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1、評分標準： 結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、銜接得當、段落內(nèi)統(tǒng)一。 論證有力、方式多樣、有事實細節(jié)。 句式多樣、詞匯豐富、無語法錯誤。 With the development of education, more and more subjects have come out. Some people suggest that it is more beneficial for students to choose the subjects which are associated with their ideal job than the subjects they like. I agree with it

2、because it actaully has several advantages. First of all, the subject that prepare for your future job always can give your more energy. You can only be longing for success when you know your direction. For instance, my brother choosed business because he wants to be a business man. He worked harder

3、 than his classmates and participated a lot of school activities that about business. Although he got many taskes to do, he told me that he felt more energetic than others since he knew what he had done could pay off when he begins his career. Now he is running a famous corporation and he really fee

4、ls thankful because he made the right decision. So these subjects foster us to work harder and gain more power. Second, these subjects really save your time after graduating. For instance, there was a survey about the univrsity subject and students future life. It showed us that students who choosed

5、 the subject they liked could get better transcripts than others. However, to our amazement, the students who choosed the subject similar with their future jobs were more outstanding than others after graduating. One of a student complained that after he left universities, he could not find satisfie

6、d jobs so he just squander his time and money playing and shopping. It really wastes time. However, well-prepared students can always find jobs quickly, know the society and get more time to complish their dreams. Admittedly, choosing the subjects they like can make students happy and relaxed. For i

7、nstance, my cousin choose music subject, now she can sing and create new songs with her classmates everyday. She seemed have a wonderful university life. However, this happiness can not be everlasting since they might not outstanding in their fields then they may quit, and find jobs they have never

8、known. If you know yourself and prepere a lot when you are in university, you are more likely to success. To sum up, the subjects that are associated with your future job enable you to gain more energy, save precious time and make your future life greater than others. Studens should choose the usefu

9、l subjects for thire future career. With the development of education, more and more subjects have come out. Some people suggest that it is more beneficial for students to choose the subjects which are associated with their ideal job than the subjects they like. I agree with it because it actaully h

10、as several advantages. First of all, the subject that prepare for your future job always can give your more energy. You can only be longing for success when you know your direction. For instance, my brother choosed business because he wants to be a business man. He worked harder than his classmates

11、and participated a lot of school activities that about business. Although he got many taskes to do, he told me that he felt more energetic than others since he knew what he had done could pay off when he begins his career. Now he is running a famous corporation and he really feels thankful because h

12、e made the right decision. So these subjects foster us to work harder and gain more power. Second, these subjects really save your time after graduating. For instance, there was a survey about the univrsity subject and students future life. It showed us that students who choosed the subject they lik

13、ed could get better transcripts than others. However, to our amazement, the students who choosed the subject similar with their future jobs were more outstanding than others after graduating. One of a student complained that after he left universities, he could not find satisfied jobs so he just squ

14、ander his time and money playing and shopping. It really wastes time. However, well-prepared students can always find jobs quickly, know the society and get more time to complish their dreams. Admittedly, choosing the subjects they like can make students happy and relaxed. For instance, my cousin ch

15、oose music subject, now she can sing and create new songs with her classmates everyday. She seemed have a wonderful university life. However, this happiness can not be everlasting since they might not outstanding in their fields then they may quit, and find jobs they have never known. If you know yourself and prepere a lot when you are in university, you are more likely to success. To sum up, the subjects that are associated with yo