記敘文的寫作方法及競爭

1、US Democratic(民主黨民主黨) presidential nominee（總統(tǒng)候選人）（總統(tǒng)候選人） Senator Obama speaks at a campaign rally(競選集會競選集會) in Philadelphia（費城），（費城），on October 11, 2008. Chinas quality watchdog（質(zhì)量（質(zhì)量監(jiān)督員）監(jiān)督員） said on Sunday that the latest tests on Chinese milk powder found no traces of melamine（三聚（三聚氰胺氰胺）.The Provi

2、ncial government (省政府省政府) call on citizens to donate thick clothes for people in earthquake-stricken area to get through winter.The emblem(會徽會徽) of the 9th school sports meeting has been unveiled(公布于公布于從從).The winners have the chance to smash (砸砸)the golden eggs and get a big prize.1.Answer the ques

3、tions as quickly as you can;2. Choose the questions with different points you want. 3. Practice narrative description.You can get 200 points for prize if all members in your group answer the questions. Step 1: Quiz timeIn this section, he who stands up and speaks outmost quickly with the correct ans

4、wer can get 100 points.(P1) 1. China is _ country that walks in outer space.A.the 1st B. the 2ndC. the 3rd D. the 4th2008-2009學(xué)年度第學(xué)年度第6期期(P2) 2. What will be punished(懲懲罰罰)in the USA if the celebrities tell lies in the advertisement?A.Nothing B.destroyedC. get into lawsuitsD. destroyed or get into l

5、awsuits(P3) 3. How many QQ friends does Sun Jiahui have?A.over 100B. 110C. less than 200 D. 202(P3) 4. Whats body image?A.a persons opinionsB. a persons feelingsC. a persons physical appearanceD. a persons opinions and feelings about his or her own body and physical appearance.(P4) 5. What is Zheng

6、Jies greatest goal?A.To be a singerB. To take part in the OlympicsC. To become the best tennis playerD. To become a swimmer(P5) 6. Whats the basic concept of Confucianism?A. loving othersB. loving familyC. moderationD. harmony Step2: Dingling Double and Typhoon In this section, you will choose the q

7、uestions you want. If you get the correct answer to the question, you will win the score you choose. If you are lucky enough, you will win the Dingling-Double. But if you are not lucky, you will meet with Typhoon.Vocabulary Sentences questions 100 100 100 200200 200 Step3: Narrative description In t

8、his section, you will be practiced how to describe narrative passage. If you can express the narrative description quickly and correctly, you can get 100 points. If you finish a short passage at a certain time, you can get 200 or 500 points.Fill in the blanksWhenWhereWhoWhatHowThis morningAt homeMy

9、daughter and II accidentally hit my daughter.I said sorry to her and kissed her記敘文的記敘文的第一句話，交待時間地點：第一句話，交待時間地點：典型句型典型句型(1)原文沒有時間地點原文沒有時間地點，The other day, I was doing sth, when .(2)原文有具體的時間、地點：原文有具體的時間、地點：This particular day began at+時間點時間點 in the morning /afternoon /evening in+地點地點. 第二句話，交待人物第二句話，交待

10、人物典型句型：典型句型： Sb1. was/were doing sthwhen +sb2. did sth.l練習(xí)練習(xí)記述段落記述段落(文文)的寫法的寫法This particular day began at 3:00 in the afternoon in my office. I was working hard when a football broke my window and hit my head.The other day, I was working in the office when a football broke my window and hit my head

11、.This particular day began at+時間點時間點 in the morning /afternoon /evening in+地點地點. The other day,I was doing sth, when .work, hit, break第三句話：推動情節(jié)發(fā)展第三句話：推動情節(jié)發(fā)展常用句型：常用句型：At this very time,sb. did sth.At this very moment, sb. did sth.All of a sudden/ suddenly,sb. did sth.l練習(xí)練習(xí)At this very time, a boy cam

