初三英語寫作訓練講解人教版(新目標)

1、初三初三英語英語寫作訓練講解寫作訓練講解人教版（新目標）人教版（新目標）【本講教育信息本講教育信息】一. 教學內容： 寫作訓練講解話題（一） 家庭，朋友與周圍的人（Family, friends and people around） 根據題目可涉及到的內容包括：關系、外貌、性格、工作、愛好、變化和理想等。 A. 重點句型（Target language） 1. Whats he like? 2. Hes very funny/ calm. He has shorter hair than Sam. 3. Hes short/ tall/ medium height. 4. She has cu

2、rly/ straight/ . hair. 5. You used to be quiet. 6. He didnt use to like tests. 7. My life has changed a lot in the last few years. 8. You used to play the guitar, didnt you? No, I played the piano. 9. People sure change. 10. What does he do? He is a waiter. 11. Where does she work? She works at a ba

3、nk. 12. What does she want to be? She wants to be a bank clerk. 13. What is he going to be when he grows up? 14. Hes going to be a computer programmer 15. How is he going to do that? 16. Hes going to study computer science. 17. What does he like? He likes collecting stamps. B. Text（Unit 6, Book 3） S

4、ome friends have opposite views and interests, and some like the same things. What is your opinion? Should friends be different or the same? We asked some people what they think and this is what they said. “I like to have friends who are like me. Im quieter than most of the kids in my class, and so

5、is my best friend Loretta. There are some differences, though. Im more intellectual than Loretta. Shes more athletic.”Dave Morrison “I like to have friends who are different from me. My best friend Ruben is taller and more outing than me. We both like sports, but Ruben is more athletic than me. Also

6、, Im quieter than he is.”Lyle Huang 寫作任務： 在班里誰是你最好的朋友？給大家全面介紹一下他/她，并比較一下你們倆在性格、外貌、興趣愛好方面有什么相同和不同之處，以及你們三年初中生活的變化。話題（二）興趣和愛好（Interests and hobbies） A. Target language（重點句型） 1. I want to join the music club. 2. I like action movies and thrillers, but I dont like romances. 3. What kind of music do you

7、like? 4. I like music that I can dance to. 5. Rosa likes music thats quiet and gentle. 6. We prefer music that has great lyrics. 7. How long have you been skating? 8. I have been skating since nine oclock. 寫作任務： 人們說一個人的愛好反映了一個人的性格。你喜歡的東西是什么？先完成表格，再給大家介紹一下你自己。 （字數 6080） 參考句式：My favorite., I love.best

8、. Im interested in., I prefer. （可適當使用時間狀語從句、原因狀語從句和定語從句）My favorite name or kind Reason singer/ group movie sports hobby color subject thing to do 話題（三）日常活動（Daily routines）一. 常用詞組： （1）日常學習與生活： get up, take a shower, go to school, have meals, do homework, watch TV, do sports, go to bed, do chores. （2

9、）Some vacation activities: stay at home, go to the beach/ mountains., go to the summer camp, go fishing and boating, go hiking/ skating/ swimming, visit the Summer Palace., have a picnic, play computer games/ soccer, visit some museums.二. 參考句型： My hobby is swimming, so I often go swimming on weekend

10、s. my hobbies are collecting stamps and watching TV, so I always go shopping to look for special stamps and watch programs about it. Im interested in/ good at playing the piano because I think its good for me to study well. （It can make me happy and relaxed.） I really enjoy going hiking, but I have

11、a lot of homework. so I have to spend much time doing my homework and reading some books. Every Saturday, Im willing to help my mother do some cleaning. I really feel very tired, but its good for me to understand my parents. I used to play basketball with my good friends after class twice a week, bu

12、t now I hardly ever play basketball or do other sports. My parents think my hobby takes me a lot of time. 任務： 以下是 Lily 的作息時間表，請根據表格內容寫一篇英語小短文。7:00起床 7:15早餐 4:20 活動（打籃球、踢足球） 5:00 回家 7:30去學校 8:00上課 5:30 晚餐 6:00 做作業(yè) 11:30 午餐（在學校） 4:00 放學 8:00 看電視 9:00 睡覺 話題（四）飲食與健康（Food, drink and health） 寫作參考句型： Its i

13、mportant to exercise three times a week because. Its necessary to keep a balanced diet and be in a good mood. Its important to have enough sleep hours. Good food and exercise help me to study better. A lot of vegetables help you to keep in good health. My healthy lifestyle helps me get good grades.

