高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究

1、語(yǔ)言手段12種高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究 寫(xiě)作的目的是考查考生整合信息和信息表達(dá),并用適當(dāng)短語(yǔ)、句型等語(yǔ)言手段產(chǎn)生出連貫語(yǔ)篇的能力。現(xiàn)介紹十二種常用的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)手段，這些語(yǔ)言手段在近年的廣東高考題中和各地模擬寫(xiě)作題中出現(xiàn)的頻率非常高, 掌握這些語(yǔ)言手段對(duì)提高寫(xiě)作能力一定幫助很大。高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究一、同位語(yǔ)手段同位語(yǔ)主要用于介紹人物、事物、地點(diǎn)、產(chǎn)品、書(shū)名等。典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：書(shū)名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother Amy Chua, 美籍華人, 耶魯大學(xué)教授中文版：2011年初開(kāi)始在中國(guó)銷(xiāo)售(2011年廣東高

2、考)高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究信息表達(dá)：A book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, written by Amy Chua, an American-Chinese, has been sold in China since the beginning of 2011. (Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother 作a book的同位語(yǔ), an American-Chinese 作Amy Chua的同位語(yǔ))高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究1. 用同位語(yǔ)完成句子。(1)去年, 我被邀請(qǐng)參加一個(gè)為

3、“待援助的孩子”(Tuesday Child)舉辦的一個(gè)狂歡節(jié)(carnival), “待援助的孩子”是一個(gè)幫助艾滋患兒的組織。Last year, I was invited to participate in a carnival for Tuesdays Child, _.課堂練習(xí) an organization that helps children with AIDS高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究(2) 離2012年還有一個(gè)月時(shí)間, 但孤星指南(the Lonely Planet)等不及宣布來(lái)年十大旅游城市排行榜,孤星指南是世界最暢銷(xiāo)旅游指南雜志之一。There

4、is still more than one month to go before 2012. But the Lonely Planet, _ _ , cant wait to announce its top 10 cities totravel to in the coming year. one ofthe worlds best-selling travel guides高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究2. 信息點(diǎn)：姓名：Steve Jobs別名：蘋(píng)果教父(godfather)出生地：美國(guó) 加州 三藩市(San Francisco)出生日期：1955年2月24日逝世

5、日期：2011年10月5日 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究信息表達(dá)：2. Steve Jobs, the godfather of Apple, was born in San Francisco, California, the USA on February 24th, 1955 and passed away on October 5th, 2011. 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究二、主題的呈現(xiàn)手段典型例題1信息點(diǎn)：效應(yīng)：(這本書(shū))引發(fā)中美教育方式孰優(yōu)孰劣的討論(2011廣東)信息表達(dá)：The book has received a heated

6、 discussion on the advantages and disadvantages of Chinese and American educational ways.要用到的詞語(yǔ)有很多, 簡(jiǎn)單的有about, on, as to等, 復(fù)雜的有concerning, regarding, with respect to等。高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題2 信息組合：演講主題：人與自然參賽選手：10名學(xué)生(2010全國(guó)卷I)信息表達(dá)：Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Ma

7、n and the Nature”.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究1. 翻譯: 上周末我校在2600名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了有關(guān)“幸福感”的相關(guān)問(wèn)題調(diào)查。1. Last weekend, a survey about “The feeling of happiness” was carried out (conducted) among 2600 students in our school. 課堂練習(xí) 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究2. 翻譯: 最近, 你班就“高三學(xué)生是否需要吃補(bǔ)品(tonics)來(lái)保持健康”展開(kāi)了討論。2. Recently we have

8、had a discussion in a class meeting about whether Senior 3 students should take a lot of tonics to keep fit. 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究假如你是你校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華, 現(xiàn)準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)一個(gè)關(guān)于演講的通知。演講題目：如何好好生活演講時(shí)間：下周六演講者：王教授信息表達(dá)： Next Saturday Professor Wang will come to our school to give us a lecture on how to live well.3. 信息點(diǎn)：高考英語(yǔ)

9、寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究三、觀點(diǎn)的呈現(xiàn)手段可用短語(yǔ)如according to sb.(根據(jù)某人的看法)，in my opinion /in my view(在我看來(lái)，我認(rèn)為)，from ones point of view(在某人看來(lái))，as far as Im concerned(對(duì)我而言), as for(至于，就而言)等, 句型有sb believes/ thinks/ claims，sb told us that.，sb pointed out that.(某人指出)等。高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究專(zhuān)家解讀(王教授)：學(xué)生近視(1)發(fā)生率：略高于

