讀后續(xù)寫之各種精彩收尾段落

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上專心-專注-專業(yè)專心-專注-專業(yè)精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上專心-專注-專業(yè)專題15 讀后續(xù)寫之各種精彩收尾段落一、讀后續(xù)寫收尾的方式：1.畫面定格 2.對話收尾3.主題升華 4.結(jié)尾留白 5.首尾呼應(yīng)二、畫面定格 1.人物動作的畫面定格 如：（2020杭州高級中學等五校聯(lián)考） They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanc

2、ed over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge. 如：His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the

3、 brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Doras hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes. 如： The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God

4、 felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life.”Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happi

5、ly with them.2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （1）The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come. 天空像是一億只純凈的眼睛拼接在一起，腳下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白晝已成為一個美麗的時刻。黎明已經(jīng)來臨。（黎明到來的畫面） 2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （2） Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, b

6、estowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon. 黎明在平靜的海面上放射出出閃閃發(fā)亮的光線，留下一條從海岸到地平線橫亙而過的金色道路。 （黎明到來的畫面） 2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （3） The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas. 當我涉過水晶般天藍色的輕柔的水時，日落就像藍色畫布上的橙色顏料。 （美好日落時的畫面） 2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （4） The l

7、ingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天際的最后一縷陽光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一層漆黑的幕布覆蓋。（日落時的畫面） 2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （5）The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The

8、never ending blackness consumed everything. 被群星圍困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，帶來了在黑暗中閃耀和懸掛著的群星。無盡的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描寫夜空的畫面） 2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （6）Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the suns rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I t

9、ook a few blinks before I landed with a thud. 抬頭一看，我看到太陽比我以前所知道的還要明亮。我看見遠處有一棵樹反射著太陽光，發(fā)出柔和的光輝。我的意識隨著熱度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到現(xiàn)實中，恢復(fù)了知覺。（特殊寓意） 2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （7） Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 綴滿星光的天空，午夜的藍色，給了這一場景一個童話般的質(zhì)量。（神話般美麗的夜空畫面） 2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （

10、8）Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮濕的地面走起來很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。一股濃郁的泥土般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。（雨后清新的畫面） The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam o

11、f sunlight.雨水打著窗戶，向最后一縷陽光告別。 （雨水來臨的畫面） 2.特殊寓意的寫景畫面 （9）The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground. 我在街上漫步時，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，有葉子會從我身邊掉下來，輕輕地搖晃，緩緩落到到地面。（描寫落葉的畫面） 三、對話收尾 （1） Chester said

12、 his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother, but both brothers had changed their last names.“He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that hes been looking for us ever since we lost contact，” he said. Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be r

13、eunited with Urrea as well. When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life, Chester said，“I got family everywhere, so it might lead to many more trips now.” (2) What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Ninas family had moved to a bigger apartment.

14、“Ive heard amazing stories about dogs loyalty, but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me. Even now, I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again. I never grow tired of repeating thisanimals

15、 are the most devoted and loving creatures. They need our love and care.” (3) Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking

16、 for. I was told, If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if he was being paid. I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.” (4) They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？” S

17、he patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuff on them satisfactorily, saying，“Yes! For me，it is not a suffering to live.” 四、主題升華(1) Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the b

18、est hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a_famous_dancer. Someday, when_I_am_older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母愛的深遠影響） (2) .I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesnt equal happiness. And free life

19、 style also doesnt equal happiness. The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is everything. In my opinion, money cant take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and

20、 your happiness.(表達自己的價值觀） (4) “Two reasons account for that you won，” the teacher answered.“First, youve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo. Second, the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm. It is your biggest weakness that makes y

21、ou win the match. As a proverb says, Every coin has two sides. Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to everyone.”(借用名言警句來升華主題） 五、結(jié)尾留白(1) While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “D

22、o you have dinner plans?” I explained that Id like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital gave Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. “Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat?” I asked. “Id love to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. And, this was the

23、beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsys death.（故事結(jié)尾留白，給予讀者想象空間） (2) The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares? He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.”With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but

24、 to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars. 六、首尾呼應(yīng)(1) 2017年浙江高考題 開頭： I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with suprises and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and for

25、getful. One strange faimly trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.結(jié)尾：Despite moms being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom. (2) 2018年浙江高考題 開頭：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the W

26、ild West.結(jié)尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.(3) 2016年浙江高考題 開頭：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. 結(jié)尾：What a funny day. Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked

27、 back on this hilarious 搞笑的experience.附：名言警句升華主題 1. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。2. Well begun is half done. 好的開端是成功的一半。3. East, west, home is best. 金窩、銀窩，不如自己的草窩。4. There is no royal road to learning. 學無坦途。5. Look before you leap./ First think, then act. 三思而后行/摸著石頭過河6. It is never