14、You must try to eat less meat. Im unhealthy because I always eat junk food and never exercise, although I have one healthy habit. I try to get up fifteen minutes earlier and walk to school. You should try to have a good balance between study and hobby. You should make time to exercise. For example,

15、You can walk to school and enjoy the fresh air. 任務：書面表達。 假如你的朋友埃米經常生病，你寫一封信給她，告訴她應該怎樣注意保養(yǎng)自己。詞數：60 詞左右。 take more exercise play sports like running, swimming, climbing have healthy food have more fruit and vegetables drink more water and milk get enough sleep stay happy 寫作任務： 你樓上的人家把音響開得很大（play their

16、 stereo too loud） ，而且經常持續(xù)到半夜（often last into midnight） ，使得你睡不好（cant sleep well） 。而且他們的女兒早上早早地就開始練習唱歌（practice singing in the early morning） 。請寫一封禮貌的抱怨信給你樓上的鄰居。 范文：Dear Neighbor: I am writing to tell you that your family really bother me these days. Since you moved upstairs, you have always played th

17、e stereo so loud that I hardly fall asleep, I have to eat sleeping pills in order to sleep well. Would you mind turning down your stereo? In addition, your daughter begins to practice singing in the early morning, you know, Im in GradeThree and I am busying studying all day, so it makes me feel exha

18、usted. I really hope you can accept my advice and also I believe we can get on well with each other in the future.Yours, Lucy話題（五）業(yè)余活動（Spare time activities） Travel Target language: 1. What did you do over the weekend? 2. On Saturday evening I went to the movies. 3. On Saturday morning I cleaned my

19、room 4. How was your weekend? 5. It was great. 6. What did she do over the weekend? 7. She played tennis. 8. Where did you go on vacation? 9. We went to New York. 10. Did you go to Central Park? 11. Yes, I did. 12. How was the weather? 13. It was humid. 14. Where did she go on vacation? 15. She visi

20、ted her uncle. 寫作任務： 你一定去過不少地方吧。你能談一談你曾去過的最有趣的地方嗎？在那里，你感到最有趣的東西是什么？如果有機會，你還想再去那里嗎？ 范文： I had a wonderful time. I used to be interested in Beijing and I often dreamed of visiting Beijing some day. Last weekend my dream came true. My parents took me to Beijing for a one-day trip. In the morning, we vi

21、sited the Palace Museum. I was surprised at the great buildings because I had never seen such a great museum and it reminded me of the soap opera Huan Zhu Ge Ge. At noon we had lunch at Quanjude, the famous restaurant in Beijing. And of course we ate Beijing Duck. It was great, too. In the afternoon

22、, we visited the Summer Palace and then went shopping. I found that Beijing was quite an expensive city. But the clothes and the food were wonderful. In the evening, we went to Chao Yang Music Hall to watch Beijing Opera. My father fell in love with it. Although I had to be honest to say that I dont

23、 like Beijing Opera, it was a wonderful trip. I think I will never forget the day when I visited Beijing. I love Beijing, the capital of China.圖表類寫作一. 基本句型及重點詞匯 1. all, most, some, a few 的用法 2. We can learn from the chart that. 3. Most students agree/disagree that. 4. Only a few students agree/disag

24、ree to do. 5. I believe that. 6. Some students think that. 7. We can / should. 8. We are supposed to do. 9. We should be allowed to. 10. In my opinion 11. Firstly, secondly. 12. also, besides, whats more 13. On the other hand 14. In a word, All in all二. 重點句式漢譯英 1. 大多數學生認為學生應該被允許帶手機到學校來。 _ 2. 而且，幾乎所有

25、的學生都相信學習方法很重要。 _ 3. 在我看來，我不同意花費太多的時間上網。 _ 4. 總之，我們的生活需要規(guī)則。 _ 5. 實際上，很多學生愿意穿自己的衣服來上學。 _ 6. 另一方面，多讀書也是一個很好的方法。 _三. 寫作要求及注意事項： 1. 認真審題，確定內容要點和大體結構 2. 注意分段寫作，先描述圖表信息，再說明自己的觀點及原因，最后總結。 3. 注意行文的連貫和開頭、結尾的呼應。 4. 避免句式單一和低級的語法錯誤。 寫作任務： 下面是對一所學校初三年級的一百名學生進行的一次有關校規(guī)家規(guī)的一次問卷調查，請你任選兩個進行描述，然后就其中的一個觀點說說自己的看法和理由。 1. a

26、gree to wear our own clothes to school 2. agree to bring mobile phones to school 3. can watch TV 4. can surf the internet at home We did a survey about the rules at school and at home. Here is the result. _話題（一）一. 漢譯英 1. 2008 年奧運會將在北京舉行。 _ 2. 北京將是 2008 年奧運會的主辦國。 _ 3. 天安門是世界上最大的廣場之一。 _ 4. 北京發(fā)生了巨大的變化。

27、 _ 5. 歡迎到北京來。 _ 6. 北京有許多名勝古跡，例如：長城、頤和園、故宮等。 _ 7. 烤鴨是北京最重要的食物。 _ 8. 秋天是北京最美的季節(jié)。 _ 9. 那兒很暖和。 _ 10. 我想去暖和的地方。 _二. 寫作任務： 北京作為中國的首都和一個國際化的大都市，每年有無數中外游客來北京旅游。作為2008 年奧運會的主辦地，現在北京發(fā)生了哪些變化？請寫一篇短文介紹北京的著名景點，并描述所發(fā)生的變化。字數：100 字左右。 提示詞： capital, big international city, tourist, the Great Wall, Tiananmen Square, t

