人教英語選修7Unit4How-to-write-a-good-composition(共50張PPT)課件

1、Learning About Composition Writing How To Do A Good Job In WritingWhat difficulties do you often have in writing?What should a good composition be like ? Requirements: 整潔清楚的書寫和卷面 準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范的標(biāo)點(diǎn) 詞數(shù)適當(dāng)100 120 150 Lets scan some kinds of handwriting that are not appreciated by teachers.黑螞蟻的飛行式：隨意的草稿式無力隱遁式卑微的顫抖

2、式藍(lán)色長腿歐巴式遠(yuǎn)距離的戀愛式： 漫天飛舞式Some neat and clear handwriting.Really neat and prettyRequirements: 完成試題要求的任務(wù) (1) 覆蓋內(nèi)容所有要點(diǎn)； (2) 要求緊扣,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊； 有較強(qiáng)的語用能力（數(shù)量+準(zhǔn)確+連貫） (3) 運(yùn)用較多語法結(jié)構(gòu) (4) 使用較復(fù)雜或較高級(jí)詞匯； (5) 篇章段落及前后文連貫好； (6) 較少錯(cuò)誤 假定你是王強(qiáng)，有一批英國的交流生要來邵武參觀學(xué)習(xí)。市政府外事辦打算招募一些高中生志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請(qǐng)按照下面內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英語給市政府外事辦寫一封申請(qǐng)信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.個(gè)人情況:年齡,性

3、別2.你的優(yōu)勢3.承諾:提供最佳服務(wù) 注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右. 2.交流生：exchange studentsDear Sir / Madam,My name is Wang Qiang._ Yours, Wang Qiang structureParagraph 1: Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3:the purpose of the e-mail (the beginning)self-introduction and the aims of taking part in the summer camp (the body)hoping to be accepted

4、(the ending)Here is an article.Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Shaowu. Im a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good a

5、t English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Shaowu. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate

6、 it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang QiangPlease find out the errors in the passage and correct them.Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy

7、and Im 19. I was born in Shaowu. Im a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Shaowu. It is impor

8、tant to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qianga volunteercommunicatinghelpingwithgiveworki

9、ngfordisappointhearingfrom you.We can polish the composition to make it better. Lets work hard .Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Shaowu. Im a student in Shwowu No.4 Middle School.

10、 I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like helping others. Last, Im familiar with Shaowu. It is important to the work. If you give me the chance, Ill try my best to prov

11、ide the best service for them. I wont disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Wang QiangDear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students from England.

12、 Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Shaowu. Im a student in Shwowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I like helping others. Last, Im familiar with Sh

13、aowu. It is important to the work. If you give me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service for them. I wont disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Wang QiangDear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang

14、Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Shaowu. Im a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at

15、communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Shaowu. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to h

16、ear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang the same subject “I” simple words simple transitions（過渡詞） simple sentencesfour aspects & ways of improving them: use different sentences (使用多樣句型) change the subject (改變主語/物化主語)use good transitions (使用好的過渡連接)use advanced phrases (使用高級(jí)詞匯). change the s

17、ubject (改變主語)：1. Ill provide the best service for them._ is my goal. (-ing形式作主語) It is my goal _. ( (用it形式主語)2. I like helping others._. (-ing形式作主語)_. (用it形式主語)Providing the best service for them to provide the best service for them.Helping others is my favorite/ what I like .It is my favorite to he

18、lp others.use advanced phrases (選取高級(jí)詞匯)of (great) importancebe ready to / be willing to Word Phrase I like helping others.2. I like science and culture.3. This is important to the work.be fond of/ be interested in / have great interest in.use advanced phrases (選取高級(jí)詞匯)Simple phrase Advanced phrase Im

19、 good at English.2. Ill try my best to provide the best service.have a good knowledge of/ have a good command ofspare no effort /make every effort/ make efforts III. use good transitions (使用過渡連接)1. Phrases: (選取高級(jí)連接詞)表層次順序，羅列增加： first,second, third,fourth,lastto begin/start with, furthermore, moreove

20、r, in addition, last but not leastabove all, besides, whats more, in addition to that,last but not least III. use good transitions (使用過渡連接)2. Sentences:（加上常見句型開頭）Im familiar with Shaowu. There is no _ that Im familiar with Shaowu. doubt. use different sentences (使用多樣句型）1. Im familiar with Shaowu. It

21、s important to the work. Im familiar with Shaowu,_ _ (定語從句) 2. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Shaowu. Im a student in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. _.(過去分詞作狀語和定語從句) which is of great importance to the work.Born in Shaowu, Im a 19-year-old boy,who is studying in Shaowu No.4 Middle School. use differe

22、nt sentences (使用多樣句型）3. I wont disappoint you. （inversion倒裝）By no means_.will I disappoint you5. Ill provide the best service for them. It is _ that _. (emphasis使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句）. Use different sentences (使用多樣句型）the best serviceIll provide for them6. I like science and culture. I _ like science and culture. (e

