英文編輯工作中的一些問題課件

1、 中文論文中的英文寫作：一些較常見的問題中國(guó)醫(yī)學(xué)科學(xué)院北京協(xié)和醫(yī)學(xué)院腫瘤研究所周傳農(nóng)題目題目太繁雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動(dòng)脈聯(lián)合切斷法建立急性腦缺血大鼠動(dòng)物模型的實(shí)驗(yàn)研究Bilateral vagotomy and carotid arteries combined cutting method Establishment of rat model of acute focal cerebral ischemia animal model experimental study雙側(cè)迷走神經(jīng)和頸總動(dòng)脈聯(lián)合切斷法建立急性腦缺血大鼠動(dòng)物模型Establishment of a rat model of ac

2、ute focal cerebral ischemia by combined bilateral vagotomy and carotid artery cutting題目太大兒童單純性肥胖模型的制作Establishment of Childood Simple Obesity Animal Model 兒童單純性肥胖小鼠模型的制作Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity （本文只作了小鼠實(shí)驗(yàn)，未涉及其他動(dòng)物）題目太籠統(tǒng) 不同測(cè)壓方法測(cè)試大鼠結(jié)腸破裂壓A comparison of different pressu

3、re testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animalsComparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats題目不能反映原意、用錯(cuò)單詞基因工程大鼠研究進(jìn)展Process in Rat GeneticsProgress in research on rat genetic engineering題目濫用縮寫乳酸調(diào)控大鼠腸黏膜微血管內(nèi)皮細(xì)胞NF-B信號(hào)通路的研究Lactic acid inhibits NF-B signaling pat

4、hways in RIMMVECs 讀者看不懂 RIMMVECs是什么；“的研究”可以省去。題目濫用縮寫哺乳動(dòng)物 ES 細(xì)胞與 EG 細(xì)胞研究進(jìn)展 哺乳動(dòng)物 胚胎干細(xì)胞與 胚胎生殖 細(xì)胞研究進(jìn)展ES embryonic stem cellsEG embryonic germ cells題目 拼寫錯(cuò)誤comparision of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional guinea pigcomparison of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional g

5、uinea pig題目 用錯(cuò)單詞適度深吸氣呼吸控制部分乳腺外照射時(shí)基于不同參照物配準(zhǔn)對(duì)銀夾構(gòu)成幾何體分次內(nèi)位移的影響Influence of registration based on the different reference markets on the displacement of the geometry consisted of all clips in the cavity for external-beam partial breast irradiation at moderate deep inspiration breath holding markers署名與單位署

6、名大小寫Li bao-ming , wang zhida，liu xiaowen，yao tao,ouyang xiaotong,su jiagangLi Bao-ming , Wang Zhi-da，Liu Xiao-wen，Yao Tao, Ouyang Xiao-tong, Su Jia-gang 姓名大寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)單位錯(cuò)詞、錯(cuò)名、大小寫The forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou Universitythe Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University歷史形成的傳統(tǒng)地名，已成為這所大學(xué)的正式名稱，不可用

7、現(xiàn)今的漢語拼音代替單位不全Academy of Military SciencesAcademy of Military Medical Sciences單位大小寫Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, china.Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, China.寫錯(cuò)單位名稱Wantwanthospital, Changsha 410016, ChinaWang Wang Hospital

8、錯(cuò)誤的注釋注釋錯(cuò)誤糖尿病 (diabetic mellitus )糖尿病 (diabetes mellitus)注釋錯(cuò)誤腺病毒（adenoviral）腺病毒（adenovirus）注釋錯(cuò)誤單純皰疹病毒 （herpes simple virus）單純皰疹病毒 （herpes simplex virus）錯(cuò)誤注釋無特定病原體 (special pathogen free，SPF)無特定病原體 (specific pathogen free，SPF) 注釋錯(cuò)誤獨(dú)立通風(fēng)籠具(Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC)(Individually ventilated cag

9、es，IVC) 注釋錯(cuò)誤集落形成抑制法 (human tumor cell cloning assay , HTCA ) (colony formation inhibition assay )注釋錯(cuò)誤自然殺傷細(xì)胞 (natural kill cell，NK) 自然殺傷細(xì)胞 (natural killer cell，NK)注釋錯(cuò)誤神經(jīng)生長(zhǎng)因子（never growth factor，NGF） 神經(jīng)生長(zhǎng)因子（nerve growth factor，NGF） 全文多處，全都錯(cuò)用這個(gè)單詞參考文獻(xiàn)的書寫錯(cuò)誤參考文獻(xiàn)作者丟失第一作者、姓與名顛倒Jeongmi An, Hee-Jin Y, Kimoon

10、Park，et al. (原雜志) Jeoum Lee, Jeongmi An，Hee-Jin Yang，Byung-Woo Kim, Kimoon Park. Lee J, An J, Yang HJ，et al. 參考文獻(xiàn)作者姓名拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)Gordon MN,K ing DL,D iam ond DM et al. Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. 參考文獻(xiàn)作者姓與名顛倒、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)Maria WW,Edward P,Dennis L,et al . Werner-Wasik M, Pequinot E, Leeper D, 原文：Mari

11、a Werner-Wasik, Edward Pequinot, Dennis Leeper, et al. 參考文獻(xiàn)作者不可用怪異的寫法Giuseppe VerdileSamuel E Gandy Ralph N. Martins. Giuseppe Verdile G, Gandy SE, Martins RN. 參考文獻(xiàn)作者etc./et al.Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML,ETC. Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML, et al. 拉丁文：etc. 是指物，例如 apple, banana, etc.et al. 是指人，例如 G

12、ordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. 不可混淆。參考文獻(xiàn)不可出現(xiàn)兩批作者Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Baghdoyan,et al.Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine 參考文獻(xiàn)作者不可用數(shù)字11代替文字母ll、姓與名顛倒、大小寫、etc.Wi11iam Luyties, Peter J. Bredenbeek, Ans F.H.