28、he Summer Palace, the 2008 Olympic Games, great changes, take place, learn English, building, gyms, Beijing Duck overpass（立交橋） ，話題（二）一. 漢譯英 1. 汽車不但舒適而且快。 _ 2. 人們開著車可以隨意四處走動。 _ 3. 很難找到停車的地方。 _ 4. 汽車很容易引起污染。 _ 5. 很多同學每天坐著汽車來上學。 _ 6. 我認為汽車是有用的工具。 _ 7. 讓我們停止使用汽車吧！ _話題（三）志愿者工作 I. 翻譯句子。 1. 你愿意做哪種志愿者工作？我愿意

29、清掃城市公園/修理桌椅。 _ 2. 你可以捐獻一些書籍和玩具給那些鄉(xiāng)村的孩子們。 _ 3. 一些學生計劃在放學后的學習項目中做志愿者。因而他們能幫助小孩子們的功課。 _ 4. 他花費每周六上午的時間在動物醫(yī)院工作。 _ 5. 我們打算建立一個英語俱樂部以幫助小孩子和老人學習日常英語。 _ 6. 我長大后想做教師，因此那對我而言將是一種很好的經驗。 _ 7. 我校的學生在假期都自愿奉獻他們的時間去幫助他人。 _ 8. 做志愿者很棒！ _ 9. 她擅長繪畫。她更愿意在校報做志愿者。 _ 10. 我喜愛足球。我愿意為小孩子們訓練一支足球隊。 _ II. 寫作練習 1. 學校將要組織志愿者“獻愛心”活

30、動。請根據自己的愛好及特長選擇一項適合你的活動形式。提出你的具體活動形式和計劃，并附上你對志愿活動的看法及觀點。 參考范文： We are going to do volunteer activities next month. We like to be volunteers and think its great work to make life wonderful. Im an easy-going girl and Im always friendly and generous. I like reading and traveling. Ive got many different

31、 kinds of books and Im quite interested in science and art. Im good at drawing and singing. So Id like to go to a primary school in the countryside and help the poor children there. Ill give away some interesting books about science and history. I can tell stories to the little kids and show them ph

32、otos of my trips to different places. Ill tell them to study hard and create their wonderful life in future. Also, I can teach them to draw cartoons and sing English songs. How wonderful it will be! Im looking forward to the volunteer work. And Ill keep on helping others as a volunteer. 2. 校志愿者俱樂部要組

33、織一批志愿者周末去 SOS 兒童村“獻愛心” 。請根據自己及小組4 個成員的愛好及特長說說你們愿意為孤兒們做些什么事情。 提示詞：soccer, repairing, cleaning, telling stories,. A group of students at our school volunteer club are planning to do volunteer work at an SOS village this weekend. _話題（四）奧運會相關話題 1. 我們在中學生中做了一項調查，怎樣迎接 2008 奧運，涉及到三個話題，調查結果如下圖所示。請先描述該圖內容；然后

34、選擇其中的兩個你感興趣的話題，發(fā)表你自己的觀點。（80100 字） We did a survey about “What will you do for the 2008 Olympic Games?”in middle school students. Here are the results. _. 參考范文： We did a survey about “What will you do for the 2008 Olympic Games?”in middle school students. Here are the results. Most of the students th

35、ink that protecting the environments is very important. Although the environment in Beijing is becoming better and better, there are still some problems. Some students want to volunteer to work for the 2008 Olympic Games, because they can not only get great experience but also make lots of foreign f

36、riends. A few students would like to study English well because they will communicate better with foreign friends. In my opinion, I enjoy studying English well doing volunteering work. I think not only can I understand foreign friends better in order to do volunteering work well, but also I can intr

37、oduce the Chinese long history to them. Besides, I can find a pen pal. And we can keep in touch with each other after the Olympic Games. As for volunteering work, we should do something to prepare ourselves for our near future. Anyway, everybody should do something for the 2008 Olympic Games. 2. 現代社

38、會的發(fā)展帶來了環(huán)境的污染與破壞，我們應當如何解決這些環(huán)保問題，請根據以下提示發(fā)表你的看法。字數：80100 字。 提示詞：natural environment, pollute, destroy, river, factory, air, car, bus, subway, plant trees, keep clean, endangered animals, protect, one earth As the development of the modern society, the natural environment has been changed a lot. _ 參考范文：

39、 As the development of the modern society, natural environment has been changed a lot. We can find more pollution around us. Its necessary to do something to solve these problems. First, I think wed better keep rivers, lakes and the sea clean and save water. So factories must stop putting dirty wate

40、r into rivers and we should reuse water. Second, we should take subways or buses to work as much as possible instead of driving cars, or the air in the city will be more polluted. Also more trees should be planted to make the air cleaner and fresher. Third, all people are supposed to have good habits and keep the city clean. Finally, human beings should protect the endangered animals. In conclusion, we must pay more