寫作強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練張偉超收集

1、英語專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練范文以及模擬練習(xí)l To be a good teacher, you need some of the gifts of a good actor: you must be able to hold the attention and interest of your audience; you must be a clear speaker, with a good, strong, pleasing voice which is fully under your control; and you must be able to act what you are t

2、eaching, in order to make its meaning clear. To be a good home tutor, you need some of the gifts of a good baby-minder: you must be able to attract your students, make the child admire you and obey you; you must take good care of the child; and you must be able to share the childs sadness and straig

3、hten out his or her problems. Watch a good teacher, and you will see that he does not sit motionless before his class: he stands the whole time he is teaching; he walks about, using his arms, hands and fingers to help him in his explanations, and his face to express feelings. Watch a good policeman,

4、 and you will see that he does not stand motionless in the street: he walks the whole time he is on duty; he scans around, his head swiveling vigilantly and his eyes fixing at any suspect. l The fact that a good teacher has some of the gifts of a good actor doesnt mean that he will indeed be able to

5、 act well on the stage, for there are very important differences between the teachers work and the actors. The fact that a good basketball player has some of the gifts of a good football player doesnt mean that he will indeed be able to play well on the football field, for there are very important d

6、ifferences between the basketball players work and the football players. A good teacher works in quite a different way. His audience takes an active part in his play: they ask and answer questions, they obey orders, and if they dont understand something, they say so. The teacher therefore has to sui

7、t his act to the needs of his audience, which is his class. He cannot learn his part by heart, but must invent it as he goes along.l A good chef works in quite a different way. He concerns about the appraisal of his customers they are the judges of his work. Therefore, he has to cook dishes appealin

8、g to their tastes and interest. For a Cantonese customer, he would probably not cook him a hot and spicy dish, and hell be blamed if he offers some pork to a Muslim. “Always at your service” this is the motto of his job. He does not cook whatever he wants to cook because hes waiting for your order.

9、l I have known many teachers who were fine actors in class but were unable to take part in a stage-play because their brains wouldnt keep discipline: they could not keep strictly to what another had written. I have known many learners who were fine painters in the background of society but were unab

10、le to draw a real painting because the meaning and the value of their job is to give all the people a satisfied, pleasing scenery. 技巧l如果是有待分析或爭論的作文題, 都容易展開思路, 有話可寫。 如果題目是一個(gè)公認(rèn)的道理, 不言自明, 應(yīng)當(dāng)如何寫呢?l建議運(yùn)用原意擴(kuò)展的技巧, 把這種技巧發(fā)揮得淋漓盡致。 下面通過分析一篇較典型的范文, 來演示這方面的思路。 lconfidence(信心)的重要性是不言自明的。 但非得把這個(gè)主題演繹為一篇三段式的作文。先考慮用詞。

11、 由于文中不可避免地要多次提到信心,缺乏信心這樣的內(nèi)容, 不能總是用confidence或lack of confidence。lConfidence - faith - build up faith l - feel capable of doing sth.llack of confidence - lose heart l - feel frustrated l l 平時(shí)練作文時(shí)就要養(yǎng)成找同義表達(dá)和反義表達(dá)的習(xí)慣。 譬如, 從反面著眼, 想想一個(gè)人要是沒有信心, 原因是什么? 如果想到了是個(gè)不能正確估計(jì)自己和估計(jì)困難的問題, 那么就找出了一個(gè)可環(huán)繞做文章的詞眼 - estimate(估計(jì)

12、), estimate 既可作動(dòng)詞, 也可作名詞, 還可加前綴變成overestimate(過高估計(jì)) 和underestimate(過低估計(jì)),用起來有聲有色。 Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. If one has no confidence, there is little possibility that one would ever achieve anything, especially when one is faced with drawbacks or hardships. This truth seem

13、s to be self-evident. 一個(gè)人不論做什么一個(gè)人不論做什么, , 都要做得有信心。都要做得有信心。如果沒有信心如果沒有信心, , 就不可能成就任何事情就不可能成就任何事情, , 尤尤其是在面臨挫折或艱難的時(shí)候。其是在面臨挫折或艱難的時(shí)候。 這一真理這一真理似乎是不言自明的。似乎是不言自明的。 However, in reality we do see a lot of people who complain that they lack the ability to do something or that their difficulties are too great t

14、o overcome. 然而, 在現(xiàn)實(shí)中我們確實(shí)看到許多人抱怨他們?nèi)狈ψ髂呈碌哪芰蛘咚麄兊睦щy太大了, 沒法克服。 For some, this might be true. But for many, this only shows that they have lost heart. 對(duì)有些人來講, 這也許是對(duì)的, 可是對(duì)許多人來說, 這只說明他們失去了信心。1 These people do not have a correct estimate of themselves. 2 They overestimate the difficulties. Why do people oft

15、en feel frustrated even though they are quite capable of doing something? There are, among others, two main reasons. First, these people do not have a correct estimate of themselves. Second, they overestimate the difficulties. 為什么人們即使有相當(dāng)能力做好某事時(shí)也常常感到灰心喪氣呢? 諸般原因中, 有兩點(diǎn)重要的。第一,這些人對(duì)自己沒有正確的估計(jì)。第二, 他們過高地估計(jì)了困

16、難。 注意這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)中加了一個(gè)“among others”, 用兩個(gè)逗號(hào)插在主謂語之間, 一方面表示客觀, 不是認(rèn)為只有兩個(gè)原因, 而是諸般原因中的兩點(diǎn); 另一方面在一個(gè)簡單句中插上一個(gè)短語, 更能展現(xiàn)語言水平。 結(jié)尾段點(diǎn)明作者觀點(diǎn): 對(duì)自己抱正確態(tài)度才能建立信心。然后引述一條俗語, 再對(duì)這條俗語呼應(yīng)一句就結(jié)尾了。l It is possible to build up faith in oneself by having the right attitude towards ones own abilities. We should never underestimate our abilit

