四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作高分策略

1、四六級(jí)四六級(jí)寫(xiě)作高分策略寫(xiě)作高分策略1. 1. .盡量避免不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤：盡量避免不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤： 只有評(píng)卷人認(rèn)可了你語(yǔ)法掌握的水平，他才會(huì)抱著寬容甚至欣賞的態(tài)度看你的句型設(shè)計(jì)，用詞和例證的援引。 CET作文常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤作文常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤在實(shí)際的閱卷過(guò)程中，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，是閱卷人員的主要在實(shí)際的閱卷過(guò)程中，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，是閱卷人員的主要“照顧點(diǎn)照顧點(diǎn)”，大家可以設(shè)，大家可以設(shè)想一下，一篇語(yǔ)法上漏洞百出、嚴(yán)重影響表達(dá)的作文又會(huì)有什么樣的好內(nèi)容呢？想一下，一篇語(yǔ)法上漏洞百出、嚴(yán)重影響表達(dá)的作文又會(huì)有什么樣的好內(nèi)容呢？因此，認(rèn)清各種各樣的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，盡可能地避免少犯，對(duì)于提高作文分是有極大因此，認(rèn)清各種各樣的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)

2、誤，盡可能地避免少犯，對(duì)于提高作文分是有極大的幫助的?，F(xiàn)將閱卷過(guò)程中所發(fā)現(xiàn)的大量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤逐一歸類，抽出其中的典型錯(cuò)的幫助的?，F(xiàn)將閱卷過(guò)程中所發(fā)現(xiàn)的大量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤逐一歸類，抽出其中的典型錯(cuò)誤，以警示大家。誤，以警示大家。1.句子成分殘缺不全句子成分殘缺不全We always working till late at night before taking exams.(誤誤)We are always working (We always work) till late at night before taking exams(正正)We should read books which may b

3、e useful to us. (正正)We should read books may be useful to us. (誤誤) 2.句子成分多余句子成分多余This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (誤誤)One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正正)The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (誤誤)The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正正)

4、 3.主謂不一致主謂不一致 Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (誤誤)Some think that reading should be selective. (正正)My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (誤誤)My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正正) 4.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的誤用動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的誤用I was walking along the road, and there are n

5、ot so many cars on the street. (誤誤)I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正正)We have little time to read some books which we interest. (誤誤)We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正正)I am a student who has studying in the college f

6、or two years. (誤誤)I have been studying in the college for two years(正正) 5.詞類混淆詞類混淆 It is my point that reading must be selectively. (誤誤)In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正正)Honest is so important for everyperson. (誤誤)Honesty is so important for everyone. (正正)The old man was hit by a car whe

7、n he across the street. (誤誤)The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正正) 6.名詞可數(shù)與不可數(shù)的誤用名詞可數(shù)與不可數(shù)的誤用 Too much tests are disadvantage for students study. (誤誤)Too many tests are disadvantageous to students. (正正)In the presidents office, we have found new equipments of various kinds.

8、 (誤誤)In the presidents office, we have found new equipment of various kinds. (正正) 7.動(dòng)詞及物與不及物的誤用動(dòng)詞及物與不及物的誤用 The traffic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways. (誤誤)The traffic accident took place at the junction of two highways. (正正)Because of his excellent performance, the boss ros

9、e his salary. (誤誤)Because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary. (正正) 8.介詞介詞to和不定式符號(hào)的混淆和不定式符號(hào)的混淆Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking. (誤誤)Too many tests will do harm to the cultivation of our independent thinking. (正正)All these contributed to solve the

10、 serious problem. (誤誤)All these contributed to the solution to the serious problem. (正正) 9.情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的誤用情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的誤用 It may not good to our health. (誤誤)It may be not good to our health. (正正)They should spent much time. (誤誤)They should spend much time. (正正) 10. There be句型的誤用句型的誤用 There exists some new problems

11、such as being dishonest. (誤誤)There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. (正正)There are many students think college education is worthwhile. (誤誤)There are many students who think college education is worthwhile. (正正) 11. 動(dòng)賓搭配不當(dāng)動(dòng)賓搭配不當(dāng) We must pay attention to it and make solutions to

