大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導

1、大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導大學英語四級作文評分標準一、評分原則1 CET檢查考生是否達到大學英語教學大綱規(guī)定的四級和六級教學要求，對作文的評判應以此要求為準則。2CET作文題采用總體評分(Global Scoring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎勵分(Award Scores)，而不是按語言點的錯誤數(shù)目扣分。3從內(nèi)容和語言兩個方面對作文進行綜合評判。內(nèi)容和語言是一個統(tǒng)一體。作文應表達題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語言來表達。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達思想，也要考慮是否用英語清楚而合適地表達思想，也就是要考慮語

2、言上的錯誤是否造成理解上的障礙。大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導4避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分給低分，包括零分。一名閱卷人員在所評閱的全部作文卷中不應只給中間的幾種分數(shù)。 5. 字數(shù)不足以應酌情扣分。二、評分標準1本題滿分為15分2閱卷標準共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標準樣卷一份。3閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，若認為與某一分數(shù)(如 8分)相似，即定為 該分數(shù)(即8分)；若認為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分數(shù)則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)。但不得加或減半分。大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導分數(shù)檔4評分標準2分 (

3、33) 條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤。5分 (39) 基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤。8分 (45) 基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫；語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。11分(57) 切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分(67) 切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯。注：白卷，作文與題目毫不相關，或只有幾個孤立的詞而無法表達思想，則給0分。大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導CET4寫作評分標準高分作文基本要求：思想表達正確，語義連貫，

4、無重 大語言錯誤高分要求：句型的多樣性經(jīng)典詞組短語的運用亮點詞匯大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導寫作題型議論文1.主題型（topic）健康對人類的幸福必不可少；如何保持健康；結(jié)論2.觀點對比型（A & B）有人認為，英語對中國經(jīng)濟發(fā)展很重要；另有人認為，英語對中國經(jīng)濟發(fā)展沒有意義；我的觀點說明文很多人不注重日常衛(wèi)生習慣；不注意衛(wèi)生習慣的后果；如何解決這一問題大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導寫作題型描寫文（圖表作文）描寫圖表內(nèi)容（現(xiàn)象）；分析現(xiàn)象的原因；觀點或解決辦法應用文（包括書信、便條、通知、海報等）主題；相關細節(jié)；重申主題大學英語四級專題輔導：CET

5、4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導寫作原則內(nèi)容簡單化（“簡單”是指適合在30分鐘內(nèi)表達）結(jié)構(gòu)模式化（主題句-分論點-總結(jié)）語言要包裝錯誤要回避大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導寫作技巧宏觀結(jié)構(gòu)三段式開頭要開門見山，寫出主旨句；段落內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)：主題句+擴展句（+結(jié)尾句）大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導微觀結(jié)構(gòu)學會遣詞造句詞匯準確使用詞匯，在此基礎上盡量使用高級詞匯多使用詞組、短語恰當運用過渡詞匯避免多次重復使用同一詞匯，可以用同義詞或同根詞替代句型注意變化句式簡單句復合句交叉使用適當使用插入語，倒裝句等恰當使用修辭大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導建議

6、平時多注意收集有用詞匯句式注意模仿大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導題目：BicyclesAn Important Means of Transport in China提綱：（1）為什么自行車在中國這樣普及 （2）和汽車的比較（3）自行車在中國的前途大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導模板的提煉過程：思路和表達Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can s

7、ee that thousands of people - man and woman, old and young - ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導單復數(shù)錯誤：man and woman men and women詞性錯誤：old and young the old and the young專有名詞：第一個和最后一個單詞首字母大寫，其他：實詞（名動形副代數(shù)）首字母大寫；虛詞（介連冠）

8、首字母不大寫。大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導Direction :許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節(jié)晚會但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會我的看法 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導句式提煉：Bicycles are very popular in China.詞性轉(zhuǎn)化：popular popularityIn China, bicycles have gained wide/great popularity among Chinese people.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2011-06現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一種時尚In the recent

9、decade, online shopping has gained wide popularity among youngsters. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2010-06如今不少學生在英語學習中不重視單詞拼寫In China, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. However,大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2009-12建設綠色校園很重要In the contemporary society, the concept of green campuses

10、has gained wide popularity among universities or colleges. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2009-06越來越多的博物館免費對外開放的目的是什么？In the present-day society, free admission to museums is enjoying wide popularity among Chinese citizens.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2008-12一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛的使用During the past decades, disposable

