高考英語大一輪復(fù)習(xí)第三部分寫作增分攻略九讓寫作渾然一體的銜接與過渡課件牛津譯林

1、學(xué)案九讓寫作渾然一體的銜接與過渡寫作運(yùn)用探究銜接與過渡是高考英語書面表達(dá)的重要評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一，因此，在句與句之間，段與段之間恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┏猩蠁⑾碌倪B接詞是非常必要的。常用的連接(過渡)詞主要有：一、表示起始關(guān)系的過渡詞above all, to begin/start with, first of all, now, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to, with the development of.等。高考佳句To start with，I have been learnin

2、g and speaking Mandarin for about 17 years.(2015四川，滿分作文)首先，我學(xué)說普通話已經(jīng)大約17年了?！炯磿r(shí)演練】完成句子1._ the Internet，computers play an important role in peoples life. 隨著因特網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，計(jì)算機(jī)在人們的生活中起著重要作用。2._，the more you practise，the more skillfully you can write in English. 總的來說，你練習(xí)越多，用英語寫作就越熟練。答案1.With the development of2.G

3、enerally speaking二、表示時(shí)間順序的過渡詞first(ly)，then，later，in the end，finally，at last，after that，afterwards，since then，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。高考佳句Firstly，people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to.(2016江蘇，滿分作文)首先，當(dāng)被要求做他們不想的事情的時(shí)候人們是可能感到是被迫的。Secondly, Id like to share my boo

4、ks with others as well.(2015重慶，滿分作文)其次，我也喜歡與別人分享我的書籍?！炯磿r(shí)演練】完成短文3._，I collected all the books，newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place._ I wiped the dust off all the furniture._，I swept and mopped the floors. 首先，我把所有的書籍、報(bào)紙和其他的散落在屋子里的東西收集起來放好，然后我掃去所有家具上的灰塵，之后我掃地、拖地。答案Fi

5、rstly；Then；After that三、表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞and，or，also，as well as，neither.nor.，not only.but also.，either.or.，not.but.等。高考佳句By doing so，I can not only share good ideas with others, but also learn to express myself clearly.(2015浙江，書面表達(dá))通過這樣做，我不僅能與其他人分享好的觀點(diǎn)，而且學(xué)會(huì)了清晰地表達(dá)自己。She finally earned respect of them，who eve

6、ntually became confident as well as well-behaved.(2015廣東，滿分作文)她最后贏得了他們的尊重，他們最終變得自信，表現(xiàn)也不錯(cuò)?！炯磿r(shí)演練】翻譯句子4.努力學(xué)習(xí)，你就會(huì)升入重點(diǎn)大學(xué)。 _5.游泳不但對身體有好處，而且能培養(yǎng)我們的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志。 _答案4.Work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university.5.Swimming not only benefits our health，but also helps us have a strong will.四、表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞but，ye

7、t，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary等。高考佳句However，as a proverb goes，“Every coin has two sides.”(2016江蘇，滿分作文)然而，正如諺語所說，“每個(gè)硬幣都有兩面”。On the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth，so they are eager to experience the future life on the Mars.(廣東高考滿分作文)相反，這些志愿者說，他

8、們厭倦了地球上的生活，因此他們渴望體驗(yàn)未來火星上的生活?！炯磿r(shí)演練】翻譯句子6.然而，使你最驚訝的是下述新的功能。 _7.相反，智能手機(jī)不僅占用我們寶貴的時(shí)間，而且對我們的健康造成極大的危害。 _答案6.However，what amazes you most is the following new function.7.On the contrary，smart phones not only take up our valuable time，but also do great harm to our health.五、表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞because，as，since，for，tha

9、nks to，due to，as a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence等。高考佳句The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you dont have to worry so much.(安徽高考滿分作文)真相是每個(gè)人都會(huì)有事情看上去要變得糟糕的時(shí)刻，所以你不必過分擔(dān)心。As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents tha

10、t they have no independent thought or creative ideas.(福建高考書面表達(dá))結(jié)果，孩子們變得太依賴于父母，以至于他們沒有獨(dú)立的思想和創(chuàng)造性的想法?！炯磿r(shí)演練】翻譯句子8.多虧醫(yī)生的及時(shí)治療，他獲救了。 _9.因此，我建議應(yīng)該給我們更多的時(shí)間用于體育運(yùn)動(dòng)和睡眠。 _答案8.Thanks to the doctors timely treatment，he was saved.9.Therefore，I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.六、表示條件關(guān)系的過渡詞if，unless，