23、mphasis）doPlease rewrite this article according what weve just learnt .Share and present your works please.One Possible Version:Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students. Born in Shaowu, Im a 19-year-old boy, who is studying in Shaowu

24、No.4 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English. Besides, I do like science and culture. Furthermore, Im good at communicating with others. In addition, its my favorite to help others. Last but not least, there is no doubt that

25、Im familiar with Shaowu, which is of great importance to the work. If given the chance, Ill spare no effort to provide the best service for them. In no case will I disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Wan

26、g QiangAdvice about how to improve your writing1.Reading is the source of writing. Do remember to read some beautiful sentences and articles every day.2. Some basic knowledge and skills:Vocabulary and grammar3.Practice makes perfect. It is practice that really matters.Practice 假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個(gè)國際中學(xué)生組

27、織將在新加坡（Singapore）舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請(qǐng)寫一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。 內(nèi)容主要包括： 1.自我介紹（包括英語能力） 2.參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家） 3.希望獲準(zhǔn) 注意： 1.詞數(shù)120左右 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Try to use: -ing form 作主語或狀語/ attributive clause (定語從句）/ emphasis (強(qiáng)調(diào)）/ inversion (倒裝）/ ellipsis (省略)Homework:Homework: Write a complete application e-mail on the last page

28、. Thanks for your listening !不知道自己缺點(diǎn)的人，一輩子都不會(huì)想要改善。成功的花，人們只驚慕她現(xiàn)時(shí)的明艷！然而當(dāng)初她的芽兒，浸透了奮斗的淚泉，灑遍了犧牲的血雨。成功的條件在于勇氣和自信，而勇氣和自信乃是由健全的思想和健康的體魄而來。成功了自己笑一輩子，不成功被人笑一輩子。成功只有一個(gè)理由，失敗卻有一千種理由。從勝利學(xué)得少，從失敗學(xué)得多。你生而有翼，為何一生匍匐前進(jìn)，形如螻蟻。你一天的愛心可能帶來別人一生的感謝。逆風(fēng)的方向，更適合飛翔。只有承擔(dān)起旅途風(fēng)雨，才能最終守得住彩虹滿天只有創(chuàng)造，才是真正的享受，只有拚搏，才是充實(shí)的生活。知識(shí)玩轉(zhuǎn)財(cái)富。志不立，天下無可成之事。竹

29、筍雖然柔嫩，但它不怕重壓，敢于奮斗、敢于冒尖。阻止你前行的，不是人生道路上的一百塊石頭，而是你鞋子里的那一顆石子。最凄美的愛，不必呼天搶地，只是相顧無言。最值得欣賞的風(fēng)景，是自己奮斗的足跡。愛的力量大到可以使人忘記一切，卻又小到連一粒嫉妒的沙石也不能容納。生活不可能像你想的那么美好，但也不會(huì)像你想的那么糟。時(shí)間告訴你什么叫衰老，回憶告訴你什么叫幼稚。不要總在過去的回憶里纏綿，昨天的太陽，曬不干今天的衣裳。實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想往往是一個(gè)艱苦的堅(jiān)持的過程，而不是一步到位，立竿見影。那些成就卓越的人，幾乎都在追求夢(mèng)想的過程中表現(xiàn)出一種頑強(qiáng)的毅力。世界上唯一不變的字就是“變”字。事實(shí)勝于雄辯，百聞不如一見。思路決

30、定出路，氣度決定高度，細(xì)節(jié)決定成敗，性格決定命運(yùn)雖然你的思維相對(duì)于宇宙智慧來說只不過是汪洋中的一滴水，但這滴水卻凝聚著海洋的全部財(cái)富；是質(zhì)量上的一而非數(shù)量上的一；你的思維擁有一切宇宙智慧。所有過不去的都會(huì)過去，要對(duì)時(shí)間有耐心。人總會(huì)遇到挫折，總會(huì)有低潮，會(huì)有不被人理解的時(shí)候。如果你希望成功，以恒心為良友，以經(jīng)驗(yàn)為參謀，以小心為兄弟，以希望為哨兵。如果一個(gè)人不知道他要駛向哪個(gè)碼頭，那么任何風(fēng)都不會(huì)是順風(fēng)。沙漠里的腳印很快就消逝了。一支支奮進(jìn)歌卻在跋涉者的心中長久激蕩。上天完全是為了堅(jiān)強(qiáng)你的意志，才在道路上設(shè)下重重的障礙。擁有資源不能成功，善用資源才能成功。小成功靠自己，大成功靠團(tuán)隊(duì)。炫耀什么，缺

