新高考英語概要寫作范文

1、上海高考英語備考訓練上海高考英語題型訓練：概要寫作概要寫作是在正確理解文章的基礎(chǔ)上，在不改變原文的中心思想，體裁和結(jié)構(gòu)的前提下，省去細節(jié)，用簡明、精煉的語句高度濃縮地概況文章的主要內(nèi)容和觀點。注意只需要用不同語言復述原文主旨，不能加入自己的觀點。I helped an old man in rags who lost his way,Main point: I helped an old man. Details: in rags, who lost his way.概要寫作是閱讀理解和書面表達的溝通橋梁，考查的是學生在實現(xiàn)自由的思維表達之前，對他人的信息在理解的基礎(chǔ)上進行概括表達的能力。選材

2、上，提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，題材不限，一般以議論文說明文或者記敘文為主，要求考生寫出一篇60詞以內(nèi)的內(nèi)容概要。完成一篇概要寫作，需要經(jīng)過下列步驟。1,讀原文，找出全文中心思想和段落主題句。注重全文第一句，每段首尾句。碰上細節(jié)句，比如具體數(shù)字、舉例等可以跳過不讀。2,組織語言，對主題句和中心思想同義替換表達。在轉(zhuǎn)換改寫中，注重語言表 達的準確性、高級性，不照抄原文句子，同時注意篇幅的比例安排，用較多 的文字表達重要的內(nèi)容。轉(zhuǎn)換方式：(1) 常用詞替換:比如 be able to 替代 can, have the ability； a great many 替換 a lot of; convi

3、ncing 替換 persuasive 等。(2) 改變詞性， 比如 successful變成 succeed in doing; happy變成 happily; adapt 替換 adaptive, reproduction 替換 reproduce、reproductive 等。(3)改變句式，比如把原文兩個句子變成主從復合句，把原文的從句變成非謂語動詞，普通句改成it is句式等。3,找出恰當?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，連貫全文。如：first, what' s more, last but not least等, 關(guān)注各段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系，關(guān)注一切有轉(zhuǎn)承關(guān)系的連接詞，如 however, be

4、sides, in addition, therefore, instead 等。4,大略估算一下字數(shù)，如果不足50個字，嘗試加上形容詞、副詞如：extraordinary, amazing, significantly, greatly等，或者用定語從句，狀語從句、非謂語動詞加 上一點文中的細節(jié)擴張原來的短句。5,檢查：語法錯誤如單復數(shù)、主謂一致、時態(tài)、主干和從句主謂齊全、非謂語 動詞準確。杜絕低級錯誤。為寫好概要寫作，在平時的閱讀中，應(yīng)注意：1,培養(yǎng)抓中心旬、概況中心思想的習慣。2,掌握詞性和句型轉(zhuǎn)換方法，學會用不同的語法結(jié)構(gòu)表達同一個主題3,積累同義替換詞和連接詞。6 / 6Summar

5、y Writing Direction: Read the following passage. Sammarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Unit 1,A remarkable variety of insects live in this planet. More species of insects exist than all other animal species togeth

6、er. Insects have survived on earth for more than 300 million years, and may possess the ability to survive for millions more. Insects can be found almost everywhere - on the highest mountains and on the bottom of rushing streams, in the cold South Pole and in bubbling hot springs. They dig through t

7、he ground, jump and sing in the trees, and run and dance in the air. They come in many different colors and various shapes.There are many reasons why insects are so successful at surviving. Their amazing ability to adapt permits them to live in extreme ranges of temperatures and environments. The on

8、e place they have not yet been found to any major extent is in the open oceans. Insects can survive on a wide range of natural and artificial foods paint, pepper, glue, books, grain, cotton, other insects, plants and animals Because they are small they can hide in tiny spaces.Also, insects have an e

9、normous reproductive capacity: An African ant queen can lay as many as 43,000 eggs a day.Another reason for their success is the strategy of protective color. An insect may be right before our eyes, but nearly invisible because it is cleverly disguised( 裝)like a green leaf, lump of brown soil, gray

10、lichen 宜苔),a seed or some other natural object Some insects use bright, bold colors to send warning signals that they taste bad, sting or are poison. Others have wing patterns that look like the eyes of a huge predator, confusing their enemies. Some insects also imitate bitter-tasting insects; hungr

11、y enemies are fooled into avoiding them.參考答案：The reasons why insects succeed in surviving for a long time andexisting everywhere are as follows . First, their outstanding adaptive behaviours for survival allow them to live in very difficult / desperate conditions / in terrible situations. Moreover,

12、insects are able to reproduce themselves at an exceptionally /extraordinarily high rate. The third is that they can change colours to protect themselves from being eaten. (57 words)Unit 2,Have you ever been involved in animal rescue? This is what happened to Winter the dolphin. Winter was found off

13、the coast of Florida in December of 2005. She was just a few months old, alone, and caught in a crab trap. The ropes from the trap were wrapped tightly around her body.The fisherman who found her called for help, and the rescue team soon arrived. The ropes had cut off the blood circulation to her ta

