英語作文提高：描寫人物課件

1、出生日、出生地家庭背景教育個人事跡評價第1頁，共33頁。She was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867. 出生地出生年月日第2頁，共33頁。2. Family background描述家庭情況：was born in/into a poor/ rich familyhis/her family was so poor that was the son of a poor family描述小時候成長歷程：when he was a small boy/ young，as a child/ as a boy of 15，during his/ her childhood，

2、 spend his childhood in描述生活：live a happy/ hard lifewith the help ofhis father was strict with him第3頁，共33頁。亞伯翰林肯 于1809年2月12日出生在一個貧窮家庭。簡單句：Abraham Lincoln was born in a poor family on February 12,1809.并列句：Abraham Lincoln was born in a poor family and born on February 12,1809.主從句（定語從句）：Abraham Lincoln,

3、 who was born on February 12,1809, was the son of a poor family.Abraham Lincoln, who was the son of a poor family, was born on February 12,1809.主從句（同位語從句）：Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born on February 12,1809.第4頁，共33頁。 3. Education background be admitted to college被大學所錄取graduate fr

4、omdepartment（院系）of university畢業(yè)when at college, he majored in大學主修r(nóng)eceive a doctors degree/a PhD degree獲得博士學位be awarded (獎項)被嘉獎go abroad for further studies出國深造have little schooling (education)受過很少教育 第5頁，共33頁。出生在貧苦家庭的狄更斯只受到很少教育主從句：定語從句：Charles Dickens, who was born in a poor family, hadlittle schooli

5、ng.非謂語：1）過去分詞充當定語，修飾前面名詞Charles Dickens, born in a poor family, had little schooling.2）過去分詞充當狀語，表原因Born in a poor family, Charles Dickens had little schooling.第6頁，共33頁。 4. Big events in ones life 1）be interested in /be fond of 在感興趣/喜愛2）work hard at 在工作努力3）serve as 作為4）devote his lifetime/oneself to

6、將一生投入到5）concentrate oneself on 集中某人注意力做6）do research about/ into 做關于的研究7）make up ones mind to do sth. 下定決定做某事8）do sth with great determination and perseverance 憑著巨大的決心和毅力去做第7頁，共33頁。10）have a way of doing sth 在做某事方面有著的方式11）try ones best to do sth. 盡全力去做某事12）encourage sb to do 鼓勵某人做某事13）fight for/ giv

7、e up ones life for sb/sth 為而奮斗/為某人/某事放棄自己的生命14）win a prize/the first prize in competition 在比賽中獲得獎勵/獲得第一名15)receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for 因而獲得了諾貝爾獎16)be good at .do well in 在做得好9）be strict in sth. 在嚴格要求第8頁，共33頁。17)be crazy about / enjoy 對著迷/享受18)make rapid progress in 在做出進步19)set a new world

8、 record of 創(chuàng)造一項新的世界紀錄20)equal/break the world record 平/打破世界紀錄21)win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal 獲得金牌/銀牌/銅牌22）win the xxth place 獲得第幾名23)be selected to/ become a member of 被選為 /成為的一員24)study hard / train hard 學習努力/訓練努力25)go through hardship 經(jīng)歷困難/挫折第9頁，共33頁。26)have a gift/ talent for (language)

9、 對 (語言)有天份27)realize ones dream 實現(xiàn)夢想28)overcome many difficulties 克服很多困難第10頁，共33頁。5高錕，1933年11月4日出生于上海一個富裕家庭，從小對做不同的試驗產(chǎn)生濃厚興趣。定語從句：Gaokun, who was born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933, show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood.非謂語（定語）Gaokun, born in a ric

10、h family on Nov.4th,1933, show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood.非謂語（狀語）Born in a rich family on Nov.4th,1933, Gaokun show great interest (was interested) in doing different experiment during his childhood.第11頁，共33頁。6他于1957年在倫敦念大學，并于1963年獲得博士學位。并列句：He

11、 studied in a university in London in 1957, and received a doctors degree in 1963.After he studied in a a university in London in 1957, received a doctors degree in 1963主從句：In 1957, He studied in a university in London, where hegained a doctors degree in 1963.非謂語：Having studied in a university in Lo

12、ndon in 1957, he gained a doctors degree in 1963.第12頁，共33頁。8中山大學英語系畢業(yè)后，她出國深造。并列句：連詞After graduating from the English Department of Zhongshan University, she went abroad for further studies.非謂語：Having graduated from the English Department of Zhongshan University, she went abroad for further studies.第

13、13頁，共33頁。14 1983年他畢業(yè)于哥倫比亞大學，1988年考入哈佛法學院，1991年獲得博士學位。并列句：連詞In 1983, he graduated from Columbia University and in 1988, he was admitted to Harvard Law School, where he gained his doctors degree in 1991.定語從句After graduating from Columbia University In 1983,he was admitted to Harvard Law School, where

