechosen4 .第二段第3句：Produce改為Producing5 .第二段第5句：high改為higher6 .第二段第6句：why改為that7

19、.第三段第1句：第一個and改為but8 .第三段第3句：killed改為arekilled9 .第三段第4句：在arelooking后增添for10 .第三段第5句：刪掉tosavingtheenvironment中的toC1 .第一句:在friendship后加was2 .第二句：from改為of3 .第三句：friend改為friends4 .第四句：刪去been5 .第五句：shared改為share6 .第六句：exciting改為excited7 .第八句：So改為But8 .第八句：an改為a9 .第九句：them改為it10 .第十句：that改為whenD1 .第二句：Loo

20、k改為Looking2 .第二句：my前面加on/upon3 .第三句：allow改為allowed4 .第三句：第二個a改為an5 .第四句：刪掉that6 .第四句：danger改為dangerous7 .第六句：glass改為glasses8 .第六句：or改為so9 .第七句：drowning改為drowned10 .第八句：After改為SinceE1 .第一句：Get改為Getting2 .第二句：mostly改為most3 .第三句：found改為founded4 .第四句：在taught之前加are5 .第五句：that改為which6 .第五句：paying改為paid7 .第六句：In改