英語高考沖刺：短文改錯及真題解析

1、精選優(yōu)質文檔-傾情為你奉上高考沖刺：短文改錯題型介紹高考英語短文改錯歷來是考生的一個難點，因為它考查的是考生的綜合語言運用能力，考查內容涵蓋英語語言的各個層面。短文改錯分為兩種形式：含有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞增加、刪除或修改；對標有題號的每一行做出判斷，或增加，或刪除，或修改，全文共有9處錯誤，有一行是對的。 解題技巧改錯步驟1. 通讀全文，了解短文大意。把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，尤其是有的行文邏輯方面的錯誤在看單句時難以發(fā)現(xiàn)錯誤（比如前文用Mike，后文代詞用she等）。在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行分句改錯。2. 分句閱讀，逐行找錯。在完成第

2、一步后，要進行逐行逐句的改錯。這時要從文中的詞法、句法和語篇角度著重分析和特別注意。注意不能改變句子的原意，也不能改掉原來正確的詞語而換成了另一種正確的表達形式，如某些定語從句中that與which的互換是不給分的。3. 最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿。注意嚴格按照例題要求和解題說明，用規(guī)定的符號去改，不要用文字去說明或者用箭頭表示，更不能在原題中亂畫。答題時可以從以下幾點考慮： 1. 句中的時態(tài)、主謂、代詞一致嗎？ 2. 句中的謂語完整嗎？ 3. 習慣用法固定搭配正確嗎？ 4. 冠詞、形容詞、副詞及關系詞得當嗎？ 5. 該用被動語態(tài)嗎？ 6.

3、 從句的連接詞對了嗎？ 7. 從句中的謂語完整嗎？   真題講解（一）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they wi

4、ll be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do. (浙江)（二）Thank you for the lovely day we h

5、ave with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Annes friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and wait

6、ed there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents and made our own way to home. (遼寧) （三）Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76._Water is im

7、portant. We, as well as animal, cannot live77._without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._Many countries in the world find we dont have enough water.80._To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81._out to pl

8、ant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82._drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath84._water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._Sincerely,Li Hua（四）Dear Mom, Mothers Day is coming.

9、Im sorry that I am abroad 66._and cant send your flowers, so Im writing to you. 67._ Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you 68._before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell 69._you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not 70._only giving me life, but also teac

10、h me how to be a good 71._person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though 72._I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your 73,_part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. 74._ Hope you good health and much happiness every day! 75._ Your little girl, Jennifer（五）Dear

11、 Grandpa,How are you those days? I have been missing you very 76._much after I went to college a year ago. Whenever I think of 77._the old days, I feel very happily. I still remember when I 78._was child, you always held me in your arms and told me stories 79._till I fall asleep. We often went to th

12、e fields to enjoy the pleasant 80._view there. You told me the name of different plants and their 81._characteristics. Gradually, I became interesting in biology 82._and chose to learn biology when I entered into the college. Now 83._my friend Ann, together with me, are going to do field study 84._a

13、nd the findings will be use as materials for our research. Since 85._well do the study in our hometown, I hope to see you by then. Yours, Daisy（一） 1. Two years before, beforeago；ago指的是從現(xiàn)在起到過去時間的某一點的一段時間。這個時間狀語常與一般過去時態(tài)或過去進行時態(tài)連用。2. I rented for a car. 去掉for，因為rent為及物動詞。3. Unfortunate, I had an acciden

14、t Unfortunate改為Unfortunately，修飾一句話用副詞。4. at least two week week weeks5. I called my parents, so I did not tell them sobut，邏輯關系錯誤。6. I knew that they will be willwould，主從句時態(tài)一致。7. worried about myself myselfme，句中的主語為they，不構成反身代詞；8. I was so farther away, fartherfar，句中不構成比較級。9. I told them interested s

15、tories interestedinteresting，interesting才表示“令人感興趣的”。10.nobody knew truth truth前加the，此處特指“那個真相”。（二）1. we have with you have had，由后面的was可知，這兒應該用過去時態(tài)。2. It was so kind for you to let us for of，kind用于描述you的，適用于“It +形容詞+ of sb.”句型。3. Unfortunate, the only problem Unfortunate Unfortunately，修飾句子用副詞。4. for

16、a result, there was a long line of traffic for as, as a result固定搭配。5. for at least six mile mile miles mile是可數(shù)名詞，并且前面是six。6. we waited there unless the road was clear unless until 后面一句是一個時間狀語從句，意思是“我們一直等到路通了”。7. In the car park here here there 敘述的是別的地方發(fā)生的事，所以用there。8. as car drove out far too quickl

17、y car前加a，car不是特指，并且是可數(shù)名詞，所以前面要加a。9. They finally dropped Gina off they we 敘述的是“我們”做的事，所以用we。10. and made our own way to home 去掉to，make ones way home中home為副詞，前面不用介詞to。（三）76. opinion前加my，根據(jù)句意前后的代詞指代要一致，前文主語是I，所以后半句表達的意見就應該是“我”的意見。77. animal animals 我們還有動物們沒有水就無法活。根據(jù)句意用復數(shù)形式。78. or nor 根據(jù)前文的neither可知應該將

18、or改為nor。79. seemed seems 文章整體講節(jié)約用水方面的話題，通篇用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以將seemed改為seems。80. we they 句中的“許多國家”指的是外國，不是“我們”。81. a the/ this/ that 本句的問題指上文提到過的問題，表特指。82. though because/since/ as 主從句之間的邏輯為因果關系而不是轉折關系。83. 正確。84. using used “水”被使用過，用過去分詞作定語85.去掉for 此處for在定語從句中找不到其相應的成分，故刪去。 高666考%資&&&源#網（四）66. 正確。67. your you。此處動詞send接雙賓語，應使用賓格形式，構成短語send sb. sth.。68. thank thanks?！氨磉_感謝”應為：express ones thanks。69. 去掉on。在副詞today之前不用介詞，故去掉。70. by for。Thank sb. for為固定短語“因而感謝”。71. teach teaching。