28、 too late to mend. 亡羊補牢，猶為未晚。7. Light come, light go. 來得容易，去得快。8. Time is money. 時間就是金錢。9. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難見真交。10. Great hopes make great man. 遠大的希望，造就偉大的人物。11. After a storm comes a calm. 雨過天晴。12. All roads lead to Rome. 條條大路通羅馬。13. Art is long, but life is short. 人生有限，學問無涯。1

29、4. Stick to it, and youll succeed. 只要人有恒，萬事都能成。15. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起，富裕、聰明、身體好。16. A good medicine tastes bitter. 良藥苦口。17. It is good to learn at another mans cost. 前車之鑒。18. Keeping is harder than winning. 創(chuàng)業(yè)不易，守業(yè)更難。19. Lets cross the bridge wh

30、en we come to it. 船到橋頭自然直。20. More haste, less speed. 欲速則不達。21. No pains, no gains. 不勞則無獲。22. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上無難事，只要肯登攀。23. Where there is life, there is hope. 生命不息，希望常在。24. An idle youth, a needy age. 少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。25. We must not lie down, and cry, God help us. 求神不如求己

31、。26. A plant may produce new flowers; man is young but once.花有重開日，人無再少年。27. God helps those who help themselves. 自助者，天助之。28. What may be done at any time will be done at no time.明日待明日，明日不再來。29. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作，不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。30. Diligence is the mother of success. 勤奮是成功之母

32、。31. Truth is the daughter of time. 時間見真理。32. Take care of the pence, and the pounds will take care of themselves.積少自然成多。/小事留意,大事順利33. No man is wise at all times. 智者千慮，必有一失。34. Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.今天能做的事絕不要拖到明天。35. Live and learn. 活到老，學到老。36. Kill two birds with one st

33、one. 一石雙鳥。37. It never rains but it pours. 禍不單行。38. In doing we learn. 經(jīng)一事，長一智。39. Easier said than done. 說起來容易做起來難。40. An ounce of prevention is worth a pound of cure. 一分預(yù)防勝似十分治療。41. Industry is fortunes right hand, and frugality her left.勤勉是幸運的右手，節(jié)約是幸運的左手。42. Genius is one percent inspiration and

34、99 percent perspiration.天才一分來自靈感，九十九分來自勤奮。43. He who laughs last laughs best. 誰笑在最后，誰笑得最好。44. He who pays the piper calls the tune. 誰負擔費用，誰加以控制。45. He who has health has hope, and he who has hope has everything.身體健壯就有希望，有了希望就有了一切。46. No man is born wise or learned. 人非生而知之。47. Action speak louder tha

35、n words. 事實勝于雄辯。48. Courage and resolution are the spirit and soul of virtue.勇敢和堅決是美德的靈魂。49. United we stand, divided we fall.合即立，分即垮。50. There is no smoke without fire.無風不起浪。51. Many hands make light work.人多好辦事。52. Reading makes a full man. 讀書長見識。53. The best horse needs breeding, and the aptest ch

36、ild needs teaching.最好的馬要馴，最伶俐的孩子要教。/ 好馬需馴, 好人需教54. Learn young, learn fair. 學習趁年輕，學就要學好。55. Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.胸中有知識，勝于手中有金錢。56. Once bitten, twice shy. 一次被咬，下次膽小。57. Sound in body, sound in mind. 有健全的身體才有健全的精神。58. Seeing is believing.百聞不如一見。59. Dogs wave their tails

37、 not so much in, love to you as your bread.狗搖尾巴，愛的是你的面包。60. Money is a good servant but a bad master. 要做金錢的主人，莫作金錢的奴隸。61. Its hard sailing when there is no wind. 無風難駛船。62. The path to glory is always rugged. 通向光榮的道路常常是崎嶇的。63. Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass.沒有目標的生活如同沒有羅盤的航行。6

38、4. Quality matters more than quantity.質(zhì)重于量。65. The on-looker sees most of the game.旁觀者清。66. Wisdom is a good purchase though we pay dear for it .為了求知識，代價雖高也值得。67. Joys shared with others are more enjoyed. 與眾同樂，其樂更樂。68. Happiness takes no account of time.歡樂不覺日子長。69. Time and tide waits for no man.歲月不

39、等人。70. If you want knowledge, you must toil for it.若要求知，必須刻苦。71. Learn to walk before you run. 循序漸進。72. Knowing something of everything, and everything of something.通百藝而專一長。73. From words to deeds is a great space.言行之間，大有距離。74. Skill and confidence are an unconquered army. 技能和信心是無敵的軍隊。75. Habit is a