31、少什么；掩飾什么，自卑什么。所謂正常人，只是自我防御比較好的人。真正的心理健康，是不設(shè)防而又不受害。學(xué)習(xí)必須如蜜蜂一樣，采過許多花，這才能釀出蜜來態(tài)度決定高度。外在壓力增加時(shí)，就應(yīng)增強(qiáng)內(nèi)在的動(dòng)力。我不是富二代，不能拼爹，但為了成功，我可以拼命！我會(huì)努力站在萬人中央成為別人的光。人一輩子不長不短，走著走著，就進(jìn)了墳?zāi)梗闶且Z轟烈烈地風(fēng)光下葬，還是一把骨灰撒向河流山川。嚴(yán)于自律：不能成為自己本身之主人者，將永遠(yuǎn)成不了他周圍任何事物的主人。自律是完全擁有自己的內(nèi)心并將其導(dǎo)向他所希望的目標(biāo)的惟一正確的途徑。生活對(duì)于智者永遠(yuǎn)是一首昂揚(yáng)的歌，它的主旋律永遠(yuǎn)是奮斗。眼淚的存在，是為了證明悲傷不是一場幻覺。

32、要不斷提高自身的能力，才能益己及他。有能力辦實(shí)事才不會(huì)畢竟空談何益。故事的結(jié)束總是滿載而歸，就是金榜題名。一個(gè)人失敗的最大原因，是對(duì)自己的能力缺乏充分的信心，甚至以為自己必將失敗無疑。一個(gè)人炫耀什么，說明內(nèi)心缺少什么。一個(gè)人只有在全力以赴的時(shí)候才能發(fā)揮最大的潛能。我們的能力是有限的，有很多東西飄然于我們的視野與心靈之外。過去再優(yōu)美，我們不能住進(jìn)去；現(xiàn)在再艱險(xiǎn)，我們也要走過去！即使行動(dòng)導(dǎo)致錯(cuò)誤，卻也帶來了學(xué)習(xí)與成長；不行動(dòng)則是停滯與萎縮。你的所有不甘和怨氣來源于你的不自信和沒實(shí)力。你可以平凡，但不能平庸。懦弱的人只會(huì)裹足不前，莽撞的人只能引為燒身，只有真正勇敢的人才能所向披靡。平凡的腳步也可以走

33、完偉大的行程。平靜的湖面鍛煉不出精悍的水手；安逸的生活打造不出生活的強(qiáng)者。人的生命似洪水在奔流，不遇著島嶼、暗礁，難以激起美麗的浪花人生不怕重來，就怕沒有將來。人生的成敗往往就在于一念之差。人生就像一個(gè)動(dòng)物園，當(dāng)你以為你在看別人耍猴的時(shí)候，卻不知自己也是猴子中的一員！人生如天氣，可預(yù)料，但往往出乎意料。人生最大的改變就是去做自己害怕的事情。如果不想被打倒，只有增加自身的重量。如果你向神求助，說明你相信神的能力；如果神沒有幫助你，說明神相信你的能力。善待自己，不被別人左右，也不去左右別人，自信優(yōu)雅?；钍瞧垓_不了的，一個(gè)人要生活得光明磊落。生活真象這杯濃酒,不經(jīng)三番五次的提煉呵,就不會(huì)這樣一來可口

34、！生命不止需要長度，更需要寬度。時(shí)間就像一張網(wǎng)，你撒在哪里，你的收獲就在哪里。世上最累人的事，莫過于虛偽的過日子。當(dāng)你感到痛苦時(shí)，就去學(xué)習(xí)點(diǎn)什么吧，學(xué)習(xí)可以使我們減緩?fù)纯?。?dāng)世界都在說放棄的時(shí)候，輕輕的告訴自己：再試一次。過錯(cuò)是暫時(shí)的遺憾，而錯(cuò)過則是永遠(yuǎn)的遺憾！很多事情努力了未必有結(jié)果，但是不努力卻什么改變也沒有。后悔是一種耗費(fèi)精神的情緒后悔是比損失更大的損失，比錯(cuò)誤更大的錯(cuò)誤所以不要后悔。環(huán)境不會(huì)改變，解決之道在于改變自己。積極向上的心態(tài)，是成功者的最基本要素。激情，這是鼓滿船帆的風(fēng)。風(fēng)有時(shí)會(huì)把船帆吹斷；但沒有風(fēng)，帆船就不能航行。即使道路坎坷不平，車輪也要前進(jìn)；即使江河波濤洶涌，船只也航行。經(jīng)驗(yàn)是由痛苦中粹取出來的。浪費(fèi)時(shí)間等于浪費(fèi)生命。老要靠別人的鼓勵(lì)才去奮斗的人不算強(qiáng)者；有別人的鼓勵(lì)還不去奮斗的人簡直就是懦夫。不要問別人為你做了什么，而要問你為別人做了什么。要有最遙遠(yuǎn)的夢(mèng)想和最樸素的生活，即使明天天寒地凍，金錢沒有高貴，低賤之分。金錢在高尚人的手中，就會(huì)變得高尚；金錢在庸俗人手中，就會(huì)變得低級(jí)庸俗。涓涓細(xì)流一旦停止了喧嘩，浩浩大海也就終止了呼吸。漫無目的的生活就像出海航行而沒有指南針。如果我沒有，我就一定要，我一定要，就一定能。上一秒已成過去，曾經(jīng)的輝煌，僅僅是是曾經(jīng)。其實(shí)我們往往失敗不是在昨天，而是失敗在沒有很好利用今天。千萬人的失敗，都有是失敗在