17、ies but should believe in the proverb: “There is a will, there is a way.” Confidence is the guarantee of fulfilling a task successfully. 對(duì)自己的能力持正確的態(tài)度就可以樹立信心。我們永遠(yuǎn)不要低估自己的能力, 而要相信這條格言:“有志者事竟成”。 信心是成功完成一項(xiàng)任務(wù)的保證。 從上面的分析可以看到，這篇文章夠羅嗦的，夠空洞的，但同時(shí)又是原意擴(kuò)展各種手法的大集中，用這些手法把一個(gè)不言自明的主題，拉成了一篇作文，表現(xiàn)了英語寫作的功力。 非應(yīng)試作文慎用這類技巧， 應(yīng)

18、試作文則往往要這樣寫。 Brainstorming 思路： diligence的近義表達(dá) : hard work strive to work diligence 的反義表達(dá) : laziness leave todays work to be done tomorrow批判對(duì)立面（不勤奮者）： lack of ability in controlling themselves; pleasure seeking立論： human beings true value of life: learning and creation, discovering and changing the wor

19、ld real happinesswhile away excusespoil There is no room for any excuse forThere is no room for any excuse for laziness. Diligence is the mother of success.閑混時(shí)間閑混時(shí)間借口借口嬌寵嬌寵懶惰沒有辯解的余地。懶惰沒有辯解的余地。勤奮是成功之母。勤奮是成功之母。 Whatever one does, one should do it with confidence. If one has no confidence, there is lit

20、tle possibility that one would ever achieve anything, especially when one is faced with drawbacks or hardships. This truth seems to be self-evident. Whatever one does, one should do it with diligence. If one is not diligent, there is little possibility that one would ever achieve anything, especiall

21、y when one is dealing with a tough job. This truth seems to be self-evident. However, in reality we do see a lot of people who complain that they lack the ability to do something or that their difficulties are too great to overcome. For some, this might be true. But for many, this only shows that th

22、ey have lost heart. However, in reality we do see quite a few people who while away a lot of time chatting, drinking, or watching television, and always leave todays work to be done tomorrow. Some of them may make an excuse for what they have done, but theres no room for any excuse for laziness.Why

23、do people often feel frustrated even though they are quite capable of doing something? There are, among others, two main reasons. First, these people do not have a correct estimate of themselves. Second, they overestimate the difficulties. Why dont such people strive to work? There are, among others

24、, two main reasons. First, they lack persistence in controlling themselves. There are so many joyful things around them that they always feel difficult to concentrate themselves on their work or study. Second, they may prefer to another way of living “eat, drink, and be merry”. It is possible to bui

25、ld up faith in oneself by having the right attitude towards ones own abilities. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: “There is a will, there is a way.” Confidence is the guarantee of fulfilling a task successfully. A main difference between human beings and

26、animals is the ability to learn and to create. Only through learning and creation can one realize his own value. But that means hard work. We should never spoil ourselves but should believe in the proverb: “Diligence is the mother of success.” We shall enjoy real happiness when we eventually achieve

27、 something in discovering and changing the world. 1. Find a similar topic;2. Record your brainstorming: key word: similar expression opposite expression diamond wording3. Write a similar article. 佳作 Whatever one does, one should do it with honesty. If one is not honest, there is little possibility t

28、hat one would ever achieve anything, especially when one is in business. This truth seems to be self-evident. However, in reality we do see quite a few people who act unfairly in order to win an advantage or profit from their partner, and even play tricks on their customers. Knavery may serve for a

29、turn, but you cant fool all the people all the time. Honesty is the best policy.Why dont such people keep their word? There are, among others, two main reasons. First, there is lots of temptation of easy profits in the world nowadays. Second, they lack ability in controlling themselves. They give wa

30、y to the greed which is the excessive and selfish desire for wealth. Honesty is an ethical principle that permeates many situations, and is also a factor in developing strong customer relationships. The wise man is always frank, because he knows that “honesty is placed above jewels and treasures”. W

31、e should never spoil ourselves but should believe in this proverb. Why Childrens Schoolbags Are Getting HeavierIn recent years, our government has never stopped from calling on schools and teachers to lighten childrens load of study, but childrens schoolbags are getting heavier. What do you think ar

32、e the reasons? Write a three-paragraph composition of about 150 words to explain that. lIn the first paragraph, state the phenomenon.lIn the second paragraph, analyze the reasons.lIn the last paragraph, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion. I am a university student. My brother is a p

33、rimary school student. To my surprise, I find that he has more work to do than me. Since our government has called on schools and teachers to relieve childrens burden, why does my brothers burden get heavier? There are mainly three reasons. To begin with, the competition in our society is more and m

34、ore fierce. Children have to learn more skills and knowledge for future survival. Secondly, the schools want their students to have high marks to prove they are good teachers. Lastly, most Chinese families are one-child families. The parents want their children to lead a better life, so they ask the

35、ir child to work hard for a good future. Though it may not be easy, I think, the society, the schools, teachers and parents should gradually change their mind, and give back the children a happy childhood. Today, when you are walking on the street, you will easily find children carry a big schoolbag

36、 in hand or on back. Schools are always trying to release childrens study burden; however, childrens schoolbags are getting heavier. Surveys show that some childrens schoolbags weigh even more than 10 kilograms. In my opinion, there are two reasons for it. First, schools in China seldom provide children with private bookcases. Children have no places for them to store their textbooks in school. As a result textbooks and exercise books on each subject that children have to bring a heavy bag to school every day