12、e towards me and told that he was sorry .At this very time, I went downstairs to find out who kicked the ball.At this very time,sb. did sth./At this very moment, sb. did sth./All of a sudden/ suddenly,sb. did sth.find out, kickcome, sorry第四句話：介紹故事的結(jié)果或談自己的感受第四句話：介紹故事的結(jié)果或談自己的感受Then,Finally,Personally,

13、 I think thatI learn from the story thatl練習(xí)練習(xí)Personally, I think honesty is the best policy.honesty when I was working in my office, a football broke my window and hit me. catching the ball, I went downstairs, wondering who kicked the ball. a boy walked towards me ,saying that he was sorry to hit me

14、. It was he that kicked the ball. telling him that he was a honest boy, I gave the ball back to him, saying that he should be more careful next time. we said good-bye to each other. I think that honesty is the best policy. (200 points) The other day, AfterAt this very moment,After Finally Personally

15、, 3:00 in the afternoon I was working hard a football broke my window and hit my head. At , I went downstairs, thinking of what had happened. a boy came towards me and told he was sorry . It that told him to be careful next time. we said good-bye to each other. I think that honesty is the best polic

16、y.This particular day began atin my officewhenthis very momentAt this very time,thatwas IThenPersonally,200 points記敘文寫作的模板記敘文寫作的模板This particular day began at+時間點時間點 in the morning/afternoon/evening in+地點地點.A was doing sth when B did sth.At this very time/ all of a sudden, sb .did sth.At this very m

17、oment, sb did sth. It was .that did sth/Then.Personally, I think.(I learn from this story/event that.) The other day, A was doing sth when B did sth.At this very time/ all of a sudden,sb .did sthThen. It was .that did sth.Personally, I think. 簡化版簡化版Shorten this passage with using the above sentences

18、 .500 points1.The other day, A was doing sth when B did sth.2.At this very time/ all of a sudden,sb .did sth3.Then.4.It was .that did sth.5.Personally, I think.This morning, I was going through the door when my daughter played there.At this very time, I accidentally hit her. She shouted at me.Then I

19、 said sorry to her and kiss her. Tough I didnt mean to hit my daughter, it was me that hurt her.Personally, I think how hard it is to just face someone, kiss them and apologize. How many points have you got?12345Practice makes perfect Whats the main idea of the passage “Just stop and say sorry”?We s

20、hould face someone and apologize when we hurt them whether it is intentional or not.200 pointsDD08-09學(xué)年度第學(xué)年度第5期期(P8) Just stop and say sorry 08-09學(xué)年度第學(xué)年度第5期期(P8) Just stop and say sorry 100 pointsWhen and what happened in the story?This morning I accidentally hit my 3-year-old girl with my handbag a

21、s I was going through the door.TTRead the 5th paragraph careful and then translate the following phrases.1)1) ( (指眼淚等指眼淚等) )涌出來涌出來 _ 2 2）不管有意還是無意不管有意還是無意_3 3）被意識到）被意識到_ 4 4）實際上）實際上_ 5 5）故意做某事）故意做某事_ whether it is intentional or notbe recognizedin fact100 points08-09學(xué)年度第學(xué)年度第5期期(P8) Just stop and say

22、sorry well upmean to do sth.200 points08-09學(xué)年度第學(xué)年度第5期期(P8) Just stop and say sorry This morning I _ hit my daughterwhen I _ the door. At thismoment, she was _. Though I didnt _to do it, it was _ that caused her pain. Then, I said _ and kissed her. Finally, she ran away _with her toy bear. Personal,

23、I think we should _ to someone that we hurt whether its_ or not. accidentallywas going throughangrymeanmy faultsorryhappilyapologizeintentional1. I realized that it actually was not OK2. It needs to be recognized as pain that youhave caused to another person.200 pointsWhat are the differences of the above two thats?08-09學(xué)年度第學(xué)年度