11、plastic bags gained wide popularity among people in the world. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2008-06娛樂活動多種多樣In this day and age, a variety of recreational activities have gained wide popularity among individuals. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導Bicycles are very popular in China.?大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導In

12、my eyes, you are the most beautiful. In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導高分句式結(jié)構(gòu)：No _ is/are more _than_.Bicycles are very popular in China.In China, no means of transport is more popular and important than bicycles.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導我能想到最浪漫的事就是和你一起慢慢變老。？大

13、學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導高分句式：雙重否定句型：否定詞(no/not/never/nothing)+有否定意義或否定前綴或否定后綴的名詞、形容詞、副詞、動詞、介詞、連詞等大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm. Ralph Waldo EmersonNothing is impossible to a willing heart. HeywoodNo man is useless in this world who lightens the burden

14、of someone else. Charles DickensThe word “impossible” is not in my dictionary. Bonaparte Napoleon大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest

15、 thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time.” Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Outlines:1.堅強的意志是成功的重要保證。2.意志堅定的人才能完成偉大的使命。 3.學生也是這樣，不刻苦學習，終究不會成為有用之才。 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導意志堅定的人才能完成偉大的使命。People cannot accomplish great missions without a strong will.No one can under

16、take a great mission without a strong will.No man is unlikely to have brilliant achievements with an iron will.He will not succeed who will not persevere.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導被動表達No great mission can be accomplished without a strong will.No success cannot be achieved with an iron will. 大學英語四級專題

17、輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillNo great work can be performed without will. We envy famous men and imagine that fame was due to some stroke of luck. But when we know their histories, we find that it is long years of will and constant effort that have brought about their succ

18、ess. Just as we cant reach the top of a mountain without climbing, we cant achieve success without will.The modern society provides people with more opportunities than before, and there are stories which tell us the possibility of becoming successful overnight. Actually that is not the case. Before

19、these people become successful, a lot of hard work has been done, unnoticed mostly. What we usually see is the result, but what we ignore is a long process of struggling forward and wrestling with internal or external obstacles. Take quitting smoking for example, which is , to most people , a diffic

20、ult task, so people always give up the idea for they dont have the strong will.In a nutshell, strong will is an important condition or role of the success the individual should desire to maintain forever. There is no instant success in this world. Strong will is the best policy to make your life dis

21、tinct and your dreams come true.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導高分句式：排比句式I came; I saw; I conquered. Julius CaesarGovernment of the people, by the people and for the people, shall not perish from the earth. Abraham LincolnStudies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability. Francis Bacon Some books a

22、re to be tasted, others to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested. Francis Bacon大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導排比句式It cannot be denied that technology does help us a lot. Internet provides us with easy access to various aspects of knowledge and information; mobile phones make it more conven

23、ient for us to communicate with one another; a growing number of man-made satellites have been launched to probe into the secrets of the universe. Without technology, the world would stop developing. That is why we should be proud of advanced science and technology in the contemporary age.大學英語四級專題輔導

24、：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導排比句式some discard litters everywhere; some cheat in tests; some waste food on canteens; some throw offensive/insulting remarks at others; some are always late for classes; some guys even watch pornographic or violent films in dorms.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導Directions: For this part,

25、you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1. 建設綠色校園很重要 2. 綠色校園不僅指綠色的環(huán)境. 3. 為了建設綠色校園，我們應該.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導1.建設綠色校園很重要The concept of “Green Life” has gained wide popularity

26、 among Chinese citizens. Almost every university has been aware of the importance of building a green campus. Without green environment it is impossible for college students to have an enjoyable/agreeable life in the Ivory Tower. Furthermore, a green campus is of benefit to broaden/consolidate stude

27、nts awareness of environmental protection.Creating a Green Campus大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2.綠色校園不僅僅指綠色的環(huán)境In addition to green environment, green campuses also refer to decent behaviors. However, taking a look around, we can find a good many examples of inappropriate ones: some discard litters every

28、where; some cheat in tests; some waste food on canteens; some throw offensive/insulting remarks at others; some are always late for classes; some guys even watch pornographic or violent films in dorms. In fact, it has become a trend for many students to turn a blind eye to their own bad acts.大學英語四級專

29、題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導3.為了建設綠色校園，我們應該Accordingly, it is imperative/urgent for us to take measures to maintain green campuses. For one thing, it is essential that regulations should be worked out to ban these negative behaviors. For another, we should educate, advocate and encourage our classmates, frie