11、in case of，as/so long as，on condition that等。高考佳句Ill be glad if you can consider my recommendation.(浙江高考滿分作文)若你們能考慮一下我的建議，我將很高興。As long as we stick to our dreams，we will become a winner sooner or later.(湖南高考滿分作文)只要堅(jiān)持夢想，我們遲早會(huì)成為贏家?！炯磿r(shí)演練】翻譯句子10.只要你不灰心，就一定會(huì)成功。 _11.如果我們忽視我們的未來，就像圖畫中的這個(gè)人一樣，我們就會(huì)以失敗告終。 _答案10

12、.As long as you dont lose heart，youre sure to succeed.11.If we neglect our future，well end up in failure as what happens to the man in the picture.七、表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡詞whats more，furthermore，moreover，besides，whats worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse still，on (the) one hand.on the other hand.，for one

13、 thing.for another.等。高考佳句In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient，regardless of time and space.(2016江蘇，書面表達(dá))另外，因特網(wǎng)會(huì)使得調(diào)查和投票方便、簡單，不受時(shí)間與空間的限制。Whats more，Im outgoing and warm-hearted.另外，我性格外向且待人熱心。(2015陜西，滿分作文)On one hand，I can earn some money by doing it to help my parent

14、s，and on the other hand，I can gain some experience from it，which will do good to my future life.(山東高考滿分作文)一方面，我能通過做這樣的事賺些錢來幫助父母，另一方面，我能從中獲得一些經(jīng)驗(yàn)，這會(huì)對我將來的生活有益?！炯磿r(shí)演練】完成句子12._，our class also organize a variety of activities to enrich our spare time. 另外，我們班還組織了各種各樣的活動(dòng)來豐富我們的業(yè)余時(shí)間。13._，if we spend too much t

15、ime on phones，we will lose the communication skills we need in the future. 更糟的是，如果我們在電話上花費(fèi)過多的時(shí)間，我們會(huì)失去將來需要的交際技能。答案12.Besides/Whats more/In addition/Moreover/Furthermore 13.Worse still/To make matters worse八、表示列舉事實(shí)的過渡詞such as，for example/instance，take.for example，that is to say，as follows，in other wor

16、ds等。高考佳句They are of different shapes，such as diamonds，butterflies，flowers and birds.(新課標(biāo)全國滿分作文)它們形狀各異，諸如像鉆石、蝴蝶、花、鳥。In fact，Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages，say，“ganbu” or “minzhu” from Japanese.(江蘇高考滿分作文)事實(shí)上，漢語從來就沒有停止過從別的語言中錄入一些單詞，比如，日語中的“ganbu”或“minzhu”。【即時(shí)演練】完成句子14._，it

17、is one of the oldest cities in the world. 就拿北京來說吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。15._，if you want to succeed，you have to believe in yourself. 也就是說，如果你想成功，必須相信自己。答案14.Take Beijing for example15.That is to say九、表示觀點(diǎn)的過渡詞in my opinion，in my view，in my point of view，as far as I am concerned，as for me，personally，I think.等

18、。高考佳句As far as I am concerned，they stand for love，friendship and unity.(新課標(biāo)全國滿分作文)以我看來，他們代表愛、友誼和團(tuán)結(jié)。I think the picture conveys a message that everyone has his or her advantages.(北京高考滿分作文)我認(rèn)為這幅畫傳達(dá)了這樣的信息：人人都有自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。【即時(shí)演練】翻譯句子16.就我而言，我喜歡財(cái)富，但我更看重健康。 _17.按照我的觀點(diǎn)，人們不應(yīng)該在公共場所抽煙。 _答案16.As far as I am concerned

19、，I love wealth，but I value health more.17.In my opinion，people shall not smoke in public places.十、表示總結(jié)的過渡詞in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，all in all，on the whole，in general，generally speaking等。高考佳句In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.(新課標(biāo)大綱全國滿分作文)總之，我的生活將會(huì)更

20、加豐富多彩。All in all，traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.(山東高考滿分作文)總的來說，旅游是充實(shí)自己、準(zhǔn)備迎接新的挑戰(zhàn)的最好的選擇。【即時(shí)演練】完成句子18._，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. 總之，一個(gè)好市民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。19._，I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle. 總的來說，我發(fā)現(xiàn)自行車比摩托車更令人喜歡。

21、答案18.In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief/To sum up19.On the whole/In general單句跟蹤演練用方框內(nèi)的過渡詞完成下面的短文second，so，as a result，despite，on (the) one hand，whats worse，instead of，in a word，on the other hand，as is well-known1._，online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life.2._，online shopping has many advantages.First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.3._ sea