13、 noten etc. Luytjes W, Bredenbeek PJ, Noten AF, et al. 參考文獻(xiàn)錯(cuò)寫中國(guó)作者、標(biāo)點(diǎn)Yuhuan W,Xinming T,Charles H,et al.Wang YH, Tu XM, Humphrey C, et al. 原文：Yuhuan Wang, Xinming Tu, Charles Humphrey, 參考文獻(xiàn)引錯(cuò)作者、文題拼寫錯(cuò)誤、雜志拼寫錯(cuò)誤Schmitt CA, Lowe SW. Apoptosis cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macro

14、phage. Arch Toxical, 1996, 70: 249-251Hirano S, Ando M. Apoptotic cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophages. Arch Toxicol, 1996, 70: 249-251參考文獻(xiàn)缺雜志、缺標(biāo)點(diǎn)Age-related increase inducible atrial fibrillation 201021(1):88-93. Age-related increase inducible atrial fibrillation. J

15、 Cardiovasc Electrophysiol 2010，21(1): 88-93. 參考文獻(xiàn)文題首詞丟失Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains Primary Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains 參考文獻(xiàn)丟了作者、寫了單位Cleveland Clinic Foundation, Cleveland, OH, USA. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004

16、, 88: 1135-1143. Young JB. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143. 參考文獻(xiàn)文題脫漏Fossella FV, DeVore R, Kerr RN, et al. Randomized phase III trial of docetaxel versus vinorelbine or ifosfamide in patients with advanced non-small-cell lung cancer previously treated with

17、 platinum-containing chemotherapy regimens. The TAX 320 Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Study Group. J Clin Oncol, 2000，18: 2354-2362. 濫用縮寫濫用縮寫Ca.C 中survivn陽性 “Ca.C”是什么？（一張照片的說明）（文內(nèi)根本就沒有見到過“Ca.C” ）（猜想是癌細(xì)胞的意思）英文摘要濫用縮寫To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lin

18、es using SSH.To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using suppression subtractive hybridization (SSH).（摘要首句）濫用縮寫英文摘要IHC analysis on TMA revealed that Immunohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that 濫用縮寫英文摘要Objective： To observe the

19、 affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and RGZ rosiglitazone ATRA all-trans-retinoic acid affect effect用錯(cuò)詞錯(cuò)詞大鼠給予藥液灌胃All rats were lavaged with KFL solution. All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.錯(cuò)詞神經(jīng)上皮移植Neuralepithelial transplantationNeuroepithelial transplantatio

20、n錯(cuò)詞巴馬小型豬12只12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 12 Bama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 錯(cuò)詞Low doesLow doseHigh doesHigh dose通篇如此錯(cuò)詞RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of 錯(cuò)詞GeneBank GenBank 錯(cuò)詞用詞顛倒了正常、特異抗原批內(nèi)變異系數(shù)分

21、別為8.3%和6.4%，批間平均變異系數(shù)分別為9.7%和11.5%.The inter-assay coefficient of variation of normal antigen and special antigen was 8.3% and 6.4%, and the intra-assay average coefficient of variation was 9.7% and 11.5%, respectively 錯(cuò)詞評(píng)價(jià)其抗癌作用To access the anti-tumor effect To assess the anti-tumor effect 錯(cuò)詞 探討其作用機(jī)

22、理To explicit the molecular mechanism of To explore the molecular mechanism of 英文摘要首句錯(cuò)詞系統(tǒng)性感染Systematic infectionSystemic infection單復(fù)數(shù)The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant were tested continuously. The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested continuously. 其他不好的文章首句MG患者通常有眼肌受累，重癥肌無力（my

23、asthenia gravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累， 不好的摘要首句To Investigate the mechanism of NAFLD in gerbilsTo Investigate the mechanism of non-alcoholic fatty liver disease (NAFLD) in gerbils 中英文的語氣應(yīng)該一致結(jié)論 Ezrin、E-cadherin和CD44V6在NSCLC的生長(zhǎng)和轉(zhuǎn)移過程中發(fā)揮著重要的調(diào)控作用， Ezrin, E-cadherin and CD44V6 probably play an important role in the

24、 regulation ofgrowth and meastasis of lung cancer. 材料與方法 Methods Rats were divided randomly into 2 groups.Methods One hundred and twenty healthy adult male rats were randomly divided into two groups.英文無頓號(hào) The values of Ri, Re, Cl, MVV, FVC, Fev0.2, Fev0.2/FVC, FEF25-75%, PEF were 1.81 (0.94-4.10) cm H2O/mLs、1.83 (0.71-3.57) cm H2O/mLs、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cm H2O、144.65