12、the problem. (誤誤)We must pay attention and find a solution to the problem. (正正)It also may help you to make success. (誤誤)It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. (正正) 12. 根據(jù)中文逐字硬譯根據(jù)中文逐字硬譯 If someones family situation is not well, he can apply for loan to bank. (誤誤)If ones family is not well of

13、f, he can apply to the bank for a loan. (正正)Let alone touch the outside world of campus. (誤誤)Let alone get in touch with the world outside of the campus.(正正)keep a good body health. (誤誤)keep fit .(正正)2 2. . 句型要有變化性句型要有變化性 考生不可全以簡(jiǎn)單句拼湊文章，應(yīng)主動(dòng)使用復(fù)句、倒裝、排比、平行結(jié)構(gòu)及動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，體現(xiàn)出良好的語(yǔ)言駕馭能力。 以形容詞或形容詞組開(kāi)頭以形容詞或形容詞組開(kāi)頭Mary

14、 was very pleased and telephoned her mother Pleased，Mary telephoned her mother The girl，hungry and thirsty，went back home Hungry and thirsty，the girl went back home以副詞開(kāi)頭以副詞開(kāi)頭The child stayed there quietly Quietly，the child stayed there 以不定式開(kāi)頭以不定式開(kāi)頭 He got up very early to catch the busTo catch the b

15、us，he got up very early以現(xiàn)在分詞或過(guò)去分詞開(kāi)頭以現(xiàn)在分詞或過(guò)去分詞開(kāi)頭 I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winters day so long agoComing home from school that dark winters day so long ago，I was filled with anticipationIf you give me enough time，I can do it well Given enough time，I can do

16、it well 以介詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭以介詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭 Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered itLike many other adventurers，Chester had experienced fear and conquered it以同位語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭以同位語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭Sue，our monitor，always likes giving suggestions to everybodyOur monitor，Sue，always likes giving suggestions to everybod

17、y以從句開(kāi)頭以從句開(kāi)頭Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-handedBefore he sailed round the world single-handed，F(xiàn)rancis had already surprised his friends several timesYou will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspecti

18、onIf you have a quality control inspection， you will greatly improve your finished product3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，形象具體的代替太寬泛的。（考試中一般，形象具體的代替太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等等）等）eg. It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the servi

19、ce industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. applicable代替代替proper, approaches代替代替ways, implement代替代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替代替enhance ones competitiveness（提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力）（提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力）, Computer and IComputer and I I never forget the exceedingly thrilling da

20、y when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to

21、 me.exceedingly 替換替換 verythrilling 替換替換 excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換替換 sb. be interested in sth.google 替換替換 searchan army of ,a sea of替換替換 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and tec

22、hnology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情；來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替換替換 mo

23、re and more popular Coincident with 非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)“與與一致一致”的意思，的意思，替換替換 With Advancement 替換替換 development Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換替換 enter into Current ( currently )替換替換 now Appeal to sb. 替換替換 sb. be interested in sth. Growing individuals 替換替換 more and more people It is no exagge

24、ration to say 經(jīng)典句型，經(jīng)典句型， 說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delive

25、ring email. For a start 替換替換 To begin with We can, freely, search 用了插入語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作手法用了插入語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)作手法 Our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened 用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)用了非常精彩的被動(dòng) Additionally 替換替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換替換 send There is no denying that , however, computers can functi

26、on in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying. There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先個(gè)精彩之處，首

27、先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語(yǔ)，作為插入語(yǔ)， function in the disservice of 替換替換 do harm to Emerging 代替代替 appearing ( fading 代替代替 disappearing ) As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds，computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of

28、 unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds 替換替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play ，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)強(qiáng)調(diào) Positive 替換替換 important / good 等等 A slice of 替換替換 a part of Unfavorable 替換替換 bad Impacts 替換替換 effects / influences We