30、nds and acquaintances to refuse all uncivilized acts. If we do our utmost to do so, the future of our college life will be hopeful, promising and rosy.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導友情提醒：高分句式靈活運用Nowadays English learning is very popular in China. In recent decades, English learning has gained/is enjoying

31、 wide popularity among Chinese students.Nowadays English learning is more and more popular in China.In recent decades, English learning has gained/is enjoying growing popularity among Chinese students.In recent decades, English learning has found its growing popularity among Chinese students.大學英語四級專

32、題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導首段首尾句句式選擇（呼應式寫法）1) _has/have gained (is/are enjoying) wide popularity among_.2) _has/have found its/their way among _.3) It has become a prevalent trend for_ to_. It has become a prevalent trend that_.4) There is a growing trend of_. There is a growing trend that_. 注：首句前加上適當?shù)臅r間狀語大

33、學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2011-06現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購物已經(jīng)成為一種時尚In the contemporary society, online shopping has gained wide popularity throughout the world. For the sake of convenience, a growing number of people make purchases on a variety of shopping websites every day. It has become a prevalent trend for youngste

34、rs to shop online. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導In the contemporary society, it has become a prevalent trend for youngsters to shop online. For the sake of convenience, a growing number of people make purchases on a variety of shopping websites every day. Online shopping has gained wide popularity thro

35、ughout the world. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導In the contemporary society, there is a growing tide of youngsters shopping online. For the sake of convenience, a growing number of people make purchases on a variety of shopping websites every day. Online shopping has gained wide popularity throughout th

36、e world. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2009-12建設綠色校園很重要In the present-day society, the concept of “Green Campus” is enjoying wide popularity among universities. Without green environment it is impossible for college students to have an enjoyable and agreeable life in the Ivory Tower. Thus it has become

37、a prevalent trend for universities to create green campuses.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導2010-06如今不少學生在英語學習中不重視單詞拼寫In recent decades, English learning has gained wide popularity among students. There is a growing trend/tide of learning English in China. However,大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導題目：My View on D

38、ouble BA Degree提綱： 1. 現(xiàn)在大學生讀雙學位的現(xiàn)象很常見 2. 對此，人們看法不一 3. 我對這一現(xiàn)象的看法練筆大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導My view on Double BA DegreeIn the contemporary society, the system of double bachelors degree has gained wide popularity among universities or colleges. On many campuses it has become a prevalent trend for stu

39、dents to have two majors at the same time. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導To this phenomenon, different students take divergent attitudes. Some strongly approve of it in that a double bachelors degree can broaden their vision, thus putting them in a more favorable position in the job-seeking market. On t

40、he contrary, those who stand firmly opposed to it also have cogent reasons. For one thing, two majors make it difficult for them to focus on one particular field; for another, they can expand their scope of knowledge by reading extensively rather than pursuing a double bachelors degree.大學英語四級專題輔導：CE

41、T4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導Personally, I am slightly negative about double bachelors degree. In this day and age, the more skilled we are in one specific realm, the better we can meet the societys needs. Accordingly, it is advisable that we should make the most of our college life to acquire more specialized know

42、ledge and skills to set the stage for our future. 大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導觀點對比型模板提煉To this phenomenon/issue, different _ take divergent attitudes. Some strongly/firmly/constantly approve of/advocate it in that/as _. On the contrary/By contrast, those who are/keep/stand strongly/firmly/constantly o

43、pposed to it cogently/convincingly contend that _.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導To this phenomenon/issue, different _ take divergent attitudes. Some who strongly/firmly/constantly approve of/advocate it are cogently convinced that_. On the contrary/By contrast, those who are/keep/stand strongly/firmly/c

44、onstantly opposed to it contend that _.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導To this phenomenon/issue, different _ take divergent attitudes. Some strongly/firmly/constantly approve of/advocate it. They hold the view that_. Moreover/Furthermore,_. In addition,_. On the contrary/By contrast, those who are/keep/stand strongly/firmly/constantly opposed to it also have cogent/sound reasons. For one thing,_; for another,_.大學英語四級專題輔導：CET4寫作評分標準和寫作輔導(時間狀語), _has/have gained (is/are enjoying) wide popularity among_. It has become a prevalent trend for_ to_. Some_ strongly