14、il. She was badly hurt. Her rescuers didn't think she would survive. Hoping for a miracle and racing against time to save her, the rescuers transferred her to the Clearwater Marine Aquarium in Florida.The doctors managed to save Winter, but sadly, not her tail. Her tail flukes were too damaged a

15、nd had to be removed so Winter could live.The little dolphin Winter survived against all odds, but she would never be able to swim normally without a tail. Thankfully the story doesn't end here. Winter was able to swim, but not very well. Because she didn't have a tail. She moved her body in

16、 a side-to-side motion like a shark. But doctors at the aquarium were worried that unconventional movement would hurt her spine.Kevin Caroll heard Winter ' s storyought he could help. He is a specialist who designs and provides prostheses for people. If he could help people, why not help a dolph

17、in? He started working with Winter and came up with a solution for the new fluke and tail sectionKevin designed a stretchy sleeve to fit winter and protect bed yskin. Then a tail made of silicone and plastic was made to tightly fit over the sleeve. Now winter can swim like other dolphins. And she is

18、 a great inspiration to people who struggle with their own injuries.參考答案：A dolphin Winter was found trapped in ropes by a fisherman. Badlyinjured, she had to be transferred to an aquarium where doctors saved her but had to remove her damaged tail. Luckily, an expert offered his help by making an art

19、ificial tail for her. Winter is able to swim normally again, which inspires people in difficulties. (55words)Unit 3,Take Care of Your Spin虱柱)The spine stands at the center of your health, providing your body with structure and support. It also contains your spinal cord, a massive collection of nerve

20、s that sends electric signals from the rest of your body to your brain. Therefore, it ' s important to take care of it.Maintaining your good posture is one of the most important things you can do to keep your spine healthy. Proper posture means standing or sitting while keeping your spine straig

21、ht, except for its natural curves. Posture comes into play even when you' re asleep. Sleeping on your side puts less stress on your spine than most other positions. Having a comfortable bed is also very important as sleeping in a position that isn ' t comfortable can leave your back feeling

22、sore the next day.Exercise is also an important factor in the health of your spine. Staying still for too longeven if your posture is goodcan be hard on your back. Especially if you work at a desk most of the day, it' s important to get up and stretch periodically.Stretches can help the muscles

23、around your spine relax and allow bones to shift into better positions. Strength exercises with light weights or bodyweight exercises like pushups can also help by strengthening the muscles around your spine. However, don' t overdo the exercise, as repeated motions can hurt the muscles around yo

24、ur spine.Your diet also affects the health of your spine because many vitamins are necessary for bones and nerves. In particular, B vitamins help keep nerves healthy, so you may want to consider taking a supplement 卜充物).Another important factor is vitamin D, which is essential for strong bones, but

25、it' s also absorbed from sunlight,it may help to do some of those back exercises outside.Many of the actions necessary to keep your spine healthy are identical to those need to preserve your health in other ways. So protect our back, and the rest of body will benefit.參考答案 1: How can you keep you

26、r spine healthy to enjoy a better life? First, avoid poor posture and long-time motionlessness when standing, sitting or sleeping. Second, do some stretching and strengthening exercises but avoid overtraining.Finally, for healthy bones and nerves , take a supplement of vitamins if necessary and expo

27、se yourself to sunlight. (54words)參考答案 2： Central to health, your spine needs good care. First, keep a good posture, standing or sitting straight and sleeping on your side in a comfortable bed. Second, dontstay motionless for long and take proper exercises. Third, have a diet with enough vitamins fo

28、r healthy bones and nerves and expose yourself to sunlight. (55 words)Unit 4,As is known to all, many things can be measured in terms of data. Sometimes data can indeed tell the truth. With the help of data we can easily know the price of a can of Coke in the supermarket or the result of a football

29、match or the temperature of a certain day. Obviously, data can make our life easier and more comfortable. What is more important, data seem to be fairer than words or statements. If the data are true, we don ' t have to worry about beingcbhetawsdays, as lies exist in the world, data are expected

30、 to tell the truth. Therefore, many of us would rather believe data. On the other hand, if we judge things only by data from the so-called specific research, aren ' t we a little toomiaded? Many people often treat the so-called specific data unwisely just to make sure that they are making the ri

31、ght decisions. But sometimes we may find that data aren' Foeeerymphgj. howcan you tell that somebody isn ' t a good student just because he or she doesn' thigh marks in the final examination?There are many things in our life which cannot be measured by data. For example, the degree of yo

32、ur feeling happy in your life, the depth of love between you and your friends, and the faith you have in your country. We can only feel them in our hearts but can never express them in data.There is no doubt that analyzing the exact data is important to assessment of an actual event. But data should

33、 be dealt with wisely. We often get wrong data which mislead us. We should try our best to be wise thinkers. Remember, data have no feeling but we humans have. Data do not mean much to people if we do not have the abilities to analyze the data with the knowledge and confidence to judge whether they