29、 should, therefore, take advantage of 使用插入語(yǔ)使用插入語(yǔ) Fruits (而且而且fruits 用的非常形象，用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換替換 advantages ( defects 替換替換 disadvantages ) Facet 替換替換 aspect 最經(jīng)典的替換詞最經(jīng)典的替換詞1.individuals,characters, folks代替代替people ,persons 2. positive, favorable, rosy(美好的美好的)，promising (有希望的有希望的)，perfect, ple

30、asurable , excellent, outstanding代替代替good 3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的有害的), be less impressive代替代替bad eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a r

31、esult, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many, if not most)代替代替many. 注：用注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。后一定要有詞。 Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that 同理同理 用用most, if not all ,代替代替most. 5: a slice

32、 of, quiet a few , several代替代替some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替替think (因?yàn)槭菚?shū)面語(yǔ)，所以要加因?yàn)槭菚?shū)面語(yǔ)，所以要加that) 7:affair ,business ,matter 代替代替thing 8: shared 代代 common 9.reap huge fruits 代替代替get much benefit )

33、 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 代替代替 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 代替代替more and more ( 注意沒(méi)有注意沒(méi)有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly. Eg. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12

34、.exceedingly ,extremely替換替換 very13.benefitial, rewarding代替代替helpful14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替代替customer15. thrilling 替換替換 exciting16.nevertheless 代代 but17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替代替sb be interested in18.capture ones attention代替代替attract ones atten

35、tion19.facet,demension,sphere代代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替代替cause22.magnificent ,cute, pretty, gorgeous代替代替 beautiful 23.desire 代替代替want24.pour attention into 代替代替pay attention to 25.bear in mind

36、that 代替代替remember26. enjoy, possess 代替代替have27. interaction代替代替communication28.frown on sth代替代替 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example代替代替 for example30. next to/virtually impossible,代替代替nearly impossible（ 后為精彩替換詞）：后為精彩替換詞）：31idea/opinion notion/ standpoint/perspective/ou

37、tlook32. reasonable rational/ sensible/advisable33. consider ponder/contemplate/deliberate34. use utilize/ take advantage of35. deliver/send convey/ transmit/ transfer36. serious severe/austere/ stern37. obvious apparent/ evident/ transparent/conspicuous38. important significant/crucial/critical/ vi

38、tal/fatal39. according to in accordance with/ based on40. basic essential/fundamental/ elemental/ elementary41. main/chief principal/ primary/ dominant/ predominant/ cardinal42. partportion/ section/ fraction43. public/common ordinary/extensive/comprehensive44. task/work assignment/ commission45. me

39、thod/ way measure/mode/approach/remedy(指補(bǔ)救的辦法指補(bǔ)救的辦法)46. famous distinguished/ prominent/ eminent/ striking47. catch capture/ grasp/grip/(fig.)digest48. big enormous/immense/tremendous/ massive/ sweeping /colossal/gigantic49. search/look for google/ransack/ rummage50. finally eventually/terminally/ul

40、timately51. striking astonishing/ amazing/ 52. unbelievable incredible/ inconceivable53. prove/justify confirm/ certify/ substantiate54. various diverse/myriad/ multitudinous/ miscellaneous55. complex elaborated/ sophisticated /complicated/intricate56.unchanging permanent/ constant/ enduring57. inst

41、ant /momentary temporary/ephemeral/ transient58. arbitrary 武斷的武斷的59top summit/culmination/ acme/zenith/peak60. improve promote/ accelerate/ boost/enhance61. explain interpret/illustrate/illuminate/ elucidate/depict62. change alter/ convert/ transform/diversify/modify63. centre core/kernel/ nucleus64

42、. agree approve sb. Of sth./ consent to do /concur with sb. in doing sth.65. dont know be ignorant of sth.66. in order to for the sake of 67.ability qualification/ capacity/ capability/ competence68. buy purchase/procure69. about大約大約 approximate/ estimated70. rule/principle regulation/doctrine/formu

43、la71. give offer sth. to sb./provide for/supplyfor72. traditional conventional/ conservative73. dangerous perilous/ hazardous/ precarious74. actually substantially/ practically75. careful cautious/discreet/ prudent/ scrupulous76. old/ out-of-date obsolete/ancient/antiquated77. productive pregnant 78

