英語高考作文范文9建議信

1、9.建議信 建議信是向別人提出合理的建議，讓對方接受自己的想法、主張，解決有關問題。建議信不是投訴信，觀點要合情合理，注意禮貌當先。同時，建議信要簡潔明確、理由充足，具有合理性和說服力。通常包括：1. 說明寫信目的。2. 提出建議與改進措施并給予忠告。3. 表達希望采納建議并期盼回復。文體概述常用語塊 1. 給某人提建議 _ 2. 如下 _ 3. 在做某事時遇到困難 _ 4. 利用 _ 5. 向某人征求意見_ask sb. for advicegive sb. some advice (on)as followshave difficulty/trouble in doing sth.make

2、 use of6. 制訂計劃 _7. 認為有用 _8. 參加 _9. 聽從某人的建議 _10. 把考慮在內(nèi) _take sth. into account/considerationmake a planfindhelpful/useful/beneficialtake part in/participate infollow ones advice11. 得到改善 _12. 有所好轉 _13. 依我看來 _14. 我已收到你的來信，得知你 _15. 我建議 _ I would like to suggest that/I would like to make a recommendation

3、 that/I am writing to advise you of/If I were you, I would/May I suggest that/I would like to put forward the suggestion thatget improvedchange for the betterin my opinion/in my view/from my point of viewI have received your letter saying that you套用句式 1. 你就向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設性的建議。 2. 我覺得如果能夠將會很有幫助的。1.

4、You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to make some constructive suggestions.2. I feel that it would be beneficial if3. 我希望這些建議會對你有所幫助。4. 我相信你會考慮我的建議的。5. 如能看到我會非常開心的。3. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.5. I would be more than happy to see4. I trust youll ta

5、ke my suggestion into account./I trust youll take good consideration of my suggestion.習作修改(做短文改錯，背經(jīng)典范文)Dear Roy, I am glad to receive your letter ask for my advice to how to learn Chinese well. Here are few suggestions. First, this is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn fro

6、m the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspaper and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.asking on a it newspapers Beside, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese

7、words more easier. You can also make more Chinese friends. He will tell you a lot about China or help you learn Chinese. Try and write to me in Chinese the next time. Best wishes!Yours truly,Li HuaBesides easily They and 1. ask asking現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語，表示主動關系。2. to onadvice后常搭配介詞on。3. 在few前加a根據(jù)句意，此處為提一些建議，表示

8、肯定意義，用a few。4. this it考查句型it is + adj.+ to do sth.意為“做是的”。5. newspaper newspapers因為newspaper為可數(shù)名詞，而且與前后的books, magazines屬于并列關系，故用復數(shù)形式。6. Beside Besides此處表示補充說明關系“此外/而且”，beside意為“在旁邊”。7. easier easily修飾謂語動詞用副詞形式。8. He They根據(jù)前一句話中的more Chinese friends可知用They。9. or and此處兩個動作為“順承”關系，而非“選擇”關系。10. 去掉next

9、time前的the相對于現(xiàn)在的“下一”，next前不用the。課堂練習假定你是李華，請根據(jù)所給材料，給Lora寫一封回信。要點如下：1. Lora打算利用暑假打工。2. Lora父母不同意的理由。3. 你給Lora的具體建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。Dear Lora, I have just read your letter in the magazine. I know that you want to work part-time this summer. But your parents dont allow y

10、ou to do so. I understand your situation. I think your parents may have their reasons. They may regard learning as the most important task for you. Perhaps theyd like you to make use of this summer holiday to study. Besides, they may think you are too young to work.I think you had better have a talk

11、 with your parents. If they agree, you should make a detailed plan for your study and work, ask your friends to work together with you, and tell your parents not to worry about you because you are old enough to manage things properly. Anyway, I would be more than happy to wish you a pleasant summer.

12、Yours truly,Li Hua課外作業(yè) 假定你是李華，最近你們班從英國轉來了一名新生Jenny。這是她第一次遠離家鄉(xiāng)，她很想念父母及家人，有時候思念至深，常常獨自一個人深夜哭泣。對此，請你給Jenny寫一封建議信，要點如下：1. 鼓勵Jenny堅定求學信念，志存高遠，四海為家。2. 就Jenny的目前狀況，提兩到三個建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右。2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。Dear Jenny, I am so glad to have a talk with you. I understand your present situation

13、for I have had a similar experience before. People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for higher education or employment. I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.Try to make friends on your school campus, and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends