中考英語(yǔ)作文話題(七)環(huán)保健康

1、七、環(huán)境、健康（環(huán)保、疾病、食品健康等）本話題所涉及語(yǔ)言知識(shí)（七上）Healthy food U6必會(huì)級(jí)選用級(jí)名詞Healthy food, eggs, bananas, apples, hamburgers, salad, pears, chicken, tomatoes, French fries, ice cream動(dòng)詞動(dòng)詞詞組形容詞副詞句式For breakfast, she likes-For lunch, she like For dinner,For dessert, she has（七下）必會(huì)級(jí)選用級(jí)名詞Koala, tiger, elephant, dolphin, pand

2、a, lion, penguin, giraffe, zoo, animal, grass, leaf, bird, weather, heat, winter, scarf, mountain, cat, water, snow,動(dòng)詞Rain, snow,動(dòng)詞詞組形容詞Cute, windy, cloudy, sunny, hot, cold, warm, humid, rainy,副詞句式-Why do you like pandas? Because they are kind of interesting.-HoW s the weather?It ' s raining.（八

3、上）Unit 2,必會(huì)級(jí)選用級(jí)名詞Head, nose, eye, ear, tooth, neck, stomach,Back, leg, arm, foot, throat, cold, fever, headache, toothache, stomachache, honey,Water, medicine, junk food, fruit, vegetables, milkSorethroat,dentist, illness Advice, problem, balance, herb,動(dòng)詞Rest, stress, believe, get,Stay,動(dòng)詞詞組Have a co

4、ld,形容詞Thirsty, stressed out, tired, hungry, weak, important, fit, healthy,Sore, traditional, western, balanced diet,副詞Early, until句式What' s the matter?I ' m not feeling well. I have a headache.That sounds like a good idea.Hope you feel better soon.You should drink some tea.My eating habits a

5、re pretty good.I try to eat a lot of vegetables.I look after my health, and my healthy lifestyle helps meget good grades.Good food and exercise help me to study better.Traditional Chinese doctors believe we need a balance of yin and yang to be healthy.It ' s easy to have a healthy lifestyle and

6、it'a balanced diet.s important to eat必會(huì)級(jí)選用級(jí)名詞pollution, porridge,動(dòng)詞feel sick,cough, sneeze動(dòng)詞詞組be in good health, have a cold, get injured,形容詞副詞Fortunately,句式There will be, three times a day,（九年級(jí)）unit 15 We re trying to save the manatees!必會(huì)級(jí)選用級(jí)名詞African elephants;Chimpanzees; kangaroos; manatees:

7、 cheetahs; polar bears; habitat; swamp;動(dòng)詞Support; educate;urge; recycle;動(dòng)詞詞組Take care of;Care for;形容詞Noisy; shy; fast; be suitable for ； polluted;gentle; furry; enormous; playful;aggressive; gray; spotted; endangered副詞句式We are trying to save There used to be a lot ofZoos are good places for animals

8、to live.（一）例文審題節(jié)約資源，保護(hù)環(huán)境.從我們身邊的小事做起，假設(shè)你是一個(gè)注重低碳”生活的中學(xué)生，請(qǐng)以“My Low-carbon Life '為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)單描述自己的低碳生活”。提示：（1）每天步行上學(xué)；（2）離開(kāi)教室時(shí)，關(guān)燈、電扇、電視等；（3）不用水時(shí)，記住關(guān)水龍頭，循環(huán)使用水；（4）充分使用紙張；（5）不使用塑料袋。參考詞7匚： on foot, turn off, tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic bag要求：詞數(shù)：80個(gè)單詞左右。不得真實(shí)的實(shí)的考生姓名，學(xué)校等信息。 文章內(nèi)容可涉及到所給提示，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但請(qǐng)不要

9、逐條翻譯。人稱(chēng)：我-第一人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)內(nèi)容：5個(gè)要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮（二）頭腦風(fēng)暴pollution, fortunately, save, on foot, walk, water ,electricity, drive the car, taps, reused, recycle, reduce, duty, both sides of the paper. plastic bags, Lower carbon, cut down trees, improve, harmful, meaningful,（三）單句翻譯/造句成文1、保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的責(zé)任。2、現(xiàn)在的環(huán)境越來(lái)越來(lái)糟糕。3、我們應(yīng)