44、good part advantage/merit/strength79. brave gallant/valiant/intrepid80. excellent/good splendid/glorious/brilliant/magnificent /marvelous 81. natural spontaneous/ instinctive, inherent 82. necessary compulsory /obligatory/mandatory 83. finish accomplish/ consummate 84. carry out implement 85. about關(guān)

45、于關(guān)于(prep.) regarding/ concerning 86. difference divergence/ inconsistency/discrepasy/incongruity 87.not clear ambiguous /suspicious/ dubious/ implicit 88. decisive crucial/critical 89. cause/ arouse trigger/stimulate/whet 90. reform evolution/innovation 91. city metropolis92. admit acknowledge/conce

46、de93.avoid avert/ dodge/ evade94. start/begin embark on sth./ commence to do sth./initiate sth.95. give up abandon/renounce/relinquish96. destroy devastate/demolish/exterminate97. puzzle bewilder/perplex /mystify98.surface superficial/ostensible99. the campus the Ivory Tower100.the net(internet) the

47、 fictitious world/the electronic world/ the cyber world 101. a lot of a multitude of/ a galaxy of 102. many myriad/ umpteen 103. wethe public/the individuals/the folks 104. as a result consequently 105. popularprevalent4.主題句放開(kāi)頭。主題句放開(kāi)頭。作為應(yīng)試手段，考生應(yīng)現(xiàn)實(shí)地去爭(zhēng)取做到開(kāi)宗明作為應(yīng)試手段，考生應(yīng)現(xiàn)實(shí)地去爭(zhēng)取做到開(kāi)宗明義，將主題句義，將主題句 (Topic Sen

48、tence) 放在每段開(kāi)頭。將提綱以主題句的形式放在每段開(kāi)頭。將提綱以主題句的形式放在每段開(kāi)頭表述出來(lái)，就可避免跑題放在每段開(kāi)頭表述出來(lái)，就可避免跑題.5.寫(xiě)好第一句話。寫(xiě)好第一句話。這樣容易給閱卷者留下一個(gè)好印象，最好能這樣容易給閱卷者留下一個(gè)好印象，最好能用上一個(gè)復(fù)句，里面要用上用上一個(gè)復(fù)句，里面要用上2-3個(gè)難的單詞或詞組個(gè)難的單詞或詞組。 6. 主動(dòng)使用生動(dòng)的成語(yǔ)、諺語(yǔ)及有說(shuō)服力的引語(yǔ)。主動(dòng)使用生動(dòng)的成語(yǔ)、諺語(yǔ)及有說(shuō)服力的引語(yǔ)。每次每次練習(xí)時(shí)，把這些成語(yǔ)、諺語(yǔ)、引語(yǔ)劃出來(lái)，以強(qiáng)化主動(dòng)使用的意練習(xí)時(shí)，把這些成語(yǔ)、諺語(yǔ)、引語(yǔ)劃出來(lái)，以強(qiáng)化主動(dòng)使用的意識(shí)。例如，在論述求知的艱難時(shí)，可引用識(shí)。

49、例如，在論述求知的艱難時(shí)，可引用There is no royal road to learning. (做學(xué)問(wèn)無(wú)捷徑可做學(xué)問(wèn)無(wú)捷徑可走走)7. 學(xué)會(huì)回避。學(xué)會(huì)回避。譬如，想表示某人過(guò)著豪華的生活，可以說(shuō)譬如，想表示某人過(guò)著豪華的生活，可以說(shuō) He lived a kind of luxurious life. 但考生如不會(huì)寫(xiě)但考生如不會(huì)寫(xiě) luxurious 這個(gè)詞，不妨回避，切勿生拼硬造?？忌梢哉f(shuō)這個(gè)詞，不妨回避，切勿生拼硬造?？忌梢哉f(shuō) He had a car, a big house and a large company.bread car - microbus/van“Mr K

50、ong”,“teacher Kong” - Confucius， a great educator in the history of China孟子是孟子是Menciusthe boy putting sheep，the boy sending sheep, the boy MU sheep, -shepherd, the little boy，8. 主動(dòng)使用過(guò)渡詞主動(dòng)使用過(guò)渡詞。例如使用例如使用firstly, secondly, to make long short, moreover, however, furthermore 等等，這樣，會(huì)使文章層次清晰，也等等，這樣，會(huì)使文章層次清