40、 second nature.習慣成自然。76. Lifeless, faultless.只有死人才不會犯錯誤。77. A book is the same today as it always was and it will never change.好書千載常如新。78. Books, like friends, should be few and well chosen.讀書如擇友，宜少且宜精。79. A book that remains shut is but a block.書本不常翻，猶如一塊磚。80. Its not the gay coat that makes the ge

41、ntleman.君子在德不在衣。81. Two heads are better than one.三個臭皮匠頂個諸葛亮。82. Birth is much, but breeding is more. 出身重要，教養(yǎng)更重要。83. Nothing is impossible to a willing mind. 世上無難事，只怕有心人。84. You cant make something out of nothing. 巧婦難為無米之炊。85. Nothing venture, nothing have. 不入虎穴，焉得虎子。86. Nothing for nothing. 不費力氣，一無

42、所得。87. Of nothing comes nothing. 無中不能生有。88. He who makes no mistakes makes nothing. 不犯錯誤者一事無成。89. Better say nothing than nothing to the purpose. 話不中肯，不如不說。90. Nothing succeeds like success. 一事如意，萬事順利。91. Nothing stake, nothing draw. 不頂千里浪，哪來萬斤魚。92. Nothing is as good as it seems beforehand. 期待比現(xiàn)實更美

43、好。93. Nothing is given so freely as advice. 勸人最容易。94. Nothing is so certain as the unexpected. 天有不測風云，人有旦夕禍福。95. Nothing seek, nothing find. 無所求則無所獲。96. A little of every thing is nothing in the main. 每事淺嘗輒止，事事都告無成。97. A great ship asks deep waters. 大船要走深水。（蛟龍要在海中游。）98. The best physicians are Dr. D

44、iet, Dr. Quiet, and Dr. Merryman.節(jié)食博士、精心博士、快樂博士，三人都是最好的醫(yī)生。99. He that once deceives is ever suspected. 騙人一次，受疑一世。100. Empty wagons rattle loudest. 空車響聲大。101. Nothing so bad but might be a blessing. 塞翁失馬，焉知非福。102.Barking dogs seldom bite. 吠犬不咬人103.Better go to heaven in rags than to hell in embroider

45、y. 寧可窮而有志，不可富而失節(jié)104.Better late than never. 遲做總比不做好105.Between two stools you fall to the ground. 腳踩兩條凳，早晚要墜地(意同：腳踏兩條船)106.Birds of a feather of lock together. 物以類聚，人以群分107.Blood is thicker than water. 血濃于水(意指：親人總比外人親）108.Beggarsbags are bottom less. 乞丐永遠不知足109.The most tragic blow for one is the de

46、ath of his mind 哀莫大于心死。110.He who does not have a strong will can never achieve high intelligence志不強者智不達。111.When Heaven is about to place a great burden on a man，it always tests his resolution first，exhausts his body and makes him suffer great hardships，frustrates his efforts to recover from mental

47、lassitudeThen Heaven toughens his nature and makes good his deficiencies天將降大任于斯人也，必先苦其心志，勞其筋骨，餓其體膚，空乏其身，行拂亂其所為，所以動心忍性，曾益其所不能。112.How can a sparrow know the will of a swan? 燕雀安知鴻鵠之志哉!113.Among three people I meet on the way，there will be at least ont from whom I can learn somethingI may follow his go

48、odness or correct my own mistakes by learning from him三人行必有我?guī)熝?。擇其善者而從之，其不善者而改之?14.Education should be for all，irrespective of their social status.有教無類。115.Too many cooks spoil the broth廚師多壞一鍋湯。116.We would rather be short of books than believe all that they say。盡信書則不如無書。I117.Long as the way is I wi

49、ll keep on searching above and below.路漫漫其修遠兮，吾將上下而求索。118.When a book is read a hundred times，its meanings will naturally become clear.讀書百遍，其義自見。119.He owns a gifted pen，who reads tremendously. 讀書破萬卷，下筆如有神。120.A gentleman would rather be quick in action than talk a lot.君子欲訥于言而敏于行。121.Do not do evil t

50、hings though they may be insignincantDo not given up good things though they may be minor matters勿以惡小而為之，勿以善小而不為。122.One must stand by ones words and must not stop ones action until success is achieved 言必信，行必果。123.Never do to others what you would not like them to do to you己所不欲，勿施于人。124.To surpass others，a person has to surpass himself first；to criticise others，he has to criticise himself first；to make comments upon others，he has to make comments on himself first.欲勝人者，必先自