10、該做點(diǎn)什么保護(hù)環(huán)境。4我們應(yīng)該每天步行上班5、我們應(yīng)該節(jié)約水和電 6、我們應(yīng)該循環(huán)使用水 7、我們應(yīng)該兩面使用紙。 8、記住上商店使用自己的袋子。 9我們的生活會(huì)變得越來(lái)越好 10、讓我們開(kāi)始行動(dòng)吧！ 11 .我們應(yīng)告訴父母走著上班，而不是開(kāi)車(chē)上班。12 .購(gòu)物用籃子而不用塑料袋是值得提倡的。13 .我過(guò)去常常開(kāi)車(chē)上班，但是現(xiàn)在我發(fā)現(xiàn)坐公交車(chē)也很方便。14 .如果我們做了這件事，你可以想象我們的生活將多么美好。（四）連句成篇and, also, as well, so, because, for, but, however, while, although, though, therefore

11、, in order to, so that, by, firstly, secondly, as for, first of all, then, next, besides, what' more, not only but also, after all,finally, the last but not the least, like, such as, for example/instance, and so on, on one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another thing, in my opinion,

12、 in all, in a word, at present, in the past, instead of, to begin with,It ' s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse., we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment.- we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to

13、work.we should recycle water and save electricity turning off the taps ,fans, TV sets and lights we don' need them. we should use the both sides of the paper.remember to go shopping with your own basket. I believe our life willbecome better and better. Lower carbonh appier life. Lets take action

14、s.（五）提升亮點(diǎn)1.詞組turn off, remember to do, make use of, ,it ' s our duty tordve nt .from, protect the environment, beautify the environment, reduce pollution, do harm to , cut down trees, live a low carbon life, waste resource, take effective measures to do, form the good habit of doing raise,people

15、 ' s environmental awareness, actions 2.句型從旬 without, so that, had better do, It ' bad for, make +adj, it 'time to, not only but also, the more ,the more,be glad that, the reason why is that,generally speaking, though/although, I think that /I believe that 3.非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)：It ' s +adj. for sb

16、. to do, dosth is e.g. It is good to make full use of paper.We should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. By doing this, we can save many tree.Remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags.I used to drive to work, but now it is conveni

17、ent to take the bus（六）主題升華It ' s time for us to raise peoples environmentaltawaact國(guó)andI believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.Pollution is one of the most serious environmental problems in the world.The more exercise you do, the less junk food you eat, the heal

18、thier you will become.（七）實(shí)踐練筆6月5日（June 5）是世界環(huán)境保護(hù)日，我們周?chē)沫h(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕，污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重。假如你是學(xué)生Jone”你校要進(jìn)行 如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境？”專(zhuān)題演講比賽。要求：1、舉例說(shuō)明環(huán)境存在的問(wèn)題1 3方面；2、如何保護(hù)好我們的環(huán)境，采取怎樣的措施，舉例 13方面進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，字?jǐn)?shù)80Dear headmasters, teachers, classmates and friends:I ' m very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I' m a bit(

19、=a little) neI ' ve never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse . In some places we can ' t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to dr

20、ink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike. We can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write. In a word,

21、 if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.“There is only one earth ” , I hope everyone will protect our environment well.(八)評(píng)價(jià)修改 簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)價(jià)表內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)(5)用詞正確(5)篇章邏輯(5)句式多樣(5)書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范(5)評(píng)價(jià)細(xì)化表(用于寫(xiě)作講評(píng)課)1.內(nèi)容方面I段落主題句 是否概括本段 的中心思想？ n文章內(nèi)容是 否充實(shí)，要點(diǎn)肩 無(wú)遺漏？ m