51、晰，也使自己思路清楚。使自己思路清楚。9. 注意避免邏輯錯(cuò)誤。注意避免邏輯錯(cuò)誤。例例: 1997年年1月六級(jí)考試作文題目為月六級(jí)考試作文題目為 Haste Makes Waste，一考生，一考生的第一段第一句為的第一段第一句為 The faster the better， because they can save time in this way.這樣寫(xiě)顯然不妥，因?yàn)檫@樣寫(xiě)，就等于認(rèn)定快并這樣寫(xiě)顯然不妥，因?yàn)檫@樣寫(xiě)，就等于認(rèn)定快并可以省時(shí)可以省時(shí).10.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)，句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用，句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I （比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾（比如寫(xiě)結(jié)尾時(shí)不用時(shí)不用we shou

52、ld pay attention to而用而用Attention should be paid to. ）經(jīng)典結(jié)尾：經(jīng)典結(jié)尾：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively. 1.善于使用插入語(yǔ)善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)

53、詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 如如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 比如說(shuō)：比如說(shuō)： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that 2字?jǐn)?shù)要足夠字?jǐn)?shù)要足夠。但不要寫(xiě)得太長(zhǎng)但不要寫(xiě)得太長(zhǎng)(四級(jí)在四級(jí)在120-180之間；六級(jí)在之間；六級(jí)在150-200之間之間)，否則容易引起閱卷者的反感。，否則容易引起閱卷者的反感

54、。3. 卷面要整潔卷面要整潔。卷面潦草字跡不清的文章，常常還沒(méi)有看到內(nèi)容就會(huì)使卷面潦草字跡不清的文章，常常還沒(méi)有看到內(nèi)容就會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生厭惡人產(chǎn)生厭惡 。14.擇語(yǔ)的準(zhǔn)確性擇語(yǔ)的準(zhǔn)確性Do not write so that your words may be understood, but write so that your words must be understood. The difference between the right word and the almost-right word is as great as that between lighting and the l

55、ighting bug. (Mark Twain)15.多余的或轉(zhuǎn)彎抹角的詞語(yǔ)都不利于明白地表達(dá)思想多余的或轉(zhuǎn)彎抹角的詞語(yǔ)都不利于明白地表達(dá)思想 莎士比亞的名言莎士比亞的名言“Brevity is the soul of wit”,相當(dāng)于漢語(yǔ)的相當(dāng)于漢語(yǔ)的“言貴言貴簡(jiǎn)潔簡(jiǎn)潔”。 mutual aid (to each other) (mutual) aid to each other， (an entirely) complete confidence， repeat the question (again)， Return (back) from abroad，etc.Task1: Repl

56、ace the underlined parts Task1: Replace the underlined parts 1.In my opinion, those who are against the Internet think that it has a lot of advantages.From my perspective, the opponents of the Internet hold the view that it has a number of advantages.Task1: Replace the underlined parts Task1: Replac

57、e the underlined parts 2.In general, we can safely draw the conclusion that moving to suburb is good to a citys growth.In a word, we can safely come to / arrive at the conclusion that moving to suburb benefits a citys development. Task1: Replace the underlined parts Task1: Replace the underlined par

58、ts 3.On the one hand, the teacher should punish the lazy students; on the other hand, such phenomena should be reported.For one thing, the teacher should impose punishment on the lazy students. For another, such phenomena should be reported.Task1: Replace the underlined parts Task1: Replace the unde

59、rlined parts 4.In the current society, some people dream of making much money overnight and take risks to produce pirated products. In the present society, some people dream of making a fortune overnight and take risks to produce pirated products. Task1: Replace the underlined parts Task1: Replace t

60、he underlined parts 5.Nowadays, every one of us has been faced with many instances of dishonesty. Nowadays, every one of us has been confronted with many cases of dishonesty.Task 1: Replace the underlined parts Task 1: Replace the underlined parts 6.But in some cases, talking is the right choice.Nev