34、are true or false.Data are data after all. Life is much more colorful than the pale data. So give the cold data a warm heart and we ' ll find that the world is far more wonderful than the pale data can describe.參考答案：People believe data because they make our life easier andcomfortable and because

35、 data seem to be fairHowever, it ' s unwise to rely too much on data. Firstly, sometimes data only tell half the truth. Secondly, not everything can be valued by data. Lastly, wrong data may prevent us from making a good judgment. (55words)Unit 5,All Must Have DegreesIn a classroom in Seoul a gr

36、oup of teenagers sit over their desks in total silence. Study begins at eight in the morning and ends at half past four in the afternoon. And some even go back home at midnight. Like thousands of South Koreans, they are preparing for the important exam, which will largely determine whether they go t

37、o agood university or not. Degrees have become useful. Seventy percent of students who graduate from the country ' s secondary schools now go straight to universities.Many more countries have seen a big rise in the share of young people with degrees, but South Korea is an extreme case. As techno

38、logical reforms require workers to do many difficult and demanding jobs that they would not have done before, there seems to be reasonable to insist that more workers receive a good education than before. And a degree is an obvious way for bright youngsters from poor families to prove their abilitie

39、s. People tend to earn more if they have degrees.Employers do not have to pay for higher education and they are increasingly able to demand degrees to screen out the least motivated or capable. A recent study by Joseph Fuller and Manjari Romaan of Harvard Business School shows that companies routine

40、ly require applicants to have degrees, even though only a minority of those already working in the role have them.The Economist ' s analysis found that between 1970 and 2015, the proportion of 256 workers aged 2564 with at least a bachelor ' s degree increased. Some of them are highly intell

41、ectually demanding jobs, such as aviation engineers. Others are non-graduate jobs such as waiting tables. Sixteen percent of waiters now have degrees, because probably in most cases they could not find jobs and live poorly. Today, having a degree is usually an entry requirement.參考答案： The reasons why

42、 the young study hard in South Korea are as follows. Firstly, the rapidly changing technology is challenging, which requires the employees have more knowledge. Secondly, with degrees, the youngsters from poor families can demonstrate their abilities. Lastly, it is difficult for people to get a work

43、and earn more money without a degree, (56words)Unit 6,To Friend or Unfriend Social networking makes it very easy to have friends-lots and lots friends. Hundreds or millions of people have joined QQ, Wechat, and other sites so that they can communicate with friends online. However, the meaning of the

44、 word “friend " seems changed. In the past, a friend was someone you had a close personal relationship with. Now, anyone in the world can be your friend online!Some people have thousands of cyber friends, but what do you do if you don' t warto have so many friends?Easy! You can dump an unwa

45、nted friend with just one click of your mouse. in recent years, it has become so common to get rid of friends in this way that there is a new word to describe it -to “unfriend ” . The new Oxford American Dictionary named it word of the Year in 2009 and defined it like this:"to remove someone as

46、 afrom social networking sitet why would you want to do such a thing asunfriending someone?The most common reason for unfriending someone is to eliminate annoying people from your social life. For example, some friends post messages much too frequently, especially those messages found to be extremel

47、y boring. They endlessly post status updates which say something like" I ' m cooking dinner " or “I'm dhomework” . Another reason for unfriending someone is disagreement about world issues. A third reason is to get rid of people who write dirty things on social websites.Although du

48、mping friends is not just an Internet phenomenon, far more online friendships end suddenly than off-line ones. Even in this computer age, it remainstrue that many people prefer spending time together face-to face. After all, that ' s what friends are for!參考答案："Unfriend to d elete someone fr

49、om your friend list, becomesordinary and there are several reasons for it. First, those who always give uninteresting information are likely to be unfriended. Besides, expressing different opinions on world issues and writing dirty things may cause others to leave you. Anyway, people would rather ha

50、ve friends in real life than on line. (58words)Unit 7,The drug store was closing for the night and Alfred Higgins was about to go home when his new boss approached him. “ Empty your pockets please, Alfred, " Sam Carr demanded in a firm voice.Alfred pretended to be shocked but he knew he' db

51、een caught. From his coat he withdrew a make-up kit, a lipstick and two tubes of toothpaste.“I ' m disappointed in you, Alfred! little gEaydhtheed man. "Sorry, Sir.Please forgive me. I ' ve never done such a thing before. " Alfred lied, hoping to gain the old man ' s sympathyCa

52、rr ' s brow furrow啾后)as he reached for the phone,“ Do you take me for a fool? Let ' s see what the police have to say. But first I mother and let her know her son is heading to jail.”“ Do whatever you want, " Alfred shot back, trying to sound big. But deep down he felt like a child. He imagined his mother rushing in, eyes burning with anger, maybe in tears. Yet he wanted her to come quickly before Mr. Carr called the police.Mr. Carr was surprised when Mrs Higgins final