22、擴(kuò)展句是否 都圍繞這一主 題，啟尤貫句？ IV段落層次是 否分明，是否合 乎邏輯？2.用詞方面。I代詞的格和 指代關(guān)系是否 應(yīng)用止確？ n名詞的單復(fù) 數(shù)止確與否？ 出形容詞的比 較級(jí)和最高級(jí) 用得是否對(duì)？ IV副詞的位置 是否恰當(dāng)？V動(dòng)詞的搭配 是否準(zhǔn)確？3.篇章方面。I文章主題是 否準(zhǔn)確？n文章的文體 及所用的組織 方法是否恰 當(dāng)？田段落之間過(guò) 渡是否合理自 然？IV全文篇幅比 例是否恰當(dāng)？(前松后緊？ 前緊后松？)4句子方面。I句型結(jié)構(gòu)是 否完整?n主謂人稱(chēng)是 否Tt?田時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、語(yǔ)氣是否正 確？IV連句運(yùn)用是 否自然恰當(dāng)？V句子之間是 否連貫?5.書(shū)寫(xiě)方面。I單詞拼寫(xiě)及 大小寫(xiě)字母是

23、否止確？II標(biāo)點(diǎn)的使用 是否止確？開(kāi)闊文章思路；關(guān)注典型錯(cuò)誤；詞句取長(zhǎng)補(bǔ)短例文三近來(lái)由于極端天氣，我國(guó)長(zhǎng)江中下游發(fā)生了特大旱情，致使小河斷流，湖泊干涸，魚(yú)類(lèi) 死亡，湖底成了牧場(chǎng)。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下面的提示詞，以 “Let'DSo Something to Save Our Environment為題寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的短文。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括從干旱引出的環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀、環(huán)保意識(shí)到節(jié)水，節(jié)能，控制污染等環(huán)保措施方面的描述。首句已給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。提示詞：bad weather, bottom （底部），river, lake, grass land, save water, drop, tap（水龍頭）,ener

24、gy, turn on / off, recycle, control pollution, tears（艮淚）.Let ' s Do Something to Save Our EnvironmentIt is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and l

25、ess because of the bad weather.So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should

26、save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave； do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.Let ' s act now from everything to save our environment. Don'

27、t let our tears be the last（of water in the world!例文四你聽(tīng)說(shuō)過(guò)Earth Hour這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)嗎？今年的Earth Hour你中如何度過(guò)的？請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一篇 題為 “My Earth Hour 2011 的短文。內(nèi)容包括：1 .你今年參加Earth Hour這個(gè)活動(dòng)了嗎？請(qǐng)表達(dá)你參加或者不有參加的心情。2 .請(qǐng)描述你當(dāng)時(shí)在哪里，與誰(shuí)一起度過(guò)，做了什么事。3 .請(qǐng)列舉兩件以上你在日常生活中經(jīng)常做的有利于環(huán)保的事。4 .號(hào)召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour活動(dòng)中來(lái)。My Earth Hour 2011The Earth Hour was from 8:

28、30pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year.I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.My Earth Hour 2011The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was the moment my friends and I waited for a long time. We talked and played games at h

29、ome with all the lights off. We were glad to be in the Earth Hour. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think we can care for the earth by doing s

30、o. Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. （90 words）例文五為配合我市開(kāi)展 創(chuàng)建文明城市(build a civilized city)活動(dòng)，”學(xué)校舉辦以“How to Behave We為主題的英語(yǔ)征文比賽?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇參賽短文。提示：1.衣著整潔；2 .保持環(huán)境衛(wèi)生；3 .待人有禮，樂(lè)于助人；4 .遵守交通規(guī)則；How to Behave Well?In order to

31、 build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please"

32、 and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we

33、'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.例文六目前，我們的家鄉(xiāng)正在實(shí)施城鄉(xiāng)清潔工程”(cleaning project).請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息，給某英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇短文，就清潔衛(wèi)生和食品安全兩個(gè)方面談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。提示詞：unsafe adj不安全的harm危害rubbish bin垃圾桶Presently, a cleaning project is carried out in ou

34、r hometown. It is necessaryfor us to clean our living environment, because rubbish can be seen everywhere. The air, the soil and Use water are all polluted. Some kinds of unsafe food which is harmful to people's health appear in the stores and some supermarkets.I think we must stop the pollution and the harm. People must throw the waste into