10、50(2)人數(shù)：世界第一(2009廣東)信息表達(dá)：According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first inthe world. 典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究1. 翻譯：我的看法是我們應(yīng)保護(hù)自然資源,減少環(huán)境污染。1. In my opinion, we should try to protect natural resources and decreas

11、e environment pollution. 2. 翻譯：依我看, 合作需要有效的交流, 沒(méi)有它人們會(huì)盲目地做事情。2. From my point of view, cooperation calls for effective communication, without which people will do things blindly. 課堂練習(xí) 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究3. 要點(diǎn)組合：你的觀點(diǎn)：微博(microblog)提供大量信息, 應(yīng)根據(jù)個(gè)人情況謹(jǐn)慎使用信息表達(dá)：As far as I am concerned, microblog provid

12、es us with large quantities of information, so we should be cautious while using it according to our personal situation.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究四、比例的表達(dá)手段1. 百分比的表達(dá)。如：(1)70% of. (2)seventy percent of. (3)70 percent of the.(注意：考生最易漏用of)2. 其它一些比例的表達(dá)手段。如：(1)一半：half of the. =fifty percent of the.(2)四分之一(

13、25%)：a quarter of =25 percent of the.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究(3)四分之三(75%)：three quarters of =75 percent of the.3. 分?jǐn)?shù)表達(dá)法：分子是基數(shù)詞, 分母是序數(shù)詞。如：1/4：one fourth 2/3：two thirds 7/8：seven eighths 五個(gè)當(dāng)中有三個(gè)：three out of five，three in five高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù): (1)(目前中國(guó))吸煙人數(shù): 約3,5億(2) 分布：男性75, 女性

14、：25(2010廣東)信息表達(dá)：Currently China has about 350 million smokers, among whom 75 percent are men and 25 percent are women.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究1. The survey shows that _ _(50%的學(xué)生)gain happiness from the love of their parents or relatives and from the warmth of families. 課堂練習(xí) 50% of thestudents高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作

15、專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究2. In the study, _ _(800個(gè)的青少年中, 大約有40%)who have been exposed to secondhand smoke had detectable hearing problems.the 800 teensaround 40% of高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究小學(xué)、初中、高中學(xué)校每天提供體育鍛煉的分布情況：小學(xué)：50%初中：30%高中：20%不提供鍛煉的學(xué)校：十分之一信息表達(dá): _ primary schools, _ junior middle schools and 20% of se

16、nior high schools provide physical education each school day while _schools did not require physical education at all. one-tenth of50% of30% of3. 信息點(diǎn)：高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究五、排位的表達(dá)手段表“排位”要用到的詞語(yǔ)有：rank +(the+)序數(shù)詞, be +the+序數(shù)詞, be+ in the +序數(shù)詞+place或 get the +序數(shù)詞+place等; 也可以用“is the +形容詞最高級(jí)+范圍”來(lái)表達(dá)。高考

17、英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：基本信息：(1)發(fā)生率：略高于50(2)人數(shù)：世界第一(2009廣東高考)信息表達(dá)：According to Professor Wang， a little more than 50% of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究課堂練習(xí) 1. 翻譯：江蘇衛(wèi)視的非誠(chéng)勿擾(You are the One)這個(gè)相親節(jié)目的收視率排第一。The rating

18、s of Jiangsu TVs You are the One _among all the programs. ranks (the) first 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究2. 翻譯：東京大學(xué)(Todai)在所有的日本大學(xué)排行榜中名列第一, 因?yàn)樗漠厴I(yè)生在大公司擔(dān)任重要位置的數(shù)量很多。Todai _among Japanese universities for the number of graduates who hold important positions in big companies.ranks the first高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段1

19、2重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究李娜的主要成績(jī)：(1)目前世界排名第四;(2)2011年1月澳大利亞網(wǎng)球公開(kāi)賽(The Australian Open)亞軍;(3)2011年6月法國(guó)網(wǎng)球公開(kāi)賽(The French Open)冠軍。信息表達(dá)：The year 2011 has seen her achieve great success: she _ in the Australian Open in January and won the championship in the French Open in June, and _ in women tennis players in the world.