14、he gainedhis doctors degree in 1991.第14頁，共33頁。17米高菲爾普斯是美國一個非凡的游泳運動員，1985年6月出生于美國馬利蘭州巴爾的摩市。Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer who was born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30,1985.Michael Phelps, born in Baltimore, Maryland on June 30,1985, is a great American swimmer.Born in Baltimore, Marylan

15、d on June 30,1985, Michael Phelps is a great American swimmer.18 他7歲開始游泳，經(jīng)歷了很多艱苦的訓練。When he was 7 years old, he started swimming and experienced much tough professional training. ( go through much hard training.)第15頁，共33頁。19 15歲的時候，他參加了2000年奧運會，并在200米蝶泳比賽中獲得第五。At the age of 15, he attended the 2000

16、Olympic Games and won the fifth place in the 200-meter butterfly.20 在北京奧運會上，他實現(xiàn)了他的8枚金牌夢，打破了7個世界紀錄，創(chuàng)造了歷史。At the Beijing Olympic Games, Phelps realized his dreamof wining 8 gold medal and broke 7 world records, which created the history.非限制性定語從句，指代前句第16頁，共33頁。1)one of the best/ most important 是最重要的/最佳

17、之一2)set a good example for為作了好榜樣3)a model teacher/worker一個模范教師/員工4)be respected by everyone被所有人尊敬5)speak/ think highly of高度評價6)be honored as (an excellent athlete)被譽為（優(yōu)秀運動員）7)his hard work brought him great success他的努力工作為他帶來了巨大的成功5.Evaluation第17頁，共33頁。8)he is the pride of China.他是中國的驕傲9)His heroic s

18、tory spread all over the city他的英雄事跡傳遍整個城市10)make great contributions to為作出巨大貢獻11)Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success.堅持是成功的秘訣12)be famous/known as be regarded as因著名/被稱為13)become a world champion at Championships成為世界冠軍14)remember sb forever永垂不朽15)a new chapter of history has been turned將翻開

19、歷史新的一頁第18頁，共33頁。16)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.雷鋒以他的共產(chǎn)主義精神被贊揚第19頁，共33頁。第20頁，共33頁。第21頁，共33頁。第22頁，共33頁。第23頁，共33頁。1.A. 概況 :譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一B.外貌,性格:譯：我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人，她長著兩只大眼睛，留著長發(fā).C. 教育經(jīng)歷：譯： 畢業(yè)于中山大學外語系，她繼續(xù)出國深造并獲得了博士學位D生平：譯： 他不僅對科學興趣，而且對音樂也有天份。譯：他創(chuàng)造了一個新的世界游泳紀錄，為中國隊獲得一面金牌。E：評價譯

20、：他是中國最偉大的小說家之一，永遠被人們所懷念。第24頁，共33頁。1.A. 概況 :譯：鐘南山年出生在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫(yī)生之一1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.B.外貌,性格:譯：我的歷史老師是個漂亮女人，她長著兩只大眼睛，留著長發(fā)* 語法，句法高分tips盡量用分詞短語、同位語結(jié)構(gòu)，使文

21、章簡潔，通順 My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.巧用with做定語第25頁，共33頁。C. 教育經(jīng)歷：1）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.D生平：1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift

22、 for music.2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.注意盡量用非謂語動詞, 使文章精煉盡量用復合句倒裝,非限定定語從句等，潤色文章第26頁，共33頁。E評估：2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.注意運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組第27頁，共33頁。二、如何做到句式靈活？1)并列句2)復合句 (定語從句、狀語

23、從句、名詞性從句)3)強調(diào)句型4)非謂語動詞5)倒裝句6)其他句型及結(jié)構(gòu)第28頁，共33頁。三、如何使文章連貫？(過渡詞的使用)1) 時間：soon, then, suddenly, meanwhile, before, after, earlier, in the morning, afterwards, later, immediately, next, the other day, nowadays, gradually2) 空間: above, below, up, down, under, near, far from, in front of, behind, beside, be

24、yond, on the right/left, around, inside, outside, opposite to, next to, on top of, across.第29頁，共33頁。3) 列舉：for example, such as, first(ly), second(ly), finally, besides, apart form, for one thingfor another thing 4) 比較: like, unlike, on the contrary, in contrast to, on the one handon the other hand,

25、than, not soas, asas, while, similarly, the former, the latter, someothers, onethe other, compared with第30頁，共33頁。5) 邏輯關系：a. 并列：and, as well as, alsob. 轉(zhuǎn)折：but, however, yetc. 遞進：besides, apart from, in addition, whats more, furthermore, moreover, to make things worsed. 原因：because, because of, as, since, for that reasone. 結(jié)果：so, therefore, thus, as a result f. 讓步：though,