20、3. 信息點(diǎn)：is now ranked No. 4got the second place高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究六、建議的表達(dá)手段短語(yǔ)：advise sb to do.(勸某人做某事)從句：(1) Sb suggests that. (2) Sb gives sb a suggestion that. (3) It is suggested that. (4) It is highly advisable that. (5) give sb some advice on.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：專(zhuān)家解讀：建議：(中小學(xué)生

21、)不要過(guò)度用眼;多參加戶外活動(dòng)(2009廣東高考)信息表達(dá)：He suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities. 或 He gave us a suggestion that school children should avoid overusing their eyes and take more outdoor activities. 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究或 School children are advised not to

22、 overuse their eyes but to take more outdoor activities.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究課堂練習(xí) 1. 翻譯：你對(duì)班上同學(xué)的建議：學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)尤其是聽(tīng)課時(shí)要充分利用眼、腦、口、耳、手等器官共同參與, 這樣學(xué)習(xí)才更有效。 _when studying, especially in class students should make full use of the brain, eyes, ears, hands, and other organs for joint participation, which will make

23、 their study more efficient.It is my suggestion that 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究2. 翻譯：因此我強(qiáng)烈地建議那些同學(xué)不要沉迷于這些網(wǎng)絡(luò)活動(dòng)而把更多的時(shí)間花到有意義的活動(dòng)中去, 如鍛煉身體。Therefore, I strongly _ _ get addicted to these online activities and spend more spare time on meaningful activities, such as taking exercise. advise those classmatesno

24、t to高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究你給Jack的建議：(1) 制定學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃, 盡力把心思放到學(xué)習(xí)上；(2)多和同學(xué)交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn), 以提高學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)。信息表達(dá)：To improve your study, I think it is very important for you to make a good plan for you study and put your heart into study. Besides, _ you communicate with your classmates so that you can learn their experienc

25、e and improve your own study. 3. 信息點(diǎn)：I suggest that高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究七、提醒的表達(dá)手段表示提示或提醒的表達(dá)有：Sb reminds / warns us that.(某人提醒我們)Sb reminds / warns us(not)to do sth(某人提醒我們做/不要做某事)高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：專(zhuān)家解讀：(4)特別提示：如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)(2009廣東高考)信息表達(dá)：He particularly reminded us that how to hold a

26、 pen is also related to short-sightedness.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究課堂練習(xí) 1. 翻譯：提醒大家不要輕易在網(wǎng)上透露個(gè)人信息和不要隨意打開(kāi)不認(rèn)識(shí)的人發(fā)來(lái)的文檔。_to keep secret our personal information, including our real name, phone number, email address and so on, and not to open any files from a stranger.You are reminded高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)

27、研究2. 翻譯：Alex提醒我們不同國(guó)家的各種領(lǐng)域的時(shí)事新聞不僅豐富我們的知識(shí), 同時(shí)幫助我們明智地思考我們的人生。_ news and current affairs on various fields from different countries not only enrich our knowledge but also help us think wisely about our life. Alex reminds us that高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究3. 信息點(diǎn)：溫馨提醒：有效期：一個(gè)半月; 過(guò)期后果自負(fù)。信息表達(dá): _ that you have

28、to undertake the responsibility after one and a half month.We would like to remind you 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究八、”與.有關(guān)“的表達(dá)手段這種表達(dá)方式也有很多。如：1. be connected with/to 2. be related to3. be relative to 4. be relevant to5. have something to do with 6. be in/with relation to7. be associated with 8. be linke

29、d to 9. be bound up with高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：專(zhuān)家解讀：(4)特別提示：如何握筆也和近視有關(guān)(2009年廣東高考)信息表達(dá)：He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness. (is related to 可用上面所有的表達(dá)方式代替)高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究課堂練習(xí) 1. 翻譯：教育專(zhuān)家認(rèn)為這事關(guān)教育公平的問(wèn)題, 應(yīng)從學(xué)生實(shí)際出發(fā)。Educational experts th

30、ink that this standard _ the educational fairness so it should be based on the reality of students.is connected with高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究2. 翻譯：如果對(duì)老師的評(píng)價(jià)(evaluations)與學(xué)生的成績(jī)聯(lián)系起來(lái)的話, 良好的教育就成了一句空話。If teachers evaluations _ students grades, good education will just become empty talk. are connected to高考

31、英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究3. 信息點(diǎn)：食品安全：最令人擔(dān)憂的問(wèn)題, 與我們的健康息息相關(guān)。信息表達(dá)：Food safety is the most worrying problem because it _ _our health.linked closely to is 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究九、目的的表達(dá)手段表目的的表達(dá)手段很多, 用作不同的成分有不同的表達(dá)。1. 用謂語(yǔ)表達(dá)：aim/intend to do sth(目的是, 旨在)2. 用狀語(yǔ)表達(dá)：(1) so as to /in order to /in an effort to do

32、.(為了做某事)(2) with the purpose of doing sth(帶著的目的, 為了)(3) in hopes/the hope of(懷著的希望)(4) with dreams of doing(帶著的夢(mèng)想)(5) with the goal of doing sth(目的是)高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究3. 用不定式作表語(yǔ)表達(dá)：(1) The purpose of doing sth is to do.(做某事的目的是)(2) Our goal is to do.(我們的目標(biāo)/的是)(3) The aim is to do.(目的是)4. 用從句表達(dá)

33、：(1) so that.(以便)(2) in order that.(為了)(3) in the hope that.(懷著的希望)高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：目標(biāo)：所有室內(nèi)公共場(chǎng)所無(wú)煙實(shí)施時(shí)間：2011年1月1日起(2010廣東)信息表達(dá)：This decision, which aims to make all indoor public places smoke-free, will come into effect from the first day of 2011.或This decision, aiming to make all ind

34、oor public places smoke-free, will be carried out from January 1, 2011.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究課堂練習(xí) 1. 翻譯：為實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)要采取的措施：努力學(xué)習(xí)考上理想的大學(xué)。(2010四川)_, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university. In order to reach the goal 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究2. 翻譯：這課的目的

35、是為了體驗(yàn)中山大學(xué)的生活, 我充分感覺(jué)到做大學(xué)生的美妙。_at Zhongshan University. I fully felt the sweetness of being a college student. The aim of the class was to experience life 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究3. 信息點(diǎn)：“無(wú)車(chē)日”(Car-free Day)是一項(xiàng)節(jié)能環(huán)保的活動(dòng)活動(dòng)時(shí)間：每年9月22日參與者：全國(guó)108個(gè)城市活動(dòng)目的：提高人們節(jié)約能源與保護(hù)環(huán)境的意識(shí)信息表達(dá)：_, Car-free Day is launched in 108 c

36、ities in China on September 22 every year. To raise public awareness ofenergy-saving and environmental protection高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究十、原因的表達(dá)手段介詞短語(yǔ)：because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, for the reason that+從句從句：because, as, since, so.that.句式：The reason for/why.is that. (的原因是)高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段1

37、2重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題1. 你的偶像及理由。(2007廣東)As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life. 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究專(zhuān)家解讀：(1)原因：很復(fù)雜(2)治療：沒(méi)有哪一種藥物能治愈近視(2009廣東)信息表達(dá)：He also pointed out that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure it

38、.或 Due to the complication of shortsightedness, no medicine can cure it, Professor Wang told us.2. 信息點(diǎn)：高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究課堂練習(xí) 1. 翻譯：由于他的精湛的技術(shù), 他贏得最有價(jià)值球員獎(jiǎng), 并被選入棒球名人堂。_, he won the most valuable player award and was elected to the Baseball Hall of Fame.Because of his excellent skills高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課

39、件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究2. 翻譯：部分大學(xué)為什么吸引力下降：部分大學(xué)辦學(xué)質(zhì)量差、學(xué)生上學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)高、畢業(yè)生就業(yè)難等。 _ some colleges have become less attractive _the educational quality of some colleges is poor, the tuition fee is high and its hard for college graduates to get jobs. 或Due to the poor educational quality of some colleges, high tuition fees

40、and difficult employment for college graduates, some colleges have become less attractive. is thatThe reason why高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究3. 信息點(diǎn)：人們飲食的變化原因：原因一：人們富裕，有錢(qián)買(mǎi)貴重食品;原因二：人們更加注意食品的質(zhì)量, 好的食品對(duì)身體有益。高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究信息表達(dá)：Why are there changes in peoples diet? I think _. First of all, people a

41、re becoming rich and they have more money to buy more expensive food with better nutrition. The second reason is that people pay more attention to the quality of food, because they know good food is of great benefitto their health.there are two reasons高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究十一、對(duì)比的表達(dá)手段對(duì)比的表達(dá)手段也是常用的表

42、達(dá)手段, 主要有：1. while 2. in comparison to3. compared with/ to 4. in comparison5. in contrast 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究典型例題 信息點(diǎn)：偶像(idol)女生男生偉人18%18%父母25%11%影視明星50%14%體育明星6%48%沒(méi)有偶像1%9%男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異(2007年廣東)信息表達(dá)：The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols, while 48% of the boys favour sports stars.高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課件語(yǔ)言手段12重寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)研究課堂練習(xí) 1. 翻譯：相比球類(lèi)運(yùn)動(dòng)和其它流行體育項(xiàng)目, 慢跑更有效, 且不那么耗時(shí)。_ball games and other popular sports, jogging is more efficient and less time-consuming.In comparison with / compared with 高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作專(zhuān)題輔導(dǎo)課